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Post by superdoglac on Oct 15, 2006 20:30:22 GMT -5
LOL. I went to the bathroom XD
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Post by huntsrose on Oct 19, 2006 20:08:13 GMT -5
Working on next chapter now. Should be up tonight or Monday.
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Post by superdoglac on Oct 19, 2006 20:17:43 GMT -5
Okies
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Post by huntsrose on Oct 26, 2006 20:15:39 GMT -5
Sorry for taking so long. Here’s the next chapter…Still Jake's POV "So what are we going to do?" Rose asked. It was starting to get dark outside and Spud and Trixie had to go home. Rose and I were sitting on a couch next to each other. "What we need is a plan," I said. "Got any ideas?" she asked. "Yeah, one," I said. "What is it?" she asked. "To ask Fu," I said. "Fu, got any ideas?" "Nada, but you guys should sleep. You had a long day," Fu said. I looked at Rose with a grin. "In seperate rooms," Gramps said. "Aww man," I said, but my grin didn't vanish. Faith started laughing. We all went to bed. The next morning, I woke up to an alarm buzzing loudly. I had fallen asleep on the couch, allowing Rose to sleep on the guest bed in the back room. I saw Rose walk out sleepily. I remembered that it was a school day. “Nice hair,” I commented, snickering. “Shut up,” she snapped. Startled, I kept the rest of my comments to myself. I got up and noticed that my hair was messed up as well. I pulled out a tube of hair gel from my pocket. “Do you take that with you everywhere?” Faith asked. I looked at the tube in my hand. “Pretty much,” I said with a shrug. She rolled her eyes. Then I fixed my hair with a red comb. Rose rummaged through the shop, looking for something as Fu walked out. “What are you looking for?” I asked. “You don’t have a brush anywhere?” she asked. I thought for a moment. “I have a comb,” I said, holding it out. She groaned and snatched it out of my hand. “You’re welcome!” I called as she walked out irritably. “Looks like Miss Rose ain’t much of a morning person,” Fu said. “Tell me about it,” I sighed. “I heard that!” she yelled. “Quiet!” I said. “You’ll wake Gramps, and he ain’t much of a morning person either.” “Whatever,” Rose said, picking up her backpack. I rolled my eyes and picked up mine too. “What about Faith?” I asked. “Already taken care of,” Faith said. “I called my parents and told them I was at a friend’s house. They said I could stay until tomorrow if I want.” “Where are you gonna go while we’re at school?” I asked. She shrugged. “I’ll figure something out,” she said. “Just be careful,” Rose warned, and then we left. After school, I waited for Rose. “Hey,” she said cheerfully. “Looks like someone’s in a betted mood,” I said with a grin. “I think I aced my History exam,” she explained with a shrug. “That’s awesome!” I exclaimed. “Well, we’d better get going,” Rose said. “Don’t you have training?” “No,” I said. “Gramps let be have a break until we figure this out.” “Well that must be nice,” she said. “Oh, I forgot to tell you,” I said. “I got you something.” I grinned as she looked at me with a surprised face. I reached into my pocket and pulled something out. “You got me a tube of hair gel?” she chuckled. “No!” I exclaimed, also laughing. “Where did I put it?” I pulled something out of my jacket pocket, stuffing the tube of hair gel back in. It was a small, green, rectangular box. I opened it and showed Rose the contents. It was a diamond necklace. She released a small gasp. “How did you-?” she said. “Fu got me a part time job,” I explained. “So I got this with the money I made.” “For me?” she asked. “No, it’s for Spud,” I said sarcastically. “Of course it’s for you. Try it on.” She did. “It looks great on you.” She smiled. “Thanks, Jake,” she said, admiring it. I returned her smile. “It was nothing.” Ok, well someone just made me this really nice banner: this Thank you Superdoglac!!
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Post by huntsrose on Oct 29, 2006 18:17:37 GMT -5
Ok! Here's the next chapter. I've decided I will start naming them from now on. I think this one will be a long one. Well, enjoy!
