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Post by gojake on Sept 10, 2006 21:10:33 GMT -5
Dragon council will get some proof now! I feel a major butt whooping chapter comming soon!
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Post by DarkDragontc on Sept 11, 2006 10:16:15 GMT -5
Yup Chapter 10 is going to be some butt kicking in this one, Here is a sneek peek of the Next Chapter.
Chapter 10 The Final Decision
Summary: James is all alone in his room and trying to find out why no one answering him. Jake, Lao Shi, Mr & Mrs Dark goes to the Dragon Concil to see what is going on, and how to get james powers back. Jennfier is turning a new leaf and getting ready to go out with James. Trixe & Spud have there own problems. Rose is confused about her REAL parents are.
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Post by gojake on Sept 11, 2006 18:01:51 GMT -5
majorly overconfusing. Has a little chaos to it. Nice.
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Post by dreamcatcher on Sept 11, 2006 20:34:52 GMT -5
AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!
UPDATE SOON!!!*eats popcorn*
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Post by irishdragon on Sept 16, 2006 1:38:57 GMT -5
Awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Chaos on Sept 17, 2006 0:49:42 GMT -5
I've actually been parusing this, but never had anytime to reply to this. This is an awesome fan-fic. Now I'm reading your mind... you shall update this, sometime. ^^
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Post by DarkDragontc on Sept 17, 2006 0:50:36 GMT -5
As again I’m busy every day, but I will at least I get to write these chapters to you.Chapter 10: A Final Decision James and his parents went to the ballgame. They had a fun time watching the Staten Island Yankee trying to win there final game for the pennant race. If they win, it will be two times in a row. “Wow this is a great ball game, thanks dad” James said. “No problem, also this a present for your mom, it’s her birthday you know, we have something special plan for her at the bottom of the Seventh inning.” Dad said. Mrs. Dark was born on Sept 16, 1954. Today is Sept 16, 2006 (you do the math) and she was so happy about her birthday. “Thank you guys for taking me out to the ball game” Mom said. “No problem, ok we have to go down to the field.” Dad said. (By the way here is the Picture of Staten Island Yankee Stadium.) James and his parents went on to the field to sing happy birthday to Mrs. Dark. “Happy birthday to you” Everyone said on the field including James and Dad. After the happy birthday song, the song Rednex- “Cotton Eye Joe” (I give u the link to that song, here is the link esnips.com/doc/6159b4d6-c8e1-420c-b2ae-6431ddb98213/Rednex---Cotton-Eyed-Joe.mp3) song came on and everyone began to dance including James. Everyone was having fun time and after that James and his parents went back to their seats when the music was over. “That was a great present you guys” Mrs. Dark said. “No problem mom” Dad and James said. They all hug each other and all of a sudden a ball came right toward them. James put out his glove and caught it. The crowd cheers for that catch. This was amazing night for James and his parents. Including that the Yankees have won the Pennant Race once again for the second time in a row. They won 2 to 0 over the Valley Cats. The crowd was cheering louder then ever. James and his parents went home at 11pm at night and went to sleep after that. Before they left James was offer a job in Staten Island Yankees to be a Dancer. They need a dancer for the songs they were signing to keep the crowd awake. James accepted the offer and was ready for next year. (Just to tell today is MY mom birthday, this was written for her) Jake was pondering over… if this evidence that they show to the dragon council will work or not. (“I hope this will work, I didn’t see James on the computer all day today, I hope he is ok.”) Gramps walks into Jakes room. “My young dragon, you got the tape?” Shi said. “Yeah I do G, so what going to happen tomorrow?” Jake questioned. “Me, You and James’ parents are going to the Draco Island to visit the Dragon Council to get James power back and I hope they will make a final Decision on what to do.” Gramps said. “Yeah I hope so too, ok I better get to bed, I thought James would be on, be he isn’t.” Jake said. “Ok good night.” Gramps said. “Good night, G.” Jake said. Jake went to sleep. James woke up at 9am in the morning. Lucky for him it was not a school day. “Mom, Dad where are you?” James said. James saw a note on the table and it reads… Dear James, We have went to Draco Island with Jake and his gramps; we will be back this afternoon hopefully with good news. Have a nice day. You can go anywhere you want today, if you want too, just be careful. Thanks for the gift, that was nice of you and I have a great time. I love you James. Love, Mr. & Mrs. Dark. James smile and started to eat cereal. Then the phone rang, James ran to the phone to pick it up, and it was… Jake and the rest went to the Draco Island to visit the Dragon Council. (Remember DC= Dragon Council) They walk in and the Dragon Council was change to a court room. “Ok you four sit down right over there” DC 1 said. “We will make our final decision about James’ life, if he should have his dragon powers back” DC 3 said. “Ok listen up, James is a good person, he has save people lives before and I saw it” Jake said. “Since your witness, we have to look through your memory to see what James has done in your eyes.” DC 4 said. “OK where do you want me to sit to do this?” Jake said. “Just stand right there.” DC 2 said. The Dragon council started to read Jake mind. James picks up the phone and it was Rose. “Rose, how did u get this number?” James said. “Never mind that, I need your help, it’s about my parents.” Rose said. “What about your parents?” James said. “Well the day I went with Jake back through time to see what my parents look like, well it wasn’t that good, I saw two kinds of my parents, one is from the hunts clan and the other is from the two people from outside the had the same things like hair, face and eyes. Also they had a baby in there.” Rose said. “Hmm… maybe I can whip up a potion that can find out your real parents are, but you have to come over my house.” James said. “Ok, I will come right away, since you live in Staten Island, I need your address.” Rose said. “The address is 233 Dragon Street.” James said. “Ok I think I know where it is, if I get lost I will call you again, bye-bye James and thank you.” Rose said. Rose hang up the phone and James hang up too. Just again the phone rang… it was Jennifer. “We have seen the bad and good things of what James has done, we still think he is a danger to us” DC 1 said. “That’s it, I can’t take it anymore, you don’t learn anything don’t you. It the inside that counts, not the outside!” Jake said as he started turn into dragon form. “Be Careful Jake, you don’t want the Dragon Council to change there mind.” Gramps said. “I know, I know… it just… ok here is a tape of what James has done to save a human life when it was in danger.” Jake said. Jake gave