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Post by The Pantheon Dragon on Oct 8, 2006 11:09:22 GMT -5
Not bad.I like Chris so far.
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Post by nyc2dragon on Oct 8, 2006 12:27:44 GMT -5
Thanks, we are just about getting to the real good stuff here.
And about Zuko being evil or not. He might not be evil, but he is not very nice. At the very least, can we agree on that. He is probably not going to be nice to a pauper, like the prince in my story. Zuko probably would spit on her.
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Post by fudogg on Oct 8, 2006 13:55:41 GMT -5
Yeah. He isn't that nice. But I think Zuko would spit on her hair in season one, but season 2, I highly doubt it. Continue your story!
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Post by irishdragon on Oct 8, 2006 19:43:46 GMT -5
What's with the cowboys
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Post by nyc2dragon on Oct 8, 2006 21:36:49 GMT -5
That was a fantasy or dream sequence, that Jake had. Hope that explains it, now back to our story. The next day after school, Jake, Trixie, and Spud, were at Jake's house, trying to decide what suit Jake should wear to the dance. "How about this one?" Jake asked. "Or this one? "Or this one?" "I like the first one." Spud said. "You look good in that suit, if I was a girl I would be all over you." Jake interupted. "Ok I get it." "Jake you need to chill out. Trixie said. "If Rose doesn't like you, because of the suit you wear, than forget her. She ain't good enough for you anyway." Meanwhile at Rose's friends Courtney's house, Rose was trying out different dresses she had with her two friends Courtney and Jessica. "How about this one?" Rose pointed to the dress. "As if, not if you want to look like a color blind person." Courtney said. Rose pointed to another dress, "How about this one?" she asked. "No way, that dress just says bargan bin." Jessica said. "I want to Jake to love it." Rose says. "Don't worry, he'll like it. Even though he is kind of full of himself, he is a great guy." Courtney says. "How about this one?" Rose asked, as she pointed to another dress. "Perfect" Courtney and Jessia say simotaneously. "Your going to be the prettiest girl there." Courntey says. "And shut those brat cheerleaders up." Jessica says. "The wickied witches of Fillmore." The three of them say simotanteously and laugh. Later on in the night, Jake enters Grampa shop. "Jake where have you been?" Gramps asked. You seem destracted by something." Gramps says. "No I am not destracted grampa." Gramps responds, "You need to focus on your dragon duties, tomorow is a big night. Be focused. Your number 1 priority is to protect the magical world, never forget that." Gramps yells. At around the same time, Rose returns to the Huntsleer, the Huntsman is not to happy about her lateness. "Thorn where have you been? he asks. "You seem destracted by something." the Huntsman says. "No it is nothing." she says. The Huntsman responds "You need to focus on the duties of the Huntsclan, tomorow is a big night. We will rid the world of the American Dragon and his dragon master once an for all. Your number 1 priority is to slay dragons, never forget that." the Huntsman says. That night, in his room, Jake is sleeping and in dreamland. He dreams, that he is suppose to meet Rose for a date in front of his grampa's shop, when the magic fairy had a letter for him. To his shock, it was a letter from the Huntsman. "American Dragon, we have your girlfriend. If you ever want to see you alive. Come to the warehouse, or we will kill her. Ha ha ha." Jake turns into a dragon and flys in a hurry to the warehouse. There he is shocked to see Rose is changed up, with Thorn holding her captive. "Jake what is going on here." Rose says with fear. "So dragon boy, this is your girlfriend." Thorn says. "Well than, like you, she will be slayed. Ha ha ha." Thorn points her Huntsstick at Rose, as Jake looks in horror. As the stick is about to strike. Jake wakes from his dream in horror. "Oh my god" Jake says. Meanwhile in her room, Rose is sleeping and dreaming. In her dream, she is suppose to meet Jake for a date in Central Park. Jake is no where to be found, when she hears a loud sound, that sounds like a dragon. She runs over to where she heard the noice. When she arrives, she is horrified to see Jake is on the ground, and dead. Than the American Dragon flys from the air to the scene. "Well baby this is your boyfriend." The American Dragon says. He continues to talk as Rose is crying and in shock,"Now he is history. Just like you and all of the humans will be history, when us dragons overthrow you, and take our place as rulers of the world. And there is nothing you can do about it. Ha ha ha." Rose wakes up, and is in shock. "No, no." she yells.
