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Post by superdoglac on Jan 7, 2007 1:01:22 GMT -5
Yes I finally started a sequal to WDEWMD. I would come up with an excuse to why its took so long but I don't have one XDD It's only a short prolouge a very very short prolouge. It's technically not even a prolouge but it was so short I call it one XDDD
Two weeks had passed since Rose had been rescued from a terrible death. She had been through a terrible and stressful ordeal but at least it was all over…or so she had thought. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “Ugh, when are they going to get back from school” the teenager groaned.
For once she wanted to go to school. Anything could be better than sitting around all day stuck in an Electronics shop, having only preschool shows to watch and have no one on Fu’s slow computer be online to talk to. If she had to watch Rolie-Polie-Olie one more time she swore she would crack. The reasons why she couldn’t leave the shop were simple. 1. She couldn’t be seen by the Dragon Council or else she would be killed and 2. She couldn’t be seen by the Huntsclan or else she would also be killed.
She walked over to the refrigerator to grab a soda when she heard a soft knocking on the door.
“Lao Shi, it is Andam and I” she heard the voice of Dragon Kulde say. “We have been in the city looking in the escaped prisoner but we decided we should stop by before we left.”
“Sh!t” Rose muttered to herself darting to dusty carpet in the potions room. Loa Shi was standing there ready to go the door to let them in.
“Good you remembered our emergency plan.” He said as Rose lifted up the carpet revealing a small trapdoor.
She quickly opened it and climbed through the small hole, into a space only about as large as a small car. Fu dog pushed down the door and recovered it with the carpet as Lao Shi let in his guests. No one knew though that during this little visit all hell would break loose…
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fudogg
Young Warrior Dragon
I've seen Dead Man's Chest enough times to know that this is not a good thing...[ss:Lao Shi]
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Post by fudogg on Jan 7, 2007 11:16:35 GMT -5
I love it. Continue ASAP!
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Post by redemption on Jan 7, 2007 18:51:43 GMT -5
OMG....
YOU MUST UPDATE! NOW!!! XDDD
Uh... I mean.... *cough*
Yeah.... update soon. XD
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dreamcatcher
Young Warrior Dragon
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Post by dreamcatcher on Jan 7, 2007 21:23:41 GMT -5
O____O
UPDATE NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWW~~~
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Post by huntsrose on Jan 8, 2007 20:50:15 GMT -5
OMG THAT WAS LIKE "THE" LONGEST CHAPTER EVER! ROFL! Update soon...OR ELSE!
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Post by superdoglac on Jan 12, 2007 23:38:24 GMT -5
“Thank you for letting us stay on such a short notice.” Andam said taking a seat in the potions room.
Lao Shi would have tried to tell him to sit in a different room but he didn’t want to look suspicious in even the tiniest way.
Rose was underneath them hearing every single word they said. All different stuff like how the ogre bowl was coming up, pixie dust accidentally got on a leprechaun who can now not stop dancing and how a unicorn got its horn stuck in a tree…again.
“When are they going to leave” Rose thought to herself.
She was extremely uncomfortable being crammed into a tiny space. The wood of the floor was pressing against her skin and her legs were falling asleep.
Rose clenched onto her huntstaff which was kept down there in case of emergency. She closed her eyes and almost fell asleep when she heard the name Huntsgirl mentioned. Rose sat quietly to here what they had to say.
“Lao Shi, are you sure you haven’t uncovered any information about Huntsgirl, or the dragon that kidnapped her?” said Kulde.
“No” Grandpa replied. “But that dragon did not look friendly and it defiantly was not part of the order. Huntsgirl is most likely dead right now.”
Andam sighed. “Lao Shi, you are a trusted member of the order, so please do not feel that we ourselves do not trust you. We need to do this just in case.” Andam said taking a small jar out of his robe pocket.
“The Sands of the Aztecs” said Lao Shi. “They have the power to find a person but only in a small area, am I right?”
Rose shook a bit in her hiding spot. “This can’t be good” she thought.
“Good knowledge Lao Shi, not many dragons know of it” said Kulde.
Andam carefully opened the lid of the ancient jar and the sand flew out instantly. In seconds the room was covered in the deep blue sands. Well most of it at least because on top of the carpet the sand was a different color, a deep red.
Andam and Kulde quickly turned into their dragon forms and raced to the carpet. They lifted it and uncovered the trapdoor. Before Lao Shi could do anything to try to them they swung it open.
Rose stared at the dragons’ eyes, as terrified as she could be. Thinking quickly she took her Huntstaff and blasted a whole in another part of the floor above her. She tried to jump through but was not quick enough. Kulde got a firm grasp on Rose’s neck.
