nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
Their love can't be stopped. Neither will the show, without a fight[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by nyc2dragon on Dec 21, 2006 20:01:47 GMT -5
Prologue
This takes place after Homecoming. With Rose gone, Jake is broken hearten, and the last thing on his mind is dating. That is until he meets Arella, a new girl at school. After some encouragement from Trixie and Spud, Jake asks her out.
But she is more than she seems. She has a secret of her own.
I tell you straight out, she is a dragon. Someone wanted a female dragon love interest for Jake. You got it. Who wants to hear this story?
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Post by twg519 on Dec 21, 2006 22:35:35 GMT -5
Is Rose in this story? please say yes.
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nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
Their love can't be stopped. Neither will the show, without a fight[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by nyc2dragon on Dec 21, 2006 23:18:49 GMT -5
No Rose does not appear in this story. But she will appear in the sequel. The Arella character is loosely based on a fictional character on a tv show, most of us are familer with. This story has a big surprise twist. If anyone want to know what it is, PM me before 11: 59 pm et. 12/23/06. And I'll tell you the big surprise twist, that you can't not tell anyone.
After the deadline, if I don't get to the twist by than, I won't PM the spoiler anymore.
Chapter 1 The New Girl
It was a typical day at Millard Fillmore Middle School, Jake Long and his two friends Trixe and Spud, were chilling in the halls. Jake was not in a very pleasant.
"Jakee it's been 3 weeks. It it time to move on player." Trixie said. "Yeah life is passing you by, like the express train." Spud said.
Jake responded, "I know you guys. But it is so hard to get over Rose. I can't believe she is gone. I support what she is doing, looking for her family and all. Like G said, sometimes you have to put the needs of others, before your own. But I still miss her."
"Me and Spud understand, but it is time you move on. Yeah Jakee, that girl is checking you out boy." Trixie said. Trixe pointed at the girl, she was a Asian bronette with black eyes. "Talk to her Jakee." Trixie said. "I don't know you guys." Jake said. "I guess Brad was right. You are a big chicken." Trixie said. "Prove him wrong man." Spud said. "What did that punk say about me, I'll show him." Jake said. Jake approached the girl.
Jake introduced himself to the girl. "Hello my name is Jake, I couldn't help notice you were looking in my direction." Jake said. "Oh" the girl said with a blush on her face. "My name is Arella, I just moved here from Maine." "Really let me show you around the place." Jake said.
After school, Jake and Arella were talking in front of the school, "Do you want to go out with me sometime." Arella said. "I am sorry, I can't , I am coming out of a serious relationship. I am not ready to date anyone." Jake said. "I understand." Arella said. Jake and Arella walked home together when a couple of Hobblins appeared.
Jake was thinking, how he was going to explain this to Arella, when she turned into a dragon. Arella was a dragon. Jake turned into dragon form, and the two of them fought off the Hobblins together. It didn't take for the Hobblins to run off.
"Your a dragon?" Jake said. "Yes I am, your a dragon also?" Arella said. "Yes, but not just any dragon, the American Dragon." Jake said. "I am impressed." Arella said with a smile. "I'll see you tomorow." Jake said. Jake and Arella went their seperate ways. Jake went home, excited that a fellow dragon is his classmate. "Finally a classmate, that understands exactly what it is like to be a Dragon." Jake thought.
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Post by crazy17 on Dec 22, 2006 1:09:41 GMT -5
Nice start! Arella=Azula, huh? o.o
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nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
Their love can't be stopped. Neither will the show, without a fight[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by nyc2dragon on Dec 22, 2006 8:21:16 GMT -5
Nice start! Arella=Azula, huh? o.o Maybe you just have to wait and see. I said Rose will not be in this story, there is a chance she will appear at the very end. I modified part 1, and added that Arella is Asian.
