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Post by dragoondart on Apr 27, 2006 21:33:52 GMT -5
XD "The Huntsclan = teh schwag" So totally Ironhand!!!! Keep it up man!
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Post by spyder on Apr 28, 2006 4:38:24 GMT -5
Lol! Nice chapter, keep em coming!
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Post by Iron Hand on Apr 29, 2006 12:04:39 GMT -5
HAHA! That's so awesome! You got my personality exactly, 'cept, I don't use leet (teh, noob, ect)
Man this was an awesome chapter! ;D Gooooosh, your writing rules! lol. Update soon! PLEASE! XD
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Post by Atecom on May 3, 2006 4:50:24 GMT -5
Well Ive got 2 assignments due tomorrow yet to start, but I decided it was more worth my time to update this instead XD. Sorry If this one seems rushed, but I had to, cause I don't have much time.
Inferno Dragon- Your names too long to write now, I will still call you Amdragon
Spyder- I will, don't you worry about that, and in 5 weeks, I will be able to fully read your story
IH- I know you don't use leet but Ive seen you write 'teh schwag' a couple of times
Chapter 5- The great escape
We burst through the doors, out into the front of the police station. Everyone jumped as we slammed open the door, a shocked look on their faces. Then they heard a voice from behind us.
“Somebody stop them” The officer yelled. Constable Mike, suddenly appeared in front of the exit doorway covering the only direct escape outside.
“Quick, this way” Yelled Kellen as he suddenly turned direction and headed towards a door on the side. I followed as best I could, but it seemed hopeless. We burst through the door on the side and found ourselves in another room. On the floor sat twenty kindergarten children and several shrieked when we burst through the door. Up the front of the room, was Gun safety Dan (XD) who at the time was giving the children a lecture on gun safety. Kellen kept running, he did not have time to swerve to avoid gun safety Dan. Turning his upper body at the last second, Kellen Shoulder barged Gun safety Dan, knocking him clean off his feet. Several kindergarten childern cheered, but their teacher was in hysterics, trying to keep several of them calm. Kellen and I ran through another door, which was another hallway, but unfortunately at the other end, the police had already managed to set up a barricade. Kel stopped running for a second, then turned.In front oh him was a window facing the carpark.
“Quick, through here” he whispered, and immediately began pulling the window.
“That Won’t work” I said, “Its locked tig…” Then there was a click, and the window sprang open.
“Damn that was good”, I commented as he jumped through the window. I jumped through after him. We began running through the car park. There were so many cop cars.
“We will never make it on foot” I said.
“Well, lets take a car” Kellen replied.
I ran to the nearest cop car. I pulled on the door handle on the drivers side. It was locked. There was no way I could unlock it in time before the police got here. Kellen calmly grabbed the passenger side car handle. I heard a click, and with ease he opened the door.
“Easy” Kellen grinned. He then got in the passenger side of the car and leaned over and unlocked my side.
“Well, that’s great” I said, “But we need a key, this thing will take forever to hotwire”
Kellen just simply repeated “Easy” then he leaned over to the car keyhole. I didn’t see exactly what he did, but I heard another click and then I heard the car engine start.
“Damn, that was amazing” I complimented once again.
Kellen just grinned and nodded. Then sudden;y he turned a little serious.
“You drive” He said “You Aussies have backwards cars with the steering wheel on the wrong side of the car, and you drive on the wrong side of the road.”
I got in the car, but cam back with a witty response. “Yeah, that’s right you’re an American, so I think it’s best that I drive after all, imagine… an American driving”
“Atecom… Shuddup”
We both kind of laughed. With that I shut the door, and put the car into drive.
“We better do up our seatbelts” I said, “We don’t want to get pulled over by the cops.” Once again we shared a short laugh. Then I waited for a second, and watched as an officer reached the car, then just to tease him as soon as he got here, I put the pedal to the metal. The car screeched off. I turned out of the police station, performing a wide turn because of the momentum. I looked in the rear view mirror. The police were all getting into their cars. Well it looked like another car chase was about to be initiated, only this time I knew I couldn’t escape as easily as before, cause now I had a passenger.
