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Post by charles finley. on Dec 10, 2006 3:54:39 GMT -5
OMGZ! XD
I lurved it! Update soons!
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Dec 10, 2006 4:56:27 GMT -5
Whee. That was a nice chapter! Sorry if I didn't reply earlier, badddd moooood. x.x
But anyway!! Update soon.
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Post by crazy17 on Dec 10, 2006 10:48:03 GMT -5
"Toph slapped her forehead."
HAHAHAHA! OMG, that's so funny! GASP! Ben and Leah are brizzain washwed! O________o Update soooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!
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Post by Chaos on Dec 11, 2006 20:45:37 GMT -5
Alright, this chappy will kinda change emotion as I change songs on my iPod. XD Alright, here you are, chapter 8!
Chapter 8: Invaders Take Off To Palace
"YOU NINNYS! Snap out of being brainwashed!" Toph yelled at Leah and Ben, taking turns shaking one of them.
"Stop it! We just need to.... Jog their memory..." pondered Florence as she set her finger to her chin. Jake imediately stood forward with his idea.
"Who do you love?" he asked Leah.
"The Dragon King!"
"And you, Ben?"
"The Dragon King!"
"Now you love each other again." explained Jake with a grin on his face as he pushed their faces together so that they kissed. Realizing their love, Leah and Ben snapped out of it.
"Oh, my head..... Oh, hiya Jake, Toph." Leah greeted with a smile. "Who's your friend?" She asked.
"I'm Florence, and we can explain why you're here later." Flo told them with a pirky grin and they all sped outside.
"To the center ring!" called out Jake and Toph together as they laughed and started running as fast as they could.
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After breaking through the final wall with ease and quickly fixing it, Toph was on Jake's back, Florence on Ben's as they were dragon. Leah used her telekenisis to fly with them.
"This place is really big, where should we start?" asked Ben as he looked around in the many buildings.
"Well, since we want to know what is going on inthe city, the palace would be the best. That is where the Dragon King will be and government officials." Florence explained as she pointed to the giant, white palace in the pure center.
"You have been kicking the books. But we have companyyyyy." Jake said with a smile as he saw many guards that looked at them once they were in the parimeter of the palace gates. The guards weren't the same as in the city, but wore pure white armor suits and shot beams of white for attacks, aiming at Jake, but missing.
"What was that!?" called out Toph in confusion, not able to see of course.
"These stupid people have white lasers they're using to attack us!" Leah groaned as she used telekenisis to move the laser attack in the other way and smash the ground right before they landed. They all started charging closer toward the palace until they were cut off by guards surrounding them and attacking with more white beams. Toph and Leah sped in front of the gorup.
"Keep them away from the palace!" A guard quickly yelled out while still attacking. A beam coming to Leah was telekenetically moved upward. The second shot to her was smashed into a pilliar and fell on a group of the guards attacking. More lasers attacked to Toph were blocked by her raising the square ground multiple times to block the attacks, also attacking with earth attacks. Behind them both, Florence used her Huntstaff to make a green electric whip to smack over some guards.
"Sorry!" Florence said, smiling oddly and shrugging. She turned and watched Ben whip another group of attackers with his tail and once they got hit, he closed his right eye and gave a face, thinking that must've hurt. More large grouping guards came speeding after the others were beated. Simply, Toph jabbed her hands forward and trhe square, earthy flooring flew back and the guards got stuck.
"Sorry! We just need to get through to see the Dragon King!" explained Leah with a smile as they all ran past toward the stairs of the main palace. Some guards created a white laser-made statue to come crash down on them. Jake oddly looked up before Toph and Leah quickly controlled the earth to fly up as a barrier. As soon as the rubble cleared, Leah sped out in front to the moat and flew over the moat, using her telekenetic powers to raise a stream of water and smack the guards around the moat into the water below as she span her hand around and smacked more guards into the moat. Running over as they crossed the bridge, Toph used earth to cover up the guards in the water.
"We're almost inside." Jake told them all as they saw more white lasers coming their was from soldiers walking down the long, earthy stairs. Toph walked in front and rose her arms and before a white laser attacked, she jumped up and the stairs all collapsed into the earthy wall so they all slidded down the strailess place. They all found a way to fly up very close to where the stairs used to be, Toph on a rock, Leah telenetically flying, Jake and Ben in dragon form, and Florence on Toph's rock.