the Dragon council the tape and put it on. The tape show how Jake Rescue this man life by getting the bricks off the man that was trap from the flames. “James risks his life to save this man. He could have been killed from the flames, but thank god he didn’t died” Jake said. The Dragon Council was surprise, but still not convinced. “We still don’t know why we should give the powers back to James; look what he has done to us. This castle was under attack by the Dark Dragon.” DC 3 said. “Ok yes that a fact, but that wasn’t James, can you understand that?” Jake said. “No” Dc 2 said. “You know what I’m tiring of being nice, (Jake went to the video) Do you F**king care of what James has done to these people?” (“Oh my god I have said a curse word, I really must be mad.”) “Young dragon, if you curse again, you will be put to jail for cursing.” DC 1 said. “Ok I’m sorry but this is not right” Jake said. “We will make our final Decision in one hour, Thank you.” Dc 1 said. “Gramps I’m sorry, that I curse, I couldn’t control myself after that” Jake said. “Young dragon in time you will get mad and it’s going to happen, lucky for your parents aren’t here to see this.” Gramps said. “Thank you for fighting for our son life” Mr. & Mrs. dark said. “No problem, gramps if they say no, I’m fighting the Dragon council, I don’t care if I lose my powers, I want James to be happy” Jake said. Jake walks away and went to the Bathroom. Lao shi was sad and hoping that the Dragon council will do the right thing. Rose got off the ferry and saw Trixe and Spud were in trouble with two bullies that follow them after they visit their Aunts & Uncle in Staten Island. Rose came in there in time to stop the first punch that was about to hit Spud. Rose reflects the punch and kicks the bully right in the stomach. The other bully began to run away. The first bully said “this is not over Spud & Trixe, your lucky your friend came in time to save you.” “Who was that?” Rose questioned. “It’s a bully from Staten Island, I don’t know who he is, but thanks for saving our lives, is the ferry boat about to leave?” Trixe said. “Yeah, you better catch it” Rose said. “Thanks Rose, see you later.” Spud said. “Bye-bye Arthur” Rose said. “Huh, how did you know my first name???” Spud said. Before Rose even can answer, Spud was far away with Trixe. Rose ran to a cab and told the cab to go to 233 Dragon Street. The cab was on his way there. Meanwhile… James picks up the phone again and it was Jennifer. “Hey Jenn, sup?” James said. “I was thinking about something, since I ask you out for the dance, do u want to go somewhere before that?” Jenn ask. “Sure why not.” James said. “Can I come over your house today?” Jenn ask again. “Umm… well not today, I’m having a friend come over today… maybe tomorrow it will be good.” James said. “Please, with a cherry on top” Jenn said and laugh a little bit. “Ok let’s see I can fit you into my schedule, yeah come over about 5pm, I will be done with my friend then.” James said. “Ok see you at 5, I already know where you live, so you don’t have to tell me, good-bye.” Jenn Said. James hangs up the phone and door knock, it was Rose. One hour later, “We have made our Final Decision, Jake we decided not to give James powers back.” DC 1 said. “What the f**k are you thinking? Jake said. “One more curse and you will lose your powers forever.” DC 3 said. “I don’t f**king care no more, this has gone enough, Gramps this council must be under something because this is getting out of hand. Time to do some major butt whooping.” Jake turn into his dragon form and stared to fight the Dragon Council. “That it boy, we have to teach you a lesson of respecting us.” DC 4 said. Gramps join in the fight, but he notice something wrong, the Dragon council made the first move, then he finally realize that the Dragon Council was a fake and James’ powers were taken away on purpose. “Jake, the council is a fake, take there heads off.” Lao shi said. “Ok you got it G.” Jake said. Jake grab the head of DC 1 and it was pull off easily. It was one of the loyal servants to the Dark Dragon. Jake knew what was coming next, after Lao shi pull the rest of the masks off the Dragon Council. “Lucky for you, the Dark Dragon is not here right now, we have to fight yourselves.” DC 3 said. “D**n I thought I was about to fight the Dark Dragon, wait second what is that noise.” Jake said. The noise was coming from the floor where the Real Dragon Council is in a trap box below where Jake was standing on. Jake opens the box and saw the Real Dragon Council… The Real Dragon council was free and started to fight the Fake Dragon Council with Jake & Lao Shi. Jake punch the Fake DC 1 in the head then in the stomach, just then Jake was hammered by two other Fake DCs. He flew in the air for two seconds, lucky for him he was a dragon. He came back down with a fire ball attack which scared the Fake DCs away. The fight lasted for 2 hours straight. The Real Dragon Council said “sorry about what happen here…” they also said “that the Dark Dragon is on the revenge of Jake powers.” The Real DC found James’ powers and they said “his powers should return in an hour, thank you for saving our lives.” Jake & the rest went home happy. “Hey rose come on in” James said. “Hey James, you said you have a potion that can find my real parents.” Rose said. “Yes I do and here it is.” James said. Rose & James walk to the kitchen to sit down. James show how the potion works, but he is missing one thing a hair sample from Rose. “Rose I need your one string of your hair to make this test successful.” James said. “My hair, ok maybe this once (Rose pull one of hair strings) Ow that hurt.” Rose said. James put Rose’s hair in the bowl and the potion show a picture of what Roses Parents look like. “Oh my god, I’ve ran into this person when I was going back to the year 2006.” “Wow you have a nice mother, Rose, but who is that?” James said. “I don’t know, but it looks like I have a sister, oh wow, thank you James this should help me a lot.” Rose said and hugs James very hard. James hugs back. “I have to go but thank you, this will lead a big break to find where my real parents are.” Rose said. Rose walk out the door and saw another person that looks like her and it was Jennifer. Jennifer look back and pause for a second and starts to stares at Rose. James couldn’t believe it himself, Rose and Jennifer were twins. They have the same hair, eyes, nose and body. They continue to stare at each other. Jake went home happy, knowing James will get his power back. “You done a great thing my young dragon, word to the wise, never curse to the Dragon Council, you could seriously get into a lot of trouble like that.” Gramps said. “Yeah I know, but I was so pis off when James didn’t get his powers back, well now he has his powers again.” Jake said. “I understand young one, go get some sleep it been a hard day for you, we will see James tomorrow.” Gramps said. “Ok G, Good night.” Jake said. Jake went to his room and started to fall asleep. Mr. and Mrs. Dark went to a restaurant to celebrate James being a Dragon again and for Mrs. Dark Birthday. What will Rose say to her lost twin? Chapter 11 Coming up.