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Post by fudogg on Oct 8, 2006 21:53:46 GMT -5
ohhh. That sounds more like the Dark Dragon. Boy Jake and Rose can be pretty stupid when it comes to love, huh? Update soon.
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Post by nyc2dragon on Oct 8, 2006 21:57:30 GMT -5
ohhh. That sounds more like the Dark Dragon. Boy Jake and Rose can be pretty stupid when it comes to love, huh? Update soon. Yeah that is what I had in mind, when I came up with the idea of Rose's nightmare, with the evil American Dragon. Have him talk like the Dark Dragon. Glad you got the point. Actully, it is a cross between the Dark Dragon and Prince Zuko. Saying the words of the Dark Dragon, in the mean spirited voice of Zuko.
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Post by fudogg on Oct 8, 2006 22:29:33 GMT -5
Aww. I feel that it is very hard not to feel sorry for Zuko. Just look what his father did to him just because he cared about the well-being of the Fire Nation. But, Zuko is not a real character so it doesn't matter.
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Post by nyc2dragon on Oct 10, 2006 19:34:10 GMT -5
The next day Jake was discussing his dream with Trixie and Spud, he thought the dream was a warning of some sorts. "This dream was a message about having a relationship with someone." He said. "Jakee I think you are reading way to much into dreams." Trixie told Jake. "I don't know Trixie, one time I had a dream, I was being chased by a giant Rabbot, and that has a message." Spud said. "Yeah that message is, you have problems Spud." Trixie responded.
Jake said "You know you guys I live a double life. My life as Jake Long is no problem, but my other live is that of the American Dragon, with that life comes great danger. I have many enemies, and if I Rose got to close to me, she could be in danger by association with me. I think for own safety, I might have to call of my date with... (Rose appears suddenly) Rose."
"Jake I need to talk to you." Rose said. "Ok" Jake responds, Jake and Rose walk away from Trixie and Spud and talk priviately. Rose tells Jake "Jake you are a great guy, and I don't want anything bad to happen to you. I have some personally stuff in my life right now, and it isn't fair for you to get mixed up with that. I can't be your date for the dance I am sorry." Jake is shocked and responds "Whatever it is, I don't care, we can work it out. Rose please.." Rose intrupts "Jake please don't make this harder than it has to be." Rose runs off crying.
Trixie and Spud a few feet away see this and talk to Jake. "So she took it pretty hard." Spud said. Jake does not respond, as he stares at the hallway walls dejected.
After school, Jake is in his grampa's shop ready to go to the warehouse, for the great battle with the Huntsclan. "Ok grampa's I am focused as you say. I am ready to battle those Huntschump." Jake says. "Good young one." Gramps says. Jake, Gramps, and Fu head to the warehouse. Jake is angry over what happened with Rose. He can't help, but remember the nightmare he had, and partially blames the Huntsclan for what happened with Rose, and he is ready to take out his frustration out on the Huntsclan.
Meanwhile at the Huntsleer, Thorn is ready to go to the warehouse for the great battle as well. "Your ready Thorn?" the Huntsman asks. "I am ready master." She resonds. "I hate Dragons especially the American Dragon. They ruin everything." Rose also can't help but remember the nightmare she had. She is angry at dragons, for forcing her to brake up with Jake, someone she likes out of fear, for his safety. She is ready to take out her frustration on the American Dragon. The Huntsman, Thorn, and a half dozen Huntsclan solders teleport to the Warehouse.
