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Post by redemption on Nov 12, 2006 9:43:21 GMT -5
Okay....
As I'm still working on Never Alone, this story might not be posted for some time until after I complete that! But when I do...
I'm looking for characters. Y'know.... fan characters. Your own characters. The maximum a person can give is 2 characters; I am only accepting about 7-8 people. Jake and the crew will be involved in the story, but I also need other people. ^^;;
If you are interested, I need...
Name: Age: Gender: Appearance: Species: Personality: History:
You may add anything else, but this is the information I need. If you do not want to post your character in this thread, send me a PM with the information.
So.... um....
Yeah, that's it. >>;
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Post by superdoglac on Nov 12, 2006 11:59:15 GMT -5
*juimps up and down* PICK ME PICK ME XD Name: Veronika Age: 13 Gender: Female Appearance: Blond hair, blue eyes, tall, usually wears a sweatshirt with jeans. Dragon form is yellow with an orange belly, blue spines down the back and blue horn thingies on her head Species: Dragon Personality: Optomistic, hyper, nice, wierd...in a good way XD History: Was friends with Rose before she moved to NYC. When Rose found out she was a dragon she tried to kill her but they are long since friends again. Other info: She has recently found out she is part of draco-bestia clan, wich was believed to have dissapeard a hundred years ago when her great-grandfather was killed by the Hunts-clan. Being part of that clan not only does she have dragon powers but she can transforn into a lion and a wolf as well.
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Post by redemption on Nov 12, 2006 19:37:34 GMT -5
I currently have four character submissions for Out of the Darkness. I need at least two or three more before I can get the story started.
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Post by The Pantheon Dragon on Nov 12, 2006 19:54:46 GMT -5
Name:Tanaiya Age:14 Gender:Female Appearance:Silver-scaled dragon with light black grey scales and claws Species:Dragon Personality:Deep,thoughtful,observes before attacking an opponet and yet sometimes even though she analizes a situtation,she has a venegeful spirit that can make her go too far. She can also be fiercely loyal but finds it hard to trust people as taught by her aunt. History:Has unknown origins even to herself and lives with her aunt,preferring not to use alot of modern conviences unless necessary.
LP
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Post by redemption on Nov 13, 2006 21:09:46 GMT -5
Out of the Darkness
Prologue
It was beginning to snow. Light flakes spiraled through the gray sky and landed on the grass below, bathing New York in a mix of white and gray and black, save the gentle glow from windows of apartment buildings.
Rose shivered, smiling a little when Jake’s arm came around her waist, tucking her head beneath his chin. Standing on his other side, Jake’s foster brother Drake smiled before turning to gaze across Central Park.
“AH! Kev, you silly, put me down!”
This squeal came from a girl with brown hair and blue eyes, laughing. The reason for her delight was obvious; a young man with blonde hair and blue eyes had slung her over his shoulder like a sack of flour. She squealed again and pounded fruitlessly against his back. “Kevin, put me down!” “Say it.” He grinned charmingly and tickled her ribs, causing her to jerk and laugh. “Say it, Amanda.” “No!” “Come on, it isn’t that hard…. ‘Kev, you are the hottest, most handsome guy’….”
Amanda blushed at this, but continued pounding at Kevin’s back. “No! Let me go!”
Taking opportunity of the insanity, Raffi snuck out from behind a tree, darting across the snow to where the two were. She smiled, calculating, before racing out and tripping Kevin. He let out a yelp, and he and Amanda both tumbled to the ground. “Raffi!”
Raffi doubled over with laughter, clutching her stomach; this was a big mistake on her part, as Kevin’s hand snaked out, gripped her foot, and pulled her into the snow with him and Amanda. Unfortunately she ended up tumbling into the two, creating a tangled dog pile in the snow, filled with laughter and kicking.
Leah stood off to the side, watching the three with amused eyes. Ben took opportunity of the moment, sneaking quietly through the trees with silence born of dragon training. “Leah,” he whispered. She turned to face him, starting to smile; Ben leaned in and kissed her, eliciting wolf whistles from a still-tangled together Raffi, Kevin, and Amanda.
Rose laughed, jumping away from Jake. “Come on, Jake! Let’s join them! It’s almost Christmas!” She scooped up a bundle of snow, packed it, and threw it at her boyfriend.
Unfortunately, he ducked. Instead, the snowball hit Drake. Right in the face.
“HEY!”
