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Post by gojake on Sept 1, 2006 17:19:13 GMT -5
Prolouge:
On a very sunny day in Ottawa, Canada, Miranda, a girl, was asking her mom to hurry up so that she could go to Alta Vista Middle. (Lol my 1st to 5th grade school. It's a real school! in canada, middle is fourth to eighth)
Miranda: Mom, come on! I can't be late for the first day of 8th grade!
Ellen: Sorry, Mir!
As Miranda walked out, she saw a boy carrying a backpack. She ran up to him.
Miranda: Hey! Do you go to Alta Vista?
Cal: Yeah, I do. Do you?
His voice was accented, something Central European or British. Miranda recognized it, but couldn't exactly place her finger on it.
Miranda: Yeah! My name's Miranda, and your's?
Cal: It's Cal, Calad or Caladchold, whichever one you want.
This increased Miranda's suspicion even more. She was, in fact, the lady of the dead, masquerading as a human. She was half human, half dragon. And once she had dueled with a vampire named Caladchold Morsmordreda, the Lord of the Dead, who chopped off her arm. Luckily, it was replaced by a mechanical one that she wore a glove over.
Miranda: Your last name wouldn't happen to be Morsmordreda, would it?
A lengthy and painful pause.
Cal: No, it's Hall.
Miranda: Coolio!
The two new friends were overheard by Ellen.
Ellen: Hello. Miranda, would you introduce me to your boyfriend?
Mirand: Mom, hes not my boyfriend. Cal, this is Mom, Mom, this is Cal.
ellen: Hey Cal, do you think your mom would mind if I drove you?
Cal: She'd be happy, actually, maam....
Ellen: Heheheh!
Miranda: Ok, mom, we're gonna be late!
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Post by kashi on Sept 2, 2006 10:03:27 GMT -5
It seems as though this one might get very interesting in the next little while. Two, pausable, mortal enemies masqerading around as humans, fated to fight eachother once again. I hope to see you continue with this story ^_^
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Post by gojake on Sept 3, 2006 10:44:37 GMT -5
Lol I intend to twist this story into something unimaginable... something dark, something evil.... oh and did I mention this is a trilogy. OH and you should read the character profiles, their at americandragon.proboards60.com/index.cgi?board=ADJL&action=display&thread=1124759238&page=14 , find Caladchold and Miranda. Chapter 1: First Kiss Cal's pov On the way to school in Miranda's mom's car, I often found her staring at me. For some reason, that turned me on... Miranda's POV I saw Cal looking at me strangely. He really looked a lot like that vampire I had fought 2 years ago. And just like the vampire's gaze, his stare turned me on. Was he feeling the same? I really couldn't tell. Ellen: Ok, you two love birds (at this point I was ready to smack Mom in the face) Here is your school, Alta Vista. Not all that great, huh? Me: It's all right. No gangs is what matters. Cal: Yeah, it is ok. As long as there are no gangs. Not that I could beat them up, you know. And for some reason, I didn't doubt that claim. Cal's POV Well, school was pretty good, for a school. No gangs (Yay Canada) no weapons. It was just dumb old classes. And I fooled that idiotic Councilor into giving me the same schedule as Miranda. I really needed to confirm if she was one of the Ladies of the Dead. Not that she wasn't hot. All the Ladies of the Dead were. I had Canadian History first, Science second, English third, Athletics fourth, French fifth, Lunch sixth, Reading seventh, and Math eighth, and finally advisory last. I had Kevin Fraizer, One of my underlings posted here to keep an eye on Miranda. Miranda's POV That advisory teacher kept looking at me in a strange way. I couldn't believe how much attention guys gave me at this school. Cal, however, didn't. He remained stony, impassive. I intended to break that hard, icy, stony shell and get to his mind, his inner subconscious. And I got my chance right after school ended. Cal's POV..... As I was walking out of school, a hard faced Miranda approached me and pointed to behind the school. God knows what the hell was running through her mind, but by the time I got the the behind of the school. She tackled me into the wall, and kissed me. At first I struggled, but then I let it sink in. It felt so good. I let her warm tounge slip into my mouth. Sheer heaven. Could this ever end? I surely hoped not
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Post by gojake on Sept 3, 2006 10:47:47 GMT -5
and the next chapter will involve jake.
Ive decided to add it. Oh boy is this gonna be long.
Chapter 2: Jake's Family Ties.
Grampa: Aiyaah! (starts to curse randomly in chinese)! What have you done now, Jake? You have released a Lord of the Dead from Hell? The dragon council is going to kill me!
Jake: Calm down, we know where he is.