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Post by fudogg on Oct 10, 2006 19:47:07 GMT -5
Aww, that's sad.
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Post by nyc2dragon on Oct 10, 2006 19:48:52 GMT -5
Incase you haven't figured it out, we are now up to the climax of the story.
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Post by fudogg on Oct 10, 2006 20:51:37 GMT -5
We are?
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Post by nyc2dragon on Oct 10, 2006 20:59:38 GMT -5
I thought so. I know you guys are smart. Just wanted to clarify.
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Post by fudogg on Oct 10, 2006 22:21:31 GMT -5
I don't think it's the last chapter, though...
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Post by nyc2dragon on Oct 11, 2006 21:46:23 GMT -5
Jake, and Gramps flew to the warehouse with Fu riding on Jake. "How are we going to fight the Huntsclan by ourselves?" Jake asked. "Don't worry about that. I called in on a favor and got some reenforcements." Fu Dog responded.
They landed in the warehouse, and the reenforcements were there, a half dozen Gobblins. "Ready young one?" Gramps asked. "Ready Grampa, lets bring it on." Meanwhile in the warehouse, the Huntsclan were waiting in the warehouse. "Tonight dragons will stand in my way no more." the Huntsman said. The Huntsman was about to start his spell when Jake, Gramps, and the Gobblins arrived in the warehouse. "Attack" the Huntsman yelled, and the great battle began.
Jake and Thorn squared off, while Gramps and the Huntsman squared off. "Tonight I finally slay you dragon boy." Thorn said. "I don't think so." Jake responded. "You dragons have ruined my life." Thorn responded. "The Huntsclan has ruined my life." Jake responded.
As the battle unfolded, Jake had Thorn pinned to the ground, and kicked away her Huntsstick away. Her right glove fell off revealing her mark of the Huntsclan birthmark. As he was about to strike her, he looked at her blue eyes, blonde hair, and birthmark and remembered what Chris told him. "A girl that also has blond hair, blue eyes, and a dragon birthmark. Think about it" played through his mind. He knew that meant something, he got off of Rose and fought another Huntsclan member.
Thorn went to get her Huntsstick, gramps and the Huntsman struggled over the Huntsman's Huntsstick, and the stick went off and struck rope holding a forklift, causing it to fall, which was right over Thorn. The lift was going to crush Thorn, at this moment Jake figured it out. Thorn and Rose was the same person, and as the forklift was going to crush her, he yelled "Rose!", and he flow to get Thorn out of harmsway before the forklift was to have crushed her.
Jake than started to fight with the Huntsman, as Thorn stood there puzzled. She looked at Jake's eyes, and than she remembered what Christine told her earlier. "There is another in you life that has those eyes, black and green hair. Someone you obcess with. Think about it." played through her mind. She knew it meant something. Just than a Huntsclan solder throw a forklift anchor at Jake and was knocked down as the Huntsman stood over him. He lifted his Huntsstick at him and was about to strike. "Now it is over for you American Dragon", he said.
At this moment, Rose realised that the American Dragon was Jake and she wisppered "Jake no." She fired her Huntsstick, and it hit the Huntsman in the back, fling him accross the room. Rose pulled Jake out of the room, as the battle unfolded.
With the Huntsman down, Gramps and the Gobblins were able to defeat the Huntsclan, as the Huntsman order the Huntsclan to retreat. Gramps, Fu, and the Gobblins were excited. "We did it." Fu yelled excitedly. "Where is Jake?" Gramps asked. "Must have gotten ready for the dance as the soon as the battle ended." Fu responded.
They all exited, and Jake got to his feet, he looked at Thorn and said "I know it was you. You saved me." He said. "You saved me first." she responed. "I know who you are." Jake said. I know who you are also." Thorn responded. Jake turned into human form, while Rose took off her mask. They starred at each other for what seemed like a aternaty. Than finally, Jake and Ross kissed.
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