nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
Their love can't be stopped. Neither will the show, without a fight[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by nyc2dragon on Jan 22, 2007 12:41:22 GMT -5
I read the "Homecoming" spoiler, and knowing what I know, decided to put most of my fan fics on the back burner, and write the two part season finale. If you don't want to know what happens in Homecoming, you shouldn't read this.
And I invite you all, to do the same. I need to come up with ideas, on how to start. I need to come up with reasons, why Jake is so frustrated with being the American Dragon, and why he quits. Like most of my fan fics, I have the ending already. I wish I could write my fan fics backwords.
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nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
Their love can't be stopped. Neither will the show, without a fight[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by nyc2dragon on Jan 24, 2007 22:50:11 GMT -5
Prologue
Professor Rotwood's class, Jake Long can barely stay a wake. The night before he was fighting Hobblins. Principle Rotwood snapes his projectos stick at Jake, to wake him up. "Mr. Long this is not kindegarden, there are no nap times in my classroom. You better shape up Mr. Long, or you will not graduate." Rotwood said with a smirk.
After class, Jake's two best friends Trixie and Spud are talking to him. "Dam it Jake, you really have not be in tune all week." Spud said. "You better get your act together, or you might not make it to high school." Trixie said. "I can't do all this guys." Jake said. His friends ask, what he meant by that. "Keep up my school work, have a social life, and be the American Dragon. It is streaching me out. I had this great relationship with Rose, and nobody remembers it. They think I have an imaginary ex girlfriend. You guys are so lucky, I wish I could be a normal kid. I wish could be normal!" Jake yells. Everyone in the hallway looks at Jake. Trixie said "Jakey if you want to be normal, yelling out in the hallway like a lunitic, is not exactly helping."
End of prologue. Opening theme music
Jake decided to see the school psychologist Dr. Shumer, "Mr. Long you have told me, you are stressed out over balencing your academics, your social life, and your job. What kind of job do you have?" "Working in my grandpa's shop." Jake said. "That doesn't like such a difficult tasks, that it will cause you so much stress." Dr. Shumer said. "Trust me, it is a stressful job." Jake said. "If it so stressful, I recommend you quit your job." Dr. Shumer responded. "I would like to, but I can't."
At home Jake was rushing to do his homework. He knew any moment his grandpa would call him, with another mission. Jake's sister Haley entered the room, notice how quickly Jake was doing his homework. "You know Jake, maybe the reason your grade's are slipping, is because you do your work to quickly." Haley suggested. "Haley I don't have time for this. You don't understand how hard it is to balence school work and be the American Dragon. "Jake you are always wining to me, how hard it is to be the American Dragon. I could do it." Haley responed.
Jake responded, "Yeah right, you couldn't possi... wait." Jake thought for a moment, since the Huntsclan were destroyed. The villians he have fought weren't exactly up to par with the danger of the Huntsclan. Haley has really improved her dragon skills in the last year. She helped him, stop the Huntsclan once and for all, on the night they tried to use the 13 Aztec skulls. With the Huntsclan out of the way, the villians that are left, maybe Haley could handle it. Maybe Jake could retire as the American Dragon.
"That is a great idea." Jake said, as he grabbed his sister in the air, and hugged her. The next day at Lao Shi's shop, Jake and Haley tried to convence their grandpa to let Jake retire, and pass on his powers to Haley, as Trixie, Spud, and Fu Dog looked on. "I have had it, with being the American Dragon grandpa." Jake said. "I have done all I can in the last two years, I need a break. Haley has come through a long way in her dragon training. I think she is ready. And with the Huntsclan out of the way, she can handle the villians I have to fight." Jake said to his grandpa.
"I want to do this grandpa. I want to continue the family tradition of prodector of the magical world. Pleace grandpa." Haley said, as she rolled her eyes at him. "I don't know if you are ready Haley. But if you really serious, you have my blessing. However you need to get approval from the World Dragon Council." "The dragon council are the bosses kids." Fu Dog said. "After we saved the magical world a few weeks ago, how can they say no. They owe us." Jake said. Lao Shi and Fu had an expression of doubt on their faces. They know, how thought the World Dragon Council can be.
At the World Dragon Council, Lao Shi, Fu Dog, Haley, Sun Park, Trixie, and Spud witnessed as Jake bleeded his case to the World Dragon Council. He told them, he wanted to be a normal kid. Being the American Dragon was to much of a burdon for him. He asked them to let him retire, and pass it over to Haley. "Are you sure about this Jake Long?" Council Kuldle asked. "Yes I have been more sure of anything my life." Jake said. "Okay Mr. Long, but we will have to take away your dragon powers. Do you still want to go through with it?" Council Andam said. "Yes I am." Jake said.
All 5 council member stripped Jake of his power, than they turned their attention to Haley. "Haley Long from this day forward, you are the new American Dragon. Congratulations." Council Kudle said.
After the hearing, Jake was talking with Trixie and Spud. "Jake are you sure about this?" Trixie asked. "Your baby sister is the new protector of the magical world?" Spud said. "You sure Haley can handle this?" Trixie asked. "Yes I am, Haley has really come far along in her dragon training. I am proud of her." Jake said. As he said that, behind them Haley overheard that, and her face blust. She was so happy her big brother, her hero was proud of her. "Besides with the Huntsclan gone, none of the villians I fight, are really that dangerous for Haley. What villians should I worry about?" Jake said.
Meanwhile in a warehouse, two people with hoods entered, one carrying a box. They took off their hoods. It was impresioned counciler Chang, and a young man, that looked to be Irish, that looked to be in his 20's. "Don't want to disappoint our leader Duffling." Chang said. "Don't worry we won't." Duffling said. "Master we are ready to proceed with our plan." Chang said. A dark figured approached from the shadows, as he walked out of the shadows, it was revealed who their master was, the Dark Dragon. "Excellent." the Dark Dragon said.
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Mikokat
Mythobiologist
[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by Mikokat on Feb 6, 2007 22:25:01 GMT -5
Great so far! Update soon!
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