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Post by mehdi5 on Jan 18, 2007 12:23:22 GMT -5
Here's my version of Hong Kong Longs ::Chapter 1: Journey to Hong Kong:: At the airport during a storm. Jake: Aw man i hate storms we have been here for 8 hours. Lao Shi: Have Patience young dragon the storm will probably be over in a few hours. Jake: I know but this is ridicolous. The storm was getting rougher by the minute. Jake looked out of the window. Jake: What's that? Fu: Looks like a dragon. As the dragon was nearing the airport nobody but Jake and Fu noticed it. As Jake walked to the exit of the airport everything was abandoned at the exit. Suddenly the dragon fly's right through the window and attacks Jake. Jake: What do you want from me? Dragon: Your powers. Jake dragons up and throws the dragon against the wall. Dragon: Beware the dark lord will rise again. Jake: Say what. The Dragon dissapears and Jake returns to human form. Dad: Hurry up jake we gotta get in the plane. Jake: Huh what's this weird thing i better take it with me it might be important.
To Be Continued...
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Post by mehdi5 on Feb 3, 2007 16:20:47 GMT -5
::Chapter 2: Weird Dreams:: In the plane there wer'e a lot of passengers as Jake and the others entered the plane nothing happened. During the flight Jake fell asleep and had a weird dream. Rose: Where are you? Jake: Rose, is that you? Rose: Who are you? Jake: It's me Jake. Rose: Sorry i don't recognize you. Suddenly the Dark Dragon appears. Dark Dragon: Prepare to die Jake Long. Suddenly Jake woke up and realized that they didn't even leave yet. Jake: What a weird dream. As they flew to Hong Kong everything Jake looked at reminded him of Rose. He was thinking about all the things that happened wtih them two before he wished she was never taken by the Huntsclan. Finally they arrived. Dad: Jake, meet us at the hotel we have to take care of a few things. Jake: Sure dad. Dad: Ok jake go check in here are the papers. Jake: See ya later. At the hotel Jake: Hello i would like to check in. Woman behind desk: Name please. Jake: Long, Jake Long. Woman behind desk: Here are the keys. The family had made reservations for three rooms. One for jake, one for gramps and one for the rest of the family. Jake: Why am i having these weird dreams? Suddenly Jake had flashbacks about Rose. Jake: And they're only getting worse. Suddenly he got a call. Jake: Hello ur speaking with Jake Long. Mom: Hi Jake just want to let you know we aren't coming back till tomorrow wer'e staying with family for the night. Jake: See you guys later. Jake hang up. Jake went to the hotels cafe but suddenly he saw something he hadn't seen for a long time. He saw Rose. Jake: Say what. Jake suddenly had many thoughts about his past with Rose, well his former past. She was talking to her mom. Rose: Mom why did you take this job you already have one. Rose's Mom: Be quiet Rose, our family could use some extra money. Rose: Sorry mom, i have these weird dreams lately about someone i don't know who. Rose's Mom: Rose, why don't you get the orders of the customers a lot of them are waiting. Jake was looking outside the window wondering where the Dark Dragon was gone since he fought him a few days ago he was worried that he would strike again. Rose: May i tave your order. Jake: I'll have a coffee. he said with a nervous voice. Rose: Everything Alright? Jake: Yeah sure. Rose took off to get the coffee. Jake: Man, Why am i so nervous? Rose brought the coffee and Jake paid the bill. A lot of things happened since Homecoming the battle with the dark dragon and many more things. Suddenly Rose's mom got a call from rose's dad. Rose's Dad: Sorry you have to stay at the hotel for a few days it seems we have insects i will drop Hillary(Rose's twin sister) off at the hotel. Rose's Mom: Bye hunny. She hang up. Later that night.... The computer cafe was free for all hotel guests Jake was on the computer all night trying to get to know what the code on the strange object meant. Suddenly he saw 2 people heading to the basement but it was too dark too see who they wer'e. Jake: Eye of the dragon. Suddenly he saw it was Rose and Hillary walking to the basement. Rose: Why are we here? Hillary: Because i found something. Rose: What did you find. Hillary: This. Jake couldn't believe it when he saw it it was one of the thirteen aztec skulls and it was the exact same skull he threw on the ground. Rose: What is it? Hillary: I don't know but it looks weird. Suddenly it dissapeared as if it wasn't real. Rose: Uh. End of chapter Becaue i have a lot of free time i'm writting the next chapter now.
