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Post by Chaos on Sept 20, 2006 0:17:55 GMT -5
Mm-hmm, I know I already have a fan-fic running, Game of Potatoes. I'll be updating that still, so read that too. XD Yeah.... After talking to the Raff-ster, I really wanted to make a shuper Shade/Florence love fan-fic.Yay. ^^ Sho, here I go, and I'll try with the song thing that Raffi also does in her fan-fics. Prologue: Florence in Italy www.deviantart.com/deviation/39933270/ Chapter 1: Time After Time Lying in my bed I hear the clock tick, And think of you Caught up in circles confusion Is nothing new. ---------------------------- "Oh, Shade... You are the best person I know." Florence said, hugging Shade tightly. He just nodded, smiling. "We'd better get to school." Shade then saids, letting go of Florence, but then holding her hand. She smiled as they walked down the street, watching the clouds go by. There were many, because the weather said it'd rain soon. "I love the rain. I know you do too." Florence said, looking to Shade's face after looking at the sky. "It's like you're reading my mind..." Shade muttered, chuckling a little. Florence slightly bent over to kiss Shade, and then they got into school after they kissed. ---------------------------- Flashback warm nights Almost left behind Suitcases of memories, Time after- ---------------------------- "Are we going to go on that date, or are you going to stay up there all night?" Shade asked, smiling. Florence laughed. "I'm coming down!" She said, doing a flip off the tree. "Where do you want to go?" Shade asked Florence. "Hm, how about the theme park?" She asked. Shade nodded and they walked to the theme park. No one was there and they went on some rides. They were on the roller coaster and that big spinny thing. Shade got sick from that... Then, Shade wanted to win Florence something, so when Florence wasn't looking, he threw an iceball at the cans and they all fell down. Shade won Florence a big teddy bear and she hugged him hard. They also went on one of those scary rides. Shade got scared on most of it and kind of fell on Florence, who blushed a little. Off the ride, they were on their way to the ferris wheel and on the way the held hands together and both watched the stars as fireworks shot into the sky. ( Quote from Something's Amiss...) ---------------------------- Sometimes you picture me I'm walking too far ahead You're calling to me, I cant hear What you've said Then you say go slow I fall behind The second hand unwinds. ---------------------------- Shade and Florence were now at lunch, dreamily staring at each other. "Um, are they gonna be like that every lunch...?" Trixie muttered, oddly looking at them. Jake shrugged and ate some of his burger. "Aw, that's sweet." Rose muttered to Jake, smiling. "Yeah, but it gets boring." Jake muttered back, grinning. He kissed Rose's cheek, then went back to eating his burger. "So we up for the skate park after school?" Spud asked everyone. A yeah, or sure was said from Jake, Rose, and Trixie, as Shade and Florence slowly nodded, still looking at each other's eyes. Trixie slightly schoffed and rolled her eyes. "Ya know, yo should get that checked." Shade muttered, making an odd hand gesture in Trixie's direction. Florence giggled a little, sighing dreamily. ---------------------------- If you're lost, you can look and you will find me Time after time If you fall I will catch you, I'll be waiting Time after time If you're lost, you can look and you will find me Time after time If you fall I will catch you, I'll be waiting! Time after time... ---------------------------- "Ok, you go first." Shade gestured to Florence. "No, you." Florence replied, smiling sweetly. Shade laughed a little. "Let's just get some snow cones and watch the others." He then said, Florence now laughing and nodding. They got off of the half-pipe and walked to the stand. "They are real obsessed with each other, eh?" Trixie asked, laughing a little. "Yeah, but it's really cute." Rose then said, smiling and putting her hand to her mouth. Florence started to lick her purple snowcone, then tripped on a rock. "Woaahh!" She yelled, dropping her snowcone and about to fall, smashing her head hard. Shade quickly made his dragon wings apparent and caught Florence on her back. "Shade... You risked your dragon identity to save me..." Florence happily, but calmly muttered, smiling. "Of