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Post by crazy17 on Jan 4, 2006 23:56:17 GMT -5
Whoa... Rose is pregbnant? I can see whst's coming...
CONTINUE!!
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Post by dave on Jan 5, 2006 7:52:45 GMT -5
Chapter 9: To My Brother
(Two Months After The Attack)
Dave sat down in his room he shared with the baby. Dave was taking care of it while Chang and the Dark Dragon did their dirty work. He still hated Chang and the Dark Dragon but he knew that was no reason to take it out on the baby. Dave growled and hit the wall. He was still mad that he got caught. He finally figured everything out and he still got caught before he could tell.
Dave heard the door open and he saw the Dark Dragon walk in the room in his human form. Dave took this chance and kicked the Dark Dragon to the ground. He ran out of the room and ran down the hallway to where stairs and a single window were at the end. He ran towards the window knowing this was his only chance for escape. He got ready to dive out the window when Chang grabbed him around the legs with her tail. Dave fell and Chang grabbed him and brought him to his room. “You are really pushing your luck Dave,” the Dark Dragon said, now in his dragon form. Dave sighed in anger.
“You tried to get to your brother didn’t you? Well, I will not let you near him,” the Dark Dragon said, walking towards Dave. Dave hung his head in defeat. “Sorry my brother, but you will not get anywhere near him,” the Dark Dragon said to Dave.
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Post by dave on Jan 5, 2006 7:53:11 GMT -5
Chapter 10: Another Try
(Three Months After The Attack)
Dave put the baby back in the cradle and gave a sigh. It had been a month since he last tried to escape from the mansion. He went to his window, which had bars on the outside, and looked out. The Dark Dragon made sure the bars couldn’t be broken by just a single dragon’s power.
Dave walked out of the room and went to the dining room. He sat down at the table and saw the Dark Dragon come in. “Good morning my dear brother. Have you finally decided to join us yet?” he asked. “I would never join you if you were the last source of protection on Earth,” Dave said to him.
“You need to respect your elders,” the Dark Dragon said. Dave stood up and headed for the door. “You leave and you will be dead before you can even get a few feet away from the mansion,” the Dark Dragon told him. Dave stopped and turned to face the Dark Dragon. “Let me out of the house now,” he said. “First of all, it is a mansion,” the Dark Dragon said. “I don’t give a damn about what it is! Let me out!” Dave yelled. “Yeah right. And let you get to your brother?” the Dark Dragon asked. “They will be after me soon,” Dave said. “Let them try,” the Dark Dragon said with an evil smile.
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Post by dave on Jan 5, 2006 7:57:16 GMT -5
Chapter 11: The Search Team
Jake and Rose got out of bed and went to the bathroom. They took a shower and got dressed. They went downstairs afterwards and grabbed a breakfast of toast and cereal. After eating, they walked hand in hand to the electronics shop.
Laoshi came out to meet them and said, “We got our search team ready,” Laoshi said, handing over five files to Jake. “We got a team together to search for Dave,” Laoshi finished and Jake looked at the files.
Name: Jack Chamberland
Age: 21
Height: 5’ 7”
Dragon Colors: Red, Black, Blue
Weight: 137 lbs.
Name: Carol Benson
Age: 23
Height: 5’ 9”
Dragon Colors: White, Blue
Weight: 117 lbs.
Name: Jim Marson
Age: 49
Height: 6’ 2”
Dragon Colors: Black, Blue
Weight: 187 lbs.
Name: Rebecca Jackson
Age: 18
Height: 5’ 8”
Dragon Colors: Pink, White
Weight: 121 lbs.
Name: Ark Gordand
Age: 16
Height: 5’ 7”
Dragon Colors: Black, Purple
Weight: 137 lbs.
“Can we trust these people?” Jake asked. “I am sure that we can. They are highly qualified dragons and should do their job without question,” Laoshi said. “When do we meet them?” Rose asked. “Tomorrow, but for now, get some work done and then we shall train,” Laoshi said.
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Post by dave on Jan 5, 2006 7:57:37 GMT -5
Chapter 12: Mind Control
Dave laid down in his bed, thinking about how he could possibly escape the Dark Dragon’s clutches and get to his brother to tell him everything. He tried to remain strong so he didn’t give into the Dark Dragon. He knew he had a new strategy of getting people to work for him. He was started to use people’s temptation to get them to join him. He played off of Dave’s as often as he could. Dave’s temptation or better described as his heart’s desire was to be able to live happily with his brother.
