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Post by ADJLFanatic on Aug 7, 2006 1:39:02 GMT -5
Whee! Starting over again. And I mean fresh... this is all new and I'm striving for something way better... The storyline and school name will still the same... it'll just be a teensy bit different from the old AUA. I know not all of you read my constant rambles on why I wanted to delete it and start all over again earlier in the morning... so... if you wanna know just ask me or other people... I won't ramble now. This process is gonna be long enough... Soo... starting over with the format. Again, you MUST fill out everything... the deadline for entries this time is August 12, 2006. I need at least 10 other characters for this story... I've got two of my own characters already... So... yeah. Here's the format you MUST follow and fill out completely... But first, here's some information/rules you might want to read and follow. Rules/Information1. You have a choice of entering a minimum of one and a maximum of two characters in this story. 2. The format must be filled out completely. No blanks please (except for the optional fields)... and be sure to be descriptive as you can with what you add in. I need to know exactly what your character's stuff are. Otherwise, I won't do it right. 3. I'm getting a little leniant with descriptions. I'm sorry if I'm being strict about this... but I'd love it better if you just describe IN WORDS what your character looks like. I'm tired of just seeing images... I'm sorry to say that, but I prefer if you take the time just to type it down... If you REALLY are that lazy or don't want to post a typed description, I don't mind. I'd apprecaite if you did, though. XD 4. In any event I make a mistake, don't bash or get mad at me... just simply tell me nicely something along the lines of, 'It seems like you made a mistake on my character. Would you mind fixing it?' then tell me what I need to work on. 5. Constructive critiscm is what I consider a good review. I do not require it in my reviews/replies, by the way, since I'm being nice. But I'm still a little leniant with the way people review (sort of)... so at least tell me ONE thing you liked. It can be anything like, 'I liked this chapter because...' or 'This chapter needs a little bit of improvement because...'. Don't even try just saying you liked/hated it without a reason. I need a reason please. Format(copy, paste, then fill out... post it in this thread of in a PM) Name:* Age:* Birthplace/Last Recent Location:^ Gender:* Species:* Description:* Alter-ego Name:* History:^ Powers/Abilities:* Personality:* Other information:^ By the way, I'm not adding an optional choice for alignments... It's hard to have evil charries in your story... so... sorry if you were evil or something. XD If you'd like an example on how to fill out the format correctly, PM me and I'll send you an example of my OC (from my past stories), Cat. And that's it. Sorry if you had to go through that... but I want to make this as organized as possible... okay? ^^ Peace out! ADJLFanatic
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Post by Atecom on Aug 7, 2006 4:18:03 GMT -5
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Post by charles finley. on Aug 7, 2006 4:37:27 GMT -5
Name: Ashleigh, Everyone calls her Ash tho
Age:13
Birthplace/Last Recent Location: Plamer Alaska/ Germany
Gender: Female
Species: Dragon
Description: Long blonde hair with purple bangs and red at the ends. Blue eyes and fair skin. She were a long red jacket (for thos of you that watch FMA, like Eds). Underneth that she has a black tee shirt and blue jeans. She were white tennies and her left arm is made of metal. Automail is what it is called. (Haha, Im such a dork. I forgot her Dragon thing..XD)
Dragon loooks: A light/dark blue color. White underbelly. Her claws are red color. On her wings she has a flame thing. Her metal arm looks like a normal arm, and the mark on right arm doesnt show. Her hair in up in a ponytail
Alter-ego Name: Alaskan Dragon
History: ...
Powers/Abilities: Alchemy. Dragon
Personality: Normally, Ash is wild and extreme. She does what she wants and doesnt care what people think about her. The only time she gets clam when she is around her boyfriend, Al. She is nice to teachers, but mean to people that are jerks to her. Call her short and your in for it
Other information: Beside the fact that Al is her bf? Then No
Name: Alphonse Powter, Everyone calls him Al
Age: 14
Birthplace/Last Recent Location: ...Um..
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Description: He has brown/blondish hair. Its long and is pulled back into a ponytail most of the time (for those of you that watch FMA, like Eds). He wears a red tee shirt and black pants. He black tennis and has green eyes.
Alter-ego Name:
History:
Powers/Abilities: Alchemy
Personality: Unlike Ash, he is normally shy. When he is around Ash and his friends, he will be more of a normal kid. He tries to be nice to everyone. But if you make fun of Ash or any one that he is friends with. Your life will be hell..
Other information: Ash is his girlfriend..XD
There you go Raffi!