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Post by mehdi5 on Feb 3, 2007 17:03:54 GMT -5
Here's another chapter ::Chapter 3: The Snowstorm In the morning Jake saw it was snowing and quite a lot too. Suddenly he got a call. Fu: Hey kid it's fu we got a problem wer'e snowed in so we might come back to the hotel tomorrow. Jake: Sure fu no prob. Jake hung up. He walked outside. He accidenlt bumped in to Rose. Jake: Sorry my bad. Rose: Hey know i remember yo ur the boy i met right befoe me and my family left to Hong Kong, By the way what's your name. Jake: Jake Long yours? Rose: Rose Hunter, r u here in Hong Kong alone. Jake: No but the rest are snowed in at the house of family. Rose: Wanna go outside. Jake: Sure. Rose: I will be right back. Jake felt as if he had missed a part of his life and that part had returned for the first time in a long time he felt happyness in his heart. As they walked outside it was still snowing. Rose: So have you been here long? Jake: Not really i arrived yesterday. Rose: For some reason i feel so different with you. Jake thought it was his duty to tell the truth but he thought by himself: Rose deserves a normal life maybe i just can't tell her. Jake: Suddenly Jake had a flashback about Homecoming. Rose: What's wrong? Jake: Nothing. Suddenly he had a weird feeling as if someone was folloing them but he didn't know it was himself. Rose: Is there something your not telling me? Jake: Actually there is, but i think it's better if you don't know Suddenly he felt a pain in his heart. Rose: Jake what's happening. The storm was getting bigger. A dragon appeared, Jake wanted to fight it but something was stopping him to use his dragon powers. Rose: Who are you? Dragon: Your worst enemy. half an hour later. Jake: Man, what happened? He saw Rose Lying on the ground. Jake: Rose, What happenned. Rose: Help me. He returned her to the hotel seeing noone had awakened yet seeming it was 5 in the morning. He put Rose on the bed. She woke up. Jake: I think it's time for you to know the truth. 15 minutes later... Rose: Now i know why i recognized you. Jake opened the window wondering why was he the American Dragon but then he got a flashback. Grandpa: Remember Jake being the American Dragon is a gift sometimes it may see as a curse but always remember with great power comes great responsibility. Jake: I'll be right back. On the rooftop Jake felt weird as if his dragon side wanted to tell him something. Suddenly he dragonned up and roared like a dragon as if his wild side took over. To be continued
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Post by mehdi5 on Feb 4, 2007 13:19:22 GMT -5
::Chapter 4: Nightmares from the past Suddenly Jake woke up and he looked on his watch it was 4:30 in the morning and he looked at the date was this whole day a dream? He looked outside and it looked as if the Snowstorm just started. Suddenly he got a call Fu: Yo kid. Jake: I know ur snowed in and you and the rest are coming back tomorrow. Fu: How did you know that? Jake: Just a wild guess. He hang up. He walked outside the room. Suddenly Rose fell down the stairs and Jake catched her. Rose: Thanks, what's your name? Jake: Sorry no time to talk. He ran outside the door. Rose: What's his problem? Jake had heared from his grandfather about a dragon that lived in Hong Kong that knew more about the skulls and he lived ust a few blocks away from the hotel. Jake knocked on the door. Old man: Come in the doors open. Jake: Hello i hope i'm not wasting your name but i need to know more about the skulls. Old Man: What's your name? Jake: Jake Long, Why? Old Man: Aren't you the kid that destroyed the skulls wy do you want to know more about them if you destroyed them? Jake: Well i have these weird nightmares and flashbacks since i destroyed them. Old Man: So i never thought anyone was gonna be hit by the curse of loss. Jake: What's the curse of loss? Old Man: Well your the only one that has been hit by this sort of form of the curse well it's not exactly a curse, but tell me when did this start. Jake: Well it happenned at Homecoming she made a wish that the Huntsclan must be destroyed but then i wished she was never taken by the huntsclan and she has no memory of me anymore. Old Man: In that case i know why u have flashbacks and nightmares. Jake: Why. Old Man: Well when you made that wish you didn't know what was best for her. Jake: Yes i do be with her parents. Old Man: You think that is best but your other side thinks she should be with you. Jake: Well it could be true. Old Man: Jake it is best for you to not let her know about magical creatures. Jake: Your right thanks for the help. Old Man: Your welcome and if you ever have problems you can always come here for guidance. end of chapter
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Post by vidra on Feb 15, 2007 14:29:05 GMT -5
Interesting.