“Robbery of a Leprechaun, attempted murder of a dragon, being associated with the Huntsclan! Its over for you, Huntsgirl!” said Kulde, squeezing harder on Rose’s neck.
“So this is how it ends” thought Rose. “being strangled by a dragon. All because I did the right thing.
Suddenly something knocked Kulde over with great force, causing him to let go of Rose.
“RUN” screamed Grandpa, fighting with the two councilors. “I’ll hold them off as long as I can!”
Rose snatched her staff, turned it into a hover board, and ran out the door. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This one isn't long either, but my writing stinks, suck it up XD
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Post by redemption on Jan 15, 2007 15:46:34 GMT -5
O____O....
HOW DID I MISS THIS?!?
Yeah.... SO UPDATE SOON PLEASE! I'm hooked!
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Post by huntsrose on Jan 15, 2007 18:21:28 GMT -5
Great chapter! Update soon OR ELSE!!
EDIT: Did you not understand the SOON part? XD
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Post by superdoglac on Feb 17, 2007 11:19:15 GMT -5
Fine, I'll update XDDD. Wow this chapter is actually a chapter XD. Most of it is just long paragraphs XP I worked hard on this one, SO BE HAPPY!!!!! ___________________________________________________________________________
Rose ran out the door and jumped onto the board. She didn’t even know what she was going to do or where she was going to go. All that mattered was that she got as far away as possible.
The shop was still in view when a loud sound of shattering glass filled the air. She turned her head and saw Andam and Kulde flying strait toward her.
“Oh God” Rose muttered
Andam and Kulde charged at her letting out a load roar. Many bystanders on the streets looked around to see where the noise came from.
The hunts-board was fast, but no fast enough. Within a minutes the dragons where flying on each side of her swiping their claws. Rose kept swerving to dodge their attacks. After many strikes Kulde succeeded in cutting her leg.
Rose clenched her leg where there was now a chunk of flesh missing and let out a whimper. Andam saw his chance and he quickly picked up Rose with his tail and threw her into the air. Below them was Central Park where there were many trees around. She fell into one getting scratched and bruised as she fell. By the time she reached the ground there were bloody scratches throughout her body and her clothes was tattered. ________________________________________________________________________
Jake, Spud and Trixie where skateboarding along the sidewalks of NY. “Dang Rotwood was extra stupid today” stated Trixie as they were heading to Gramp’s shop.
“I know, since when did Unicorns actually love corn? They hate it!” said Jake
“I like corn” replied Spud.
Trixie and Jake stared at him which they do…a lot.
“Hey why are all those people in front of G’s shop!” said Jake seeing a crowd around it.
There was shattered glass everywhere and many people yelling and screaming.
“LET ME THROUGH THAT’S MY GRANDPA!” yelled Jake fighting through the crowd.
Lao Shi was lying is his human form on the sidewalk, with Fu Dog faithfully by his side. Lao had many cuts from the glass and he let out a groan.
“Grandpa, who did this to you?” asked Jake kneeling next to him.
“It was the Dragon Council, they went after Rose but I tried to defend her. Two dragons against one is a difficult task. They threw me through the window and flew off as Rose tried to escape. I don’t know where they are now”
When Gramps stopped speaking and ambulance pulled up and two men ran out of the back. They put Grandpa on a stretcher and carried him inside.
Before they left Jake yelled out “IS MY GRANDPA GOING TO BE OK”
One of the men nodded and said. “He just has cuts from the glass. Within a few days he’ll be fine.”
When the ambulance drove away, people started leaving. Fu dog brought them inside, explaining the rest of the story. ________________________________________________________________________
Rose slowly tried to stand up as Andam and Kulde landed about 25 feet in front of her. As she got up pain sheered throughout her body; she got up anyway knowing that if she lied there she was going to get killed. She felt her leg bump into something and she saw that her staff had landed right next to her.
“The first stroke of luck today” she thought.
“Huntsgirl, it is time to give up. If you surrender now we will simply imprison you, not kill you.” said Kulde trying to calm her down.
Rose didn’t believe a word he said. She knew if she surrendered it would be the end of her, but she didn’t have enough energy to fight.
“I WILL NEVER SURRENDER!” Rose yelled back at them.
Andam and Kulde sighed and started running toward her, getting ready to attack.
“Almost there” she thought
ZAP! Rose had aimed her staff at the middle of a tree and it came crashing down, right on top of the Dragon Council. She walked over to them. They were alive but knocked out, trapped beneath the tree. She turned her staff back into a hover-board and jumped onto it. She knew where she could go now, but it meant she would have to face her past.
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dreamcatcher
Young Warrior Dragon
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Post by dreamcatcher on Feb 17, 2007 11:30:07 GMT -5
YAY!!! ROSE GOT AWAY!!