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dreamcatcher
Young Warrior Dragon
._.[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by dreamcatcher on Aug 7, 2006 10:16:45 GMT -5
Name: kay Age:13 Birthplace/Last Recent Location:philidelphia Gender:female Species:dragon Description: has dirty blond hair to her shoulders, always wears a baseball cap, t-shirt, basketball shorts and sport sandels. In her dragon form she is black, has a light blue belly, light blue hair down her back and on the tip of her tail, light blue mouth, blue wings, two horns, green eyes, zigzag eyebrows, and two long wisker like things near her mouth. Alter-ego Name:dreamcatcher History:Kay is from a special clan of dragons called the quietus draco which means sleep dragon. This clan has a special power that separates them from the other dragons. Of course that power is to enter dreams without any dream charm or potion. They protect the dream world from evil dream creatures like chimeras and sometimes even krylocks. Not only do they protect the dream world but also the outside world. Kay’s clan is slowly fading out because of the huntclan and since there are less dragons, there are more evil creature killings. Now only Kay’s family is left but her parents don’t protect the dream world anymore. So it’s up to herself, her bother, and her sister, to defend the whole dream world. Since it’s hard for only 3 dragons to protect the whole dream world, the dragon counsel granted them the gift of speed. They run on all fours like a dog but run as fast as a speeding train but they had to give up makeing doppelgangers in exchange for this. The counsel gave them each special names too. Nightmare is Kay’s brother, Daydream is Kay’s sister, and Dreamcatcher is herself. The dragon counsel appointed Nightmare as both her and her sister’s dragon master. Now it's up to them to protect the dream world and not get killed while doing their job. Powers/Abilities:can enter peoples dreams, runs on four legs like a dog but as fast as a speeding train..Has all the powers of a regular dragon, but can't make a doppelganger. Personality:really hyper, smart, funny, nice, likes to play pranks on people and missuses her power to enter dreams. Other information: love's coffee THANK YOU
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Post by Erinul, Mass Ressurected on Aug 7, 2006 10:55:45 GMT -5
Name: Mark
Age: 15
*MODIFIED ON 11/5/06* Birthplace/Last Recent Location: Birthplace unknown; Last known sighting was during the attack on the 'Temple' *See 'other information' for more details*
Gender: Male
Species: Human, Dragon, Demon
Description: In human form, he is tall, has red eyes that have a slashes going horizonally, wears glasses that turn into sunglasses while outside, usually wears black clothing and has a silver dragon pendant that his mother gave to him when he was born. In demon form he has horns that go from the tips of his ears to his edge of his eyebrows, blood-red eyes, insane power and speed (at the cost of his ability to control his actions), and wings that somehow drip blood and have a blood-red aura around them; he obtained this when he was born *See 'Other Information' below for more details* In dragon form, has green skin, light-green underbelly, black claws, has a tatoo on his arm that says (in japanese) 'Death', has different hair color and skin to reflect his mood or his preference. Here are the different colors of his hair (bottom/top color in order):
*MODIFIED ON 11/5/06* Mood: color (bottom color) and color (top color)
Angry: Red and Black (Takes on appearance of real flames) Sad: Blue and Green (shines, almost like it is metal Happy: Black and Green (like flames) Tired: Black and Blue (is three times as long) Normal Color: Red and Yellow (Takes on appearance of fire)
*ADDED ON 11/5/06* He also has different skin colors (dragon forms only; color changes during combat as well):
Angry: Black skin with blood-red underbelly Sad: Black skin with grey (90%) underbelly Happy: Silver skin, red underbelly Tired: Blue skin, dark-blue underbelly Normal: Green skin, light-green underbelly
Alter-ego Name: Dragon Flame; Dragon Flare
History: *see under 'Other Information'*
Powers/Abilities: Ability to materialize his weapons (Meteor Hammer, which he can wield with one hand even though it weighs almost the same as a regular adult male, and the Dagger of Empty Sorrows) *ADDED ON 11/5/06*Can give anyone besides himself the ability to use a replica of the Meteor hammer (will require two hands) and/or the Dagger of Empty Sorrows for ten minutes. Can go into three different forms:
Super Form (which hightens his physical strength)
Spirit Form (which hightens his non-physical abilities like breathing fire and creating a barrier of flames around himself)
Shinigami form (is reverted back to human form, but with a left wing resembling an angel, and his right wing resembling a demon. His eyes are dark red, and his hair has two layers to it: The bottom part is dark red and the top part is black. He can use any of his physical or non-physical attacks with hightened power at the cost of consuming a lot of energy and stamina.)
Personality: Usually quiet, but when trouble arises, he fights until his enemy is either retreated or is dead. Does not talk to anyone unless something important is to be discussed.
