fudogg
Young Warrior Dragon
I've seen Dead Man's Chest enough times to know that this is not a good thing...[ss:Lao Shi]
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Post by fudogg on Oct 11, 2006 22:37:45 GMT -5
Aww. They kissed. It better not be the end!
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nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
Their love can't be stopped. Neither will the show, without a fight[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by nyc2dragon on Oct 11, 2006 22:42:22 GMT -5
No it is not. If it was, I would have said the end. But we are getting close to the ending. I have really enjoyed writing this story, but I knew when it was going to end when I started it.
When I did this last part, I had some computer problems, (See Help and Advice board to see what I am talking about) it might effect the quality of the chapter. I am thinking of modifying it.
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nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
Their love can't be stopped. Neither will the show, without a fight[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by nyc2dragon on Oct 15, 2006 21:15:35 GMT -5
The next night at the school dance, Jake and Rose enter the school gym holding hands. Jake looks dashing in his suit, Rose looks ravashing in her dress. Brad is looking in envy, as our the cheerleaders. "I thought this day would never come. It is like a dream come true." Jake said. "Jake could not mention the world dreams." Rose responds. "I think we have had enough dreams recently." Rose says with laughter. "Our dream is now a reality. So let's make the most of it." she says. "Ok than, but I am not going to let anything ruin this night after we have gone through." Jake responds.
The two of them dance the night away. Meanwhile watching from outside the door are Chris and Christine. "Our work is done." Chris said. Chris and Christine shapeshifting into their true forms. Chris was Cupid, and Christine was Morris. "Ok boss." Morris said. "But do I always have to be the women." Morris asked. Cupid and Morris vanashed.
Later on in the night it was time for principle Duceto to announce the king and queen of the dance. "Thank you all for coming to the dance. The Millard Fillmore king and queen of the danre are... Jake and Rose. Come on up." Duceto said. Jake and Rose came to the stage to accept their award. Duceto than said "Now our king and queen will start the last dance."
The room was completely dark except for a spotlight that was on Jake and Rose as they began to slowdance. As they were dancing, "This night is perfect." Jake said. "No it is not." Rose said. Jake and Rose looked into each other eyes, slowly, and than they kissed slowly. After they kissed Rose said. "Now it is." They continued to dance.
The End
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zero
Student
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Post by zero on Jul 24, 2009 10:15:12 GMT -5
aww... nice story I hope you make a sequel
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