nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
Their love can't be stopped. Neither will the show, without a fight[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by nyc2dragon on Nov 11, 2006 10:27:38 GMT -5
This story mostly takes place in flashback. It takes place between "The Academy" and "Breakout.". This story is about Rose's childhood. Not to long ago, we disguessed how similar Rose is to Prince Zuko. I guess this is the equeverlent to "Zuko Alone."
Prologue
It was a dark night, in the new underground Huntsleer, as Rose is in her room, lying on her bed, thinking of the events of the last few months. Rose or Huntsgirl is she is know to her Huntspeers, thinking how Jake the boy she is crazy about, the nicest person she has meet in a long time was the American Dragon.
She had a chance to slay the American Dragon, and become a full fledge Huntsclan memeber, something she has dreamed about since she was a little girl. At least what she has been tought to be her dream. When the American Dragon, revealed himself to be Jake. She let him go, and ran away from him, even while Jake was screaming at her not to go, but she couldn't face him.
Than a few months later, she and Jake crossed paths again at the Hunts Academy, when Jake and his friend Spud snucked into the Hunts Academy undercover as Huntsclan trainnes. It was there when Jake's cover was blown and he was capture, the Huntsmaster ordered her to slay him. To her surprise Jake was willing to sacrifice his life. But Rose couldn't bare the thought of doing that, and they came up with a plan to fake Jake's slaying. She then graduated the Hunts Academy, free to return to Jake at Millard Fillmore Middle School.
But she had to stay away from him, because the Huntsmaster could be watching. Life is so complicated for Rose at the moment, but it wasn't always that way. Life use to be so simple before. Her destiny was to slay dragons. Rose wishes life could be that simple again.
She looked at a picture of her when she was 5 years old, and thought about the past.
This is when the flashback starts.
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fudogg
Young Warrior Dragon
I've seen Dead Man's Chest enough times to know that this is not a good thing...[ss:Lao Shi]
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Post by fudogg on Nov 11, 2006 10:40:53 GMT -5
Cool! She better not be thinking of betraying Jake!
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nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
Their love can't be stopped. Neither will the show, without a fight[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by nyc2dragon on Nov 11, 2006 11:06:13 GMT -5
No she won't. And finally I got a review.
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Post by crazy17 on Nov 11, 2006 12:39:48 GMT -5
No...
You get TWO reveiws! XD lol
Nice start! There were a few spelling errors, but it's good!
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Post by redemption on Nov 11, 2006 13:27:24 GMT -5
Awesome start! Some spelling errors, but still.... very good! I like it! ;D
Update soon!
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nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
Their love can't be stopped. Neither will the show, without a fight[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by nyc2dragon on Nov 12, 2006 0:16:19 GMT -5
Chapter 1 The First Day
We are back in the year 1997, Rose lives in the Hunts Nurcery, the place where the Huntsclan raise their young trainees, located next to the Hunts Academy in upstate school. Until that time, Rose has been told her parents died shortly after she was born, and this place is a orphanage. However for some reason there are mostly adults.
Rose is playing with her best friend Cindy, a girl that lives accross the street. "I can't believe we start school tomorow." Rose said. "It stinks we can't go to the same school." Cindy says. "But I have to go to this school next door to the orphange for some reason." Rose says. "Don't worry we will still see each other. Remember best friends forever." Cindy says. "Yeah just like the Spice Girls." Rose responds. They both start to giggle.
"Rose honey, it is time to come home." a woman says. "Coming", Rose said. Later that night, Rose is being tugged in by this woman. "I am so excited about starting school tomorow Betty." Rose says. "I hope I make some friends." "I am sure you will." Betty says. "Try to get some sleep." Betty says. "Good night Betty." Rose says. "Good night sweety." Betty says. Betty kisses Rose goodnight, and closes the light.
The next day, Rose is in the Hunts Academy for orentation, a man wearing a mask and carrying staff walked in. He said, "Welcome new students. You are all here for a special reason. To explain more, here is our Huntsmaster." Out walked a big man with a mask and skull on his head, carrying a even bigger staff.