Other information:
History (ADDED on 11/5/06!): Born somewhere in the month of December, Mark has had his dragon powers since birth. As one of the ten newborns that were given the "Psyanton" Gene, which gives those who have it the powers of a dragon, he was sent to a special training facility called 'Temple' at the age of seven. He used to be very talkative, outgoing, and very happy. On the day that Mark turned ten, however, a massive army of Phaers, Forgotten, and Yzao descended upon Temple. During the battle, Mark turned into his Demon form for the first time, killing everyone within a mile of him. The battle was over. Only three people out of the selected ten Psyanton's were still alive: Mark, his best friend Sert, and Mark's biggest rival Nieril. Neither Nieril or Sert knew that Mark killed the other seven kids, nor did Mark himself. Mark thinks he was knocked out by a Phaer during the battle. All three of them parted ways shortly after the attack and to this day, Mark has no knowledge of their whereabouts. He joined the Draco Island School Of Magic (a year before Jake arrived) to help increase his dragonic abilities, to help see through magic spells and counter them, and help control his Demon powers so as to be able to control his Demon form's movements. He also is practicing with his weapons (the Meteor Hammer and the Dagger of Sorrows) every night so as for no one to disturb him in his training. He is currently still in DISOM, and still searching for his friend and his rival.
Just to help you out, here's a small dictionary for my character's history:
Dictionary:
Psyanton Gene: A gene that is almost rare in humans. It gives the person who has inherited the gene dragon powers at the cost of a demon form. People say that those around the Psyanton Gene carriers are instantly killed whenever the gene carrier goes into demon mode.
Phaer (Fay-ers): A being that resembles a human, but is completely purple and has no face at all.
Forgotten: Creatures of darkness that resembles a human, but have the ability to create copies of themselves when attacked by any weapon except for the Dagger of Sorrows, which turns them into dust, and can be used to either replenish a person's energy or kill all enemies with lightning speed. (if you've played Prince of Persia The Sands of Time, then you'll understand this better).
Yzao (ease-ow): Floating orbs from the darkest depths of the Netherworld. Makes anyone it latches onto to recall their worst memories. When a foe is subdued by it's worst memories, it will use Darkness Crush to shatter the victim's mind, causing the person to literally die from being "brain dead". Fourty-eight hours after death, a person will then turn into a FD (Fener Dust; see below).
Fener Dust: A creature that can copy a person's best fighing style or fighting moves and uses them against a person. The only way to beat them is with the Dagger of Sorrows or the Meteor Hammer.
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Post by Chaos on Aug 7, 2006 18:39:59 GMT -5
Name: Shade Chaos
Age: 13
Birthplace/Last Recent Location: Born in Scotland, lives in New York, near Jake.
Gender: Male
Species: Human and Ice Dragon
Description: Shade's human form consists of light blue hair that sticks out of his bandana. He wears a pure, blue navy shirt that slightly goes over his palms. He also wears green, baggy pants as well as black shoes. He is also quite short, shorter than Jake. Shade's dragon form has light blue scales and light blue wings, but the inside of his wings are grey as well as his claws. His stomach is very dark blue and his hair is also a light bluish color, more of a sky blue.
Alter-ego Name: Freezy the Ice Dragon
History: No bad past at all... ^^
Powers/Abilities: Shade can control the powers of ice, and learned water when he started to get onto his older age. Eventually, Shade studied under pressure point martial arts, either making a body part not move, numb them, or hurt.
Personality: Shade is fun and outgoing, very smart too. He's got a very bad temper, but other than that, Shade's personality is somewhat perfect, unless angry.
Other information: Shade's girlfriend if Florence, who just recently left and rejoined Shade and the rest of team ninja. He thinks about Florence a lot, he really likes her. ^^ Shade's old nemisis, Aqua, has also just recently come back with his water powers again.
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Iron Hand
Student
Get money.. by any means necessary..