course, I love you, I could never let you get hurt." Shade said, smiling. He set his dragon wings away and kissed Florence, her in his hands. ---------------------------- After my picture fades and darkness has Turned to gray Watching through windows you're wondering If I'm ok Secrets stolen from deep inside The drum beats out of time If you're lost you can look and you will find me Time after time If you fall I will catch you I'll be waiting Time after time... ---------------------------- "Whew... Thanks for that." Florence said, getting up and blushing. "Too bad the now cone you bought for me fell." She sadly muttered. Shade looked down at the fallen snowcone and picked up the base of the cone, then breathed ice to make another snowcone. Then he used his water controlling to control the purple flavor to go into the new snowcone. "There ya go!" Shade said, laughing a little and scratching the back of his head. Florence finished her snowcone and hugged Shade tightly, then thorwing away her snowcone base. "Hey, let's go home, huh? I want to talk to you..." Florence said, smiling. Shaden odded and finished his snowcone before throwing it out. He retook Florence's hand as they walked over to Shade's house. ---------------------------- If you're lost you can look and you will find me Time after time If you fall I will catch you, I'll be waiting! Time after time Time after time... [quieter]Time after time... [quieter]Time after time....... ---------------------------- Chappy 1 is at a finish now. COMMENT!!!
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Sept 20, 2006 0:26:51 GMT -5
Aww, sho schweet. ^^ That's just.. cute. I agree with Rose. They're sho obsessed with each other. Heh, so cutecutecuteloveyloveydovey booo. Oh yeah, and I lurve that song. Yea-uh, Time After Time is sho pwners. XD Nice. I liiiiike. Update soon!!!!!!
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Post by Chaos on Sept 20, 2006 0:28:20 GMT -5
Thankshoe sho muchie!! ^^ First comment ish good for teh soul. I'll update when I can. Eh, no song thingy until chappy 3. ^^
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Sept 20, 2006 0:36:10 GMT -5
Oh noes! XD Oh well, Time After Time was sho pwners... *shrug* I guess I can wait.
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Post by Chaos on Sept 20, 2006 17:22:39 GMT -5
Aww.... Only Raffi...person... .Yeah. Only she replied, which makes me... sad. -_- Ah well.
Chapter 2: The Huntsclan Movement
"So, Shade, what I wanted to tell you was that, well, just promise to me you won't freak out, ok?" Florence asked. Shade nodded and took her hands, reassuringly. "Well, Huntsdad has found out my location, the hotel I'm staying in. So-"
"What?" Shade asked, wide-eyeing Florence.
"Wait! I asked your parents, and they said I could stay here." Florence explained, smiling. Shade then laughed.
"Yay! Then we can talk, and hang out more, and have fun...!" Shade said, excited and grinning. Florence chuckled a little and nodded. "But Florence, I want to fight Huntsdad again. With you." He said again.
"Shade, if you and I are going, I will need to know the new movement of the Huntsclan that live in New York." Florence explained, then getting an idea. "Oh yeah, Rose is still in the Huntsclan!" She then realized. Shade grinned once more and nodded, turning dragon and flying out of the window with Florence in his hands.
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After getting the information from Rose, Shade and Florence ended up in a warehouse.
"Hey, this place is so familiar..." Shade muttered.
"Really...?" Florence asked, looking around. It was very old and abandoned, lots of boxes and ruins.
"Yeah, it was when I first fought with Jake, side by side, because I remember fighting a griffin. Trisie, Spud, and Rose were there, but none of them knew I was that dragon at that time." Shade explained. He was still in his dragon form with Florence next to him.
"Hey, there's a lot of stairs now." Florence muttered, looking around. They both saw stairs that went to a basement. It had all kinds of weapons and books, probably meaning there was aother hidden staircase for a sub-basement.
"Here!" Shade yelled in a whisper to Florence, blowing dust over a secret compartment door to the staircase. They popped their head through and saw Huntsdad, his new main accomplice, and 88 and 89, obviously for a small transfer.