"You are the future of the order of the Huntsclan. The Huntsclan goal is to eliminate the world of all fowl magical creatures. Standing in our way are dragons. These dragons that shapeshift into humans. Here besides math, science, and the normal subjects in other schools, you will learn to become future warriors, and destroy dragons and magical creatures alike.", the Huntsmaster said. "Are there any question?" A young boy raised his hand, and the Huntsmaster pointed at him. "I got to go potty."
Later on in class, the kids are being thought math, the teacher is another man wearing a mask, and skull hat, carrying a staff. "Who can solve this world problem?", the teacher said. "If Suzie slayed 2 dragons on Monday, and 2 dragons on Tuesday, how many total dragons did she slay?" Rose raised her hand, and the teacher called on her. "Ahh, 4." "Correct." the teacher said.
Later on in the day, in gym class, the students are playing an unusual game. "Ok kids, we are going to see how far you can throw a football. Your goal is to hit the plastic dragon accross the field." the gym teacher said. Later in the day, the kids were back in class. "Story time kids.", the teacher said. "What story are we going to hear?" one of the kids asked. "A true classic, How The Dragons Stole Chrismas."
After school, Rose saw Cindy outside. "How was your first day?" Rose asked. "It was great, it so much fun. I wish you could have been there. How was your first day?" Cindy asked. "It was ok, but it was kind of weird, all day we talked about dragons." Rose responded. That night, as Betty was tucking Rose in. "School today was so weird." Rose said. "It was?" Betty asked. "It was all about dragons." Rose responed. "Are dragons real?" Rose asked. "I don't know. If your teachers say they are real, then they are real sweety. Time to go to sleep. Good night Rose." Betty said. "Good night Betty." Rose said. Betty kissed Rose goodnight, and turned out the lights. Rose went to sleep, thinking about what a weird day she had.
End Of Chapter 1
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nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
Their love can't be stopped. Neither will the show, without a fight[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by nyc2dragon on Nov 17, 2006 15:58:50 GMT -5
Sorry for the delay. I had some writers block.
Chapter 2 Martial Arts
A few months later, the gym class decided to have a special test. The teacher told the class, "My students, for the last few months, you have thought the martial arts, now today we will see how much you have learned. Each of you will be peered off, and fight in front of the class." Meanwhile the Huntsman was watching this in the next room with the use of a two way mirror.
When it was Rose's turn, she was peered off with a boy about her size. She lost badly in her fight. After it was over, all of her classmates laughed at her. The teacher put aside and talked to her. "What is wrong with you? Why didn't you fight back?" the teacher asked. "I don't like fighting." she responded. "I don't want to hurt anybody." "Listen fighting is an importance. Next time, you battled, think of something that caused great pain. And pretend your opponent caused that pain. You got that?" the teacher said. "Yes." Rose responded. "Let's do it again."
Rose got a second chance to fight this boy. She thought of something that caused her great pain, and she knew exactly what it was. As they were ready to fight, in Rose's mind, the boy was taunting her. "Ha ha your parents are dead. Your parents are dead. Na na na." The teacher began, and the battle started. The opponent barely got in any offense. Rose was enraged, and beat him all over the room. Before the boy yelled. "Make her stop! Make her stop!" "Ok stop it!" the teacher yelled, and the fight was over. Meanwhile the Huntsman was watching all this, and he had a smile on his face.
That weekend, Cindy was in the park with her doll waiting for Rose to arrive, when two boys probably 8 - 10 years old approched. "What a nice doll." one of the boys said. He grabbed the doll, Cindy yelled "Hey give it back." The boys played keep away with the doll as they were laughing at her.
When all of a sudden, one of the boys was kicked in the head by someone. It was Rose. "Boys mind if I play." she said. Rose flipped the other boy to the ground. The first boy tried to sneak up to her, but Rose flipped him to the ground. She kicked one of the boys in the gut. One of them said. "This girl is nuts. Let's get out of here." The two boys ran away, as they were running Rose yelled to them. "You mess with Cindy. You mess with me."
"Thanks Rose." Cindy said. Rose looked at her hands. She realised what she learned would come in handy in her life.
End Of Chapter 2
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Post by roselovesjake on Nov 19, 2006 0:44:30 GMT -5
GReat Story Despite Errors
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