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Post by dragoondart on May 3, 2006 8:34:03 GMT -5
Woo hoo, Safety Dan strikes again!!!! XD N E wayz, good chapter, cant wait to see you do a major car chase scene (have you seen the Blues Brothers??? Good stuff to pull from.)
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Post by Iron Hand on May 3, 2006 9:30:09 GMT -5
OMGOSH! XD That was so awesome! Every time I controlled something opened I smiled lol and again, you got my personality totally right XD. Ohhh man that was great, funny too Make more great chapters like this lol. -IH
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Post by Atecom on May 6, 2006 1:09:26 GMT -5
Chapter 6- The Gettaway
AmDragon- Theres still more car chase to come after this
Kellen- Well here it is
After for a bit on George street, I realised it was too packed to get anywhere fast. I had to turn and get on the western distributor, which would be a clear path onto the Bradfield Highway, which crossed the Sydney Harbour Bridge as I was heading north, I would not have to worry about toll booths, which then lead to the Warringah freeway, Then the Gore Hill Freeway, then it’s a straight stretch along Epping road. Well that was the plan anyway. But I was very intrigued by the person sitting next to me, in my 2 years of street crime, he could steal a car way better then I could. In less then a second, he had access, then he had turned on the engine.
“Uh Hey Kellen” I began to ask as I turned on to the Western Distributor
“Hey, Dude, just call me Ironhand”
“Uh, ok, got ya Kellen”
“What???”
“I said..” I was cut off
“I know what you said, but I just asked you to call me Ironhand”
By now I had turned on to the western Distributor, which looked a lot like the above ground freeways you can find in Los Angeles. I began picking up speed, weaving in and out of cars, who would beep their horn as we went by. Out of the rear view mirror, I saw a long line of police cars, with their sirens blazing also turn onto the Distributor.
“Ok ok, sorry Kellen” I replied
He just sighed. “Your an idiot.”
“Well anyway, how did you manage to steal this car so fast?”
Kellen smiled. “You want the truth?” He asked
I nodded
“You want the truth? Well you can’t handle the truth” He yelled
“Uh ok then” I replied. “What if there was a chance that I could handle the truth”
“Ha ha im only Joking dude, see This may not be easy to comprehend at first, but I’m not a regular human, Im a kind of special Human”
“Ill say” I replied
“You Suck” he replied in response.
“Go on” I urged
“Well, Don’t laugh and don’t tell anybody I told you this, but I have a magical power”
“Really?” I asked sounding a little more sarcastic then I meant it to sound
“Yeah Really” he replied, imitating the way I said really.
“No, go on” I urged
“Ok, well I’ve been able to control metal since the time I was born”
“That’s a pretty lame power I replied” Then I stopped. I realised I was starting to sound like… like you know who.
“But then again I guess its actually pretty cool cause you were able to break me out of prison” I quickly covered.
“Your reaction is fairly small for someone who has just been told that the person next to them as magical powers”
“Well.. I’m trying to concentrate on the road” I quickly replied, looking up just in time to swerve to miss a truck.
“Man you suck..” Kellen said
“Sorry Kellen” I replied
“IRONHAND Damnit”
I didn’t respond, the Bradfield highway was more packed then I hoped for. Some inconsiderate person had decided to have a car accident on the bridge, which made the traffic run slowly.
“Damn, there is no way I can get around all those” I said out aloud
“Allow me to help” Kellen said. With that, he put out his hands. The cars at the back started moving forwards, hitting the cars in front, which moved forward hitting the cars in front of them. Pretty soon, all the cars were moving forward, no matter how hard the people tried to put the foot on the break.
“Its hard to move all these cars” Kellen said
“Just try do it enough so that they are off the bridge” I responded. Then we could drive on the Median strip around them.
“Kellen was trying his hardest, but the cars still were not moving fast enough. I had to put my foot on the break in order to stop myself from hitting them. The police casught up fast. A little to fast, In fact, it didn’t even look like they bothered trying to stop. The first few went crashing into the line of cars.
