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Post by dave on Dec 20, 2005 8:40:00 GMT -5
Yes, I am going to tease you all lol. I am going to give you the prologue before I leave and then, I will update when I get back from vacation. I hope you enjoy the prologue. -------------------------------------------------- Prologue: Changes Dave walked past Jake, who looked like he was doing his homework. When Dave walked out of the room, Jake pulled out his journal. He hadn’t written in it for a while. He saw that the last entry was describing himself. He gave a brief sigh and started writing in the journal. ‘It has been two weeks to this day since we escaped from that lab. A lot has changed since then. Gramps is still serious and is bent on finding out about the connection between the Dark Dragon and Dave. Haley is taking her training more seriously than I ever have and is growing stronger. Dave is training hard as well and is still searching for his lost brother. I hope he finds him soon. It would be nice to meet someone related to Dave, He has moved in with Mom, Dad, Haley, and I. He is working with me in Gramp’s shop. Rose has been sick quite a bit. She has been vomiting every time she ears. We think she is still getting over the poisoning. Gramps has let her live with him since the Huntsmaster was apparently dead. She promised him to work in his shop when she was better. I have still been taking care of Rose. Our love has grown even more and we are closer than ever. We still haven’t told Dad about our family yet though Mom is thinking of telling him on my sixteenth birthday which is in two weeks. School is going ok. I am going again with Dave while Rose is being taught at home by gramps because of her sickness.’ Jake stopped writing and closed the journal. He walked to the front of the shop to be asked, “Have you seen Dave and Rose,” by his grandfather. Jake shook his head and Laoshi said, “We will just do the briefing without them.” They walked to the back of the shop. “All right kid, time to go to Pandarus Tower again. It’s like a repeat of last time. He stole gold and you need to get it. Since Rose and Dave aren’t here, we have to wait. We can not let you go on your own,” Fu told them. They sat down and turned on the television to the Magic Channel. “And live from Pandarus Tower, we have a new girl trying her best to sing,” the woman said, showing the singer. “What is she doing!” Laoshi yelled. “I can see a place, but something like this…” the person was singing. (With Dave…) Dave kicked a guard down and gave a thumbs up to Rose. “What can I do for you?” Rose continued singing. Dave went down to the vault. “This is it?” he asked in amusement. “Because of you, I’m strong enough to know I’m not alone,” Rose continued. Dave broke into the vault and avoided the lasers and got the gold. He then heard a siren and some guards were standing at the exit smiling. “I can hear you!” Rose finished and the crowd cheered. American Dragon: Jake Long The Dragon’s Cradle ------------------------------------------ Yes, a cliff hanger. Makes you want to find out what is next doesn't it? . I will update when I am back from vacation. Enjoy the holidays and I hope you will enjoy the story. Edit: Before I forget, I do not own the song Rose is singing. It is called "Real Emotion" and it is sung by Jade if I remember correctly. I am not sure, but there, just so everyone knows it is not mine ;D.
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Post by KaiDragon on Dec 20, 2005 10:09:59 GMT -5
Looking forward to it. Update soon, so that I don't have a heart attack from the suspense!!
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Post by crazy17 on Dec 20, 2005 16:19:35 GMT -5
Looking good!
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Post by americanhuntsgirl on Dec 24, 2005 19:09:50 GMT -5
please kepp on going i look forward to the rest of the stiry
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Post by The Pantheon Dragon on Dec 25, 2005 10:40:40 GMT -5
Awesomez!Continue soon Trav!
LP
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Post by dave on Dec 31, 2005 0:37:07 GMT -5
I am typing up some chapters now...will update in a few minutes.
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Post by dave on Dec 31, 2005 0:51:54 GMT -5
Chapter 1: Gold Rush Dave smiled as the guards moved in to get the gold. “You want it boys? You got to earn your money,” he said to them.
One rushed at him and Dave tripped him into the vault, setting of the upstairs alarm. Rose went off stage and looked for Dave. He said he would be out before the end of the song. She ran to the entrance and saw that Dave wasn’t there. Her cell phone then rang and she answered it.