Chapter 17 ~You Can't Have Him!~
*Rose's POV*
"So, are you ready to go home?" Jake asked. I was still admiring my new necklace. I looked up and nodded. We started to walk home in silence, when I noticed something in the corner of my eye. "Jake! Look out!" I pointed at a glowing green arrow that was zooming towards him with amazing speed. He turned around and he didn't have enough time to move out of the way. "OWWW!" he yelled as the arrow struck him right above the hip. I bent down next to him. "Are you ok?" I asked. He breathed heavily, trying to yank the arrow out, but it only seemed to cause more pain. He nodded. "Yeah," he whispered. "I think so." I helped him up and then side stepped another arrow just as it whizzed by. "The Huntsclan," I said. "You go get help. I'll keep them busy." "But what about you?" Jake asked. "Just go," I said, taking out my staff. "I'll be fine." "But--" he started. "GO!" I yelled, cutting him off. "Ok," he said, and with that, he reluctantly flew off, struggling to keep his flight steady. I looked up past the school to see three figures walking toward me. The Huntsman and two Huntsclan warriors. He was only yards away from me when he stopped. "What do you want?" I demanded. "I want the dragon," he said. "You can't have him!" I yelled. "Why are you going through so much trouble to defend such a disgusting creature?" he asked. "Because I love him," I said, anger boiling in the pit of my stomach. "And he loves me back!" "How could you love such a fowl--" he started, but I shot at his leg, knocking him off balance and cutting off his sentence. "Get her!" The two warriors chased toward me. I shot my staff desperately, but they were too quick. Clutching my staff tightly, I started to run.
*Jake's POV*
I flew as fast as I could to Gramps' shop, ignoring the pain erupting from my side. I wanted to get there as quick as possible so I could get back to Rose to make sure she made it back safely. I burst through the door, panting heavily. I turned back human unwillingly and fell in the floor with pain and fatigue, but that didn't matter. Nothing in the world mattered right now except the safety of Rose. "Gramps! Fu!" I grunted between my heavy panting. "What is it Young Dragon?" Gramps asked, walking out from the back room, Fu and Faith right behind him. I looked down at the arrow. The blood that was seeping out from the hole that the arrow made was causing my jacket to become an even darker shade of red. "What happened?" Faith asked, alarmed. "The Huntsclan," I panted. "Rose. She's in--in trouble!" "Hold on Kid," Fu said. "I'll get a first aid kit." He ran into the back room. "We have to hurry," I said eagerly. Fu walked back out with the first aid kit in his mouth. "Ok, here it is," he said, opening it. "Hey what's that?" I asked, pointing to a vial with dark purple liquid in it. "That," Fu said. "Is a healing potion. It's extremely rare and will heal almost any wound." "Really?" I asked, amazed. He nodded. "I will remove the arrow," Gramps said. "Do not move." I didn't see what he did because I closed my eyes. When I opened them he had the arrow out. There was no time for questions, so I didn't ask how he did that. Fu took the potion and dropped one drop in. I felt a cooling sensation in the wound as it slowly closed back up. There was still a hole in my jacket and shirt though, and they were both still soaked with blood. The minute I was sure Fu was done, I flew off.
*Rose's POV*
I was almost cornered into a wall when I saw something red in the sky. I had a feeling it was Jake. He swooped down and grabbed me by the shoulders, then flew up again. "Hi," Jake said. "Hi yourself," I said, remembering the first time we talked. "Climb up," he said. I climbed up so I was on his back. "You're ok!" I said, hugging him. "Yeah," he said, looking back and grinning at me.
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Post by superdoglac on Oct 29, 2006 18:23:56 GMT -5
Great chapters! WIth the crabby Rose parts I laughed so hard I got spit on my Grandpa's computer screen XD
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Post by huntsrose on Oct 29, 2006 19:14:24 GMT -5
Haha! Thanks for reading! I feel like updating for the heck of it! YAY!