“Well at least your gonna put a hole in some insurance companies pocket” I said.
Then I noticed a small gap, just enough for a car to go through, I turned to head for it, and picked up my speed.
“We will never make it” Kellen shouted.
“Yes we will I replied” but I doubted it myself, you would have to have been the worlds best driver to go through there.
Then at high speed, we drove through. The rear view mirrors on either side were knocked off and I heard a scraping noise. We began to rapidly lose speed as we scraped along the line of cars on either side.
This action saw a few more police cars fall victim to the great pileup.
“Don’t stop” I thought to myself, “ Please don’t stop. The car stopped.
“Damn” I shouted
“Dude you suck, I told you we were not gonna make it. What are we gonna do now?”
“Lets jack another car, at the front of the line I replied.
“I can’t even open the door, we are wedged between 2 cars.”
I looked at the windscreen. “When God shuts a door, he opens a window” I replied. In the backseat of the car there was a police baton. I leaned back and grabbed it.
“Cover your eyes” I instructed. Then I started hitting the windscreen.
“Geez” Kellen yelled as he covered his eyes.
I hit the glass several more times. “Damn bullet proof glass” I commented, as my hits did little more then crack it. “Screw this, I said, as I saw Iron hand had his eyes covered. I breathed fire at the glass, the heat weakening it. Then I hit it again. It smashed easily. With that, I pulled Kellen and we got out the front of the car, just as one of the police on foot reached it.
We ran. He didn’t see us get out of the car and it took him a little while to realise we weren’t there. By then, we were already near the front of the line of cars. One of the drivers of one of the cars in front had gotten out to call his insurance company. Score It was a Lamborghini Counthash (However the hell you spell it). We snuck up onto the side then opened the door and hopped in. I jumped to the drivers side and Kellen got in the passengers side.
“Ok, do your magic” I said
With that, Kellen started the engine.
“Thanks Kellen” I said
“Dude…Ironhand” He replied
I didn’t have time to reply because the driver of the Lamborghini realised what was gong on.
“Hey!!!” He yelled. Immediately I took off. The driver ran behind us for a few meters, then gave up. We were free on a road with no cars cause it was blocked off due to the pileup caused by Kellen. The police were also stuck behind it. But that still didn’t mean we were home free.
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Post by Iron Hand on May 6, 2006 1:19:17 GMT -5
XD so funny. We love eachother, yet hate eachother! XD We're the best family ever! hahahaha. Great chapter! Full of action and suspense! I love it! (As you can see since you were watching me on a webcam LOL)
Hehe, hope you update soon ;D
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Post by spyder on May 6, 2006 1:19:43 GMT -5
Another awesome chap! It's pretty suspenseful (well, kind off) Anyways, update soon...Great work!
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Post by Atecom on May 7, 2006 0:58:26 GMT -5
Chapter 7- The Gettaway Part 2
We were cruising down Epping road, making the most of the chance we were just given. The road was mostly empty bar a few cars who had turned on from the streets, but there were very few of them. I turned on the radio to the News.
“We have just received word of a 34 car pileup on the Sydney Harbour bridge. Reports indicate that Police cars are involved in this as well.”
“Score, well done Kellen” I said “34 Cars is awesome”
“Well you know” Kellen replied “Its their fault for stopping, when the great Ironhand needs to get through.” Then he let out a laugh.
I watched the road. They would probably eventually get a helicopter to follow us or something, I didn’t care, I was already the most wanted person in Australia. Things went smoothly for the first 10 minutes. Then from out of nowhere, a police car shot out of a side road, nearly crashing right into us.
“Fudge!!”, I yelled as I swerved to avoid it. “Damn they caught up faster then I had hoped.” Following that car, a line of squad cars turned. I had never seen so many police cars. As for speed, we were about even. The police squad cars were fast, but so was the Lamborghini
Then I saw it. Up ahead a roadblock in the distance.