Rose yelped and ran, Drake hot on her heels with a snowball. Jake laughed before taking chase, tackling Drake’s legs, causing the two stepbrothers to tumble to the ground. Rose immediately dove in the middle of it.
“BONZAI!” “HOLY CRAP!”
Rose’s exclamation was cut short as her friend Veronika made her presence known, diving into the tangled heap. The two friends laughed and rolled across the snow, wrestling good-naturedly as Jake and Drake sat up to watch.
Tanaiya, smiled and shook her head. “Crazy,” she murmured, earning a soft chuckle from Lao Shi. She leaned down, scratching Fu behind the ears, but there was a smile on her face and light glowing in her eyes.
It was snowing. It was almost Christmas.
The day was good.
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You owe them nothing, you know.
The silver dragon’s ear flicked slightly as a voice admonished her in her head—the voice of her long dead Dragon Master. She closed her eyes.
You don’t even know them.
She opened her eyes again, shaking her head irritably. “I’m not doing this for them, Dallas,” she snapped. “I’m doing it because the Huntsclan is involved.”
You have to let that go, kid.
Her ears flattened as pain flashed hotly in her belly, causing her black claws to dig into her perch. Like hell she was going to let it go. Like hell. Dallas shouldn’t have died.
Technically, she shouldn’t have been having conversations with him either. But she didn’t want to ponder that.
Moonlight played across her perch, casting a gentle glow on her silver scales, her dark blue belly, her black claws, the red-tipped yellow spikes that ran from her head down her back to her tail, her green eyes narrow and thoughtful as she gazed down upon the playing friends below.
“I have to do this, Dallas.”
No response. She sighed.
I’m not doing this for them, she reminded herself. I’m doing this because it’s the Huntsclan.
Silently, she spread her wings, lifted with a mighty flare, and flew into the sky, curving away into the silvery clouds above.
End prologue
Yep... the beginning.... my first time writing multiple characters. PLEASE let me know if anyone was OOC!
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Post by superdoglac on Nov 13, 2006 21:14:22 GMT -5
Wow, great job ;D I'm already loning this story and it's only the prolgue XD
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Post by crazy17 on Nov 13, 2006 21:22:52 GMT -5
OMG that was awesome! ^_^ Both Ben and Leah were perfect! ;D
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Post by The Pantheon Dragon on Nov 13, 2006 21:41:31 GMT -5
Wow,nice job.Wonder who Dallas was to Tanaiya. Continue soon.
LP
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Post by charles finley. on Nov 14, 2006 1:26:48 GMT -5
Hope Im not too late! XD Anyways, I would have posted it sooners, but I couldnt. Cause I just got homes and all that stuffers. XD
Name: Ashleigh, Everyone calls her Ash though
Age:14
Birthplace/Last Recent Location: Plamer Alaska/ Germany
Gender: Female
Species: Dragon/Human
Description: Long blonde hair with purple bangs and red at the ends. Blue eyes and fair skin. She were a long red jacket (for thos of you that watch FMA, like Eds). Underneth that she has a black tee shirt and blue jeans. She were white tennies and her left arm is made of metal. Automail is what it is called. (Haha, Im such a dork. I forgot her Dragon thing..XD)
Dragon loooks: A light/dark blue color. White underbelly. Her claws are red color. On her wings she has a flame thing. Her metal arm looks like a normal arm, and the mark on right arm doesnt show. Her hair in up in a ponytail
Alter-ego Name: Alaskan Dragon
History: She was born well back in the 1940's. Her father left her when she was lil girl. All she remembers is that her father was an abuseive to her and her mother. Her mother died when she was 10 from a tpye of sickness. After her mother died, she moved in with her Grandfather (Edward Elric) and Grandmother (Cody Elric, fan char of mine).
Over the years, her body has been jumping threw souls. She was part hummoclus for a while (given the name Death), and when her soul moved to a different body, she was the Ash that everyone knows in the year 2006.
Powers/Abilities: Dragon
Personality: Normally, Ash is wild and extreme. She does what she wants and doesnt care what people think about her. Make her mad, and it takes her a LONG time to calm down.
Other information: .....
Nice start also! Update soons!
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Post by redemption on Nov 14, 2006 6:36:29 GMT -5
Wow,nice job.Wonder who Dallas was to Tanaiya. Continue soon. LP Actually, the silver dragon at the end is my own character. ^^; Ash.... technically you are kind of late, but.... I'll see what I can do.