"Today, we go out in search for Huntslass. Make her re-join us, or destroy her." Huntsdad announced. 88, 89, and the new accomplice nodded as they headed for the stairs. Shade and Florence quickly covered the sub-basement and then got ready to attack when they came out.
"Ready?" Florence asked, Shade nodding. 88 and 89 were first out as Shade ambushed 88, pressure pointing him in the stomach hard, then doign it to his arms so he fell over as Shade pushed him easily. Shade then uncapped a water bottle and sent it to whip 89.
"AAAHHH!!!!" 89 screamed, dropping his Huntstaff and speeding out of the warehouse before the water whip hit him. Shade oddly looked at 89 as the new accomplice attacked Florence, which she blocked with her arm.
"Who are you!?" Florence yelled, the boy smirking.
"Number 35, better known as Huntsdeath." Huntsdeath said, pulling out some Huntsclan weapons and attacking Florence. she hoped up and bounced from the walls until she was above Huntsdeath on a box group. She jumped on it as the many boxes fell on top of him and she landed on Huntsdeath, knocking him out.
"You coming here has saved us from burning a hotel. And your treason to the Hunsclan is obvious. When I find out Scottish Dragon's human identity, I will do something horrible..." Huntsdad evil said, pulling out his Huntstaff and shooting a laser at Shade, which he froze with his breath before it hit him.
"You'll never know!" Shade yelled, freezing his tail and swinging it around, sending Huntsdad into the wall. He groaned, until Shade unfroze his tail and controlled the water to surround all, but Huntsdad's head, until he refroze it.
"Come on, let's get outta here!" Florence yelled, Shade picking up Florence. She grabbed a few of Huntsdeath's weapons before they flew out of the hole in the first floor that was there before.
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"Phew..." Shade muttered, tuening human as they entered his room again. Florence closed his window as his father came in.
"So, Florence, you fine with sleeping in Shade's room on the floor?" He asked, Florence smiling and nodding. "And remember, you all can train, Shade in dragon form, because his mother is out of town for this month."
"Thanks dad, see ya in the morning." Shade said, smiling and jumping on his bed. He nodded and closed the door.
"So... Florence?" Shade asked, twiddling his thumbs a litle and blushing. "Would you like to go to ther beach tomorrow morning?" He finished, smiling.
"Of course, I'd love to!" Florence exclaimed, hugging Shade tightly. They both laughed, as Shade got into his bed and Florence entered her sleeping bag on an air mattress, excited for the morning beach time.
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Okie, Chappy 2 is at a closey close. ^^ REVIEW, because Raffi was the only one who reviewed last time. X3
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Post by redemption on Sept 20, 2006 17:50:32 GMT -5
O____O
THIS IS TOTALLY AWESOME!!
*Bows down and worships the awesomness* XD
Update soon!
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Sept 20, 2006 21:09:04 GMT -5
XD Nice chapter man. Liek, great as always. I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE. UPDAAAATE!
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Post by Chaos on Sept 20, 2006 23:33:32 GMT -5
Yays! TWO reviews is definitely enough to get me to write another chapter for today. Here it is, enjoeh!! But, more viewers would be even awesomer.
Chapter 3: Beach Day; Like a Hawaiian Roller Coaster Ride
Aloha e aloha e 'Ano 'ai ke aloha e Aloha ae aloha e A nu ay ki aloha e ----------------------------------------------------------
"Shade... The beach is always great and romantic." Florence said, smiling. The sun was shining brightly over the ocean and on them.
"It sure is. Great water and sunlight!" Shade said, smiling and getting up, Florence still sitting and leaning with her arms. Shade started to control the ocean water to move back and forth.
"Hee hee, that makes the water shine more, and I love how powerful you are." Florence said, laughing and jumping on Shade to hug him as they fell into the water, laughing and hugging each other.
