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Post by yfwe on Jun 12, 2005 9:28:58 GMT -5
Whassup? In my other thread, I said I probably wouldn't put any fics of mine on this site b/c of length and language issues, but... I found one of mine that is quite short (by my standards, that is) and has no bad language whatsoever. It's merely a prologue to the fic that I'll be working on this summer as soon as I finish my "Dragon in Paradise" fic, so here it goes. This is a songfic, called "Ordinary". Hope you all like.
Ordinary YFWE
I had always wondered- what would happen if someone else found out my other identity? Especially if it was someone that would be really dangerous if they found out? Once, I thought I was almost discovered by the teenage rumor queen, Natalie Portman, but I soon realized that she didn’t really know. (By the way- that’s part of my “You Raise Me Up” fic!) /Whose eyes am I behind?/
I figured that one day, I would have to tell someone.
/I don’t recognize anything that I see Whose skin is this design?/
Maybe I could tell my friends. And Trixie and Spud- they found out anyway. But there was always the possibility of someone else...
/I don’t want this to be the way that you see me /
What if I told Rose? How would she react? But then again, what if she didn’t like me as a dragon? What if... she left me, because of my other identity?
/I don’t understand anything anymore And this web that I’m tied up Is taking me right up these walls That I climb up To get to your story/
I had always wanted to tell her. But I knew that it’d be hard. Time after time, I tried. But then, I got the chance. When our school took the ski trip. If she had any doubts about me, I needed to tell her... /It’s anything from ordinary/
I was anything but ordinary.
/And when the world is on its knees With me, it’s fine/
I had always had no trouble with being the hero. It wasn’t like I was really ever “saving the world”, but I was still saving many things. I mean, New York was pretty big, after all.
/And when I come to the rescue I get nothing but left behind/
It just kinda sucked that I never was able to reveal my secret identity to many people. Normal people, that is. Only Trixie and Spud. I couldn’t even tell my dad!
/Everybody seems to be getting what they need Where’s mine?/
If I was able to tell everyone... I’d be, like, a celebrity, or something. Everybody’d like me a lot more. Not that they didn’t already. But even more! I might even get some offers to become a pro skateboarder! That’d be the bomb!
/‘Cause you’re what I need so very But I’m anything but ordinary/
But I couldn’t tell everyone. Barely anyone. But I had known Rose for a while. I could trust her. That’s why I had to tell her.
/Can you save me from this world of mine? Before I get myself arrested with this expectation/
The final night of the Ski Trip, off I went. To make my move. Spud and Trixie, they told me that Rose couldn’t be trusted. They even said that Rose was the Huntsgirl- my arch enemy! But I couldn’t believe them. I wouldn’t. What did they know, anyway?
/You are the one/
But how could I have known? That my two best friends- they were right all along?
/Look what you’ve done What have you done?/
This had basically broke my heart. How was I to tell her now? When I knew that her destiny... was to kill me?
/This is not a joke You’re just a kid You weren’t ready for what you did, no./
But part of me was like, it wasn’t her fault. How could she have known that her almost-boyfriend was the one that she was destined to slay?
/I think I’m trying to save the world for you You've been saving me, too. We could just stay in and save each other/
I actually thought it was my fault. My fault that I was a dragon. That she had to slay me. I still wanted to be there for her... and I was almost sure she was the same way. But I knew that I couldn’t do that. Unless if...
/I’m anything but ordinary/
I was anything but ordinary. But not anymore. It was at that point that I decided,
I would no longer be the American Dragon.
END CHAPTER
Ok, so I hope you all liked it. That's just a precursor to the whole story that'll be up sometimes. And I may put some of my other ones up here, as long as I am able to censor them. Ok, see ya.
YFWE
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Post by dreamofdragon on Jun 12, 2005 9:32:17 GMT -5
Great job. Keep it up. From what I read, this is more like a gentle rap with a narration right?
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Post by yfwe on Jun 12, 2005 10:29:46 GMT -5
Well, actually, this was just the prologue. It's not gonna be, like, a songfic for the whole fic- just the prologue, for the fic's name's sake. BUt I have yet to decide whether if the whole thing will be from Jake's point of view, or not. But, thatnks for reading it!
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Post by polydactyl on Jun 12, 2005 10:43:42 GMT -5
excellent work! very emotional!