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Post by YFWE on Nov 14, 2006 9:06:58 GMT -5
Wow, that rocked!!!!! ^^ I can't wait for the update!!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Nov 14, 2006 19:17:04 GMT -5
awsome really awsome Ari
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Post by redemption on Nov 15, 2006 15:51:15 GMT -5
Chapter 1
In the Long household, insanity ruled. Even Haley was involved.
Said insanity had previously been a group attempt at homework; Haley had come in to snuggle between Rose and Jake, and the pair didn’t have the heart to object. Kevin and Amanda were laying on their stomachs side-by-side on the floor puzzling out their math homework. Raffi, Veronika, and Tanaiya were sitting together, heads bent close as they discussed their history homework. Leah and Ben were alternating between actual work and glancing at each other, smiling. Drake was on the phone talking to his girlfriend Shinsei, who was on vacation in LA.
Overall, it was peaceful.
The peace was abruptly shattered when Ash came charging into the room, clutching a radio that blasted Nickelback and singing “Savin’ Me” at the top of her lungs. Pillows flew at her to silence her singing; she dodged and continued, which led to Raffi springing to her feet and tackling the other girl.
All hell erupted.
Kevin, Jake, Raffi, Rose, Veronika, Leah, Ben, Kevin, Amanda, and Ash were now in a tangled heap, each one trying to get Ash to stop singing without success. Haley and Tanaiya were huddled on the couch, at least until Haley got bored and dove into the middle of the chaos. Tanaiya elected to stay on the couch. Drake was alternating between trying not to laugh and trying to talk to Shinsei on the phone, who of course was wondering what the hell was going on.
Overall, it was a normal night.
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The silver dragon’s ears swiveled forward at a crash, muffled by the glass she was currently gazing through. A small smile worked its way onto her face as she watched the chaos inside.
It was more then obvious that she didn’t belong. The smile faded.
It wasn’t too late. She could still leave. Not go home—she hadn’t been home since she was thirteen—but away. Somewhere. She could track another Huntsclan, keep an eye on the activity there.
But the hunter that had killed Dallas was a member of the New York Huntsclan…
And there was her vision.
She had received it nearly a week ago. In black, gray, and white it had flashed before her eyes like an old movie. The dragons inside the house fighting against the Huntsclan for their lives—even the little one. One dragon had reverted to human form, clutching his stomach, and his fingers were dark with blood, his eyes glazed with shock and pain as his friend cradled him close and wept, begging him not to die, another trying to heal him.
She sighed, closed her eyes. She hadn’t asked for the vision. But it had come to her; they always did, sooner or later. It was a dragon gift Dallas had begun to teach her when he had been killed. She didn’t know its full potential. She only had the ability to see into the future, to see enough to keep herself—and others—alive.
She hadn’t asked for this.
The silver dragon tilted her head, stretched her wings briefly. Her eyes narrowed as she gazed at the friends through the glass; a heavy sigh escaped her.
Jesus. She wasn’t totally heartless.
She flared her wings, curved them in front of her to keep her face covered; the next instant, coiling her muscles, she leaped. The glass shattered against her body weight and slashed through the air, but her wings managed to protect her face and her scales were strong enough to only be scratched. She pulled her wings away from her face, flaring them mightily so she landed on all fours on the ground, broken glass lying at her feet.
Silently she stood her full height, her wings curving back to their normal position behind her back. She noted with some amusement that the other dragons were gaping, obviously stunned by her unexpected and sudden appearance, but she fought back any more emotion. She had no intentions of getting attached.
“Hello.” Her voice was cool. “I suppose you weren’t expecting me.”
Without another word, she was surrounded by red flames. When the flames cleared, the silver dragon was gone.
In her place was a girl, her long blonde hair pulled back in a ponytail. She wore a silver shirt with a dark blue dragon symbol on it, and black pants. She shoved her hands into her pockets, but kept her eyes level and her head high.
“I’m Ariana. I need to talk to you.”
End chapter 1
That's all you're getting for now. XD
And yes, I managed to figure out a way to get Ash involved...
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Post by dragonfan123 on Nov 15, 2006 16:02:18 GMT -5
cool really awsome Ari
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Post by crazy17 on Nov 15, 2006 16:06:31 GMT -5
0__________________o Wow... ... OMG that was awesome! Holty crap! *faints XD
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