---------------------------------------------------------- There’s no place I’d rather be Then on my surfboard out at sea Lingering in the ocean blue And If I had one wish come true I’d surf till the sun sets Beyond the horizon
A wiki wiki mai lohi lohi Lawe mai i ko papa he'e nalu Flyin' by on the Hawaiian roller coaster ride! ----------------------------------------------------------
After hugging each other in the shore and shallow end of the water, they were standing up and looking over to the deeper bit of the water.
"I wonder what it'd be like under the water..." Florence pondered, looking into the water. Shade set his hand on his chin, then thought of an idea.
"Well, now you can see it!" Shade yelled, controlling the water to split a little by moving his hands and making a small bubble as they watched the fish and algae that was on the ocean floor.
"It's so beautiful down here!" Florence gasped, smiling and looking around. Shade was still moving his hands to control the water to stay up and were moving around to see all of the ocean's bottoms and depths.
"Would you like to go back now?" Shade asked Florence, getting tired from moving his arms. Florence laughed and nodded as they slowly set their course back for the shorline.
---------------------------------------------------------- A wiki wiki mai lohi lohi La we mai iko papa he na lu Pi'i na nalu la lahalaha O ka moana hanupanupa Lalala i kala hanahana Me ke kai hoene i ka pu'e one Helehele mai kakou e Hawaiian roller coaster ride! ----------------------------------------------------------
"That got tiresome." Shade laughed when he and Florence reached the sand again and were out of the bubble. He fell to the sand and smiled. Florence just giggled at him and fell on top, kissing him. Shade kissed him back before Florence got off him and turned over, laying next to him.
"Well, do you want to surf?" Shade asked Florence, getting up and looking to her direction.
"Yeah sure, but did you bring any money to rent boards?" Florence asked, confused. He just grinned and got up.
"Watch." Shade muttered, grinning as they stood up and got to the edge of the water. Shade jumped on it and froze his feet over, flying around. Florence stood on the water and Shade froze if for her. She laughed happily as they 'water skated' to a wave and rode on it.
---------------------------------------------------------- There’s no place I’d rather be Than on the seashore dry, wet free On golden sand is where I lay And if I only had my way I'd play til the sun sets Beyond the horizon
Lalala i kala hanahana Me ke kai hoene i ka pu'e one It’s time to try the Hawaiian Roller coaster ride! ----------------------------------------------------------
"I never knew that this could be so fun!" Florence yelled out to Shade, laughing and having lots of fun.
"Yeah, but just be careful of, WIPING OUT!!!" Shade yelled, one of his foot frozen breaking off as he sped into the water, drifting to shore and laughing his butt of. Florence ran over and also laughed with him.
"I thought you'd practice." Florence muttered, laughing.
"Yeah, and I thought you'd be ready for this." He replied back, tackling her this time into the water as they started making out in the water.
---------------------------------------------------------- Hang loose, hang ten, howzit, shake a shaka No worry, no fear, ain't no biggie braddah Cuttin' in, cuttin' up, cuttin' back, cuttin' out Frontside, backside, goofy footed, wipe out
Looking for the wipeout Let's get jumpin', surf's up and pumpin' Coastin' with the motion of the ocean Whirlpools swirling, cascading, twirling Hawaiian roller coaster ride! ----------------------------------------------------------
"I can't believe no one came here, the area has been so beautiful." Shade whispered to Florence, astonished. They were holding each other in each other's arms before they started kissing again. Florence laughed, as they finally stood up and got out of the water.
"I can't believe you could be so romantic, and such a great kisser." She whispered back, laughing and kissing his cheek one last time before they held hands and started to walk on the side of the beach.
---------------------------------------------------------- There’s no place I’d rather be Then on my surfboard out at sea Lingering in the ocean blue And if I had one wish come true I’d surf till the sun sets Beyond the horizon
A wiki wiki mai lohi lohi Lawe mai i ko papa he'e nalu Flyin by on the Hawaiian roller coaster ride
A wiki wiki mai lohi lohi La we mai iko papa he na lu Pi'i na nalu la lahalaha O ka moana hanupanupa Lalala i kala hanahana Me ke kai hoene i ka pu'e one Helehele mai kakou e Hawaiian roller coaster ride..... ----------------------------------------------------------
"This day has been amazing. I don't want it to end." Florence said, blushing and holding onto Shade's hands.