Fu: And who's he with. A hot girl, but she looks a lot like Miranda, that Lady of the Dead who was born the same time as Jake, to Cilimchold the First and his third wife, Nimichold. From my books, Cilimchold was the eviler twin of Caladchold the First. And the name of the Lord of the Dead is, Caladchold the Second, I think. Lives in Ottawa, Canada.
Grampa's jaw hits the floor with a huge thud.
Grampa: (Curses in chinese again) You released the Heir of Caladchold the First? Aiyahhh!
Jake: So, now what do we do?
Grampa: We drag him back down to the underworld and kill him there, because only in his own realm is he mortal. And it's not an easy task. But as punishment, I will send you with Fu Dog, Jake, and you will kill Caladchold.
3 Days later... Toronto, Canada.... 4:30 AM
Fu: Canada's a real beauty. So many trees, and they're all different colors. Red, gold, yellow, green, brown. America's not like that anymore, you know. And neither is Canada. It's rapidly expanding, this country, and more and more things are getting killed.
Jake: Why was Grampa trying to hide something from me about Caladchold?
Fu: No he wasn't
Jake: You speak too fast. You're lying.
Fu: Man, you're becoming a lot like the old man now. So serious. What is the problem with you? Tell me that, and I'll tell you about Caladchold.
Jake: It's rose. I can't believe she told me that she loved me. At least that's what I thought she was gonna say. Her exact words were, "Listen, Jake. I would never have the courage to say this in the real world, but I - " and then the alarm rang.
Fu: Typical. She does love you Jake, you know. I wouldn't be surprised if that was the thing she was gonna say.
Jake: Now, what about Caladchold?
Fu: The old man is going to kill me for this, but, listen, you have a half brother. You see, when you're mother was 21, she was abducted by a Lord of the Dead named Caladchold the First. And she gave birth to his son after 12 months, because of Caladchold's dark magic. You're your dad and mom's son, but Caladchold the Second is your mother and Caladchold the first's son. And Miranda is your half cousin because her dad was Caladchold's uncle. There is such a thing in the magical world.
Jake: That's really.... messed up.....
Fu: And from my research, Rose's mother was mother to Miranda. So Rose is your half cousin. But if your wanting to get serious with her, the magical law allows it. You're really distantly related, so the Magical Law doesn't care.
Jake: That's even more messed up. Who knew I had such a messed up family. Geez. Why didn't the old man want me to know?
Fu: Because it's his theory that your father is the Dark Dragon.
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Post by gojake on Sept 3, 2006 21:34:31 GMT -5
Oh and like, I really love this story, so I'll update anyways. and i really need to join FF.net. Chapter 3: Revelation Miranda's point of view. flashbackThe handsome, tall vampire lunged at me. I could smell those wilting roses straight away. I knew he was dead, and I knew he would kill me and make me his bride. Not too great about the bloodsucking part. Anyways, we fought and fought. At one point I managed to dismember his arm, and to my surprise, a mechanical one popped out. The vampire smiled at me with those blood red lips and rendered my breathless and voiceless. I watched as he locked his lips in a fatal embrace with mine. To recieve a kiss from the dead was fatal to humans. Vampire: You must love your enemy if you are to love your friend. And from that, I knew what he meant. Vampire: I'm not dead. I'm a dragon. And at that point he let go of my lips and released me. I would have killed him there and then, but right before I struck, he smiled at me. I't wasn't the smile that petrified me. It was the pity and love he had shown me. And once again we locked lips, but this time I initiated it. Love was what had grown between us. end flashback Yet now with the dissapearance of Ellen, my human mother, I was at war with the darkness yet again. 4:00 AM, Ottawa, Canada. Jake's POV It was... well.... staggering, if you know what I mean. The great sights of Canada made America seem really bland and distasteful. I loved looking at the Parliament Building. The great Gothic Archetecture was very beautiful. Fu: I love it when I get to go to Canada. Me: Yeah, but, lets try not to get sidetracked. Fu: Yeah, yeah.... Me: Well, I wonder where we find this guy. Fu: His last name is Morsmordreda, but he's probably using another name, like Stephen or Carl. Then he's probably also using another last name. Let's try his school. I flied Fu to the school, and entered the prinicpals office, leaving Fu leashed outside. Me: There wouldn't happen to be a Caladchold at this school? Prinicpal: Yeah, there is. A wierd name, don't you think? What's your relation to