“Yo! What are you doing at Pandarus Tower?!” she heard Jake’s say.
“We are working on getting the stolen gold,” Rose told him.
That was a mistake.
“She is after the gold! Guards, get her!” Pandarus said, who was a few feet away from her.
“Darn, I got to go,” she said to Jake and hung up the phone.
She ran to the trap door where Dave went down. She looked down and realized there was no ladder.
Dave ducked under a punch and back kicked another guard into the vault. He closed the vault door, trapping three guards. He tried to run to the hole in the ceiling but the guards were closing in on him. He gave a growl.
‘I don’t want them to know I am a dragon,’ he thought.
Fire then seemed to fall from the ceiling. Dave backed away from it so as not to get hit. A flash of red came down from the ceiling and grabbed Dave. He was flown through the hole in the ceiling and out of the shop. It only stopped when they were in front of the electronics shop. Dave got down and turned to see Laoshi carrying Rose.
“Thanks for saving me Jake,” Dave said as Jake transformed to his human form.
“No problem. Just don’t go alone again like that!” Jake said to him.
They walked into the shop when the other two arrived. They sat down and Dave gave the pot to Laoshi.
“There you go,” Dave said.
“Mission accomplished!” Rose said happily.
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Post by dave on Dec 31, 2005 1:04:47 GMT -5
Chapter 2: Supply Fetching
Dave sat at the edge of the roof of the electronics shop. He stared out at the cars and people passing by and gave a playful sigh.
“I would never last a minute away from the city and into the country,” he said.
He stood up for a moment and said,
“I would rather jump over the edge of this building that do that.” Jake heard Dave’s last sentence as he came through the door and saw him standing on the edge of the roof.
“Don’t do it Dave! Don’t jump!” Jake yelled to Dave.
Dave turned and said, “This isn’t what it looks like.”
He stepped down and Jake gave a sigh of relief.
"If you didn’t say what you did to mean that you would jump, then what did you mean by what you said?” Jake asked.
The question confused Dave for a second, then he realized what Jake was saying and said, “Oh, I meant that I would rather jump than leave the city for the country.”
“Well, be careful about what you say and do at the same time. I thought you were going to jump,” Jake told Dave.
“No, I wasn’t. I was just sitting here thinking for a moment before I ran to get some things from the woman named Veronica for Fu. Know her?” Dave asked.
Jake thought for a moment and then remembered Veronica. “Oh yeah. I know her, just don’t flirt with her,” Jake told Dave.
“Why not?” Dave asked.
“Oh, you’ll find out soon,” Jake said.
Jake gave a small laugh, knowing what Dave would think when he saw that Veronica was half human and half spider.
“Well, I will let you go now. I just came up here to check on you,” Jake said to Dave.
They walked downstairs and Dave went to Fu.
“I am leaving now. I will be back with your stuff soon,” Dave told Fu Dog and left the shop.
He went to the magical part of New York City and went to the place where Fu said Dave could find Veronica. He saw a woman sitting behind a shop stall, looking bored.
‘Is that Veronica? What is wrong with her? She is hot,’ Dave thought and walked up to her.
“Hello. You must be the beautiful Veronica that Fu asked me to come to,” Dave said to her.
“Ah, you must be Dave Halan. Nice to have you here. The supplies are right over here,” Veronica said and walked out from behind the table.
Dave gave a shocked stare at Veronica’s legs.
‘So, that is what Jake meant,’ he thought.
Veronica brought over a box and gave it to Dave.
“Thanks. I’ll make sure it gets to…,” Dave started to say, then a banging noise came from a few feet away.
Dave looked to see an all too familiar man with his group of henchmen.
“The Huntsclan shall be reborn! Now go and hunt to your heart’s desire!” the man said with an evil laugh.
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Post by dave on Dec 31, 2005 1:13:29 GMT -5
Chapter 3: Alerts
Dave glared angrily at the Huntsmaster.
“I suggest you leave,” Dave said to the Huntsmaster.
Huntsmaster glared at Dave and approached him. “Ah, Hal…”
“Don’t call me that. I am not your puppet anymore,” Dave said to him.