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Post by yfwe on Jun 22, 2005 15:44:15 GMT -5
Wrote Ch. 2 the other day. Here it is!
Ordinary:Ch. 1 YFWE
Jake Long was just about as upset and confused as one person could ever be. Here he was, returning to school for the first time after the Ski Trip. And he had just discovered that the girl that he loved most- Rose... she was, in reality, the enemy. Although she, obviously, knew nothing about it. How could she? She had no clue as to the identity of the dragon that she faced time and time again. She did not know the identity of the dragon that had kept her uncle from resurrecting past Huntsmasters to eliminate all dragons. She didn’t know the identity of the dragon... who had saved her from almost certain death at the ski trip. She didn’t know that one of her best friends... was also one of her greatest enemies.
Unfortunately for Jake, he did know this.
He was that dragon. The one that time and time again foiled the Huntsclan’s evil plans. It had been a great job. A great thing to do. That is, until he found out the news. That Rose was the enemy. Jake sighed, looking toward the sky. Why? Why was he destined to be the American Dragon?
Why him?
(End)
Rose was a little moody as well as she walked to school that morning. There were many feelings. Feelings of confusion. Feelings of denial. To name a few.
This all had resulted from the school ski trip that had occurred the previous weekend. The American Dragon... it had followed her to the ski resort. Of all places, he had followed her to the school ski trip.
Why had he been there? She had been ordered to capture the Abominable Snowman... maybe the dragons had been tipped off by someone that they were going to do this. It was possible, and he had stopped her. But there was one thing. One thing that happened that weekend that she couldn’t stop thinking of.
He had saved her life.
Why would he save her life? They were mortal enemies. They were supposed to hate each other. They wanted to kill each other.
At least Rose did. But after that happened, after the dragon had not only spared her when he had her cornered, but had actually saved her from death, she wasn’t so sure about him.
Did the dragon actually love her?
That couldn’t be right. Rose wouldn’t accept it. The dragon was her enemy. After all the times they had fought... there was no way he could feel even an ounce of compassion for her.
But he had saved her. And to boot, even if this dragon did like her, it wouldn’t matter. Nothing would change. She already had someone she loved, and he loved her.
Or so she thought.
Rose had wanted to spend time with Jake on the ski trip! Honest! But she couldn’t. Brad... he had never let his eyes off her the whole time. Whenever she wanted to talk to Jake, Brad showed up and pulled her away. But by the end of the trip, she was ready to get with him. She had gone back to his seat on the bus... and asked if she could sit with him, after apologizing for not spending time with him.
But he had said the seat was taken.
But was that exactly true? Rose believed him, thinking it might have been for Spud, but when he looked back mid-ride, Jake was still the only one in the seat.
Was he mad at her? She sure hoped not. She decided that today, at school, she was going to once again attempt to confront him.
(End)
“Jake! Hey!”, Rose called in the hallway after their first period class that day.
Jake had been at his locker, talking with Trixie and Spud. When he heard her voice, his immediate reaction was to look up and smile. But then he remembered. Actually, he had never forgotten.
Rose was Huntsgirl, his enemy. And he still could not get over it- so much that he could not even look her in the eye.
“Uh oh, Jakey. Here she comes again. Y’ might wanna hide”, said Trixie, pointing toward the approaching Rose.
And that is what Jake wanted to do. But for some reason, he could not bring himself to do this. Was it because he still loved her? But how could he love someone that wanted to slay him?
“Jake, I gotta talk to you!”, she said when she caught up to him.
He looked back at Trixie, wondering what she thought he should do.
She just shrugged her shoulders.
“Um... yeah, I guess. But could we make it quick?”, he asked.
“No problem! We have the same class together next, remember?”
“Yeah.”
(End)
“Jake... I just wanted to say I’m sorry- again”, apologized Rose, “I really wanted to spend time with you, but...”
“Hey, like you said... you were busy”, Jake muttered, “There was nothing you could do...” What he had just said had more meaning than he originally thought.
“Jake. What’s wrong? Are you still mad?”, Rose wondered aloud. She reached out to touch his arm.