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Post by gojake on Sept 17, 2006 8:31:58 GMT -5
awesome! looking forward to the next update!
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Post by DarkDragontc on Oct 4, 2006 17:21:07 GMT -5
Thanks for Reading Chapter 10, here is chapter 11. Remember be honest when you read it and Please Reply. If no one comments and i can't not continue and i want to continue. Since no REPLY!! I have to make this my last story. Chapter 11: A “Twin” Thing/ the Hospital.James was still surprise of what he saw today of Rose and Jennfier. “You look like me” Jenn said. “You look like me also” Rose said. They both smile and they both said, “Twins, yeah”. “James if you don’t mind, can we come inside and talk to you?” Rose said. “Ok” said James. Rose, Jenn and James went inside, they spend at least 4 hours talking to each other about what happened and what adventurous they had when they were separated, James felt kind of Jealous and he feel that he was left out because he started a relationship with Jenn and now since Rose found Jenn, it will make more harder to go out with her. James was being a servant for 2 hours straight, getting drinks and food for them. “I’m Sorry James, we didn’t mean making you work like this. You can stop if you want.” Rose said. “Thanks (“phew”)”. James said and sighed, then deicide to sit on the couch next to Jenn. “James you have to keep this a secret because Jake can get suspicious.” Rose said. “Why?” James said. “Because of what we are, we look alike and Jake can confused of us and what we look like, expect for you.” Jenn said. “Ok, but I still don’t get it why it has to be kept a secret” James said. “Just trust me (wink)” Jenn said. “Ok I will (I guess I can start trusting her)” James said. “Oh wow where has the time went, it’s already 9pm, my parents must be worried about me, Rose do you want to come with me and meet your real Mother.” Jenn said. “Hmm… would she know who I am?” Rose said. “She might” James said. “Ok I go, bye-bye James, I see you in school Monday.” Rose said. Rose walk outside waiting for Jennifer. “James I’m sorry that we didn’t get to talk to each other, but I promise we will get a chance to talk to each other in school.” Jenn said and smile. “Ok, I promise” James said and smiles. Jenn walks outside and wave a kiss good-bye. Again James blush. Jenn & Rose walk home. James went upstairs and looks in the mirror and saw dark cloud around him, “hey get off of me” James said. The dark clouds cover James’ body and then turn him into a dragon. “Oh wow, I turn into a dragon, but how? I guess Jake and the rest my family got my powers back. YEAH BABY, American Dragon is back.” James said. He went to sleep, happy that his powers were back. “Well Rose here we are” Jenn said. Since Rose lives in New York and Jenn lives in Staten Island, Rose decided to stay in Staten Island. Jenn house is very big, including that her parents are rich. “Here we go.” Rose said and was worry. “Don’t worry my parents will know.” Jenn said. “You think so?” Rose said. “I know so.” Jenn said. Rose smile. Rose & Jenn walk into the house and Jenn said “Mom, Mom where are you?” The room was dark until they walk into the kitchen… “Surprise” Mom and Dad said. “What is this, oh my god (The cake says nice job on making the cheerleader squad) I can’t believe you made a cake for making the cheerleading class.” Jenn said. “Yup” Mrs. Love. “Who is your friend, she looks familiar?” Mr. Love said. “Mom, Dad this is Rose.” Jenn said. Mr. & Mrs. Love are in shock. “Are you the Rose that was taken away from us?” Mrs. Love. “Yeah I am (Smile and Cries) Mom…” Rose said and went to her real mom and dad and hugs them. “Aww, this is great, I have cake and a new sister.” Jenn said. “Yup, thanks for reunited with my real mom and dad. Thanks Jenn.” Rose said. “No problem.” Jenn said and joins mom, dad and Rose in the hug. They celebrate by eating cake, and then two hours later they all went to sleep. The Next day… It was 9am in the morning. Jake woke up happy knowing that James’ got his powers back. “Jake come down and eat your breakfast.” Mom said. “I’m coming.” Jake said. Jake got dress and went downstairs. He headed downstairs and ran to the kitchen where he saw Haley in his seat. “Haley I sit there, can you please get up?” Jake said. “Usually you push me off there, but since you ask nicely I will get up and go to my seat” Haley said. “Thanks” Jake said. “When is James coming?” Haley said. “I don’t know, I think he will come this afternoon.” Jake said. “Ok (She smile)” Haley said. Jake, Haley and the rest stated to eat breakfast. James woke up at 10 in the morning, his parents did not return back yet. “Where are my parents?” James said. Someone knocks at the door. James went downstairs and opens the door. It was the policeman. “Are you James dark?” Policeman said. “Yes, is there something wrong officer?” James said and a little worried. “There is something wrong, your parents got into a car crash (James was shock, and was worried that his parents ….died) your parents are ok, but they both have serious injures.” Policeman said. “At least my parents are ok, but what kind of Serious Injures were talking here?” James said. “Well come with me, I will explain on the way.” Policeman said. “Ok” James went in the police car and went off to the Staten Island Hospital. “Hah I finish before you Jake.” Haley said. “So what, this wasn’t a race” Jake said. “Ok you two stop it.” Dad said. “Jake brush your teeth and get ready to go.” Mom said. “Why?” Jake said. “Because were going the hospital with James, I will tell you on the way” Mom said. The Long family was ready to go and went to the car and went on the BQE which was Jam up. “Oh man, how are we going to get out of this one?” Jake said. “Jake go outside and check on what’s holding us up?” Mom said. “Ok” Jake said. “I’m coming too” Haley said. “No you stay here.” Jake said. “Jake take your sister with you, you might need backup” Mom said. “Ok come on Haley” Jake said. Jake and