“So it seems,” the Huntsmaster said. “But, I suggest you don’t anger me dragon.”
“What did you say?” Dave asked angrily.
Two Huntsclan members grabbed Dave from behind.
“Veronica, stand back,” Dave said and transformed and took out the two members.
Veronica stood back and Dave shot fire at the Huntsmaster. He avoided Dave’s attack and gave a smile thought it couldn’t be seen. “Come, we are leaving. We are to go after Jake Long,” the Huntsmaster said to the members of the Huntsclan.
“What did you just say?” Dave asked him, transforming to his human form.
“While I hate to admit it, I am working with the Dark Dragon at the moment. It will only be temporary and then I will slay him along with the other magical creatures. He gave us the identities of almost all of the dragons in the world,” the Huntsmaster said.
He turned and then left as quickly as he came. Dave turned to Veronica.
“I have to go warn Jake. Don’t worry, you should be safe,” Dave told Veronica.
Dave grabbed the box and paid Veronica for the items and ran for the shop.
“Jake! Where are you? Hello! Is anyone here?!” Dave yelled.
There was no answer and Dave put the box on the counter and ran for the roof. He quickly opened the door to see Jake and Haley training with Laoshi while Rose and Fu Dog watched on.
“What was the yelling for?” Jake asked Dave.
“The Huntsmaster! He is working for the Dark Dragon! He knows who you are!” Dave yelled.
“Say what?!” Jake himself yelled.
“Come on! We have to leave!” Dave said. Laoshi then appeared behind Dave. He slipped away during all the yelling as he heard the phone ring.
“Listen, we got another problem young ones. The Isle of Draco is being attacked. We are needed there,” he told them.
“Well, let’s go. The Huntsmaster could be here any minute,” Dave said.
“Sorry to say this, but I think you will be delayed,” the Huntsmaster said, appearing at the edge of the roof.
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Post by americanhuntsgirl on Dec 31, 2005 1:23:05 GMT -5
Kewl i like it please update soon
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Post by dave on Jan 4, 2006 8:13:46 GMT -5
Chapter 4: Slight Delay
The Huntsmaster wasted no time and attacked. Dave grabbed Rose and brought her inside with Fu right behind them. “It isn’t safe for you out there in your condition,” Dave told her as he sat down next to her on the couch. “I just can’t sit down here doi…,” she stopped and then got up and ran for the bathroom. Dave heard her vomiting and he sighed. “Fu, go check on her,” Dave said.
The fighting on the roof was brutal. Fireballs were being shot by both sides. The dragons didn’t get touched at first and the Huntsclan seemed to be losing. Jake wanted to get the Huntsmaster for finding about who he was. Jake decided to take the Huntsmaster head on. He transformed back to his human form and grabbed two pieces of short, skinny wood that was broken during the fight.
He started to fight the Huntsmaster with a piece of wood in each hand. The Huntsmaster fought back against Jake, trying to get the upper hand. Jake got two hits in. One on the Huntsmaster’s waist and one at the side of his head. The Huntsmaster only stumbled and Jake smirked and used his dragon tail to trip the Huntsmaster and then he made his tail disappear again.
The other two dragons were blasting Huntsclan members almost as fast as they could come. Haley was starting to get tired and Laoshi wasn’t sure how much longer he could hold up. Then a voice came from the door. “Uncle, stop this now,” Rose said, her voice weak. The Huntsmaster looked at her and said, “Siding with the dragons? You were always weak.” He then felt a blow come painfully to his stomach and was on the ground on his back again. “Don’t you ever call her weak!” Jake yelled at him, going next to Rose and dropping the wood.
“Stay with the dragons you wench. I will get you later, you be sure of that,” the Huntsmaster said, disappearing in a green orb with the other Huntsclan members. Jake walked downstairs with Rose leaning on him lovingly with Laoshi and Haley right behind them. They went to the couch where Dave was at only to find him gone. “Where did he go?” Rose asked. “Guys,” Fu said. “I think he went to the Isle of Draco.”