But Jake pulled away, “I’m alright! Really!”, he yelled, so loud that everyone that happened to be in the hallway turned toward them. Knowing he’d been a little to loud, Jake quieted his voice and returned to his conversation with Rose. “Rose... I really am okay. I think...” He looked her in the eyes, the first time he’d done so that day. It was then he remembered why he’d fallen in love with her to begin with. Her eyes... her blue eyes... they were so beautiful. It was right then and there that he made up his mind. To do something he didn’t think he was going to do. Something that could quite possibly get him killed.. “Rose...”, he said, “Could I meet you after school? At Mambo’s down the street? I have something to tell you...”
END CHAPTER
Ok! What's he gonna tell her? If you don't know, then you definitely haven't seen the ep "Ski Trip". Oh, and polydactyl: No. 3 won by ma landslide on that poll thing. No one's voted for anything else! So this was the first update, DIP next, then I'm on vacation, where I'll likely write a new chapter fro everything. See yall
YFWE
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Post by magenta on Jun 24, 2005 19:21:23 GMT -5
Please continue! =D
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Post by yfwe on Jul 11, 2005 14:07:49 GMT -5
Hey yo! New chapter of this fic! Hope you like!
Ordinary: Ch. 2 YFWE
This was it. The moment of truth. For the second time in a week, he was going to try it.
Jake was going to tell Rose that he was a dragon.
And it, of course, wouldn’t be easy.
But was it ever?
The time and place was set. Jake would meet Rose at Mambo’s, a small pizzeria not far from the school. Their meeting would be after school.
It almost seemed too easy.
But he knew that it wouldn’t be.
This was because Rose was Huntsgirl. And she was supposed to be his enemy.
She would kill him.
Maybe.
It was possible.
But then again...
Jake sat in his final class of the day, in deep thought, imagining what could happen.
She wouldn’t kill him.
She loved him.
Or did she?
It was all a question in the sense of their relationship. Did she like him? Or love him?
That was probably what it’d come down to.
But she wouldn’t kill him.
She wouldn’t kill someone she knew.
But what if...
What if she did?
What if her orders got in the way?
What if it didn’t matter to her?
What if...
(End)
The spot was handpicked by Jake, of course. For he was the first one there. He chose a table at the restaurant toward the back. No one ever sat back there, although Jake felt it was the most romantic spot there. Go figure.
But this was no time for romance.
This was the time for truth.
The plan was simple. She would sit down. They would order. They’d eat. The check would come. And then...
Then...
...there it would be.
Jake’s chance. The chance to tell her everything.
Just as she had told her, although unintentionally.
The door opened.
Here she came.
Get ready, Jake.
It’s about to begin...
(End)
“Jake, hi”, Rose greeted him when she reached their back table, “Why are we sitting all the way back here? There were tables in the front.”
“Oh, uh...”, Jake tried to bring forth his normal attitude, “Oh... ya see, the Mackdaddy Jake figured that you would want the... the... most romantic spot here!” It had worked. Sort of.
Rose shrugged her shoulders. “Whatever. Fine with me.” She sat down across from him. “I’ve never been here before. Is it nice?”
Jake smiled. “Only the best for you, Rose.”
She smiled.
He smiled back.
This was going great.
So far...
(End)
The food was great, that much could be said for it. The two talked the whole time, Rose bringing up most of the conversations. Jake tried to go along with it, trying to hide his emotions. Dreading the moment when...
“Your check”, their waiter laid a slip of paper on their table, turned, and walked away.
Rose began digging in her purse to find her billfold. But Jake stopped her, putting his hand in hers. “I’ll pay for it.”
“Wow. Five dollars. Big spender.” Rose sarcastically noted.
Jake winced sheepishly, “You’re welcome...” He set the money on the check. “Rose...”
Go on, make your move.
“Rose, I...”
What’re you waiting for?
“Yes, Jake?”
Come on, you’re stalling! Do it already!
“I wanted to tell you...”
Tell her what?
“Something.”
That’s the best you can do? Tell her what.
“Yes? What is it?”
“I’m... I’m...”
Yes... yes, you’re getting there...
“I’m a...”
One more word, one more...
Then the unthinkable happened.
RRIIINNGG!! Rose’s cell phone went off.
“Oh, come on! Sorry, Jake. This’ll just take a sec.” She got up and headed toward the bathrooms to answer her call.
Jake sighed. He’d come so close...
You talked too slow. You gotta hurry it up!
“I know, I know...”, Jake said to himself.