UPDATE SOON!
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fudogg
Young Warrior Dragon
I've seen Dead Man's Chest enough times to know that this is not a good thing...[ss:Lao Shi]
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Post by fudogg on Feb 17, 2007 15:40:23 GMT -5
Die Dragon Council! Update soon!
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Post by redemption on Feb 17, 2007 17:03:09 GMT -5
Yay for Rose getting away!!
Update soon!
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Post by huntsrose on Feb 17, 2007 21:57:37 GMT -5
O-M-G!!!! Update ASAP!
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Post by superdoglac on Mar 5, 2007 22:05:05 GMT -5
Chappy 3
Rose flew her staff past a large blue sign. ‘Welcome to New Jersey’ it said. An hour later she found herself in a small neighborhood. It was one mile around with 3 small lakes and an old building that served as a clubhouse. There was also a large grassy area where softball and kickball games where held and where every night in the summer kids would gather and play kick the can. Next to it was a mass of trees commonly known as ‘The woods.’ Rose smiled slightly. She was home. This was where the Huntsman lived before he moved to New York City. Everyone hardly knew him but knew he wasn’t a good caretaker. Everyone there in some way adopted Rose; she was always welcome at anyone’s home and had many friends. She suddenly started to feel faint. It was already nighttime and she was very weak from the battle, she had to get bandaged up and get some rest.
“Can you just go to sleep already?”
“I can’t something doesn’t feel right”
A blond haired, blue eyed girl in penguin pajamas was sitting up in her bed with the light on. There was a gray colored Weimeraner curled up in a ball at the foot of her bed with one eye open. The dog was clearly annoyed and just wanted some sleep.
“Veronika nothing is wrong except for this itch on my head” Lilli said wanting to be petted.
Veronika scratched Lilli behind the ears. “I dunno it just I have a bad feeling in the pit of my stomach and I don’t know why.”
Rose stood in front of Veronika’s house. She started to think that she shouldn’t of come here, especially to her house. She had once done something unforgivable to her. No, she had to apologize, she was missing for 1 and a half years, it was the least she could do. Rose started feeling faint again. She turned her staff into a hover-board again and flew up to a window on the top floor. It was partially opened and Rose pushed it all the way open.
Veronika heard something going on with the window. She jumped out of bed to see someone climbing in. She looked at her strait into Roses eyes.
Flashback
A group of 5 friends were playing kickball in the field. Among them were Rose and Veronika along with their friends Alexis, Robby and Kyle. Alexis and Robby were siblings each with black hair, brown eyes and obvious Spanish descent. Alexis was Rose’s height and Robby was a bout a ¾ of a foot shorter then her. Kyle was the shortest of the group and had brown hair and blue eyes.
Rose kicked the ball really hard and Robby ran after it. First base, second base, third base, HOME. Rose slid onto home plate right as Robby threw the kickball. Veronika gave Rose a high five.
“We’re winning! We’re winning!”
“GET EM!” everyone turned their heads to see Veronika’s little sister, Mimi and her friends holding sticks they sharpened their selves.
“RUN FOR YOU LIFE” Alexis screamed.
The group bolted into the woods nearby where the other kids weren’t allowed. It was the day after Veronika discovered she wasn’t a normal kid. She was a dragon. These where all best buds and should know what Veronika found out about herself.
“Guys I wanna show you something” she said while they where walking up a steep hill. “This may look really weird but…” Veronika’s body immersed in blue flames, and out came a yellow dragon. She had an orange belly and blue spikes with blue F shaped horns on her head.
“Guys… its me!” said Veronika.
“Holy Moses” said Kyle, shocked as could be. “Pinch me I’m dreaming!!!! No more rice crispies before bed!!!”
As Veronika tried to persuade Kyle he wasn’t dreaming no noticed that Rose had disappeared.
“HI-YA!!!!” She jumped out of a bush and attacked Veronika with her hunts-staff.
Trying to defend herself, Veronika got a huge cut in her arm and was knocked over.
“Its over dragon, SAY GOODBYE!” Veronika shut her eyes preparing for what was to come but right before Rose was about to kill her Alexis threw a rock at her head, knocking her over.
“Take that you son of a church!!!!!”
Kyle and Robby started doing the same and Rose ran for her life. None of them had seen her since.
End flashback
“Why, why are you here,” stammered Veronika
“Veronika, I’m sorry”
With that Rose collapsed in her arms.
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fudogg
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I've seen Dead Man's Chest enough times to know that this is not a good thing...[ss:Lao Shi]
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Post by fudogg on Mar 5, 2007 22:31:14 GMT -5
Very cool. Update soon.
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