The Dark Dragon came into the room. Dave wanted to have nothing to do with him and turned on his side so he didn’t have to look at the Dark Dragon. “You got a busy week ahead of you,” the Dark Dragon said. “What do you mean?” Dave asked him, turning to look at the Dark Dragon. “Well, you see. I am going to control you,” the Dark Dragon said and then quickly poured a potion into Dave’s open mouth.
Dave quickly fell under his control and Dave laughed along with the Dark Dragon. “You will be near your own brother and you won’t even be able to do anything of your own free will,” the Dark Dragon said. Dave stood up as he was controlled by the Dark Dragon. ‘I got to get out of this trance and get to Jake,’ Dave thought in his head with panic.
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Post by dave on Jan 5, 2006 7:57:57 GMT -5
Chapter 13: The Magical Parade
Jake and Ark was put on a mission to see if the Dark Dragon or Dave could be at a magical parade that was being held that day. They waited in the subway for the right time to go to the magical world of New York City and saw that the parade had already started. They stayed hidden in the crowd and waited for any sign of the Dark Dragon or Dave.
They saw him at last on one of the floats. He was sitting next to a man they didn’t recognize. Jake took a closer look and said, “Who is that man?” “I am not sure but we shouldn’t try anything yet,” Ark said. ‘It almost sounds like he doesn’t want me to save Dave,’ Jake thought.
Ark gave an evil smile that was hidden by the shadows of his robe. ‘My plan is working just perfectly. Dave is in his trance and I seem like a sixteen year old,’ the Dark Dragon thought.
Dave looked straight at the Dark Dragon and Jake just as he was forced to do. He stared right into Jake’s eyes. ‘Jake! Help me!’ he thought in his head. Jake knew he couldn’t wait and went after Dave but it was all planned. Chang appeared and transformed. She knocked Jake back and he hit Ark which wasn’t planned. The control over Dave broke and he ran to get off the float and get to Jake.
Chang grabbed Dave but Dave pulled out of her grasp. He ran to Jake and grabbed his arm and pulled him up to run. “Hurry! We got to run!” Dave yelled. They tried to run away but Dave was tripped. “Dave!” Jake yelled and turned to get Dave but Chang already got him and the Dark Dragon was in his dragon form and had control over Dave again.
They flew away leaving Jake behind. “Ark! Ark!” Jake yelled but he couldn’t find him. He gave up after a few minutes of searching and went back to the electronics shop in defeat.
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Post by dave on Jan 5, 2006 7:59:27 GMT -5
Chapter 14: Secrets Revealed
(Three Months After The Parade)
Dave was trapped again in the house or mansion as the Dark Dragon liked to call it. He was still taking care of the baby and he rarely let it out of his sight. He fell in love with the child but he couldn’t help but think of his relation to the child. “This is my uncle and my nephew as well as I am his uncle and nephew,” he said.
The Dark Dragon then came into the room. “Enjoying the baby?” he asked. “Yep and thinking about how you had it with your own grandmother,” Dave said. The Dark Dragon angrily hit Dave, sending him to the floor. “Don’t you dare say that!” he yelled. “But it is the truth,” Dave said. “A truth you dare not speak about!” the Dark Dragon yelled. The baby then started to cry from its cradle. Dave got up and went to it. “I suggest that you stop yelling,” Dave said. “And I suggest you stop trying to escape,” the Dark Dragon said.
Dave put the baby down after it relaxed and turned to the Dark Dragon. “I will get out of here. I will get back to Jake,” Dave said. ‘Sorry to leave you behind,’ he thought to the baby and ran out the door. He didn’t make the mistake of getting caught this time and he went out the mansion doors. He then transformed and flew to the electronics shop. He landed and transformed back to his human form and ran inside to see Jake and Rose side by side on the couch.