Rose came back in a few moments later. “Jake, I’m so, so sorry! I gotta leave. Some family thing just came up, and...”
“... say no more, say no more. It’s cool”, replied Jake. It had to be something with the Huntsclan, no less.
“Yeah... you were about to tell me something, though. Could I call you later?”, she asked.
“No prob”, he sighed.
“Thanks! See ya later!” Rose thanked him, and soon enough she was out the door.
Jake was still for a moment, and promptly slammed his head on the table. The glasses and plates shook as he did so.
Everyone stared his way. Smirking in embarrassment, he slowly got up and headed to the bathroom.
Once inside, he went over to the sink and splashed a whole bunch of hot water on his face. He had actually intended for it to be cold, but apparently this section of town didn’t get cold water easily.
He looked up in the mirror, his face dripping of water, “Jake!”, he said to his reflection, “This is getting old. What do you think?”
Of course, he wouldn’t be able to reply back, but even if he could, he wouldn’t because just then a messenger fairy appeared before his eyes.
“Message from Lao Shei. Sign here”, he said.
As he signed, Jake said, “Y’know, couldn’t ya have waited until I was outside? There is a such thing as privacy, you know.”
“Sorry. This letter was urgent. I was supposed to give it to you at all costs” He gave him an envelope and flew away.
“Whatever...”, Jake opened it up. Grandpa’s face appeared as a hologram above it.
“Jake! A safe house that had been housing centaurs is in danger! We need to protect it before the Huntsclan arrives.”
“That must’ve been why Rose left...”, Jake wondered aloud, “Okay, Gramps. Be right there.”
He, too, left the restaurant, hoping to make this as quick as he planned on trying to tell Rose once again that he was a dragon.
Once and for all.
He wouldn’t show himself there in the fight; even if Rose stopped fighting, the Huntsmaster wouldn’t. So he’d wait.
But waiting sucks.
END
End of chapter 2. Hope everyone like it. Later
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Post by jenny on Jul 11, 2005 15:21:38 GMT -5
it was really good keep writing it please
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Post by yfwe on Jul 21, 2005 9:24:33 GMT -5
Ordinary Ch. 3: Fate YFWE
The safe house where the centaurs were being hidden was not in the Magical Village, as one might expect. Rather, it happened to be in the northern section of New York City, a good deal from Jake’s location at that point in time.
“DRAGON UP!!!”, he yelled once he was outside the restaurant, and he became a dragon and soared toward the house. Would he be able to fight Rose?
That was his main question now.
He’d never thought of it before.
He hadn’t fought the Huntsclan since... it was before the Ski Trip, although he had obviously had a run-in with the Huntsgirl there.
But the last time, he hadn’t known that Rose was Huntsgirl. Until now.
Could he bring himself to fight her?
He’d have to. If he refused, Grandpa would suspect that something was up.
“They were right...”, he repeated.
They had been right. Trixie and Spud. Why hadn’t he listened to them? Why hadn’t he listened when they told him that Rose was Huntsgirl?
Was it fate?
Fate- was it the reason Jake ventured out into the cold blizzard that night to follow her?
Had fate been a factor when Jake was caught in one of Huntsgirl’s traps, only to easily break free?
Was fate the answer to why Jake had discovered on his own that Huntsgirl and Rose were the same person?
If all that was fate, then...
...then could it be possible that Jake’s fate was to...
No, it couldn’t be.
He’d already thought of it... it’d never work.
But maybe it would.
‘Cause it was fate.
No matter what the circumstances could be, Jake was going to tell Rose his secret tonight.
END CHAPTER.
Sorry it was a little short, but I had to get it up for a fan of the fic at FF.net. So, yeah. Please tell me what you think! Later!
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Post by stranger on Jul 21, 2005 9:37:21 GMT -5
that is very good!, pls contiue if u have more
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Post by dragonfan123 on Jul 21, 2005 9:43:51 GMT -5
i whold like to continue to it's really good
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Post by yfwe on Jul 21, 2005 9:50:11 GMT -5
Thanks guys! I'll have more soon, but not immediately. I have to go work on DIP, or a few people (PD included) will seek me out and kill me.