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nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
Their love can't be stopped. Neither will the show, without a fight[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by nyc2dragon on Dec 22, 2006 16:27:23 GMT -5
Chapter 2 The First Date
The next day, Jake and Arella were talking. "I couldn't stop thinking about you." Jake said. "Would you want to go out with me tonight?" Jake asked. "I love to." Arella said.
That night Jake and Arella agreed to go to the local club, the kids Jake's age hang out. Arella arrived at the Long's house. Jake opened the door. Arella wh*re a black and white dress, she looked stunning, Jake believe his eyes. "Arella, dam you look beautiful tonight." Jake said. "Thank you." Arella replied.
At the club, Jake and Arella were having a good time dancing. Jake went to get Arella a drink. Arella was all alone, when Jake's nemisis Brad approched her. "Hey sweety couldn't help noticing you, and I know you couldn't help noticing the Brad star." Brad said arrogantly. "Who really? Why don't we go behind the D.J. booth, and I'll show you a good time." Arella said. Brad said Jackpot and the two of them went behind the booth.
"Close your eyes." Arella said. "You are one bad girl." Brad said. A few moment later, Arella exited out behind the D.J. booth and found Jake. "Here is your drink." Jake said. "Thank you Jake, it is getting late, it is time we leave." Arella said. "Ok Arella." Jake said. After they left, another couple went behind the D.J. booth to make out. And found Brad, with a black eye, bloody noise, and fat lip. Not knowing what hit him.
The two of them walked on the streets of New York. They were infront of Arella's building. "Well this is me." Arella said. "Goodnight Jake, I had a great time." "Me to." Jake said. They looked into each other's eyes, and approached each other. They kissed.
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fudogg
Young Warrior Dragon
I've seen Dead Man's Chest enough times to know that this is not a good thing...[ss:Lao Shi]
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Post by fudogg on Dec 22, 2006 17:25:27 GMT -5
This is pretty cool. And it would fit Azula as that girl because she was a dragon in Zuko's dream.
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Post by crazy17 on Dec 22, 2006 20:00:51 GMT -5
Nice! hahaha, Brad got OWNED, mayn! XD The chapter could've been longer, though...
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nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
Their love can't be stopped. Neither will the show, without a fight[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by nyc2dragon on Dec 22, 2006 20:22:37 GMT -5
Sorry it wasn't longer. I'll try to imrpove on that. But right now we are in the early chapters. The set up chapters, as you could call them. As we move on, and get to the action, they will be longer.
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nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
Their love can't be stopped. Neither will the show, without a fight[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by nyc2dragon on Dec 26, 2006 23:41:40 GMT -5
Chapter 3 Torn Between Friends
The next day, Jake was talking to Trixie and Spud about his date. "Thank you so much, for encourging me to go out on this date. Arella is a great girl" Jake said. "No problem player, you all set to hit the skates." Trixie said. "I am ready." Spud said. "I was talking to Jake fool." Trixe said. "Guys I am sorry I am going to show Arella the city. Tomorow I promise." Jake said. "Ok Jake no problem." Trixie said.
Near dust, Jake and Arella were walking down Central Park. "Jake I am having a great time." Arella said. "We better go it is getting dark. Dangerous to walk at night." Jake said. "Why walk, when we can fly. Dragon up." Arella said, as she shape shifted into dragon form. Jake turned into dragon form, and the two of them flew away.
"This is great. I can't do this with my other friends. Meeting you rules." Jake said. "Right back at you." Arella said. As they flew accross the city, shortly into flight, Arella held Jake's arm. They flew all over Manhattan.
Finally they arrived at Jake's house. They landed and shape shifted back into human form. "After school Jake, you want to go shoping with me?" Arella said. "I can't, I promised to go skateboarding with Trixie and Spud." Jake said. "But Jake I need you. They will understand. Pretty please my strong American Dragon." Arella begged. "Okay." Jake said.