"Oh forget it!" Toph groaned as she smashed through the palace walls and got to the front of the Dragon King's door. She quickly opened it with her earth and it flew through the room. They only saw the Dragon King, sitting in his throne in the room.
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Immediately entering the palace, Florence laid her eyes on the Dragon King nad her pupil size increased as she slowly walked over.
"Shade.... This long, I can't believe it, you're here!" She called out with sheer joy and slowly walked over. The Dragon King just oddly looked at her as she walked over close.
"Wh-What are you talking about?" He asked, obviously showing it wasn't Shade. Flo jumped to the king and hugged him tightly, causing Jake and the others to droop their head in sorrow.
"Lying in my bed I hear the clock tick and think of you." Florence began to sing. "Caught up in circles, confustion is nothing new. Flashback... Warm nights... Almost left behind. Suitcase of memories, time after..." Suddenly she stopped, realizing this dark blue dragon in many, fancy green robes and gowns was not his lover. In secrecy and invisibility, a vouce began to keep singing.
"Sometimes you picture me, I'm waaalking too far ahead. You're calling to me, I can't hear what you've said... Then you say... Go slow... I fall behind. The second hand unwinds." His voice faded away as Florence apologized to the Dragon King and started to cry. The gang looked in even more sadness to Flo as they looked up, seeing her move closer back to them.
"I am sorry for your friend, but I don't see why you come in here and invade my palace, beating my guards, destroying walls, and breaking my fancy door." The Dragon King explained in slight anger.
"Your Dragonliness, we need to explain something to you, could you give us another chance tomorrow, or something?" Jake asked with want. The king just oddly looked down on all of them.
"Alright then. You get tomorrow to explain what has been going on and what you want to explain. You can stay in the spare quarters to your left. Good evening." He told them, with a slight smile and wave. They all shurgged in a greement and nodded, bowing before going to their room. In secrecy, Long Feng was spying on what was going on and moved back to his room.
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Yerah, pretty long eh? And many TEK references from Avatar as well? Riiight. Except, a bit different. ^^ Hope you reply, took a while for me to do this. XD
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Post by crazy17 on Dec 11, 2006 20:57:48 GMT -5
LOL! Well, that was quick thinking by Jake, breaking Leah and Ben out of the spell! ^_^ But why a day? Why not tell the DK now?
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Dec 11, 2006 21:17:15 GMT -5
Awwww... *cries* Florence sang Time After Time to the wrong.... person... *crysobsniff* XDD Yeah, I would be embarrased after singing a song meant for someone I love and I find out that he isn't who I was expecting to see. Update soon! *sniff* SHAAAADEEE. *cries* XD
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Post by charles finley. on Dec 11, 2006 21:49:47 GMT -5
o.OOOOOO
OMG! XDD
Haha, lurved it! Update soons!
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Post by Chaos on Dec 14, 2006 21:44:36 GMT -5
They didn't talk to him because it was late and the Dragon King doesn't automatically talk to strangers, MKAY!!?? *angry twitch* Geewwddd. Back to the show! :3
Chapter 9: Dreams of a Blue Sky
Deepy sighing on her green-sheeted bed, Florence had just gotten laying on her bed before thinking baout her emarassment and Shade.
"Hey, tomorrow will be a better day, just look up to it. You might have another nice dream." Jake explained to Flo, trying to cheer her up. It brought a smile on her face.
"Thanks, I'll try to remember that."
"Good night everyone." groaned a tired Toph. Leah and Ben were already fast asleep, but that's what brainwashing does to ya.
"I hope tomorrow is better..." Florence continued to murmur to herself. A few more blinks came from Flo before she fully closed her eyes and fell asleep with the rest of her friends.
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A grumble came from Florence as she started to hear a different atmosphere. She got up on bed and rubbed her eyes, and once she got up, the bed disappeared. Flo was now in a pretty place, with plains, flowers, a river, a bridge, and a beautiful sky.
"Wha-What is this?" She asked no-one-particular.
"AAAAHHH!!!" yelled out another male voice before falling on top of Florence. They both got up and apoligized before recognizing each other.
"Shade!"
"Florence!" They immediately cheered out and hugged each other. Sudden light music started to play as Shade took Flo's hand and they sped into the field of flowers. Shade began to sing along.
"Sun is shinin' in the sky, There ain't a cloud in sight. It's stopped rainin', Everybody's in a play and don't you know, it's a beautiful new day, hey!" he sang merrily while spinning around on the field of flowers with Florence. They both laughed before falling over and the flowers poofed up into the air. Quickly, they sprung ot their feet and saw a stone path, speeding down it.
