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Post by Lucille Bluth on Aug 1, 2006 17:36:47 GMT -5
OMFG THE HUNTSMAN KILLED C.J.!!!
XDD You know I'm just messing with you.
I absolutely loved chapter 3. XD The Rose vs. Marissa scene was amazing with the way you described it. :D Marissa was just asking for it, ugh.
Chapter 4, awww. T_T "Never give up with out a fight" CRIES.
Update soooon. :D
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Post by Iron Hand on Aug 2, 2006 15:26:46 GMT -5
Weeeelll I still don't think she's dead.
If she is: I HATE YOU!!! F*** jkjk XDDD.
Man.. I just LOVE your writing ;D So freakin' awesome. Great chapter... but... so mysterious.. Ugh! *Confused* >_< XD great job, I look forward to the next chapter.
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Post by redemption on Aug 3, 2006 21:13:48 GMT -5
Epilogue
The memories faded, as they always did and always would. The girl sighed.
There were too many questions surrounding C.J.’s disappearance, and none of them had ever been answered. The girl sighed.
Wherever she is, maybe Tory’s watching over her.
It was a comforting thought, but the girl had no time to ponder this, as her beeper went off. She jerked in surprise before sliding a finger down to flick it off, glancing up to see the sun was near the center of the sky.
Time had passed, and she hadn’t even known it.
The girl gently ran her fingers over the picture, then slowly rose. Life called. Silent as a shadow, she slipped away to do her master’s bidding.
Sunlight broke through the leaves, dancing across the dappled shadows that fell across the picture, and the gentle golden beams touched gently on three smiling faces, three sisters that had always been there for each other and had been willing to defend each other, no matter what the cost.
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The young woman perked up slightly from her perch as the girl darted from the cemetery and disappeared into an alley. Her muscles tensed instinctively, longing to follow the girl and run with her.
Then the scar on her back seemed to burn slightly, reminding her of what she tried so hard to forget. With a sigh, she relaxed her muscles. She tilted her head back slightly, rolling her shoulders to soothe tension.
The kid had really grown, the woman mused. In a few years or so, she’d have to beat men away with a stick… if she wasn’t already. The woman chuckled softly at the thought, narrowing her eyes at the sun’s glare.
Funny how she’d never thought the girl would ever have to worry about male attraction, because she’d always assumed she’d be there to help her through it. But life was screwed up sometimes. She shaded her eyes from the sun’s rays, gazing across the city. After a moment, she leaped lightly from her perch and slipped easily into the crowd, until she vanished without a trace.
A new day was beginning.
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If you ever lose your way You don’t have to be afraid Look inside to find a friend Who’ll be with you ‘til the end Many different roads to choose Searching for the strength to make it through But it was always there in you…
The End
DON'T LOOK AT ME LIKE THAT!!
... There's going to be a sequel, okay? So, seriously, stop looking at me. No, really, stop. I MEAN IT! XDDD
Sequel shall be called "Never Alone", so be on the look-out for it...
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Post by crazy17 on Aug 3, 2006 21:21:37 GMT -5
Hehe. Rose rose. :fup:
Ok, I'm gonna take a wild guess and say that the Huntsman made to kill CJ, but she escaped. Right???
Anyway, nice story! I can't wait for the sequel!
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Post by Lucille Bluth on Aug 4, 2006 1:06:08 GMT -5
WHAT! NO WAY! XD You better make the sequel fast then because that last chapter was amazing and I'm going crazy to find out what's going to happen now. :D
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Aug 4, 2006 3:49:33 GMT -5
O_____o How did I miss all of this?! Bad Raffi! >.> The Huntsman killed CJ! I just know it! The muffins told me so! XDD Meanie... *wants to kill him now* Ahhhh... well, sorry if I always forgot to read and review. I'm so mean. Well, I loved it. If I ever see that sequel, I will jump up and down then go crazy and point to the screen saying, "Omgosh! Is that the sequel!?" :fup: XD And jeez... Kel is right... how do you make it one thing, then another thing... then A TOTALLY DIFERENT THING?! o.o It's like... dude... wow...
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Post by Iron Hand on Aug 4, 2006 13:01:13 GMT -5
Weeeeeeellll.. you kinda already told me what'd happen.. XD. Tragic ending, truly is. But very nice epilogue. Love the writing . This is kinda one of those feelings that you believe that.. CJ's still alive Loved this story -Iron
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Post by charles finley. on Aug 4, 2006 15:41:23 GMT -5
OMFG!THE HUNTSMAN KILLED HER!!XDXD
Jk jk...Man..Ok so she is alive! XD..Man I need to get a life...*pokes you* Get taht squel up there soon or else!XD
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Post by superdoglac on Aug 4, 2006 16:37:37 GMT -5
OK. I loved this story! Make a sequel or else... XD
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Mar 31, 2007 8:30:25 GMT -5
LOVE IT! sequal?
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