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Post by magenta on Jul 21, 2005 10:57:15 GMT -5
Yeah! Please continue asap! =D
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Post by yfwe on Jul 31, 2005 18:47:43 GMT -5
Ordinary: Ch.4 YFWE
“Dragon”, the Huntsmaster muttered as he watched Grandpa soar towards him. The Huntsclan simply wanted to search this house they were at to see if there were any magical creatures being housed there. This region had been known for doing these types of things- housing magical beings, that is. It was comparable to the Underground Railroad during the US Civil War.
“Huntsmaster! You get away from this house! Humans live here!”, Grandpa yelled.
“Ah, dragon master. Do you honestly believe I would put a human’s life at stake?”
“Yes”, breathed Grandpa.
“For your information, dragon, the humans that supposedly live here are gone on vacation- they left this morning. And furthermore, we have checked every home on this block- except this one. And neither you nor the American Dragon stopped me before... until we reached this one. So answer me this, old man- What is in this house?”
“I have no clue what you are speaking of. I did not want you harming innocent civilians.”
“Is that so?”, the Huntsmaster smiled wryly. He snapped his fingers, and a group of about 10 identically-dressed Huntsclan members appeared on either side of the Huntsmaster “Then I guess I will have to go in anyway- check things out?”, he grinned, “Finish him.”
The army of Huntsclan ninjas leapt toward Grandpa, who was clearly outnumbered. And to add to it all, Jake still had yet to arrive.
(End)
The Huntsmaster ran inside the normal-sized, two-story home, meeting Huntsgirl beside a door that either led upstairs or into a basement. “Huntsgirl, we do not have much time. Although I have trained the other members well, they are nowhere near ready to face off against a dragon- even if they outnumber it greatly. They can hold it off- but only for a small time.” He looked at the door, “Where does this lead?”
“Downstairs”, replied Huntsgirl, “The basement. The door was locked, so we have yet to go down yet.”
“That so?”, asked Huntsmaster, “Okay then. This should not be too much of a problem.” He held up his staff, powered it up, and shot a relatively-smaller-than-normal blast of energy at the door. With little resistance, it splintered and fell in pieces to the ground.
“Easy”, Huntsmaster said reassuringly. “Now quick. Let’s go.”
(End)
Down the stairs they went, searching for a lightbulb or something to use to see. It was pitch black down there, and the staircase was pretty narrow to boot. But when Huntsgirl reached the foot of the stairs, she felt a small silky object brush across her face. At first she thought it was a spider web, but upon thinking a little more, she realized that it could be. Searching for it again, she found it, and pulled.
A small, yet bright, lightbulb blinked on.
“Bingo”, she grinned, and the Huntsmaster joined her.
The basement didn’t seem to be much of a place. In fact, there seemed to be nothing down there.
“Uncle, it seems that there isn’t anything here”, Huntsgirl said, and then quietly added, “As it has been with every other place we’ve searched.” Obviously, she was still a little miffed at her uncle for making her leave her date with Jake early.
“Yes, it seems that you are...”, he stopped mid-sentence, and the room became deafly silent.
“What is it?”
“Shh! I think I heard something.”
Huntsgirl hadn’t. But then again, her uncle had always claimed that he had really good hearing.
The Huntsmaster slowly crept over to the left of them, until he was inches away from the stone wall. “It came from in here.”
Huntsgirl snickered, “I think you’re hearing things. There’s nothing there but a wall. Let’s just get outta here, and...”
“Nonsense”, Huntsmaster stopped her. He held up his staff once more and aimed it carefully at the wall. Energy flew at the wall again and, upon impact, kicked up a whole lot of dust.
But when the dust settled, there sat another room. And inside it sat four humans.
A man, two women, and a young girl. And they all looked absolutely shocked to see two ninjas standing before them. Especially since there had previously been no way to get in there. Come to think of it... how had they gotten in there in the first place?
“Greetings”, Huntsmaster started, “I am a member of the Huntsclan. We are patrolling this area for any magical creatures. Do you know of any in the area?”
The man slowly shook his head, eyes wide.
“No? Okay. Well, I think we’ll be off. Oh”, he looked back at them, “Any reason that you all would be hiding in a sealed-off room?”
“No...”
“Is that right?” Huntsmaster walked over to the man, who seemed to be shaking with fear, “Looks to me as if you might be hiding something.”
“No!”
“Huntsgirl, please come here”, he motioned to her, and once she was by his side, he whispered, “Please get out the Eye of Zarthon.”