“Uh Kellen, Help” I said
“No problems” Kellen replied, with that, he used his power to push the cars out of the way. The look on the police officers face was priceless as they wondered why their ars were moving. I stuck my middle finger up at them as we drove past. Kellen did the same. I looked back at the roadblock. The police just stood there. They couldn’t chase because Kellen pushed them over road spikes when he pushed them out of the way. The other police cars continued, I still hadn’t managed to shake them. I looked forward just in time to see we were headed straight for an oil tanker truck. It had already seen us and tried to swerve to avoid us, but turned too hard, so its momentum continued on, but now it was perpendicular to the road and blocked it off completely.
“Stop It” I yelled
“I can’t, its got too much momentum” Kellen replied. I watched as the tanker quickly got closer. Looking round I noticed a ramp that lead to the M2 Motorway. It was the wrong way, and far too close for our speed, but I knew it would have to do. At the last second, I swerved. The car began screeching, We felt the full effects of the inertia as the outside wheels began lifting off the ground. “We are going to tip!!!” Yelled Kellen. I just sat there keeping control as best I could
“S*%#” Kellen yelled, as we successfully turned onto the ramp, the wheels coming back down just as the tanker passed the place we were just at. The police did not have time to turn though, they hit the tanker dead on. The tanker exploded, flames shot high into the air, the force of the explosion also forcing the burning wreckage of the tanker to jump high in the air, and come down on the M2 Overpass, making that collapse.
“Christ” I yelled
Kellen was looking back in amazement, but he managed to utter in a shocked voice “Hey dude, don’t use the lords name in vain.”
I was still far too shocked to reply I just concentrated on the road. Luckily the overpass was in the opposite direction the where we were travelling, or the road would have been blocked off. I moved to the correct side of the road, then sat there driving at the correct speed limit. I wasn’t sure if there were any police left. I turned off on Pennant Hills Road in order to avoid the M2 Tollbooths. I remained the speed limit but I ensured I was ready at any signs of a police car. I wound down my window, still trying to relax after what had just happened. I noticed a cool black car was driving next to me, with its windows tinted. I let a made a little nodding gesture in its direction.
Then the guy in the passenger side of the car wound down his window. It was constable Mike. He was in an unmarked car. I didn’t think about that. I began to speed up, the unmarked car did as well.
“This is your last warning, pull over” he shouted.
I just kept going faster. I then noticed about 2 other black cars, similar to his. We were nearly surrounded. I drove faster ignoring his order to pull over. Luckily Pennant Hills road was not busy.
“You’ve had it” Mike Yelled, then to show he meant business he pulled out a shot gun and socked it.
“Gah” I yelled “He means business, get down” I ordered Kel.
Kellen ducked as he shot, the bullets hitting the door, narrowly missing us.
I turned the car to hit his, hoping I could run it off the road, but his driver seemed to realise this and turned his in to hit mine at the same time. We were now so close to his car that he couldn’t miss a shot.
“Last chance” He said as he pointed the gun at us. I sat there, alternating looks between him and traffic building up at a red light just ahead. I waited. He put his finger on the trigger and got ready.
“Brace yourself” Kellen I ordered, then suddenly slammed my foot on the break, seconds before he fired. The car behind us slammed into us at a high speed, spinning us around, forcing us to go off road. We crashed through a brick wall, and straight into a house. The police cars, unable to stop in time, crashed straight into the cars at the red light, Flipping over the cars they hit and landing upside down on the road.
I was dazed, but alive. Kellen looked to be in a very similar state. We both had cuts on our forehead and were bleeding. It seemed that no one was home in the house we crashed into. I opened my car door and stumbled out. I was covered in blood, dust and sweat. I limped over to Kellens side, and brushed away a bit of rubble which was obstructing his exit from the vehicle. Then I helped him out of the car. We could both barely stand after that.
He put his arm on my shoulder to support himself. I did the same with him.
“This way” I said and began limping. “I know a place near here we can go.”
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Post by Iron Hand on May 7, 2006 16:23:36 GMT -5
Awesome! You once again got my personality TOTALLY right! I LOVE THIS STORY!! XD..