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Post by dave on Jan 4, 2006 8:14:08 GMT -5
Chapter 5: The Isle Of Draco
Jake, Haley, Laoshi, and Rose ran to the subway station. They couldn’t let Dave fight anything or anyone on his own, especially if who or whatever it was attacked the Isle of Draco. They ran down the steps to the subway station to see Shades at the bottom as if they were waiting for them. Jake went down the stairs quietly, transforming his arms into dragon arms. He made quick work of the Shades, using his claws to defeat them. He changed his arms back to normal and they broke out into a run, heading towards the magical elevator.
They stopped in front of the elevator and Laoshi quickly entered the code into the buttons and waited for the elevator. The doors opened and the employee said, “We are sorry. Due to emergency reasons, the elevator is closed.” “We need to get to the Isle! It is a matter of life or death!” Jake said. “Oh, all right. Hurry up,” the employee said and they got on and went to the Isle of Draco.
The doors opened and their eyes saw panic and destruction everywhere. They ran out of the elevator and ran to the council building. They saw Kulde and Andam trying to figure things out on a map of the Isle. “Councilors! What is going on?” Laoshi asked. “The Isle is under attack. We are trying to figure out where the attack started from. Listen Laoshi, the other two councilors are dead. They were killed at the beginning of the attacks,” Andam told him.
“Have you seen Dave?” Jake asked. “Yes, he came here and then he ran off saying he knew who was behind all of this,” Kulde said. “Young ones, go look for Dave! Haley, stay with me!” Laoshi said. They nodded and Jake and Rose ran to the door to leave when they saw that the Isle was now different. It changed for the worst. The Isle of Draco was now on fire.
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Post by dave on Jan 4, 2006 8:14:25 GMT -5
Chapter 6: The Isle of Draco…In Flames
Jake went white as he could at the sight of the Isle. Rose grabbed onto him weakly. “Lets…let’s go find Dave,” Jake said weakly and they left. They were weak with shock at first but by the time they reached the bottom of the steps, they were relaxed slightly and not in as much shock. Jake and Rose went to the arena where the test of Wisdom In Battle was given. They found it empty all except for a person leaning against the wall.
“Nerk! What is going on here?” Jake asked the person. “Haven’t a clue mate. But, I suggest you leave. Things don’t look good here,” Nerk told him. Jake gave a growl. “I am leaving. You better do the same,” Fred said, walking away. Rose grabbed Jake’s arm. “We have to hurry and find Dave,” she told him. He nodded and they set off.
They saw trees burning and people running in all directions. Panic ruled everything and everyone during that time. Rose and Jake continued forward to find Dave and whoever was responsible for the attack on the Isle. They saw a group of Shades. That told them either Chang or the Dark Dragon was the one behind the attack. They ran forward to see a body in the grass.
Jake ran up to it to find out that it was Dave. “Dave! What happened here?” Jake asked him. Dave rose his dirt covered head up slightly off the ground. “Dark Dragon…here…,” Dave choked out. “Why did he do this? Did he attack you?” Jake asked, Rose coming next to him. “Yes…because I found out, Rose…Dragon,” then Dave went unconscious. “Damn, this isn’t good. We need to get out of here. Rose, take Dave to Gramps. I will go on ahead,” Jake said. Rose nodded to him and carried Dave away with difficulty as Jake went on ahead.
Jake saw a figure up ahead and he ran to it to see Chang transform and fly away. “Ugh, she got away. I better go back to the others,” Jake said and left to the council building.
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Post by dave on Jan 4, 2006 8:14:42 GMT -5
Chapter 7: Infiltrating The Lair
Jake ran into the council building to find Dave was lying on the table, still unconscious. “What does it look like?” Jake asked. “He is fine. Just knocked out,” Andam told him. “He told me about the Dark Dragon being part of the attack. Then I saw Chang fly away. Before Dave went unconscious he said something about Rose and then he said dragon at the end then he passed out,” Jake told him before Laoshi put on a stern look on his face. “Rose and Jake. I want you to check out the Dark Dragon’s lair in the volcano. We will stay here and watch Dave,” he said.