"Runnin' down the avenue, see how the sun shines brightly, in the city on the streets where once was pity, Mr. Blue Sky is living here today, heeey!" Florence and Shade sang together as they got closer to the river and the bridge that crossed it.
"Mr. Blue Sky, please tell us why, you had to hide away for so long, so long! Where did we go wrong? Mr. Blue Sky, please tell us why, you had to hide away for so long, so long! Where did we go wrong?" they continued to merrily sing as they fell on their backs and span down the hill into the river water below, making a big splash. Shade started to control the water to fly in Florence's direction. She grinned and spiraled through the wave and smashed into Shade as they fell deeper into the water.
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After the big river splash fight, the sun had slowly sunk and the sunset was bright and orange. Shade and Florence were on the stone bridge as Shade started singing again.
"Hey you with the pretty face, welcome to the human race!" Shade sang to Flo and she giggled to his singing and started sining along again.
"A celebration, Mr. Blue Sky's up there waitin', and today is the day we've waited for, bahaha!" sang in unison the two lovers. They both hugged each other and took hands as they sped to the path they hadn't been on before and slowly walked on it as the singing went on.
"Mr. Blue Sky, please tell us why, you had to hide away for so long, so long! Where did we go wrong? Hey there Mr. Blue. We're so pleased to be with you. Look around see what you do, everybody smiles at you. Hey there Mr. Blue. We're so pleased to be with you. Look around see what you do, everybody smiles at you." Florence and Shade took each other's hands and span around, laughing merrily. Darkness slowly started to fall as each other started to fade from each other as a last song lyric was sung.
"Mr. Blue you did it right, but soon comes Mr. Night, creepin' over, now his hand is on your shoulder, never mind. I'll remember you this... I'll remember you this way!" The fading continued until they were completely separated from their dreaming.
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Ah yes. Another song chapter with Shade/Florence dream fluff. XD Erm.... Yeah, just read and review. )_(
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Post by crazy17 on Dec 14, 2006 22:29:40 GMT -5
...Um...that was kind of random. BUT STILL GOOD! ^_^ Keep it up!
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Dec 14, 2006 22:42:21 GMT -5
Awwww. *cries* XDDD *singing* SAY YOU LOVE MEE. YOU KNOW THAT IT COULD BE NICE. If only you would say you love me! PLEASE SAY YOU LOVE ME. And if you'd only say you love me, things would really work out fiiineeee... :fup: Oh wait... wrong song. XD
Uhhh... That was SOOOO sweet. Shade and Flooo... awwww. UPDATE SOON.
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Post by charles finley. on Dec 15, 2006 0:02:26 GMT -5
o.O Dream thinger! XDD
Update soons! :]
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Post by Chaos on Dec 20, 2006 3:54:31 GMT -5
Long needed update, right? Well, like Raffi, I got bored/lazy, AAANNDDDD, I've been busy going outside and stuff. But now I'mma start agaaaiinnn.
Chapter 10: Long Feng's Discovery With the Lai Di
At the morning of the Dragon King to discover the conspiracy that is going on in his city, the gang of five met together in the Dragon King's throne room.
"Good, you're all up. You may be wondering why I didn't want you to explain this 'conspiracy' yesterday. Well, I was buried in paperwork." The Dragon King explained, laughing a little and scratching the back of his head. This young man seemed to be outgoing and fun, kinda like Shade.
"Um... Ok. We're going to start with your agents around the city. Could you send one of them out here?" Leah politely asked, smiling.
"Of course. They're an elite group, called the Lai Di. This is their leader, Long Feng. Long Feng!? Could you come out here!?" The Dragon King called out. Long Feng did come out, calmly. Two other Lai Di agents followed him.
"How may I help you, your highness?" asked Long Feng as he smiled graciously. His Lai Di agents glared angrily at the gang who glared back.
"These people believe of a starge conspiracy in this city, dealing with your Lai Di agents. Is this true?" The king asked. Obviously, Long Feng lied.
"Never! Why could I take this city's control over you?" answered him.
"He's my main assistant, I have to take his word. Unless you have proof..." began to say the Dragon King.
"He and his Lai Di agents brainwashed Leah and I!" Ben angrily called out.
"All lies."