Great chapter! Action is tight! haha
Update soooooooon! lol LOVE IT! hehe Not as much as Raffi.. but.. ^^;;;
Yeah
-Kel
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Post by dragoondart on May 8, 2006 12:31:48 GMT -5
Wow, that was awesome!!!!!!
OMG, you know IH so well man, it is hilarious
"'Hey dude, don’t use the lords name in vain.'"
10 seconds after he flipped off the police XD So IH
N e ways, keep updating, cant wait to continue reading!
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Post by Atecom on May 27, 2006 1:26:47 GMT -5
Chapter 8- Hideaway
Within 10 Minutes the sky was full of choppers. We moved from cover to cover in the hope that we would not be spotted by the helicopters. It wasn’t easy, we were both battered and injured and to make matters worse we had to scale fences and stumble through peoples backyards in the hope that we were not spotted by anyone. Our goal wasn’t far but when hobbling along being pursued by lawmen it seemed to take forever. We would take it in turns to help each other over the fences, one providing foot support, the other climbing then would have to scramble over themselves. It was very slow progress. Then at about the 5th house, Kellen completely collapsed.
“Ahh S@$%” I exclaimed. I shook him.
“Cmon, get up” I urged but I realised I felt quite faint myself. I fell onto my knees. A sudden sense of fatigue fell over me. I looked around the yard, there was no one in sight. I knew I had to do something quick.
“Ahh Screw this” I yelled “Atecom Transform!!!!”
With that, I transformed into a dragon. I picked the unconscious Kellen up in my claws, then Took off very quickly, and flew as fast as I could. I don’t know how many people spotted me, I was flying low to the ground and a little erratically. Im sure many residents saw me, as well as the people in the choppers, Luckily, I didn’t have to fly far. I landed in the backyard of an empty house. I knew it would be empty. Its was where my old house was the one that I supposedly burned down. It had been rebuilt but no one lived there. I also knew how to get in. There was a small weak door on the side which could easily be pushed open. I dragged Kellen inside and shut the door. Then I reverted into my Human form once again.
I went into the bathroom and got some water. I splashed it on Kellens head. He seemed to stir a little bit, then his eyes shot open. Then he groaned and raised his hand to his forehead as if it hurt badly. He coughed.
“Where are we?” He asked.
“Somewhere safe” I replied.
“Damn, we gonna be on Australias most wanted list” he said.
“Screw Australias most wanted.” I replied. “We gonna get on worlds most wanted.”
“Well bro, maybe this will all eventually die down and we can go back to normal”
Something seemed to change in me. I felt a bit of anger, that I hadn’t felt in years. “Die down?” I asked snappily. “There is no going back to normal, WE ARE fugitives, and always will be, Think about it you can never return to the life you know”
“Calm down Atecom”
“Your friends, family, you can never see them again. The world screws you over, but it doesn’t stop there it screws you over again and again. There is nothing that can be done about it. We are damn copkillers, hear that? COPKILLERS!! It’s a new life, a changed life. It’s the way of this damn world and it aint gonna change. Hear that? Your life as you knew it is OVER!!!” “Wow dude, calm down, what’s gotten in to you?”
I took a deep breath, realising I wasn’t helping anyone with my performance.
“Sorry, I guess what has just happened has gotten to me.” I replied.
“What are we going to do now?”
“We can’t stay here, they will eventually know to look here”
“Hmmmm Kellen replied. Oh and one more thing. Howd you manage to get me here.”
I strained myself thinking of an answer. ”Well… I.. um … I.” I was suddenly interrupted by a knock at the door.
“Open up, it’s the police, we know your in here.”
“Ah Heck I yelled. They caught us, we have to get out of here now!!!!”
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Post by Iron Hand on May 27, 2006 23:00:05 GMT -5
Oh no! XD. Good chapter braw lol. Love the chases.. now.. what was I gonna say? Hehe, nice man. Update soon
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Post by dragoondart on May 30, 2006 16:49:23 GMT -5
XD Poor Kel, he couldn't handle the pressure huh? (XP BURN!!!!!!!!!)
Anyways, good chapter and sorry it took so long to post XD Update SOON!
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