"It won't have to. We live together, remember? It's like we're married." Shade said as a similie, laughing a little and blushing. Florence laughed with him (again. It's laughing day! XD) and blushing brighter.
"Hey, guys!" Jake called out to Shade and Florence, running over and holding up a piece of paper.
"Hi Jake! What's that there?" Florence asked Jake as Shade took the paper and they read it together.
"It's a magic dance, tonight at 6pm!" Jake exclaimed, very happy.
"Awesome! You asked Rose?" Shade asked. Jake grinned and nodded, taking the paper back.
"Come on, even if it's noon, we should get ready." Florence suggestedto both of them. They nodded back and ran off the beach.
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Say bye bye to ch. 3! X3 It will probably be the most romantic chapter of the story, so enjoy it, embrace it, and dance! Oh, and review. Comments make me make more chapters. If you want meto work on GoP more also, ask also. XD
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Sept 20, 2006 23:42:23 GMT -5
KISSY. KISSY. GOO. GOO! Romance! Fluff! Shade! Florence! Hug! Tackle! Kiss! Beach! OMG. I want to have a date on the beach like that. They lucky mannnn. XD That was really a romantic chapter that I am SO speechless. Shade and Florence fluff is like... teh pwners stuff. ^^ UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I beggeth of joo!
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Post by charles finley. on Sept 21, 2006 0:19:59 GMT -5
LOVELY DOVEY THINGERS IN STORY!
I cant believe I missed this awsome lovey dovey story! *Bows down* I am not worthy, I an not worthy! XD
Updates soons!
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Post by Chaos on Sept 21, 2006 19:58:04 GMT -5
Yay, a NEW reader! X3 Time for this, a new chappy! Also, songies, yippee!!!!! That's all.
Chapter 4: A Magical Dance
------------------------------------------------------------ I still hear your voice, When you sleep next to me. I still feel your touch, in my dreams (my dreams) Forgive me my weakness, But I dont know why, Without you it's hard to survive! ------------------------------------------------------------
"So, we're here now, huh?" Florence asked, wearing a dress. It was a glitterly, pink dress with white gloves. Shade was next to her, wearing a blue tux with a silver necklace and a water drop on it, his bandana now blue.
"Yup." Jake said, laughing a little. He and Rose were in their same outfit as from the dance at school with the Nix, only a little changed. Spud and Trixie were at home and just, doing nothing.
"Then what are we waiting for? Let's go in!" Shade said, holding Florence's hand and running in, Jake and Rose behind them. Once they entered, upbeat and fun music was playing. They walked into the dancing circle and started to dance.
------------------------------------------------------------ (chorus) 'Cause every time we touch, I get this feeling And every time we kiss, I swear I can fly Can't you feel my heart beat fast, I want this to last, Need you by my side 'Cause every time we touch, I feel estatic, And every time we kiss, I reach for the sky, Can't you hear my heart beat slow I can't let you go, Want you in my life. ------------------------------------------------------------
"We'll challange you to a dance off!" A yell came from a group of pixies with their dates. Jake, Rose, Shade, and Florence grinned, nodding.
"Bring it on!" Jake called back, comptetitively. About 12 pixies flew into the dancing circle with them as they started to dance. Everytime We Touch was playing as they danced quickly and with vigor.
"This may get tough..." A girl pixie muttered to her date, still dancing around. He nodded back as they started to glitter more and make themselves seem better, making the others clap. They all groaned as Jake and Shade got an idea.
"Fire and ice?" They both asked each other simultaniously, shooting fire and ice from their hdns, spiraling around them and Rose and Florence, whoever the other was dancing with. The crowd cheered laouder as the pixies groaned.
