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Post by magenta on Dec 3, 2005 0:53:56 GMT -5
Awwww.....^_^
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Post by dave on Dec 3, 2005 0:58:46 GMT -5
lol...Thank you. I will write more tomorrow...I am sort of tired now and I don't want that to affect the story lol...thanks again..., and if you don't mind me asking, how do you think I did with the Jake/Rose thing?
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Post by magenta on Dec 3, 2005 1:00:55 GMT -5
You did a great job with the Jake/Rose thing! LOL, I know how it feels to wnt to write more, but not want your sleepiness to affect the chapter XD
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Post by dave on Dec 3, 2005 1:03:36 GMT -5
lol, well I am glad I am not the only one who knows how that feels...and I guess you can call this a spoiler, sneak preview, whatever...but I am going for a whole chapter with just Jake/Rose romance going on. I should have that written by tomorrow hopefully. Thank you for telling me I did good with the Jake/Rose romance/thing lol. That really boosted my confidence in writing more chapters like that in the story.
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Post by magenta on Dec 3, 2005 1:06:17 GMT -5
You're most certainly welcome! I'm really enjoying this story! ;D
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Post by dave on Dec 3, 2005 1:07:32 GMT -5
That is great! Thanks again!
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Post by magenta on Dec 3, 2005 1:08:35 GMT -5
Welcome! ^__^
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Post by dave on Dec 3, 2005 18:33:27 GMT -5
Thanks again! I am working on the next chapter at this very moment! I hope to have it up tonight...in fact, I should.
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Post by magenta on Dec 3, 2005 19:11:15 GMT -5
YAY!!
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Post by dave on Dec 3, 2005 23:17:52 GMT -5
Update time! I am planning on getting three chapters done tonight! The third one will be an eight-page handwritten Jake/Rose romance one so, it will take me a while tonight but I promise, I will do it tonight! ---------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 17: The Test Of Courage In Flight Dave rolled over on the couch. Councilor Kulde was kind enough to let him sleep at his house on the Isle Of Draco. Dave heard Kulde’s voice call out, “Wake up Dave. Time to prepare for your last test.” Dave gave a small nod although Kulde didn’t see him. Dave stretched and yawned before he got up.
He walked past the dining room where Kulde was sitting at the small wooden table, drinking a cup of coffee. Dave said, “Morning,” to him and walked to the bathroom. He opened the small closet in the bathroom and pulled out his bag. He closed the closet door and closed the bathroom door and locked it.
Dave turned on the hot water to the shower. He undressed and entered the shower. The hot water ran down his body as he took his time, washing his body and hair. After about ten or so minutes of being in the shower, he turned the water off and grabbed his towel. He dried himself off and grabbed his clothes to put on.
He put on his black boxer shorts and his black pants. He then sat down on the toilet and put on his white socks. He got up and stared into the mirror, shirtless. He continued to stare for a few more seconds before he put on his shirt which was black with a purple stripe going across the middle, all around the shirt.
He walked out of the bathroom and into the dining room with his bag. He sat it down on the floor next to his chair which was across from Kulde. “How are you feeling this morning?” Dave asked Kulde. Kulde gave a small smile. “I am fine. I just have a hearing to go to,” he said. “Well, that doesn’t sound bad. I still have my last test to take,” Dave said.
“It shouldn’t be too bad. If you do fail, you already have those last two passes. That means whatever happens on this test, you still pass,” Kulde said. Dave smiled, “Well, that is good,” he said. “Well, it is about time for the hearing. You can come with me to the council building, then you can go train, have fun, do whatever you wish until it is time for your third test,” Kulde said.
Dave and Kulde stood up and left the house. Dave held his bag loosely by his side as they walked to the building. When they were heading up the steps, Dave saw three familiar people. He turned his eyes to those of a dragon’s and saw to his surprise that two of them were Jake and Laoshi. He took a few seconds to figure out the third one. He ran up the steps to them and smiled. He said, “I didn’t know you were coming here, this is a surprise!” “Go off young ones and don’t let her wander off on her own,” Laoshi told them. Jake and Dave lead the third person down the stairs with them. “Rose, why are you here?” Dave asked.
“Gramps is going to talk to the councilors about her. We need to protect her,” Jake told Dave. “Well, nice to have you on the team,” Dave told her. “So, you are a dragon I take it,” Rose said. Dave nodded. “Wow, all this time, there was a dragon in the Huntsclan,” Rose said. “Yes, but I didn’t seem evil or like I was putting the world in danger did I?” Dave asked. Rose said, “No, you didn’t.”
“See, dragons aren’t evil. At least not all of us,” Dave said. “Well, I got a test to take,” Dave said. “We’ll come watch if that is fine with you,” Jake said. Dave nodded, “Of course it is alright with me,” he said. They walked to where the test was going to be given at and they sat and talked.
After fifteen minutes, a crowd started forming. Then after ten more minutes, Kulde, Andam, and Laoshi arrived. Kulde gained everyone’s attention and then said, “Dragon Dave, are you ready for your test of Courage In Battle?” “Sir, I am ready!” Dave said. “Who shall be your opponent?” Kulde asked. Jake looked around and saw Nerk. ‘Him again! Oh, how I would love to have someone beat him. Dave, I hope you pick him,’ Jake thought. “My opponent shall be the American Dragon! Jake Long!” Dave said. ‘Just as I predicted,’ Laoshi thought. “Me?” Jake asked. “Yes, I would love to be tested against you. Just don’t hold back,” Dave told him. “Very well then. Dragons get ready!” Kulde called out.