Jake saw Dave and stood up. Dave smiled and went to him. “The Dark Dragon’s spell over me is over. I got away,” Dave said happily. Jake helped Rose up from the couch. “Listen, I got some things to tell you,” Dave said. “What is it?” Jake asked seriously. “Don’t be so serious Jake. They are mostly good things,” Dave said. Jake smiled, “All right. What are they?” “One, Rose is a dragon,” Dave said. Rose stared at Dave and Jake held her close. “Are you sure?” Jake asked. “Yes, the Dark Dragon himself told me. I will explain more later. Two, Jake…you and I are brothers…twins,” Dave told him. Jake sat down with Rose. “Us…brothers?” he asked weakly. “Twins. The Dark Dragon separated us at birth and gave your mother a memory modifying potion to think she only gave birth to you Jake. The nurses were all working for the Dark Dragon,” Dave said. “Anything else?” Jake asked. “Yes. The Dark Dragon is also our brother. And our grandmother is Chang,” Dave said. “So, you finally know young ones?” Laoshi asked from the corner.
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Cliffhanger lol. I am not going to update this story tomorrow so I can have time to write some more chapters. Instead, tomorrow like I promised, I am going to put up one of the other fanfictions about Dave's time when he was with the Dark Dragon. Well, I hope you enjoyed it.
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Post by dave on Jan 6, 2006 9:11:43 GMT -5
Ok I kinda lied. I will not have the other fanfiction up today. Why? Well, I wrote the death chapter last night to this story and that took a little while and then I had to go to bed early because I got about three tests today (joy...I am being sarcastic here). I hope that the death chapter will work out good. I tried to make it very emotional and I hope I did a good job. Well, got to go now and on Monday I will have the new fanfiction up and hopefully more chapters to this story.
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Post by crazy17 on Jan 6, 2006 11:23:10 GMT -5
Okay! You know, you're really good at updating!
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Post by dave on Jan 6, 2006 12:17:25 GMT -5
lol, and I try to be good at plot twists but I kinda think that the Rose is a dragon; Jake, Dave, and the Dark Dragon were brothers twist was kind of obvious.
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Post by KaiDragon on Jan 7, 2006 14:01:07 GMT -5
It doesn't matter, we still love reading it. Take your time, rushing it will only cause you to make mistakes.
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Post by dave on Jan 17, 2006 22:24:05 GMT -5
Sorry, no update yet but I do have good news, no, I didn't save money on my car insurance. I have the day off tomorrow because I am exempt from my first and second period exams so I will write more and I will post a few more chapters. To keep you anxious for the next part, here is a sneak peek at what is going to happen.
-------------------------------------------------------------------- Dave held onto the roof of the train and then he dropped down. He tried to open the doors in front of him but the sliding doors were locked. He said, "I am not suprised it is locked. They would want to keep them locked up." Dave then heard a voice, "Dave, is that you?" "Jake, it is me. The door is locked. I can't get through," Dave told Jake. "You are a dragon, use your claws," Jake said to Dave. "I can't. I don't have my dragon form. I think that I have that liquid sphinx hair stuff in me," Dave said. Dave then tried to open the door and it opened after some effort. Dave walked in and saw Haley, Jake, Laoshi, and Rose chained to the walls of the train. They were also all in their dragon forms. Dave walked to Rose as he heard her waking up. "Where am I?" she asked. "You are on a train," Dave said. Rose looked and saw she was in her dragon form. "What is happening?" Rose asked. "Nothing good, that is for sure," Dave said and pulled out the keys he got earlier. He unlocked Rose's chains and handed her the keys. "Get them out of their chains. I am going to go try to stop the train," Dave told her. Rose looked Dave in his eyes. "Be careful Dave. Everyone will be in the compartment before the first one," she said. Dave sighed, "That makes my job harder. But I got to stop the train before we reach the place of the..."
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Yes, a cliffhanger preview. I will post more chapters tomorrow.