Haley went in the forest and they both turn into Dragons. They both flew and saw a car that was upside down blocking two lanes and another car blocking one lane. Haley went to the car that was upside down and tries to push it aside and Jake went to the car that was blocking one lane and push it aside. A few minutes later Jake & Haley got the cars aside and the traffic was moving fast. Suddenly Jake’s cell phone was ringing, “Hello” Jake said. “Good Job, Jake. Stay as a dragon and fly to the hospital we will meet you there.” Mom said. “Ok” Jake said. Jake closes his cell phone and told Haley to come with him to the hospital in Staten Island. Rose & Jenn woke up this morning and smile at each other. The both did theirs hairs and faces. They had a schedule plan for the whole day. The plan was going Shopping in the mall, then eat, then shop some more. “This looks like a great Schedule you have here Jenn.” Rose said. “Yeah I know, the shopping part is kinda of funny, but we will do other stuff too.” Jenn said. “Ok” Rose said. “Ok you two come down and eat your breakfast” Mrs. Love said. “Coming” Rose & Jenn said. They both laughed and came down to eat, and then one hour later they went to the Staten Island Mall. Jenn Parents of course drove them to the mall. Rose was not fond of shopping, but when she was with Jenn, she knows she will have lots of fun with her. Jake & the rest have arrived at the Staten Island Hospital. Jake & Haley turns back to human form in nearby corner and meet up with his parents. They all went inside and saw James sitting down on the chair waiting to see his parents. “Hey James” Jake said. “Hey Jake, I’m not in the mood to talk, Sorry” James said. “I know how you feel, and since this is probably the only time we get to talk, let’s get this over with.” Jake said. “Ok” James said. Jake took James outside to talk about what happened the past few days he miss in school, and what happened when they try to get James’ power back. One hour later they were done talking and came back just in time to visit James’ parents. “Mom, Dad, oh my god are you guys alright?” James said. “Yeah we are, we will be not moving for a while James, and we are going to stay in the hospital for a least two to three days.” Mom said. “Two to three days, oh man.” James said and started to weep. “Look, you can stay at Jakes’ house if you like and you will be much safer there since they know you a lot.” Dad said. “Maybe your right, is it alright with you if I stay over your house for three days?” James said. “Sure it is” Jakes’ mom said. “Thank you, so much” James said and smile. James walks outside and told Jake to stay in there. Suddenly Trixe & Spud were about to walk outside until they saw Jake and went back in to say hi. James was sitting on a bench outside, a few minutes later Haley came out and talks to him. Rose & Jenn spend over $300 dollars in clothes, Shoes and Bags. “Whoa Jenn you don’t have to spend that much.” Rose said and giggles a little bit. “Well what I see, I want to get. Ok let’s get some lunch, and then our next stop is the game store.” Jenn said. “Ok”. Rose said. Just then a boy was about to go into the fountain and Rose went in grab the boy before he slipped in the water. “Thank you for saving my boy.” The mother said. The boy grin. Rose & Jenn smile and gave a high five and ran down to the food court to get something to eat. “What happened here?” Trixe said. “Well I guess after we got James’ powers back, his parents went out to celebrate and I guess a car hit them on the way home and they were injured.” Jake said. “I feel sorry for James.” Spud said. “Me too.” Jake said. “Where is James anyway?” Trixe said. “He is outside, I recommend not going outside, and he wants to be alone for now.” Jake said. “Ok I understand.” Trixe said. Spud agreed and they all look at James’ parents of how the injures were. James’ dad arm was injured and it was broken. James’ mom has to stay on a wheel chair for 6 months until she fully recovers. Meanwhile… outside Haley was talking to James. “I know we never get the chance to talk, but I must tell you something” Haley said. “Ok what is Haley?” James said. “Well... I don’t how to start this but… I like you.” Haley said. “You do thanks” James said and smile a little bit. “I’m sorry for your parents at least they are ok” Haley said. “You got that right.” James said. “The reason I like you…” Haley was cut off. “Don’t start saying why you like me; I can probably guess why you like me.” James said. “You do” Haley said. “Yeah I do, I was once crush on a girl when I was your age and well I didn’t have the courage like you did to ask her out or say ‘I like you’.” James said. “Oh so your saying that I have a crush for just because your older than me.” Haley said. “Basically, but If I was the same age I would go out with you, but since we have an age differences, I really don’t know.” James said. “How old are you?” Haley questioned. “I’m 14 years old” James said. “Oh, you look young for your age, I’m 10 years old, that only a 4 year differences, that’s not so bad.” Haley said. “I know, but right now I don’t think I can give it a shot with you. It will be a little weird that I’m hitting on you when I’m Jakes best friend.” James said. “Well… you got a point. Ok I will wait; I just wanted to tell you that I like you.” Haley said and smile. She walks back inside and then a few seconds later James went back inside to meet with Trixe & Spud. Then two hours later James & the rest went home, after James hug his parents and told them I will take care of the house for them. “Well that was a good day of shopping.” Rose said. “Yeah it was” Jenn said. They both head out the mall and went into the forest to catch the s61 to go home. Just then one of the huntsclan just grabs Rose and put her into the truck. “Rose, where are you? ROSE!!!” Jenn said. She ran out of the forest and saw the s61 and got on it before the huntsclan can kidnapped her too. “We got her, lets go.” said 88. “Ok.” said 89. What will happen next? Chapter 12 coming up.