Chapter 18 ~Anger, it can trigger a lot of strange abilities...~
*Jake's POV*
"So what happened while I was gone?" I asked Rose. "Well, I was running from them and then you showed up," she explained. "Oh," I said. "So you're ok then?" "Yeah, I'm fine," she said. "Goo--whoaaaaa!" I yelled. A net flew over me, causing Rose to fall off. It was made of sphinx hair, so I was falling to the ground. "Rose!" I looked up and she seemed to have turned her staff into some sort of hover board and was flying toward me as I fell. She just barely caught a piece of the net on the back. "Hold on!" she yelled. The board wasn't strong enough for both of us and it started to fall, much slower then I was falling because it was trying to keep flying. We landed gently, but unfortunately it was right in front of the Huntsman, who was leaning on his staff. He shot Rose's staff out of her hand and aimed his own at me. "Leave him alone!" Rose yelled. He chuckled. "How are you going to stop me without your staff?" he asked. I couldn't help but think that he had a point. I looked at Rose. I had never seen her so angry before. She started running toward him as if to tackle him. "Rose! No!" I yelled. It was too late. He shot her back into the wall. "Rose!" She groaned weakly. I was relieved that she was still alive. She stood up, rubbing her head dizzily. The Huntsman glanced at her with no concern and went back to aiming his staff at me. It started glowing as if it were about to launch. "Stop!!" Rose screamed. "STOP!!" Her hands started to glow a blue color. "Leave him alone!" She pointed at the Huntsman as she said this. The blue glowing color erupted from her hands and shot him back with great force. Then she shot the other two and fell to the ground. "Rose?" I asked. "Rose, are you ok?" She groaned again and sat up very slowly and weakly. "Yeah," she said. "What was that?" I asked. "I-I don't know," she said. She stood up and tore the net off of me. I stood up too and caught her before she fell again. "C'mon," I said. "Let's get you back to the shop. Dragon up!" She climbed onto my back and together we flew back to the shop. "We can worry about them in a bit. Right now you need to sleep. That was really amazing what you did back there! Thank you." "For what exactly?" she asked. "For saving me twice in 5 minutes," I said with a chuckle. We arrived at the shop and I explained what happened. "So what was it G?" "It was anger I believe," he said. "Anger, it can trigger a lot of strange abilities..." "Are you sure?" Faith asked. "I've never heard of that before by anger. I've heard of magic being used by anger or fear, but is this magic? Could she be the first Huntsclan member to have magic abilities?" "I do not know," Gramps said, obviously amazed by what happened. "I do not know."
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Post by huntsrose on Oct 31, 2006 22:42:22 GMT -5
Happy Halloween everyone! I was a ninja! Woohoo! Anyway, here's tonight's Halloween chapter. It doesn't have much a point, it's justthem talking about Halloween basically. Still Jake's point of view! It's kinda short, but I'll probably post a longer one tomorrow. Enjoy!
Chapter 19 ~That really doesn't suit you~
The next morning was Halloween. I had totally forgotten about it. I walked into the back room to see Rose sitting cross-legged with her eyes closed. "What are you doing?" I asked curiously. "I'm meditating," she explained. "Gramps told me that magic uses a great deal of energy and it's good to meditate to get it all back." "Ohh," I said with a smile. "Can I meditate too?" "Sure," she said, returning my smile. "Hey have you seen Faith?" I asked. "Yes, she went home early this morning," Rose explained. "Without saying good bye?" I asked. "She told me to tell you she said good bye," she said. "She said she didn't want to wake you up." "Oh," I said. "We going trick-or-treating tonight?" She looked up at me. "No, I don't think so," she said. "Why not?" I asked. "Too dangerous. Anyone could be in the Huntsclan and we wouldn't even know," she explained. "We'll be wearing costumes," I said, trying really hard not to roll my eyes. "They'll never know it's us." "Alright," she sighed. "We'll go trick-or-treating, but only for a little bit." "Alright!" I exclaimed. "So what are you going to be?" "Well," she said. "I might be a witch." "A witch?" I asked, chuckling. "That really doesn't suit you." "From what I heard from Spud it does," she said with a smile. "Never, ever," I said. "EVER listen to Spud. What did he say anyway?" "He said I was an evil, two-faced, dragon slaying, ninja she-witch," she said with a laugh. "You could be that for Halloween," I said, grinning. She glared at me. "You're serious?" she asked. I chuckled again. "No, you should be a fairy or a princess," I said. "Or better yet, a fairy princess." She rolled her eyes. "What? I'm serious." "I want to be something scary!" Rose said. "How about a haunted rose, cuz you know that's your name," I said. She continued to glare. "I could be a dragon curser," she said. "What's that?" I asked, confused. "I'll show you," she said. She pointed her finger at me and out shot some of that blue magic. "OW!" I yelled. "What was that for?!" "I was showing you what a dragon curser was," she said, giggling. "Ohh!" I said. "A dragon curser! Haha, very funny." She rolled her eyes again. "You got some kinda eye-rolling disease?" "No, you're just being a dork," she said. "I may be a dork," I said. "But at least I'm your dork." She rolled her eyes again. "Do we have school today?" she asked. "No, it's Saturday," I said, but this time I was the one to roll my eyes. "Are you going to let me meditate or are you just going to keep talking?" she asked. "The second one," I said, grinning. "Of course," she sighed. "Hey my mom says I have to take Haley trick-or-treating," I said. "You don't mind do ya?" "No," she said. "You want me to show you what a dragon curser is again?" "Alright! I'm leaving!" I exclaimed. "I'll pick out our costumes." I started to leave but Rose's voice stopped me. "Wait," she said. I turned around. "You're seriously going to leave without a hug?" I grinned and hugged her and she kissed me on the cheek before I left.