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Post by mehdi5 on Jun 20, 2007 15:28:58 GMT -5
Sorry it took so long to update here's Chapter 5. ::Chapter 5: Choices:: As Jake walked over the streets at night he saw it was abandoned. Of course that was because all the streets wer'e snowed in. But Jake had the feeling a part of his soul was taken away. But he had no choice he couldn't tell Rose she would be in too much danger. Jake has been followed by darkness all his life he couldn't stand it if something happened to Rose. Jake: It's time to move on. At Jake's hotel room. Jake made his claw appear. Sometimes he thought that dragon powers are a gift but at the same time they're a curse. Suddenly it started to snow again but this was no normal snow it was a huge snowstorm. As he stepped outside of the hotel he heard someone's voice. Hillary: Hi could you help me with getting this stuff into the hotel. Jake: Sure. 15 minutes later. Hillary: That's it, thanks for the help. They shaked each others hand but Jake felt a spark, nothing like he ever felt with Rose but it was much more it was like he had gotten the part of his soul he lost back. Jake: No prob, i guess i will see you around. Hillary: You sure will. Jake walked down the street well snow. and found something. It was some type of skull it looked like an aztec skull but somehow different. In Jake's hotel room... Jake called fu with his phone. Jake: Yo Fu i have a question. Fu: What's the matter kid? Jake: Well i found a skull it looks like an aztec skull but it looks like metal it has some kind of symbol on the back do you know if it's a magical object? Fu: Can u make a picture of it? Jake made a picture of the skull and gave it to fu. Fu: That's a Magical Warp Skull. Jake: What does it do? Fu: It lets you see another reality, in other world it lets you see what also could hav happened in your life. Jake: I gotta go. Fu: Wait, kid! He hang up. Jake: So it lets me see another reality. how does this thing work. Jake put it in his other hand wich was his dragon claw and suddenly the skull started to glow red. A portal opened. Jake: I guess this is it. He walked through the portal. He saw his school and saw a yearbook on the ground, he picked it up. He turned a page and saw: best couple - Jake Long & Hillary Hunter. Jake: Wait in this world Hillary is my girlfriend. He saw himself walking by, but he was a bit taller in this reality. As he walked to the alternate univers - New York he saw Lao Shi's Shop and in this world there was something he couldn't believe, they had customers and a lot of them. Jake: I'm starting to like this world. Then Jake got a call. On the other side of the line he could hear Fu. Jake: What's the matter Fu? Fu: Kid you have to get out of there or else the world where you are now will become reality. Jake: But i thought you said it was another reality? Fu: No it is still our reality but another version and if you stay there too long it will replace the original reality. Jake: Well you know Fu maybe it's for the best. He hung up. To Be continued...
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Post by justicez on Jun 22, 2007 6:27:01 GMT -5
very interesting..jake actually wants to go with hillary?Write more,this is good XD
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Post by mehdi5 on Jun 25, 2007 14:56:25 GMT -5
Here's the next chapter ::Chapter 6: For the best:: Suddenly Jake was back in his own dimension. Jake: Say what, what am i doing back here? He suddenly saw Fu at the door. Fu: It's good that i got here in time to get that skull away from you, you could have died. Jake: What? Fu: If you stayed in that dimension long enough you would stay in that dimension forever but without your dragon powers but dragons that can turn human can not survive with they're powers if they are transported to another dimension, your life power would have been gone quicker than you can say I. Jake: Your right i was stupid. Fu: Don't worry kid it's over well i gotta go somewhere see ya later kid. Fu left. As Jake looked through the window he felt his dragon side taking over it was as if his instinct was saying: Get over it. He felt like he couldn't control it anymore. But he managed to. He walked downstairs. Jake: O, Hi Hillary. Hillary: Hi Jake. Jake: I was wondering would you like to go out with me? Hillary: Sure i'd love to. Jake: I will pick you up at 8. Hillary: See ya tonight. Hillary walked away. Jake went outside and dragoned up and started patrolling the city. Later that night... Jake walked to Hillary's hotel room to pick her up, he knocked the door. She opened the door. Hillary: Hi Jake. Jake: Hi are you ready. Hillary: Not yet, i'll be back in a minute. Meanwhile somewhere in a cave. The dragon that attacked Jake at the airport entered the cave. Dark Dragon: And what's the status of the plan? Greggy: I have found the dragon, master he is here in Hong Kong. Dark Dragon: Well done young one. Somewhere in Hong Kong at a magical street a dragon flew into an alley and dragoned down. Ryan: Now i have to find that skull thing or what it's called. Then he saw Greggy trying to break into a building. Ryan: So the stupid dragon has become a criminal. Greggy: Who are you, leave me alone. Ryan: I'm not going to do anything i'm just saying if you do this more often you will get into mayor trouble. Greggy: Says who? Ryan: I did. Greggy: So the dragon thinks he can beat me? Ryan: I can beat you as a dragon even without my powers, i can crush you like a fly a little small fly. Greggy dragoned up and flew away Ryan: Big mouth, bad dragon. His phone rang. Kelly: And Ryan how's the plan going so far? Ryan: I'm still working on it. Kelly: Don't worry we got all the time in the world. Ryan: You meant that sarcastic didn't you? Kelly: Yes. Ryan: I thought so. Kelly: Sorry i am bragging to you to find that skull but it is so important. Ryan: I know well see ya later. He hung up. Several hours later at the hotel. Hillary: Thanks i had a very nice time Jake. Jake: Yeah me too. They shared a kiss. She closed the door. Next Chapter will probably be out this week because i don't have time next week.
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Post by justicez on Jun 26, 2007 2:28:42 GMT -5
.....a Jake /hillary themed story?I thought it was good nonetheless.Update soon
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Post by ` SAY WHA ?! on Jun 26, 2007 2:35:49 GMT -5
Ooh nice! I luv it! continue the story!
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Post by mehdi5 on Jun 26, 2007 11:20:13 GMT -5
.....a Jake /hillary themed story?I thought it was good nonetheless.Update soon Well actually it isn't it is just a side story the main story will begin in one of the upcoming chapters
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Post by justicez on Jun 26, 2007 17:38:15 GMT -5
o0,thanks for the info
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