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Post by DarkDragontc on Oct 7, 2006 22:10:11 GMT -5
For those who read chapter 11, Thanks for not responding. Chapter 11 is actually like a two parter for whats going to happen next. Chapter 12 was title as Confused Love.
Chapter 12: Confused Love.
Jennifer was safe on the bus, but she didn’t see who kidnapped Rose. When she got home, she went into her house and told her parents what happened. Jens’s Parents were shocked. “Number 88 and 89! You didn’t have to grab me this way.” Rose said. “I order them to do this, now look at this quarter” Huntmaster said. The huntmaster was trying to hypnotize Rose but that didn’t work. “That won’t work” Rose said. She looks smart when she said that. Just then the huntmaster pull a fast one by using sleeping gas and making Rose mind brainwashed. “Uhh…” Rose fell asleep. “HAHAHAHA! Perfect this will help on my plan.” Huntmaster Said, as 88 and 89 were laughing.
“Jake, Thanks for taking me home, but I forgot my clothes to get from my house” James said. “Ok, so you need to get your clothes?” Jake said. “Yeah… would you think so?” James being sarcastic and giggle a bit. “Ok James, I want you to be back in ten minutes or I’m coming to pick up.” Jake said. “Ok” James continues “Dragon up” Jake was amazed that James got his powers back and saw him flying out the windows. Just then Haley comes in, “who was that?” Haley said. “That was James getting clothes from his house.” Jake said. “Ok” Haley said. Haley was about to walk out until she was stop by Jake. “Haley I need to talk to you about something and I hope you listen.” Jake said. (“Well if I suspected my sister liking James, I better tell her the truth about the birds and the bees.”) “Ok spit it out already.” Haley said. “Ok here it goes…” Jake continues. Haley Scream after Jake was done speaking.
James finally flew into the house and got his clothes. Just then, there was a knock at the door. James went to the door to open it and it was Rose. “Rose what are you doing up at this late at night?” James questioned. “I lost something, and I want to know if I left it here.” Rose said (lying). “Ok come on in.” James said. Rose walk in with James right behind him. “Perfect it going to plan nicely; now we need Rose to do one more thing, she has to Kiss James on the lips to make him evil. Then we will leave.” Huntmaster said. Huntmaster knew James was the dark dragon because he saw it on TV as he transform to a dragon. “This is a nice house” Rose said. She sat on the couch waiting for James to sit down too. James finally sat down; they both look at each other until Rose made a move and Kiss James right on the lips. (“what is she doing, uhh… wow”) Rose kisses hard on James, that how the spell will works. Just then Jake flew by James’ house to check on him and he saw the worse thing in his life. Rose kissing James, (“Oh no, I can’t believe he did this, you f**king idiot, oh you will pay James. Watch what happens in school tomorrow James.”) Jake said to himself and flew back home. James pushes Rose off and said “This is not right, what did you do to …. Me?” James said. The spell that Rose kissed James on, did not even last five minutes for him to become evil. The huntclans have already left, knowing that spell has work which didn’t.
Rose woke back up from being brainwashed. “What am I doing here?” Rose said. “I don’t know, but I think you were under a spell.” James said. “A spell, oh no, d**n it. Did we do anything else? Rose said and was worried. “Well we kissed.” James said. “What!?” Rose said. Rose was very shocked and was about to slap James in the face, but she stop herself. “I know you didn’t mean it.” James said. “Yeah I know, I have to leave now, bye-bye James and see you in school.” Rose said. “But wait; did you feel anything at all?” James said. “I actually did James, and between you and me, that was a good kiss, but don’t tell Jake.” Rose said. “I promise that, good night.” James said. Rose ran out the house and James ran out, and locks the door and headed back to Jake’s house to find everyone sleeping, so James decided to plop into his bed and waited for the next morning to get up.
Rose ran home and saw her parents sleeping on the couch and Jenn sleeping in her room. Rose decides to sleep in her own bedroom that her parents made for her.
The Next Morning… Monday
Jake, James and Haley woke up and went downstairs to eat breakfast. Jake’s Mom drove James to school after they were done eating. They both arrive at the school and went inside to meet up with Trixe and Spud. They only talk for a few seconds then school bell rang and they all went in. “Ok class since Mr. Rotwood is not working in this area any more. (Jake smile) I’m will be taking this spot over for him.” Mr. Ponser continues, “Since I don’t know where he left you off on, we will be watching a movie on the civil-war.” “But why are we watching this?” James said. “Good question and I’m glad you ask that, (The class started to moan when Mr. Ponser wrote a 2 page report about the Civil War) I want a 2 page report on the Civil War. You can use anything you like as long you cite it.” Mr. Ponser said. “Meaning…” Jake said. “Meaning you have to write where you got it from…” Mr. Ponser answers back. “Ok”. The class continues to watch the movie until the school bell rang again and went to the next class which was Lunch.
Jake saw Rose and almost forgot about what happened last night. “Pardon me James, what happen last night at your house?” Jake said. (“Oh no I think Jake saw what he saw”) “Well…” James said. “No answer! Ok let me give you the reason why I ask that (Rose walk closer to the table where James and Jake were) I saw you kissing Rose last night, how dare you do that to my girlfriend!? Jake made a fist (Trixe and Spud were in shocked, Rose knew this secret was not going to last this long) “Jake if you let me explain….” James was cut off. “There is nothing to explain.” Jake said. Just then Jake went up to James and started to fight him. Jake & James went on fighting rampage against each other. Jake dodges the punch from James but he was trip by James’ foot and fell to the ground. (“I’m sorry Jake”) James said in his head. Jake came right up and punches James in the face, which made James’ nose bleed. Rose came up to them and stops the fight “STOOOOPPP!!!!” Rose said. “Rose is my girlfriend, stay away from her.” Jake said. “Look Jake, you don’t understand.” Rose said. (Jenn overheard about James kissing Rose) “Yeah Jake she was under a spell.” James said. “You are crazy.” Jake said. “James, why would you do that?” Trixe said. “I didn’t mean to do that.” (“I knew this wouldn’t last long.”) James said. “Jake come with me, we have to talk, including you James.” Rose said. “Ok” Jake & James said. Rose walks both Jake & James to the Library. Jennifer follows right behind them.