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Young Warrior Dragon
I've seen Dead Man's Chest enough times to know that this is not a good thing...[ss:Lao Shi]
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Post by fudogg on Oct 31, 2006 23:31:37 GMT -5
Cool.
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Post by superdoglac on Nov 1, 2006 7:06:27 GMT -5
But the fairy princess would soooooo fit her XDDDDDD Great job!
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Post by huntsrose on Nov 1, 2006 18:32:34 GMT -5
The 20th chapterversery! Yay! Here's chapter 20!! (Still Jake's point of view)
Chapter 20 ~Trick or treat? Don't you mean trick or death?~
I had picked out some cool Halloween costumes for Haley, Rose, and me. Haley was going as a pink fairy with lots of sparkles, and Rose and I were both going as vampires. "Are you ready?" Rose asked. "Yes," I said. "Let's go get Haley so we can start...But, we'll wait outside my house for her!" "Why don't we go inside?" she asked. "Er..." I said. "I'll explain later. Let's go." She followed me out, confused. "I finally get to meet your family," Rose said. "Um, no!" I exclaimed. "What? Why not?" she asked. "Just...wait here," I said. I ran up the steps and opened the door. "Haley! We're leaving!" She ran down the stairs. "How do I look?" she asked. "Ok, now let's go," I said. She did, but was irritated by the fact that I didn't really look at her very long. "Oh, so this is your little sister," Rose said. "You never told me how pretty she was." Haley smiled, but I just rolled my eyes. "Can we go?" I asked impatiently. "Fine," Rose said. "Are you really Jake's girlfriend?" Haley asked. "Cuz you're too pretty to like someone like Jake." "Aww, I think he's cute," she said. I rolled my eyes again. "Really, cuz not many girls think that," Haley said. "Actually, not many girls talk to him at all." "That's because they haven't gotten to know him like I have," Rose said. I felt a smile twitch across my lips. "Hey isn't that the Huntsman?" I asked, pointing at a dark figure. "Who knows?" Rose asked. "It could just be someone in a costume." "I don't think so," I said. "See? 88 and 89 are with him." "Jake, it could just be a parent taking his kids out trick-or..." She paused when they turned toward us. "...Treating." "No, it's the Huntsman," I said. "Keep down and he won't recognize us." I could barely hear them talking. "Ear of the dragon." "It can't be the dragon because they have a smaller child with them," the Huntsman said. "What if the dragon has a little sister?" 89 asked. "Let's find out," he replied. They turned and started toward us. "Run!" I yelled, grabbing Haley's hand so she would keep up. We started to run, but it was no good because they were gaining. "Dragon up! Rose get on my back!" Rose climbed up and held onto me tightly. "Haley, you have to fly." "Ok," she said nervously. "Dragon up!" We started to fly. "Jake, I'm scared!" "It's ok Haley," I said. "Dragon!" the Huntsman, who was now on a hoverboard, yelled. I grabbed Haley's hand and flew faster. I pulled to the left as a net was shot towards us. "Where do we go?" Rose asked. "I don't know!" I said. "We can't lead them to the shop." "Why not?" Haley asked. "Because they'll just come back," I explained as I dodged a shot from the Huntsman. "Rose, see if you can shoot one of them with magic." She turned slightly and shot at the Huntsman, who dodged it. "Try and shoot 88 or 89." She shot at 88, who fell off his hoverboard and landed in someone's lawn. He sat up dizzily as Rose did the same to 89. "Good shot," Haley commented. "Now it's three against one," I said. "Think we can take him?" "Probably," Rose said. "But it's very risky." "What other choice do we have?" I asked. "Ok," she said. "Land, but be careful." "Haley, are you ready?" Jake asked. "Yeah, I think so," she said. "Hold on Rose," I said as I lunged downward and landed gently. The Huntsman landed in front of us as Rose climbed down. "We meet again, Dragon," he said. "Yeah, but this time, you're goin' down," I said. "What makes you think that?" he asked. "Because it's three against one, chump," I replied. "Can we make this quick?" Haley asked. "We're losing trick-or-treating time." "Trick or treat? Don't you mean trick or death?" he asked, then laughed at his not-so-clever joke. "Oh, it's on," I said, jumping into the air and lashing my tail out at him. He dodged it. Then we all attacked, and he may have been quick enough to dodge my attack, but not all of ours, and he almost fell over, but he didn't, so we shot again. That knocked him over. He retreated and took off. "I'll be back for the dragons!" he yelled. "And you too, Traitor."