------------------------------------------------------------ Your arms are my castle, Your heart is my sky. They wipe away tears that I cry (I cry) The good and the bad times, We've been through them all. You make me rise when I fall... ------------------------------------------------------------
"We can still out dance them instead of out sparkle them." A pixie muttered as they all danced simultaniously in an odd fashion.
"Tiem for a woman's touch." Rose whispered to Florence, who nodded. They left Shade and Jake and started dancing beautifully on their own, making the men pixies fall over, smitten with her dancing.
"Hey!" The women yelled as Rose and Florence laughed, dancing back with their dates. The other dancers were clapping and cheering some more.
"Nice job, nice job." Jake complimented to Rose and Florence, grinning in their direction, mostly in Rose's direction, however.
------------------------------------------------------------ (chorus) 'Cause every time we touch, I get this feeling And every time we kiss, I swear I can fly Can't you feel my heart beat fast, I want this to last, Need you by my side 'Cause every time we touch, I feel the static, And every time we kiss, I reach for the sky, Can't you hear my heart beat slow I can't let you go, Want you in my life. ------------------------------------------------------------
"Come on, time for the final dance off move!" Florence challenged to the pixies, who just nodded. They flew up and started spinning their partners, who glittered.
'Oh please." Jake muttered, laughing and dancing with Rose, Shade doing the same with Florence. They span each other and then quickly ran back and forth, like a tango. Then they did both at the same time, making a lights show with ice and fire again.
"They show off!" The pixies yelled, starting to charge at them. The light show hit them, actually, because they weren't thinking properly. Some burnt their wings and others froze over.
"Hah, those fools!" Laughed Jake in a yell, as they stopped dancing and took a pose, many people throwing roses at them in cheering and calling out happily.
------------------------------------------------------------ 'Cause every time we touch, I get this feeling And every time we kiss, I swear I can fly, Can't you feel my heart beat fast, I want this to last, Need you by my side. ------------------------------------------------------------
"Wow, that was very fun!" Rose said, putting a rose in her hair neatly and kissing Jake on the lips. He kissed her back in love.
"Aw...." Florecne lovely said, watching Rose and Jake. Shade then put his arms around Florence and kissing her, also being kissed back. They were standing out in the moonlight and nighttime sky.
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Finnnn on chappy 4. Yeah, it was short, but I had writer's block. XD Enjoy and review!
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Sept 21, 2006 20:40:52 GMT -5
SWEET! MORE LOVEY DOVEY ROMANCE FLUFF! YAAAAAAAAAY! ^^ Yeah, that's my awesome review. Update soon like, sho totally pwners, boyfriend. *snap snap* XDDDDD
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Post by Heart Dragon on Sept 21, 2006 21:13:40 GMT -5
I think its perfect... keep it up and update please, I don't know how long I have to wait but ened my suffering please!
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Post by Chaos on Sept 21, 2006 23:34:05 GMT -5
Let our suffereing end, HERE'S CHAPPY 5!!! It's a song we're playing in band, and flutes and clari's and trumpets get good parts, so I'm very satisfied. I'm doing very good on it for getting to today, and the song matches today. ^^ ENJOYYYY!!
Chapter 5: The Last Enjoyment of September
A while past after the dance in the magical land, making it late September. Everyone was at the park, enjoying the leaves starting to change color and the calmness of fall.
"Although Autumn is my least favorite season, it is still crisp, calm, and quiet." Shade calmly explained, smiling.
-------------------------------------------------- Do you remember the 21st night of September? Love was changing the minds of pretenders While chasing the clouds away
Our hearts were ringing In the key that our souls were singing. As we danced in the night, Remember how the stars stole the night away --------------------------------------------------
"Oh the joys of Fall and September." Jake peacefully expressed out of happiness. Rose sighed merrily.
"Jake, I love how lovely you express these things. Your vocabulary is growing." Rose complimented, laughing slightly. Spud and Trixie were calmly asleep, hugging each other and laying on a pile of leaves that had just fallen and been raked under a tree.