“Man that was weird.” Trixe said. “Yeah I never saw Jake get that way before.” Spud said. “Including James too.” Trixe added. “Yup. (Spud was tap on the shoulder by a girl) Yes may I help you?” Spud said and turns around and it was Stacey. “I was wondering… if you want to go to the dance with me on Friday?” Stacey said. “Are you sure? I thought you hate me.” Spud said. “No actually I like you spud, and please say yes. And hopefully we can give it a shot, since you like me.” Stacey said and smile. “Ok sure why not” Spud said and his heart began to beat a little faster. “Ok meet me at Central Park at 4pm on Friday. Got it?” Stacey said. “Yes I will be there. (Stacey ran out the lunch room) I can’t believe in all my dreams that I got a date with Stacey.” Spud said. “Your lucky boy, I don’t have a date for the dance at all.” Trixe said. “Try to ask Kyle again, maybe you will get him back.” Spud said. “Not a bad idea. I will ask him.” Trixe said and went out the lunch room to look for him. Spud sat down on the table by himself, thinking about him and Stacey. “YAY!!!” spud yell at the lunch table.
Meanwhile…. Jake, James, Rose and Jennifer went to the library to sort thing out. “Look Jake I didn’t mean to kiss Rose.” James said. “Yeah I’m sure” Jake said. “Can you both shhh. Look Jake, James didn’t kiss me, I actually kiss him.” Rose said. (Jenn and Jake was shocked) “Why would you kiss my boyfriend?” Jenn said. “I didn’t mean too, the huntsclan must of brainwash me or something” Rose said. “Say what? You telling me that James didn’t kiss you and you were under a spell trying to kiss James for what reason?” Jake said. “Well… you see… that… when Rose kiss me, I think she pass down to me an evil curse.” James said. “An evil curse?” Jenn said. “Yup, because right after she kisses me, I’ve felt evil for a couple of minutes, but it didn’t work.” James said. “Why didn’t it work?” Jake questioned. “I want to be good not evil and guess my heart fought it and broke the spell.” James said. “Oh now I get it.” Jake said. “Me too.” Jenn said. “I’m sorry James about that fight.” Jake said. “No problem, you were there to protect my girlfriend and I understand that.” James said. “Yeah about that, Rose I have to break up with you for now, sorry Rose.” (Rose was surprise) Jake said. “Why are you breaking up with me?” Rose said and was about to cry. “Because too many things are happening at once and I don’t want to deal with it right now, I’m out of here, bye-bye James and Jenn.” Jake said and walks out. “James for now I want to be friends, can you live with that?” Jenn said. “I have no problem with that.” James said. “Good” Jenn said. Jenn walks out and Rose continues to cry, James came on the other side of the table and tries to stop Rose from crying. “Look you will get Jake back, for now I think it’s best to be alone for now.” James said. “Thanks James for cheering me up (Rose wiped up her tears and looks at James) James I have to ask you something, do you want to go out with me?” Rose said. “Are you sure? I can give it a shot, but I don’t want to have another fight, like with Jake.” James said. “We will keep this as a secret and yes I’m sure.” Rose said. “Well… I guess its ok for now.” James said. “Ok see you later, James.” Rose said. Rose walk out the library and then finally James did the same.
James was worry about if Jake knows about me and Rose dating secretly, (“I hate doing that to people.”) James flew home and got a letter from the Dragon Council. James was invited to the World Dragon Adventure, all he has to do is to pick a color, there were seven different colors to choose from and He picks green. He will be a green Dragon for now on during the match. He will be traveling to Draco Island Tomorrow. Jake got the same thing but he picks Red. When Rose got home she got a letter in the mail about the Dragon Adventures. (“Why am I getting this?”) Rose reads it and understands why. (“Oh I get it, since I save Jakes life before in the fight against the Dark Dragon; I can become a Dragon for the match. Nice.”) Rose chooses pink.
James went to his room and lay down on his bed to take a quick cat nap. Just then he started to dream about his parents, but what he saw was the future of his parents. He saw his mom died because of the injuries and he saw his dad suffering from a fire and then later died. James woke up and out of breath. (“Weird, I can see into the future, oh no my parents will died, what can I do to prevent this from happening.”) James ran down the stairs and read the sheet again, and at the bottom it says, “If you win, you will get a wish spell and $5000 in cash.” (“I have to win this for my mother and father, if I don’t they are doomed and I will never get them back.”) James started to cry and sat on the chair. When Jake saw the money, he needed it to fix the house up since it’s leaking. What will happen next?
Chapter 13….. To be continue
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Post by superdoglac on Oct 20, 2006 22:31:45 GMT -5
BUM BUM BUM! Excellent story, and I'm sorry i didn't read it earlier . Can't wait till ya come back ;D
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DarkDragontc
Young Warrior Dragon
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Post by DarkDragontc on Oct 27, 2006 20:23:40 GMT -5
Thanks for waiting, I know it took a while, but hopefully I will continue to write, just make sure you comment after your read. This chapter is spilt into two parts, one is for the intro and the other is for the game.
Chapter 13a: The Dragon World
“Come on young one, we have to go” Lao Shi said. Jake was upstairs getting ready to go to the Draco Island, which is where the adventure begins for him. He grabs the letter (which you will see what it says on the next paragraph), that his proof of getting in. “Ok I’m coming down now. Lucky there is no school for the next three days.” Jake said. (Just an FYI the school was under a huge smell which stank the whole school, the reason came from Jakes breath, which again he had bad breath, the odor was so bad, Jake made the school closed down. Now back to my story.) “Your lucky you dragon breath is away, lets go Jake and make sure you have everything.” Lao Shi said. Jake and Lao shi head out the door and went to the subway to go to the Draco Island.