"The damage that Toph made while we were being chased by the Lai Di! That can't be covered! Dragon King, come with us!" Flo immediately said loudly, grabbing his arm and they all ran out of the room, the Dragon King fussing a bit on the way.
"Curse them, We may lose our control of the city..." thought Long Feng as the Drgaon King's bear, Bosco, walked in and grumbled a little, looking at him with confusion.
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"Uh... This city is interesting when you finally see it. And how this many people are looking at me funky..." explained the worried Dragon King.
"Hey, it'll be worth is once you realize what's going on here in the city." Leah told the king as they were flying on their own wings/powers, or on a back. They finally arrived at the third wall that Toph had angrily smashed down and was being rebuilt by some comoon people, other Lai Di agents.
"This is a possibility of evidence... But it could've been from a storm that I didn't hear of. I don't know if I can trust this for the whole conspiracy..." murmured the Dragon King once they landed. The others sadly sighed as the Dragon King seemed to have a sudden change in mood.
"You ok, kingy?" Jake asked, oddly eyeing the Dragon King.
"We must hurry back to the palace, I got a spiritual message... And it was believeable." the king explained, taking off once more. They all, but Toph, curiously looked at each other with confusion and took after his lead. They were going back to the palace it seemed, because the Dragon King was headed for the city's center from where they arrived.
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After another ten or so minutes, the gang with the King had arrived back in the throne room of the palace.
"Your Highness, you're here so early?" Long Feng asked the Dragon King, a few more Lai Di soldiers behind him.
"Yes I am, and I have made my decision of what happened for real. Lai Di, arrest Long Feng and put him up for trial on treason to the Spirit Realm City." announced the King. Mouths agape, the gang all looked in the shocked Lai Di leader's direction. The group of soldiers lal looked at each other curiously before using their earthen hands to get around Long Feng and have him captured.
"You cannot arrest me! You all need me more than you know!!" yelled out Long Feng angrily, shaking around in the Lai Di's clutches. Jake just laughed.
"Yo, looks like Long Feng is Long-Gone!" Jake said, the only one laughing at his joke. Everyone else looked at him oddly, as he just coughed to cover up what seemed a lame joke.
"Sorry for the intrution, Your Highness, but there are three warriors at the gate, they claim to know the American Dragon..." A soldier, non Lai Di, told the Dragon King.
"Hey, that must be Rose, Spud, and Trixie!" called out Florence delightfully.
"Hey, wait, one of you is the American Dragon?" curiously asked the Dragon King as he sped to looking at Florence.
"No, not her, me!" Jake called out, rolling his eyes.
"Well, I will welcome them warmly, you can stroll the city if you'd like!" The Dragon King offered all of them. They all happily nodded and quickly sped out of the palace, eager to actually relax for a bit.
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Alone at where the three friend's of Jake and the gang were escorted to the palace in the full center ring from the outer wall where they were. Trixie was leading, Rose and Spud walking behind.
"It is with the highest honor, that I welcome Trixie, Rose and Spud, warriors of the American Dragon!" declared the Dragon King with esteem in his voice. The three grily dressed people bowed their heads as Lai Di men next to the Dragon King and guards surrounding them watched them. Something was not right with Trixie, Rose, and Spud though. As they rose their heads, their true faces could become apparent.
"We are loyal to the Dragon King." meerly said 'Trixie', who was really Aruella with her gang, Saphire and Huntsdeath in disguise.
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ZOMG!!!! Many Avatar referencess!!! XD Yeeaahh, sorreh about being lazy, but in one boring night, I FINISHED THIS!! But have the dentists tomorrow. )_( EHhh.....
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Post by charles finley. on Dec 20, 2006 3:58:35 GMT -5
o.o
Update soons!
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Dec 20, 2006 4:13:33 GMT -5
Hah... Bosco... It totally reminds me of the Earth King's pet... Oh wait, it is. ^^
AND OMG. Aruella!!! EVIL. D: Hah. Long Feng is Long GONE. *is the only one cracking up too* Uh... ANYWAY. I liked it. It was a lot like the Avatar episode with the Earth King. Riding without a saddel on a flying bison's back is VERY dangerous. XDD
I mean... update soon! Mewwy (eawly) Chwistmas. x3
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Post by crazy17 on Dec 20, 2006 12:42:02 GMT -5
OMGOSH!!!! It's TEK all over again! XD lol Long Gone...XD I laughed. But GASP! What happened to the REAL Amdrag warriors?! 0____________o
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