Huntsgirl obeyed, reaching into the knapsack-like object around Huntsmaster’s waist and pulled a small, sphere-shaped piece of metal. She handed it to him.
“Thank you”, he turned back to the man, “See this? This is the Eye of Zarthon. Do you know what it does?”
“No. Please, sir, my family and I would like to...”
“I’ll show you then”, Huntsmaster shook the Eye and a glowing red light came on in it. A piercing laser of red light shot at the man. As if it was a scanner of sorts, it touched every spot of his body.
And then Huntsgirl gasped.
For there, in place of the man, was a centaur.
It looked just like the human, except for the half-horse thing.
“Excellent...”, the Huntmaster chuckled.
(End)
All this time, Jake had been nearing the house. And now he had, and upon arrival, he saw his Grandpa, in dragon form as well, finishing off the last of a few Huntsclan ninjas. Great. The Huntsclan was here. That meant Rose was.
“Jake!”, Grandpa greeted him, “Hurry! I fear that we do not have much time. For all we know, the Huntsmaster could have reached the centaurs by now.”
“Are you saying that this is my fault?”, Jake somehow seemed a little offended by that.
“Of course I am not! I am just worried. Let’s go!”
They flew to the ground, reverted back to human, and quickly ran inside.
When they saw the splintered door that led to the basement, they morphed back to dragon and headed down there, as they were not stupid and knew the Huntsmaster’s trail when they saw it.
They got to the bottom of the stairs, to see a large hole in the wall, and four centaur sitting dormant in nets. Huntsclan nets. But where was the Huntsmaster and Huntsgirl?
“Dragons”, Huntsmaster said shortly.
They spun around. There stood Huntsmaster and Huntsgirl, glaring at them.
“Glad you could join us. But this isn’t your business. These centaur were being hidden in a location of the Magical Village. That means that they are our business.”
“‘Fraid not”, Jake snarled, “Anything involving defenseless magical creatures and the Huntsclan IS our business.” He lunged at the Huntsmaster. And with this, the battle was on.
“Not so fast, dragon boy”, Huntsgirl stepped in front of him, “You’re mine.”
“Man...”, Jake sighed to himself. Could he bring himself to fight Rose?
“You’re on, but mind if we take it outside? Little cramped in here.” “Whatever. See you out there”, she used her staff to teleport outside,
“Okay”, Jake said to himself, “If I can bring myself to actually hit her or something, I may be able to stop her long enough to tell her who I really am.” He nodded to himself in confidence and headed up the stairs to meet her.
He hadn’t been outside two seconds when he was slammed into by a flying kick from the Huntsgirl. He staggered back, but the blow hadn’t been too hard, and he regained his composure with ease.
“Yo, babe! Watch out!”, he flew toward her, knocking her to the ground. Yes, he thought, Here’s my chance. He slowly walked over to her landing spot. “Hey, I...”
She grunted and got up to his eye level (which was a little difficult), “Why didn’t you finish me when you had the chance just now? Bad move, dragon boy.” She brought her arm back, and before Jake had any time to react, he was blindsided by her staff.
And that’s when he blacked out.
(End)
It was about fifteen minutes before Jake regained consciousness. It had gotten a bit darker outside, and there was no Huntsgirl in sight. In fact, there seemed to be no one in sight. Wait... there was his Grandpa. In the sky, yonder about a mile. Where was he headed? And why didn’t he wake Jake?
But that wasn’t really what was on Jake’s mind at that point.
Once again, he had tried and failed to tell Rose that he was the American Dragon.
He was beginning to think that it may never happen. That he would never be able to tell her. He’d tried so many times, and had failed so many times.
Was there any solution?
He still loved her.
But she couldn’t possibly love him if he was her enemy.
Enemies couldn’t be lovers. It would never work.
There seemed to be only one way out of this.
It was something that he knew shouldn’t be done.
But it seemed to be the only way.
A light rain had begun to sprinkle on the pavement around him as he slowly stood up. He took another look in the direction he had seen Grandpa leaving. But he wouldn’t go with him. Never again. From that day forward...
“I don’t want to be the American Dragon any more!”, Jake cried out. “I’m through! No more!”
Is this what you want?
END CHAPTER
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Post by polydactyl on Jul 31, 2005 19:36:04 GMT -5
Oh, cmon! Dont leave us hanging!
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