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Post by Iron Hand on Aug 7, 2006 20:17:35 GMT -5
Name: Kellen/ Kel Age: 15 Birthplace/Last Recent Location: Santa Rosa, California Gender: Male Species: Metal Human Description: (Metal morphed appearance is that, except everything it metal XD) Alter-ego Name: IronHand History: Not much is known about Iron. All that is known, is that he has a mother that lives a whiles away from the boarding school. When he was around 9 or so, figured out he was a metal human from his mother, he was shocked, and excited at the same time. One day while he was testing out his powers in the downtown area, he was attacked by a werewolf, but someone.. some group had saved him. They fled before he could thank them, so he ran after them, and found their encampent. He was going into the lair, when the Huntsclan surrounded him. He was really scared, they told him not to worry. He asked who they were, and they said they were the huntsclan. Iron was confused, but asked what they did, they said that they hunted bad creatures that harmed humans. Iron nodded. Then the Huntsman noticed he had an ironhand, and asked if he'd like to join. Iron said he would think about it. A couple days later, he was walking around, and saw the huntsclan fighting a dragon. Iron gasped and ironed up. He controlled a car right at the dragons head, it looked and screamed really loud in pain. The Huntsclan turned to him and grinned (Or it seemed like it, they couldn't tell because of their masks) The Huntsman walked to him and said thanks, and asked if he was ready. Iron nodded, and he then became apart of the Huntsclan for the next 4-5 years. Then his mother said it was time for him to use his power more effectively, she was really proud of him, and realized she could make him better, so she sent him to the school. The Huntsclan is unknown about any scemes for the school, but you never know. Powers/Abilities: 1. Metal control Able to control any metal substance, or anything with metal on it. 2. Metal Morph Able to turn body into full flexible metal. 3. Object Metal Morph Able to turn an object into metal. Depending on the size of an object, is how long it takes to turn it into metal. Personality: A happy-go-lucky man, with a body of steel, and a will or iron. He can be very nice, but when you make him angry it takes a while to calm him down. He seems to love guns. He's a good fighter, but sometimes gets too thingyy and gets distracted from his duties. He likes to keep free of negative thoughts. Iron has also been known to predict the future; not like ESP, but he says something and something happened. Basically he has a very strong intution, and is good at figuring out things. Other information: NEIN! XD
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Post by Kisama on Aug 8, 2006 16:32:52 GMT -5
Name: John/Joshyboy Age:15 Birthplace: Brighton (south of london) Species: Human/Light Dragon
Histroy: Sick of my life at school day in day out everyday was the same, my father was a studied at the karate dragon style school in london. mother used to work as a cheif at subway but she quit and became a resterant waitress. John was got teased & Beaten up by these bullie chavs at his old school, until they cut one of his fingers off for fun, he was resigned at a school called patcham high were eveyone studied hard and became friends with a Metalhead called Stan and a wild girl called Sally. When john was walking on the field to the bus stop about 6:00pm after everybody had left and gone home. then all of a sudden a dragon came falling from the sky from nowhere, and was being hunted down by another dragon. John picked up the dragon and ran like hell, the other dragon started throwing fireballs at him and slashing him, John found a bike and put the dragon on it and he rid off on the motoway. dogdeing every traffic and the other dragons attack witch hit most of the cars, vans, etc etc. John finally managed to loose the other dragon from under a tunnel. when he got home the dragon was left on his bed, john started panting and fell asleep next to the dragon. In the night, the other dragon woke up but was badly hurt, desiding the other dragon couldn't do anything he turning into glitter and fued with john. and thats how john got his super powers.
Powers/Abilitys: 1. Shadow of the dragon: allows him to create a shadow figure of him but X100 bigger and it can smash throw houses and skyscarpers 2. Crystals Of Fury: Creates Crystals and uses them like ninja stars 3. White Fire: Basiclly Normal Dragon Fire but can be turn into ice aswell 4. Krimson Mode: Makes him faster than the eye can see, and increasses his stength 5: Stuffering: Makes him stornger eveytime he is woonded badly
Personality: A Hard Core Party Rocker Very Kind, Mostly Looks At Clouds For Happy Times and sad times, he love playing video games with friends, get quite annoying at times, and he loves any type of music
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Aug 8, 2006 19:30:34 GMT -5
Fwee... okay. XD Submissions are now closed! Thanks for the sign-ups guys. ^^ I actually got 12 characters now... haha... thanks... Prologue will be posted some time today, y'all!
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Post by charles finley. on Aug 9, 2006 0:07:31 GMT -5
Saweet! cant wait for the update Raf!
