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Post by Chaos on Jul 22, 2005 11:21:55 GMT -5
For people who read the Downpour of Darkness fan-fic, you know this is coming. For those who don't, here's a preview and I'll get started soon.
Shade invites Jake to go back to the UK with him and his family. Jake agrees, but unknown to Jake, Shade still knows that Jake is the American Dragon. Shade has only taken Jake with him to test his abilities, so he sends letters without a signature to a few of Jake's enemies. Jake is surprised to see that these villans are here and gets rid of them with ease. But when Jake is looking for Shade, he discovers the secret of him and his family...
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Post by stranger on Jul 22, 2005 11:23:10 GMT -5
sounds interesting, pls add more soon!
(the title of your story makes it sound like jake is on drugs,lol)
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Post by dragonfan123 on Jul 22, 2005 11:24:37 GMT -5
same here shade and thats not a bad idea
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Post by yfwe on Jul 22, 2005 11:25:59 GMT -5
Yeah, it does sound like that! Or maybe Jake's Excellent Adventure... (after Bill & Ted's Excellent Adventure)
Sounds good so far, Shade. Can't wait to hear more!
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Post by Chaos on Jul 22, 2005 11:31:27 GMT -5
Thanks. I had to make the fan-fic when Jake finds out about Shade. Ok, here's the beginning...
RING!!! The bell had rung for a four day weekend! Everyone was happy because most people had plans. "I'm going with my mom on her business trip." Trixie told Jake and Spud. "Well, I'm going to Hawaii!" Spud bragged. "What about you Jake?" Spud asked Jake. "Me?" Jake asked. "I'm staying here in the NYC." Just then, Shade walked up to Jake. "Hey, Jake? Are you going anywhere for the weekend?" Shade asked. "No, why?" Jake asked. "Because...you're going back to the UK with me, my sister, and dad!" Shade said. "Meet me at my house at 6pm today." Shade informed Jake, walking off. "Wow, I actually get to go ALL the way to the UK!" Jake bragged to Spud. "I wonder if I could sneak away in the trunk..." Spud thought, walking off. As Shade was walking off, he was thinking, "That fool Jake doesn't even know that this is all a trap to test his skills..." He started to laugh to himself.
I said magical, because you know, he's the magical realm defender.
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Post by stranger on Jul 22, 2005 11:33:29 GMT -5
pls continue
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Post by dragonfan123 on Jul 22, 2005 11:42:40 GMT -5
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Post by yfwe on Jul 22, 2005 11:47:33 GMT -5
What they both said.
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Post by Chaos on Jul 22, 2005 11:52:59 GMT -5
Darn! I was writing it and I acidently refreshed! I'll restart, hold on.
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Post by stranger on Jul 22, 2005 11:54:59 GMT -5
u should write it all in microsoft word first, then copy and paste
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Post by yfwe on Jul 22, 2005 11:59:18 GMT -5
Man, I hate when that happens. Sorry.
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Post by Chaos on Jul 22, 2005 11:59:29 GMT -5
Quickly writing letters to Jake's enemies. Sadly for Shade, only two people replied and said yes, the Huntsclan (not Huntsgirl OR Huntsman)and Panderas. "Good enough, I guess." Shade thought, shrugging. At 6pm, Jake came to the door with his bad of clothes and what ever else might be in there. "Good, you're here. I hope you brought warm clothes and have spare room." Shade said to Jake. "I do, I have a spare backpack, why?" Jake asked Shade, putting his bag in the trunk of Shade's dad's car. "You'll see..." Shade told Jake as they both got in the car and drove to the airport. The airport was pretty busy, but not the plane for Scotland. They all went on and got in their seats. "Cool! Little TVs in the chair in front of you!" Jake said, figuring out how to work it. Shade sat next to Jake and his sister and dad sat close by as the plane took off.
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Post by Chaos on Jul 25, 2005 17:02:19 GMT -5
I'll work on this a bit more...
Jake was really bored on the plane. "Is there anything to do?" Jake whispered to Shade. "Other than watch a movie, sleep, or listen to music, no." Shade replied. Jake groaned, pulling out his MP3 player. After lots of hours, the plane finally landed in Scotland. "So, now what?" Jake asked. "We book a hotel." Shade's dad said. After lots of paper work, everyone was set in a hotel and Jake and Shade were outside.
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Post by stranger on Jul 25, 2005 17:30:48 GMT -5
pls continue soon!
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Post by Chaos on Jul 25, 2005 18:20:54 GMT -5
Ok, it's coming at you all!
"What are we outside for?" Jake asked Shade. "I told someone I knew before I moved to America I was coming back for a small vacation..." Shade told Jake, looking around. Then, out of the fog, came a girl with long, brown hair, blue eyes, pink gloves, a gray sweater, and black jeans. She had a really happy smile on her face. "Shade!" She said, happily, running to Shade and Jake. "Uh, who is that?" Jake asked, looking at the girl. When she came over and hugged Shade, he said, "This is my girlfriend, Florence!" Shade informed Jake. "Wow, you have a girlfriend?" Jake asked, smiling. He was thinking about Rose and how he was Huntsgirl, but he tried to keep smiling. "Yeah, she's really smart as well." Shade said, blushing as Florence kissed him on the cheek. "Well, I have to go, bye Shade and Jake!" Florence said, running off and waving. She vanished into the fog. Shade and Jake waved back before she left. "What now?" Jake asked. Shade walked past the building. "I have to take care of some...business. Then we'll do something." Shade said. "Now, attack." Shade whispered in a phone thing. Then, a net dropped down on Jake and Panderas walked out. "Well, well, well. What do we have here?" He asked, laughing.
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