“Dragon up!” Dave and Jake both yelled as they transformed to their dragon forms. “Dragons ready!” Kulde yelled and Dave and Jake got ready to take off. “Go!” Kulde yelled and Jake flew off with Dave right behind him. Jake got through the first ring first with Dave close behind. They entered a forest and Dave maneuvered carefully through the trees to take the lead in front of Jake. Then Jake flew next to him and they headed for the second right, dodging everything in their path. They flew side by side and they were just in front of it when Dave gave Jake a small bump, going through the ring. Jake had to fly back and go through the second ring. They continued to fly forward when Jake saw the place where Nerk was grabbed before by the Dark Dragon. “Dave, be careful, this is where I fought the Dark Dragon for the fir…,” he didn’t finish as a black hand grabbed Dave and pulled him into a new hole. “Aw man! Not again!” Jake said and flew in after Dave, preparing for another fight against the Dark Dragon.
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Post by dave on Dec 4, 2005 1:12:53 GMT -5
Here is the second one...I am sorry but I am not putting the third one up tonight...I am very tired and I don't want it affecting the Jake/Rose chapter...I will try to have it up sometime tomorrow... ------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 18: The Duel Of Related Blood Dave was tied up and gagged. He was also unfortunately in his human form. He struggled against his bindings as the Dark Dragon dragged a claw lightly down Dave’s face. “Such a pity that you turned to Laoshi for training. The old fool, passing on his ways are just going to lead to the downfall of multiple dragons,” he said as he continued to run the claw down Dave’s face.
“Yo, Dave! Are you in here?” Dave heard Jake yell out. Dave knew he couldn’t warn Jake. ‘The bindings or something is stopping me from using my dragon form,’ Dave thought. Then he watched the Dark Dragon fly of but not in the direction of Dave’s voice. ‘It’s a trap!’ Dave yelled in his head.
He saw Jake fly into the room. Jake spotted Dave and landed in front of him. Jake took off the gag when a syringe with a slightly long needle penetrated Jake’s arm. It came out a few seconds later. Jake fell to the ground in his human form. The Dark Dragon laughed and threw the syringe into the lava. “A special potion. It stops dragons from transforming and leaves them in their human form for either two weeks or until they get the antidote,” Dark Dragon said with an evil laugh. Dave felt anger surging through his body. He struggled again.
The Dark Dragon noticed this. “You want to fight? Very well,” the Dark Dragon said. The Dark Dragon cut him loose and then a sword was thrown in front of Dave. Dave got up and grabbed the sword. “This is my grandfather’s sword! He gave this to me! How do you have it!” Dave asked the Dark Dragon angrily. “I went and found your old house. I destroyed it but I took this sword with me,” the Dark Dragon told Dave.
Dave growled and wove his sword at the Dark Dragon. The Dark Dragon smiled. “Bring it,” he said. Dave charged at him and the Dark Dragon knocked him back into the wall but he got lucky and hit the ground instead of the lava. Dave got up slowly but then Jake grabbed onto Dave’s hands.
“Give me the sword. I will fight,” Jake told him. Dave nodded and gave Jake the sword. The Dark Dragon just watched, waiting for the next move. Jake ran forward and fought him, trying to not get hit as Dave did.
Dave saw an item that was silver. He snuck around the battle between Jake and the Dark Dragon to see what it was. Jake clashed the sword against the Dark Dragon’s claws, trying to bring him down. Dave reached the item and it was an open briefcase. Inside it were two syringes with liquid in them. He grabbed one and took a deep breath and injected it into himself. He felt his dragon powers come back. He had the antidote. He ran towards Jake. He slid the last yard and stuck the syringe’s needle in the very bottom of Jake’s leg and injected the liquid into him. Dave pulled it out and heard Jake say, “Ow! What was that for!”
“We got our powers back,” Dave said, grabbing his sword back and transforming. The Dark Dragon shot fire at Dave. Dave avoided it and shot his own fire back at the Dark Dragon. Jake then transformed as well and fought along side Dave. Fire being shot in all directions, they fought like this for several minutes, no one even got hit. Then Dave and Jake quickly flew out. “I can get you another time. Don’t think you are free yet my dragons,” the dark Dragon said with a smirk.
The race continued. It ended with Dave going through the third ring first but with Jake right behind him. “Dave Halan! You passed the third test as well as every test!” Kulde said and Jake, Dave, Laoshi, Rose, and others cheered. “And Dave Halan. Laoshi is now your official master!” Andam said. Dave couldn’t of been happier.
An hour later…
Dave, Jake, Rose, and Laoshi entered the elevator and went back to New York City. When they arrived, they went to Laoshi’s shop and Dave put his sword away so that no one would be hurt accidentally by it. Dave pulled Jake aside and gave him about a thousand dollars. “What is this for?” Jake asked. “Tomorrow, spend a day with Rose. Do things together, have fun, that money is yours to spend on doing things with her tomorrow,” Dave told Jake. “I can’t take this much money,” Jake said. “Yes. Take it. It was money I was going to use on running away from Yonkers. I feel like this is my home now so you use the money,” Dave said. Jake gave Dave a quick hug. “Thank you!” Jake said. “No problem. Just have a good day tomorrow,” Dave said. They then went to bed, but not before Jake and Rose gave each other a five minute kiss before they went to bed.
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Post by dave on Dec 4, 2005 11:20:50 GMT -5
Ok..just thought I would tell everyone. I am not going to update this morning because
A. I don't have the chapter finished B. My mom is taking me to see HP:GOF
I will try to update tonight though!
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Post by magenta on Dec 4, 2005 12:11:40 GMT -5
OK! Btw, great story so far! ^___^
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Post by KaiDragon on Dec 14, 2005 5:13:38 GMT -5
Great! Looking forward to it!
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Post by dave on Dec 14, 2005 12:52:41 GMT -5
lol, sorry, no chapter update here. I am still writing it lol. It is going to be at LEAST 16 pages long. I am hoping to finish it soon lol. Wish me luck
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