The next day, at dismisal time, Jake was hanging in the hallways with Trixie and Spud. "Let's his the skates." Trixe said. "I am sorry guys, I promissed Arella I would go shoping with her." Jake said. "Not again." Spud said. "Since you started dating Miss dragon thing, you have not spent any times with your peeps." Trixie said. "Sorry guys maybe some other time." Jake said. Arella waved to Jake from down the hall. "Guys I got to go. see you." Jake said. As soon as Jake left Trixie said sarcasticly. "Yeah sure."
Arella took Jake to what seemed like every store in the mall. "Do you like this outfit?" Arella said. "Yeah sure I love it." Jake said half paying attention. "Arella I fell really bad from blowing Trixie and Spud off like that." Jake said. "Jake you are so sweet and caring. But we have bond, you will never have with anybody else." Arella said. "What are you talking about?" Jake asked. "We are dragons. We must stick together. Trixie and Spud are great and all. But they will never understand you." Arella said.
Later on Jake and Arella were walking down the mall, when Arella asked Jake something. "Jake you want to go see a movie tomorow?" Arella asked. "Tomorow is game night. Me, Trixie, and Spud always play table hockey." Jake said. "I am sure they won't mind if you mis one game night Jake. If you go with me, I just might... Arella wispered things into Jake's ears. "I am sure Trixie and Spud will understand." Jake said with a smile on his face.
The next day, "Your ditching us again." Trixie yelled. "Jake you are letting this girl break our group up." Spud said. "I am sorry, but you guys will never understand the bond between a dragon and a dragon. Next week I promise." Jake said. Jake exited.
"I am starting to hate miss dragon thing." Trixie said. "She is tearing us apart." Spud said. "At least Rose gave Jake his space." Trixie said. "Yeah the worst thing she did, was try to slay Jake." Spud said.
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nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
Their love can't be stopped. Neither will the show, without a fight[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by nyc2dragon on Dec 31, 2006 0:41:11 GMT -5
This chapter is shorter than I antcipated, but it is imporant. Oh well, enjoy.
Chapter 4 We Got Company
In the Game Room arcade, Trixie and Spud were playing table hockey by without Jake. "It is not the same without Jake." Trixie said. "We are just rock and paper, without the scissors." Spud said.
Meanwhile at the movie theater, Jake and Arella were on their date, watching the latest Jet Li movie, Jake put his hand on Arella's hand, and looked into her eyes with a smile.
Meanwhile Trixie and Spud decided to go to Jake's Grampa's shop, "What you kids doing here tonight?" Fu Dog asked. "We got ditched by Jake again, so he can go on another date with miss dragon thing." Trixie said. "Really the kid is on a date. Is she a looker?" Fu Dog asked. "Here is a picture of them together." Spud said, as he presented a picture on his cellphone. "You know her?" Trixie asked. "No maybe gramps will know, hey gramps." Fu Dog said.
Lao Shi entered, "What is it Fu Dog?" he asked. "Do you know this girl? She is one of you guys, you know a dragon." Fu Dog said. "Hmm, no I never seen her before. And I was not informed that there would be a new dragon in New York city. You meet her parents." Lao Shi asked. "No we haven't." Trixie said. "I'll ask the dragon council." Lao Shi said.
Meanwhile back at the movie theater, as the movie was coming towards the end. "Jake I think I am falling for you." Arella said. Jake responded "Really well I think...", before Jake could continue Arella kissed him on the lips, and they continue to kiss for a few minutes.
After the movie, Jake and Arella were walking on the streets of New York. "Are you sure you don't want to take cab?" Jake asked. "No I want to walk slowly home with you. I don't want this night to end" Arella said. "Follow me." Arella said, as they turned a corner downtown. They were all along, when all of a sudden Jake heard something. "Did you hear something?" Jake asked. "No Jake, now kiss me." Arella said, all of a sudden, Jake's fears were confirmed, they were not alone. They were surronded by a group of people.
"We have company." Jake said.
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Mar 9, 2007 15:14:45 GMT -5
uh oh!
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Mar 9, 2007 15:15:09 GMT -5
uh oh!
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