(Here is the letter) Dear Dragon Students,
If you got this letter, that means you are the one of top students in the dragon world. By all means tap yourself on the back. You and other dragon have been chosen to be in this competition to win $5,000 from where ever you are and a wish. The wish could be use on anything. Everyone will at least go home with a prize; usually it’s a little gift. This year is our 50th anniversary and we will give out a special prize to our wild card winner. (Which will be explain when you get there)
Get to Draco Island, once you receive this and make sure you pick your color dragon. You will not be in human form once you enter this place. Also you can’t turn back to human form until the semi-finals. Here are the colors that are available. Once you’re at Draco Island you will spend at least 3 days. Have Fun. (Remember Jake and the rest can’t see the names, he can see only the numbers, read more down for the info)
(Red Dragon)-Jake Long (Green Dragon)-Lloyd/Sparkx (Brown Dragon)-Dante. (Yellow Dragon)-Fred Nerk (Orange Dragon)-James Dark. (Blue Dragon)-TRON-THE EUROPEAN DRAGON (Sky Blue)-Shade Chaos (Black Dragon)-FullDragonAlchemist (Purple Dragon)-Rose Love (Pink Dragon)-The Empyrean Dragon (Gold Dragon)-HeartDragon (Sliver Dragon)-Redemption (White Dragon)-krypto (Yellow-Orange-Blue)-superdoglac/Veronika (Black-Purple Dragon)-littlejimmyurine (blue and black with white patterns)-spyder (Sapphire Dragon)-lildevil92 (Blue-Black Dragon)-dreamcatcher (Dark Blue)-vakama (Red-Violet Dragon)-Kokusho the Evening Star Wolfenknight: 8 (Blue-Red Dragon)
Thank you, DC #1
James had a hard time with himself, with his parents at bay of dieing from the injury of the crash and worried that he won’t win the competition. He was force to live in grandma house for a while, since Jake kick him out for what he did last night to Rose. James has feelings for Rose, but not as strong as Jake does. His Grandma Lucille Dark has already know that he was a Dragon, she was the nicest person in the world to him and he was lucky to have her. “James you better get going if you want to win that competition.” Ms. Dark said. “Ok grandma, Thanks for being there for me, I love you.” James said and gave grandma kiss and wave good bye. James was really excited to finally to have an adventure for himself. James doesn’t have to go to the subway, because since he lives in Staten Island, he can fly there on his own.
Jake and James arrive at Draco Islands minutes later but they couldn’t see there human form, so they can’t recognize from a friend to a foe. Even the voice coming from there lips would not give them the hint. Once the humans enter the vortex one at a time they turn into dragon and can not turn back until the semi finals. The DC wanted to make sure this was a great year, because last year it ended up with a tie and did not go well. This time they plan it and made sure it went well.
Once all the Dragons entered, they post to call them by there number until the semi-finals. Here is the list of numbers:
TRON: 15 (Blue Dragon) LittleJimmyurine: 23 (Black-Purple Dragon) Redemption: 10 (Sliver Dragon) Superdoglac: 5 (Yellow-Orange-Blue Dragon) Lloyd: 87 (Green Dragon) Dante: 34 (Brown Dragon) Dreamcatacher: 7 (Blue-Black Dragon) HeartDragon: 54 (Gold Dragon) ShadeChaos: 4 (Sky Blue Dragon) Spyder: 75 (Red-Black and White patterns Dragon) Krypto: 55 (white Dragon) Lildevil192: 24 (Sapphire Dragon) LP: 90 (Pink Dragon) Vakama: 65 (Dark Blue Dragon) FullDragonAlchemist: 31 (Black Dragon) Kokusho: 88 (Red-Violet Dragon) Jake: 2 (Red Dragon) Rose: 3 (Purple Dragon) James: 1 (Orange Dragon) Fred: 4 (Yellow Dragon) Wolfenknight: 8 (Blue-Red Dragon)
“Ok Jake this is where I leave you, I can’t go with you on this because of the rules, so good luck and I will cheer for you from the sidelines.” Lao Shi Said. “Ok Grandpa I will miss you, bye-bye.” Jake said. Jake went through the vortex and went in and saw many dragons. He was in dragon form and he can’t turn back into human. (“So I guess this is permanent, I wonder how we can sleep”) “Welcome everybody to the Dragon World Champion” DC 1 said. All the dragons were clapping. Jake sat down on the chair and asks a girl a question, “What going on here?” #2 said. (Remember we called them by number until the semi-finals) “The Dragon Council is speaking to us about the rules and what going to happen, this is stupid about the numbers things.” #7 said. “I know it is stupid, but what can you do.” #2 said. Jake and Dreamcatcher were talking through out the whole intro and he wasn’t paying attention to what DC said. Dreamcatcher is a 14 year old dragon girl with a beautiful hair color and body; she smiles at anything, even at a boy. She is very easy to get along with very smart. Jake and DreamCatcher already became friends after there long talk about what happening here.
James was on the other side and also asking the same question to a person. “Well this is nice, how do I know where go to?” #1 said. “They should of gave you a room number it usually when you receive in the mail.” #10 said. “Oh now I see, my room 100, that’s weird, I’m on the first floor.” #1 said. “No kidding I’m on the first floor too, but I’m little more away, I’m like 8 doors away.” #10 said. “Nice, it seems that you have been here before, is that correct?” #1 said. “Yes I have and it’s been awful last year, I hope this year goes well.” #10 said. “I hope so too.” #1 said. Redemption and James were talking though out the whole intro, but James was making sure he got every piece of info from the person that was speaking. Redemption was 15 year old girl dragon; her color is sliver with a nice glow, very clean, neat and loyal.