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Post by dave on Jan 18, 2006 10:18:34 GMT -5
Chapter 15: Grandfatherly Talk
“You knew all along?” Dave asked. “I have been knowing for months. Chang told me,” Laoshi said. “Chang? What are you doing with her?” Jake asked. “I have been talking to her. Getting information, I still love her you know,” Laoshi said. Dave just shook his head, “She is an enemy and yet you still love her?” Dave asked. “I can’t help what I feel,” Laoshi said. “I can’t believe you G. I thought you of all people would…” Jake started before he was cut off by Laoshi. “Would what Jake?! There is nothing to explain! I love Chang and that is it! No one can change my feelings for her!” he yelled and went to his room. Dave turned to Jake. “Something isn’t right here and I want to find out what,” he said. Dave started to head towards the door before Jake called out, “Don’t Dave. Don’t anger him.” “I won’t,” Dave said, reaching for the door handle before Rose said, “Dave, don’t go in there.” Dave didn’t listen and went on into the room. “Gramps?” Dave called out softly and saw Laoshi sitting on his bed. “What do you need young one?” Laoshi asked quietly. Dave closed the door gently, “I want to talk to you.” “Fine, join me,” Laoshi said and Dave sat down next to Laoshi. “Gramps, I didn’t mean to sound rude if I did. I am just wondering about you. I don’t want you to get hurt,” Dave said to Laoshi. Laoshi sighed and turned to look at Dave. “I love Chang. I can’t help but feel so close to her. I had Faye with her. We raised her and took good care of her. Then when Jake and you were born, she asked not to be mentioned as your grandmother. Of course, we didn’t know you were born. Only your mother knew that she had twins Then she had that potion forced upon her and no one knew you existed except for Chang, the Dark Dragon, and those nurses,” Laoshi told him. “Where are the nurses now?” Dave asked. “They are all dead. They died years ago according to Chang,” Laoshi said. “Why hasn’t anyone been searching for me for the past few months then?” Dave asked. “We have but all five members of your search team are dead,” Laoshi said. “I am sorry to hear that,” Dave said. “Dave, can you, Jake, Rose, everyone, forgive me for who I love?” Laoshi asked. “Yes, we will. And if you love Chang, stay with her,” Dave said. “Thanks. I think I am going to go to bed for the night,” Laoshi said. Dave nodded and went to the door. “Goodnight Gramps,” he said. “Goodnight Dave,” Laoshi said and Dave left the room.
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Post by dave on Jan 18, 2006 10:22:49 GMT -5
Chapter 16: Keeping Secrets
Dave sat down on the couch thinking about going to sleep but he got up. He walked to Rose’s room to talk to Jake. “Hey, I am going home now. I will talk to you later,” he said to Jake. “Ok. Tell Mom that I will stay here tonight,” Jake said. Dave nodded and walked out of the shop and headed home. He opened the door quietly and saw his parents sitting at the kitchen table talking. “Mo…Mrs. Long, I am home,” Dave said to Faye. “Hello Dave. Have you seen Jake?” Faye asked him. “No, he is staying at Gr…your dad’s shop tonight,” he told her. “With Rose,” she said. “Yes with Rose. Your dad also didn’t feel too well so Jake wanted to watch after him,” Dave told her. “I see, thanks for letting me know,” Faye said. “Your welcome. Goodnight Mo…Mrs. Long,” Dave said. He walked upstairs to his room and closed the door and sat down on his bed. ‘I hate that I have to keep secrets from them. They are my parents,’ he thought. He stood up and felt something cold pressed against the back of his neck. “Move and your dead.”
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Post by dave on Jan 18, 2006 10:33:05 GMT -5
Chapter 17: Return Of An Enemy
Dave gave a sarcastic like smile. “So Karalyn. You are still alive after all,” he said. “How did you know?” she asked. “When you work with someone like my brother, keeping who is alive and who isn’t is hard to keep a secret,” Dave said. “So it’s true then. He is your brother,” Karalyn said. “Isn’t that what I just said? Now if you would be so kind as to take your claw off the back of my neck,” Dave said. Karalyn transformed her hand back to normal and shoved Dave forward. Dave turned around only to have a familiar staff pointed at his face. “And Huntsclan too? You don’t have a good taste in careers,” Dave said. “I’m not scared to shoot this you know,” Karalyn said to him.
“I am not afraid to let the parents below know that you are up here,” Dave said. “Jake’s parents are still awake?” Karalyn asked. “Why, didn’t you hear? They are my parents as well,” Dave told her. “Guess it slipped my mind Well, he didn’t tell me that you and Jake were brothers. But, it isn’t part of my job to question the Dark Dragon. I just follow his orders,” Karalyn said. “I’d hate to be you then,” Dave said. Karalyn growled and said angrily, “You do not know that it is like to be me! I have the best training anyone could want!” “And the worst masters in the world,” Dave said to Karalyn.
“You are getting closer to me wanting to kill you,” Karalyn said. “Ah, try me,” Dave said. “You are pushing your luck,” Karalyn said. Footsteps were then heard coming up the stairs and Dave turned to face the door as Karalyn jumped out his window. Faye and David was at the door and Faye looked worried. “What is going on in here?” she asked. “Nothing. Just thought I heard something,” Dave said. Faye and David just looked at each other and left the room leaving Dave alone again for the night.
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