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Post by superdoglac on Nov 1, 2006 18:52:28 GMT -5
Great, now i laughed so hard I snorted XD Great job! THe huntsman is gonna get pwned XD
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Post by huntsrose on Nov 2, 2006 17:20:28 GMT -5
Definately because Jake is da pwnzorz! Lol...I'll update soon.
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Post by huntsrose on Nov 14, 2006 22:34:23 GMT -5
Sorry I haven't updated in a while, but here it is!! There will actually be thoughts in this one and they will be in italic!! (Note: This chapter is extremely short, but I'll update a bigger one soon!) YIPPEE! Sorry about that, I'm extra hyper today. ;D GOOD NEWS! I'm going to be making a GUEST APPEARANCE for the first time ever! This random chapter brought to you by Captain Crunch. Eat it! It's good!
Chapter 21 ~Wri-ter~
*Rose's POV*
Traitor? I asked myself in my head. How am I the traitor? He's the one that kidnapped me and lied to me for over 13 years now! "Rose?" Jake asked. "Yeah?" I asked, blinking. "You ok?" "I'm fine..." "Good," he said. "Are we going trick-or-treating?" Haley asked eagerly. "You two go," I said. "I think I'll just watch. Besides, I'm too old for this anyway." "No you aren't," Jake said. "Cuz that would mean I am." I smiled. "I'm just not feeling like myself tonight," I said. "I'll sit with you and we can watch Haley together," he said. Suddenly, some girl with shoulder-length, brown hair and blue eyes, almost like mine, appeared right in front of us. "HI!" she exclaimed. "Hi," Jake said. "Um? Who are you?" "I'm the writer, Emily," she said. "The...what?" I asked. "Wri-ter," she said. "I write pretty much everything that happens." "What are you talking about?" Jake asked. She slapped herself in the forhead. "I knew this wasn't going to be easy..." she whispered. "Ok, I pretty much control what you do." "Yeah, right!" he said, laughing. She raised an eyebrow. "I can make you fly into a wall right now, you know," she said. "Suuure ya ca--HEY!" he said. He then randomly flew into a wall. "OW!" "Scary," I said. I wonder if she can read my thoughts... "Yes, I can," Emily said. "Wow, how do you do that?" Jake asked, rubbing his head. "With my uber writer powers!" she replied. "Make Jake run into a wall again!" Haley exclaimed. "Nah," she said. "Jake's cool." "Yay, I'm cool," he said, rather dorkily. Emily rolled her eyes. He is such a dork...Why don't I just say that out loud so he can hear? "Jake, you are such a dork," I said. There, I said it. I grinned to myself, making Emily roll her eyes again. "Yeah, but I'm your dork," he said. "I KNEW you were gonna say that!" Emily said. Duh, you're writing it "You know, just because you don't have to talk doesn't mean you shouldn't!" "Can you do something about the Huntsfreak with your 'uber writer powers'?" Jake asked, changing the subject. "Um...I gotta go," Emily said, and with that, she vanished in a puff of smoke. "Wow, that was random," Haley said. Jake and I nodded in agreement. "Can we go trick-or-treating now?" "Yes, Haley," Jake said. "Yes we can."
Sorry about the length...and everything else in that chapter. I'm just feeling random tonight. I'm not too happy with the length, so I will make it up to you tomorrow by making a longer one...If I'm not too busy. Anyway, EAT CAPTAIN CRUNCH! IT'S GOOD!
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Post by superdoglac on Nov 15, 2006 7:01:27 GMT -5
LMAO XDDDDDDD. YAY CAPTAIN CRUNCH!!!!!
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