"Heh, they look so cute." Shade said, laughing a little at Spud and Trixie and creating some ice in the air slowly. Florence peacefully watched the many clouds going over the sun, making lots of shade.
-------------------------------------------------- Ba de ya - say do you remember Ba de ya - dancing in September Ba de ya - never was a cloudy day
My thoughts are with you Holding hands with your heart to see you Only blue talk and love, Remember how we knew love was here to stay --------------------------------------------------
"Ah..." Shade let out from his mouth, leaning against a tree. He and Florence were at one tree, Trixie and Spud at another, and Jake with Rose on another. They were all somewhat close to each other though.
"Oh Shade. Summer with you has made me so happy." A happy thought came from Florence to Shade's ear. Shade quietly and peacefully laughed, as to not wake Spud and Trix.
"Flor, being with you has been the best experience I could imagine." Shade replied to her saying, Florence leaning on his shoulder. Shade hugged her as they peacefully fell asleep, leaves, flowers, and flower buds flying around them calmly, giving a great showing.
"Why can't all days be like this?" Rose asked, watching Shade and Florence sleeping in a love fashion. Jake just crawled over to Rose, kissing her as she blushed and their dream charms shinned brightly.
"Goodnight, sweet princess..." Jake said to Rose, falling asleep on her lap. Rose rested her head on the tree trunk, falling asleep with him, having them all asleep.
-------------------------------------------------- Now December found the love that we shared in September. Only blue talk and love, Remember the true love we share today --------------------------------------------------
In Spud and Trixie's dreams, they were in Spudopolis again, at the docks.
"Hey, why are we here?" Trixie asked, kicking her feet in the water.
"I have no idea, but I'm actually remembering this dream!" Spud said, laughing a little. Trixie just shrugged and laughed with him.
"You are just so innocent." She shook her said and explained as Spud, kissing his cheek. Trixie smiled and hugged her back tightly.
-------------------------------------------------- Ba de ya - say do you remember Ba de ya - dancing in September Ba de ya - never was a cloudy day --------------------------------------------------
"Where are we?" Rose asked, looking around. They were on an island that was much like Japan, only without the numerous people and buildings.
"Hm, well I was tired of things like islands, or peaceful places at the moment, so here we are!" Exclaimed Jake, shrugging and oddly laughing. Rose just shrugged.
"Whatever floats your boat." Rose muttered, grinning and half closing her eyes. Jake put his arm around Rose's as they walked into the city.
-------------------------------------------------- Ba de ya - say do you remember Ba de ya - dancing in September Ba de ya - golden dreams were shiny days.... --------------------------------------------------
Shade and Florence's dream chouce was more complex than others. It was a large ice palace in the North Pole, Shade and Florence wearing warm clothing.
"Wow, this place is gorgeous!" Florence astonishly stated, watching Shade powerfully control the palace to get bigger and bigger at the second.
"Man, I wish I was this powerful in real life." Extorted Shade, laughing a little and raiseing water from the ocean to go super high in the air. Florence just laughed at him as they entered the large, icey palace.
"Even more of a beautiful place on the inside!" An amazed Florence expressed her thouhts, holding Shade's hands and blushing. "It's cold in here."
"Yes. But with you, I feel like I'm living in the sun." (I know, WORST TING EVER!! XD I shouldn't have had Shade say that.) Shade said, passionitaly kissing Florence in the cold, frozen palace of frozen water.
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There ya go, the final first chapter lovey dovey bits. ^^ In chapter 6, it gets sad, so be warned. XD But this, this is great, so review it. ^^
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Sept 21, 2006 23:53:19 GMT -5
Oooooh passionate kissing... Hahahha. It's close to 'making out' doncha think? :fup: XD
Nice! The dreams sound really cool mannnn. Now I want a dream charm. Hmph. *pouts*
UPDATE SOON!!!!!! ^^
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