-Ash
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Aug 9, 2006 4:56:16 GMT -5
@ Ash: Then you might want to read this. @ Everyone else: Thanks for the submissions. I guess I didn't need to extend the deadline all the way until Saturday... ^^ An Unlikely Adventure By: ADJLFanatic PrologueThe glow of the afternoon sun had shown down that day. A temperate breeze had cooled the citizens of New York City with gentle touches of the wind. All the normal sounds of the city were arisen throughout the entire metropolis. All that was average were surrounding this outsized municipality such as honking cars, chattering inhabitants, those infuriating car alarms you constantly seem to hear, and other unmentionables. Among all of this hustle and bustle in New York, there was a commonly diminutive part of most places… a component that was known as boredom that brainwashed the minds of teenagers… This portion of the conurbation was called… middle school. In this miniature, urban area was filled with many students. Amid these number of apprentices was one that didn’t seem as normal as the rest. That one individual was a regular eighth grader named Jake Long. This teenager was now dwelling in a class called English… “Come onnnnn… is the bell going to ring yet?” The class might have been in the midst of a lesson, but him and his best friends stood anxiously as they lingered longingly for the sound of a school bell ringing. “Am I boring you, Mr. Long?” “Uh… umm… no sir… I mean mister… I… I mean… Professor. Uh… Principal… Rotwood.” Jake spluttered a little. “Very well.” Principal Rotwood might’ve been a... principal but he will always be the proxy for this class as prolonged as they settled and set foot in that school. At this time, he had gone back to his constant rambling on nothingness… or so it seemed. OoOoOoOoOoO When the bell at last dismissed them all, the trio had departed out from the crowd to saunter to their accommodations collectively. “Hey Jake,” alleged his best friend Trixie. “You’re up for the skate park today, right?” “Oooh, can’t. Gramps told me to go to the shop after school.” Jake murmured to his questioning companion. “Is it because of your dragon training again? I thought you were already done with that,” asked his impractical pal, Spud. He was assembled in the left side of the crew while Trixie was placed on the right, making Jake the central position of the cluster. “I don’t know.” Jake responded to his friends. “Gramps told me that I’m completely done with training; I have been for two weeks. He said he taught me everything he knows… I don’t understand why he’d make this such a big deal this time.” “Dude, maybe the Huntsman figured out that Rose didn’t slay you yet! Evil!!” Spud remarked without judgment. “I don’t think so. Rose told me that the Huntsman totally bought it.” Jake pointed out. “Besides… it’s been three months and we haven’t seen a single sign of the Huntsman or the Huntsclan.” “You know, homeboy’s got a point, Spudinsky.” Trixie commented. “Well, I’m just saying!” Spud said. As his two friends were skittering home, Jake set off to the shop. All day, he was pondering in his mind about what could perhaps be so imperative for him to go to the shop that day. OoOoOoOoOoO “Is that even legal?” Jake protested with such anguish. “Well, of course it is, kid. You heard it from the old man and you believe it like it’s magic.” Fu alleged. “I mean, what kinda of rule is this? Move to a boarding school? Leave home? What is this… is this some kind of a joke?” Fu trembled his head slowly. “I’m afraid not.” “You see, the dragon council informed me today that once you have completed all of your training that your dragon master has taught you, it is of the essence that you are to progress to a boarding school in the Isle of Draco.” Lao Shi explicated tranquilly. Jake, though, didn’t take this very unperturbedly. “I thought you said that once I’m done with dragon training, I’m done for good. Why didn’t you tell me that I had to move out to this boarding school after I was done with my dragon business?” “Because, kid.” Fu said with a bit of arrogance. “The dragon council doesn’t do this for all dragons… only for you, the American Dragon. Since you are the first, they kind of need to see if you really are the best one for the job.” “But what about what Gramps said?” “This rule wasn’t actually official until… around… say, two days ago.” Fu replied. “But why me?” Jake grumbled immaturely. “It is what the dragon council wants. So it is what they will get,” Lao Shi informed him. Jake moaned despondently. “I am sorry, young one… but there is no other choice.” Lao Shi sighed sympathetically. “I wish I did have a choice…” End PrologueSorry... I know it was short... But come on, aren't most prologues short? T_T Hope it was good though... o.o; Chapter one coming soon. ADJLFanatic
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Post by charles finley. on Aug 9, 2006 14:06:15 GMT -5
I am reading this! XD
Bwwhaaa..We make Jaike go to our school! XD
Updates soons ma friend!
-Ash
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dreamcatcher
Young Warrior Dragon
._.[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by dreamcatcher on Aug 9, 2006 14:11:50 GMT -5
good start! update soon!
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Iron Hand
Student
Get money.. by any means necessary..
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Post by Iron Hand on Aug 9, 2006 16:08:42 GMT -5
Whoa! What happened to the old Raffi? XDD. That is amazing writing right there! AMAZING =D Wow.. way better than I expected ;D Hehe, you truly are a great writer ^_^ Good job on the characters. Jake kinda.. sounded like me ;; XD. Update soon! You awesome writer! =D -Kel
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Post by Chaos on Aug 9, 2006 18:11:43 GMT -5
Aww... Poor Jakey Jake. I can't wait for the next chapter, that was real awesome. ^^
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