“I hope you enjoy your stay here, and be careful of what you do here and remember the rules in the games you play. The first game is kickball/baseball game, you be using gloves when your in the field; you will find more about that game tomorrow, for now get some rest and get ready for tomorrow game. If you want to know what team your on look on the bulletin board on my left and right for Team A and B. If you has a mark © next to you then you’re the captain of that team and you have to meet me after this intro is done. Thank you.” DC 1 said. All the dragons clap and went to the bulletin board to see what team they are on. (You should know by now what team your on, but just incase you don’t there right here.)
“I’m Team captain of Team B, wow I must did something good last year.” #10 said. “Good for you #10, I’m on team A, and… (James was shocked) I’m a captain of Team A, no way, I wonder why. (Hmm I guess it was made for the mess earlier.) #1 said. “Nice Job!” #65 said. “Thanks. I see you on the tomorrow.” #1 said. James and Redemption went up to the Dragon Council and they got the © patch plus they are allow to change the positions for each player and they are allow to make the choice if the situations calls. #1 and #10 just became friends and now have to go against each other; they both shake hands and ran to their rooms.
In each of the rooms that the Dragons stay in there are two rooms. Within each of the rooms there one bed for each of the Dragons that they sleep and a closet for each for the dragons to put there clothes in. The beds are made for the dragons, since they can’t turn back to human form until the Semi-finals. James stays with a nice young Dragon name Kokusho. Kokusho is a 13 year old Dragon (His birthday is tomorrow) with a mix of Red and Violet color on the front and back. He is very nice person to get along with and sometimes takes joke too seriously. James enter the room and didn’t notice that he saw another person in the room, he thought it was a one room; if he was listening about the dormitory intro and how they are setup maybe he will know what’s going on. He took like a men and said, “Hi” “Hi, who are you?” #88 said. “I guess I’m your dorm buddy. #1 said. “Oh I was been waiting to see you, I got in late but I mostly know all the rules since I read a lot and draw a lot.” #88 said. “That’s cool; you seem very young to be in here.” #1 said. “Well actually my birthday is not until tomorrow so I will 14 then. Did you check what team am I on?” #88 said. “Yeah you’re on my team.” #1 said. “Nice, that’s good. Who is our captain for the team?” #88 said. “Well, it’s weird but you’re looking at him.” #1 said. “It can’t be you, really? (James nod his head) it’s very rare that a first time dragon student get the © patch, you must of did something good.” #88 said. “I guess I did, (The phone rings) I will get it.” #1 said. James went to the phone and picks it up. “Hello.” #1 said. “Hey #1 sup?” #10 said. “Hey #10, nothing much just unpacking and getting ready for bed.” #1 said. “Ok, well me and some of my friends are going out to the lounge to hang out and get to know each other better, do you want to join us and ask your buddy if he wants to join too?” #10 said. “Sure why not, I have to meet these dragons.” #1 said, James hang up the phone. “You want to come with me and meet new dragons?” #1 said. “Umm… ok… I will come.” #88 said. James and Kokusho went to the lounge which is on the first floor.
Jake and Dreamcatcher walk to there rooms and notice they were neighbors, because they were right next to each other. Jake went into the room and saw another person in there with the number 87 in it. “Hey #87 sup?” #2 said. “Finally. It’s nice to meet you. As you know I’m #87.” Said #87. “I know it sucks with these rules, but what can you do.” #2 said. Lloyd (#87) is a 14 year old dragon that loves everything about green, he is a fully green dragon and also he likes meeting new people like Jake for example. Lloyd is very friendly and respectful. There was a knock at the door, it was James (remember Jake doesn’t know who he is because of the Dragon Costume.) “Come on you guys, you be late for the team places and how we going to meet each other.” Said #1. “Ok we are coming, Ready #87.” Said #2. “Yup I’m ready.” #87 said. They both went out the door to the lounge.
“This is great, you get your own rooms and can stay up as long as you like.” #65 said. “Yeah I agree it’s great to be here” #34 said. Vakama (65) is a 14 year old Dragon that is very dark blue dragon. He is very tall dragon than most of the dragons in this competition. He is Trustworthy and Loyal. Dante (34) is the Brown Dragon. He is a 14 year old dragon that likes to skateboard and is a great in sports. Which means he is good at any sports that he likes to try. “Look it’s the team setups, there on the board.” #5 said. Superdoglac (5) is a mix color dragon, the mix of Blue, yellow and Orange. She is very creative in every different way, people respect her for that. She love animals and loves to play with them.
Team A 1.James Dark 2.Fred Nerk 3.Rose Love 4.FullDragonAlchemist 5.TRON-THE EUROPEAN DRAGON 6.littlejimmyurine 7.Shade Chaos 8.krypto 9.lildevil92 10.vakama
Team B 1.Jake Long 2.Lloyd/Sparkx 3.Dante 4.Kokusho the Evening Star 5.dreamcatcher 6.HeartDragon 7.superdoglac/Veronika 8.spyder 9.The Empyrean Dragon 10.Redemption You might see the names here, but the rest see numbers in this story. “Ok everyone, these are the teams for tomorrow game, get some rest and get ready to play tomorrow.” #10 said. Everyone said “Ok”. They went to bed and were ready to play the Kickball/baseball game. Who will win?
To Be Continue…
P.S if I didn’t mention your name, don’t worry you will be mention in the next story I make. That is a promise. Pleases Comment if you read this.
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Post by superdoglac on Oct 27, 2006 20:32:26 GMT -5
Wow! Great job, are you a mind reader of something cause I really do love animals . XD
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Post by redemption on Oct 27, 2006 20:35:05 GMT -5
Hmmmm..... Very interesting. ;D Wait... I'm a team captain? And I'm also a friend of James.... Update soon!
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DarkDragontc
Young Warrior Dragon
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Post by DarkDragontc on Oct 28, 2006 8:33:38 GMT -5
^ yup your the team Captian, there is a reason for that. Anyway don't forget about the question on the 29 on a sunday and 8pm.
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