Jake and Rose left to the volcano lair. Jake flew there with Rose in his arms. They entered it to find that it was empty. They saw that it looked like it was changed into a more house like environment. They heard a cry coming from a room. They walked over to where they heard the crying. There was a cradle. In it was a baby. “Jake look,” Rose said. The baby was not an ordinary baby you would find in a cradle. In it was a baby dragon.
“It is so cute. But, why is it here?” Rose asked. “I am not sure but…,” Jake stopped when he heard Chang’s voice call out, “Hang on baby. I am coming.” Jake and Rose hid as Chang came in and held the baby. “You are beautiful, just like your father,” she said.
‘What is going on here?’ Jake thought. Chang was holding the baby close, giving the baby love and care. She then said, “Don’t worry. When my grandson’s wench gives birth to her child you will have a playmate.” ‘Oh god. She knows,’ Rose thought. “And,” Chang started, putting the baby down, “If you don’t leave I will kill you now.” Jake froze momentarily. “Rose, move!” a voice yelled and Dave flew in. He was in his human form but with his dragon wings.
Rose grabbed Jake’s hand and started to run. “We can’t leave Dave behind!” Jake yelled but Dave just continued to stare at Chang. “Well, time for the truth to be revealed,” Chang said. “I already figured it out,” Dave said and then he was hit on the back of the head, knocking him out. Jake pulled away to help Dave but Rose grabbed him again. “Come on Jake, we have to leave,” Rose said. “No! DAVE!” Jake yelled.
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Post by dave on Jan 4, 2006 8:15:00 GMT -5
Chapter 8: Telling The Truth
(Three Months After The Attack.)
Jake sat with Rose leaning against him. Her sickness had finally calmed down but she was also moody as well at times. Rose looked into his eyes and thought, “I can’t keep lying to him. I got to tell him the truth.’ “I am going to go cook us some dinner,” Jake said. Rose’s mood swing then kicked in. “Oh, you think I am incapable of cooking huh!” she said. Jake just stared at her. “No, I am just going to cook. You can help if you want,” Jake told her.
They went into the kitchen to start cooking. Jake’s parents and Haley were gone for the night, so they had the house to themselves. “Jake honey,” Rose said to Jake. “Yes?” “Well, I am sorry for snapping at you. I didn’t mean it. Jake, there is something important I got to tell you,” Rose told him. “What is it?” Jake asked. “Jake, I am pregnant with your child,” Rose said. “My…child?” Jake asked weakly. “Yes. I got pregnant on the night that you took me out for the day of dating,” Rose told him. “Rose, is that fine with you?” Jake asked. “Yes, I want to have this child,” Rose said. “Oh Rose! I am so happy!” Jake said and they held each other and kissed. Jake forgot all about cooking and they kissed and held each other all the way to Jake’s room. Jake and Rose got in his bed for the night.
David, Faye, and Haley pulled up to the house and went inside. They walked into the living room to find it empty. They went into the kitchen to find a pot and some food sitting on the counter. Faye looked at the food and went upstairs. She quietly opened the door to Jake’s room to see Rose and Jake in bed together in each other’s arms. Faye frowned for a few moments. David then came to her and put his hand on her shoulder. “He is sixteen, let him make his own choices,” he said. She gave a small smile and nodded. They closed the door to give them peace for the night.
(A/N: David is Jake’s father and Faye is Jake’s mother. I have heard Jake’s dad called David and I do not know if that is his official name or not. I am sorry if that was just someone’s own name they came up for him. I got Faye from my favorite Chinese singer Faye Wong. See how it works lol as Jake’s mom is Chinese?) ------------------------------------------
I hope you all like this so far. There is more to come and I am working on two other fanfictions as well. They are both "side stories" to this fanfic. I am going to post the first one after I get to Chapter 14. I will post the second one after I finish this fanfiction as it takes place right before the very end of this fanfiction. I am planning on doing a "Scary Movie" and American Dragon: Jake Long crossover but I have to see if it will work out right. Well, enough of me going on lol. I will post more chapters tomorrow morning.
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