Post by ADJLFanatic on Jul 3, 2006 19:52:56 GMT -5
Hey y'all. This is me again. But I didn't completely write this story. My best friend offline, Ginette, just came up with a story while on the phone together. We wrote it together and I typed it for her. She'll post it on FFnet too. ^_^
Anyway, I'm Ginette's co-writer. So, I do a little bit of the work. She came up with the story, most of the events, and... pretty much almost everything. I just helped a little. We kind of alternated with writing too. Well, enough about my babbling. Here's chapter one.
Summary: Twenty years after everything took place, Jake and Rose became eternally bonded for eight years, with a seven-year-old daughter in their care. It was only one day that daddy was with Kimmy, playing around with her… then it was another, seeing him die. She loved daddy so much, now she can’t handle living with just… mom. Young, little Kimberly loved her, but daddy was her favorite.
Chapter 1: Bonding
“Daddy! Daddy!” squealed Kimmy.
She was running around he house, trying to find her father. It was Saturday and it seemed like a bore to her. All of friends were out playing and she was stuck at home, while mommy was somewhere. Why she was a complete mystery but she didn’t mind it all that much…
“Yes sweetcheeks?” Jake said, coming over to his daughter in an instant.
“I’m bored!” She said, still hopping up and down repeatedly.
Jake waited until she held up her arms to pick her up. He did ever so gingerly and cuddled her.
“I know you are, Kimmy.” He grinned. “Say, how about we play a little game of dragon?”
“That would be cool, daddy!” Kimmy said, looking at him with her sweet, innocent eyes. It was an amazing mix of blue and hazel, which sparkled like the morning sun. Her blondish, brown hair was very long—below the waist.
It was unusual. Jake had never told her daughter that dragons and other magical creatures really existed. So whenever they played the game of “dragon”, Kimmy always laughed at the end… not only because she enjoys it with daddy, but also because she knows for a fact that dragons, in her case, don’t exist.
“Now get your wings ready for take off!” Jake said playfully.
He held Kimmy with gentle, but safe, support as he carried her.
“Whee!” She said excitedly. “I’m a dragon, hear me roar! Roar!”
“Yay! Go Kimmy!” Jake said, as he still played around with her. He was holding her waist with both hands as he ‘hovered’ around the house. Upstairs, downstairs, everywhere around the entire residence they went.
“Now daddy has to go and fix up lunch.” He said. “Time for a landing!”
“Noooo! I still want to go flying!” She giggled.
“Yeees! All little dragons need an appetite.” Jake said, making sound effects as he teasingly set Kimmy down the ground.
“Yay!” Kimmy said, clinging on to her dad. “I wish I was a dragon!”
“Hehe, yeah… me too.” He chuckled.
“I love you, daddy.” Kimmy said, jumping up and hugging her father.
“I love you too, Kimmy.” Jake said, leaning over and kissing her on the cheek.
Ginette: Well that’s a wrap for chapter one!
Raffi: But it’s short! Can’t we continue on?
Ginette: Nah. I think that’s it. It’ll be a pretty good beginning.
Raffi: But... but…
Ginette: IT’S MY STORY! (grins evilly) Oooh… and what shall happen when I kill Jakey?
Raffi: (gasps) How dare you!
Ginette: Hey, it’s part of the story.
Raffi: But… but… I love Jake!
Ginette: Ah, you can deal with it. Anyway, any and all flames shall be thrown at my co-writer!
Raffi: HEY! Why me?
Peaaaaaacceee
Loooovvvvee
GE and AF ♥
Anyway, I'm Ginette's co-writer. So, I do a little bit of the work. She came up with the story, most of the events, and... pretty much almost everything. I just helped a little. We kind of alternated with writing too. Well, enough about my babbling. Here's chapter one.
♥ Daddy ♥
By: GinettexDogz4Ever
(and co-writer, ADJLFanatic)
By: GinettexDogz4Ever
(and co-writer, ADJLFanatic)
Summary: Twenty years after everything took place, Jake and Rose became eternally bonded for eight years, with a seven-year-old daughter in their care. It was only one day that daddy was with Kimmy, playing around with her… then it was another, seeing him die. She loved daddy so much, now she can’t handle living with just… mom. Young, little Kimberly loved her, but daddy was her favorite.
Chapter 1: Bonding
“Daddy! Daddy!” squealed Kimmy.
She was running around he house, trying to find her father. It was Saturday and it seemed like a bore to her. All of friends were out playing and she was stuck at home, while mommy was somewhere. Why she was a complete mystery but she didn’t mind it all that much…
“Yes sweetcheeks?” Jake said, coming over to his daughter in an instant.
“I’m bored!” She said, still hopping up and down repeatedly.
Jake waited until she held up her arms to pick her up. He did ever so gingerly and cuddled her.
“I know you are, Kimmy.” He grinned. “Say, how about we play a little game of dragon?”
“That would be cool, daddy!” Kimmy said, looking at him with her sweet, innocent eyes. It was an amazing mix of blue and hazel, which sparkled like the morning sun. Her blondish, brown hair was very long—below the waist.
It was unusual. Jake had never told her daughter that dragons and other magical creatures really existed. So whenever they played the game of “dragon”, Kimmy always laughed at the end… not only because she enjoys it with daddy, but also because she knows for a fact that dragons, in her case, don’t exist.
“Now get your wings ready for take off!” Jake said playfully.
He held Kimmy with gentle, but safe, support as he carried her.
“Whee!” She said excitedly. “I’m a dragon, hear me roar! Roar!”
“Yay! Go Kimmy!” Jake said, as he still played around with her. He was holding her waist with both hands as he ‘hovered’ around the house. Upstairs, downstairs, everywhere around the entire residence they went.
“Now daddy has to go and fix up lunch.” He said. “Time for a landing!”
“Noooo! I still want to go flying!” She giggled.
“Yeees! All little dragons need an appetite.” Jake said, making sound effects as he teasingly set Kimmy down the ground.
“Yay!” Kimmy said, clinging on to her dad. “I wish I was a dragon!”
“Hehe, yeah… me too.” He chuckled.
“I love you, daddy.” Kimmy said, jumping up and hugging her father.
“I love you too, Kimmy.” Jake said, leaning over and kissing her on the cheek.
-- END CHAPTER ONE --
Ginette: Well that’s a wrap for chapter one!
Raffi: But it’s short! Can’t we continue on?
Ginette: Nah. I think that’s it. It’ll be a pretty good beginning.
Raffi: But... but…
Ginette: IT’S MY STORY! (grins evilly) Oooh… and what shall happen when I kill Jakey?
Raffi: (gasps) How dare you!
Ginette: Hey, it’s part of the story.
Raffi: But… but… I love Jake!
Ginette: Ah, you can deal with it. Anyway, any and all flames shall be thrown at my co-writer!
Raffi: HEY! Why me?
Peaaaaaacceee
Loooovvvvee
GE and AF ♥