him? Me: I..... I'm his half brother. Prinicpal: Your related parents? Me: My mother and his is Susan. Prinicpal: Ok, that checks... Where are you from? Me: New York City. Prinicpal: Are you here to pick him up? Me: Oh, yeah. My mom's driving. Principal: Ok, I think we can arrange this... (Speaks into intercom) Cal Hall, will you please come to the office immediatley? Cal's POV.... That voice in the intercom made my heart sink. Had someone seen Miranda and I kissing in the back of the school, and reported on us? Well, I had no choice but to go. When I arrived there, I saw no one except a Asian American boy around my age, who had a striking resemblance to me. Same nose, same eyes, same hair style, except we had different hair color. We were even wearing the same clothes. This was one of the rare occasions I wore red instead of black or brown. : So, I guess you're my half brother. Cal, my name is Jake. Me: Jake? Jake Long? THE Jake Long? Jake: The one and only genuine. Me: How are you my half brother? Jake: Well, It's long story, Fu will explain. Come on, lets go! Jake led me outside, into a nearby forest. Jake: Ok, this is Fu Dog. Jake points to a dog staring intently at him. Me: Alright, and I expect he's your animal guardian. The potions master from Hong Kong? Fu: You are correct, sir. Me: How am I related to you? Fu: Well, you are related to Jake because A You're a dragon. B you share the same mother. C because your lookalikes! Me: Mom is Jake's mom? Fu: Your mom is married to Jonathan Long, but she had you with Caladchold the First, your father, when she was twenty one. She was under a spell, so I doubt she remembers any of this. Jake: And this makes our task harder. Me: What's your task? Jake: We need to kill you. Me: Why? I could beat you up if I wanted to. Jake: Puhleez. You couldn't even turn dragon. Me: But why do you wanna kill me? Jake: Because you're pure evil and I released you from the underworld. And I need to finish the task. Me: Oh sh*t. Don't tell me you released someone who looks just like me. Don't tell me his name was Vladamir. Jake: Actually, that was it. It wasn't Caladchold. It was Vladamir! Who's Vladamir. Me: My cousin, and your half cousin. He's basically the evil version of me. The vampire I never was. Jake: Aw, such a tragedy. Miranda: Actually, it was.
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Post by kashi on Sept 4, 2006 0:10:28 GMT -5
The story is still going great. I like all the twisting family plot lines you have going in this one. Hope to see some more updates soon ^_^
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Post by twg519 on Sept 4, 2006 9:38:56 GMT -5
ewwwwww.......half cousin?
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Post by gojake on Sept 6, 2006 18:18:10 GMT -5
Chapter 4: Silvermere
Jake's POV
Miranda: I'd tell you about it know, but we need to get to Silvermere.
I looked at Fu questioningly.
Fu: It's the capital of the High Elven Kingdom. Somewhere in the Northern Atlantic, kid.
Me: Ok, I know what a basic elf is, but what's a high elf?
Fu: Ever seen the Lord of the Rings movie?
Me: Yeah....
Fu: You know the elves in that movie? That's a high elf. Tall, beautiful, the whole shebang. They all look like Rose. Actually, Rose is one.
Me: Are you serious?!
Fu: Yep. When she entered my dream to wake you up, she told me.
Me: Alright, but I need to know where to get to-
Fu brandished a Transporter out of his skin.
Fu: Afloogooheegoo!( you know, the Fu's Quagmire imitation) Got it right here.
Me: You rule Fu!
Cal smirked.
Cal: Jake wouldn't last without you, Fu.
Fu: Tell me something I don't know.
At this point, I was pissed, half brother or not.
Me: DRAGON UP!
I picked up Fu and tossed him like a football. Then I turned to face Cal, who didn't looked surprised.
Cal: You use your power for evil!
Me: (evil, cruel voice effects) I will kill you, half brother or not, if you piss me off one more time. (Darth Vader breath) I am most displeased with you. (Darth Vader breath).
Cal: Fine, whatever.
To teach him a lesson, I breath a light fire in his face.
Cal: Ok, maybe I deserved that.
Miranda: Ok, whatever, here is the dog, now we need to get to Silvermere.
I turned human again. That girl really reminded me of Rose in a way. Not as close to being as good looking as Rose, but I guess she was the prettiest in Cal's leauge.
Fu: What was that for? I'm gonna tell gramps about this.
me: (Evil cruel voice) Not if you value your life.
I walked over to Cal and whispered:
Me: It gets them everytime!
Cal: I really thought you were gonna kill us.
Me: I'm not like the Dark Dra-
The teleportation machine started up and sucked us into a funnel.
Silvermere 6:30 PM.
Jake's POV (you'll see why I did this again)
We, that is, Cal, Miranda, Fu and I, landed on a soft grassy meadow. Although it was dark, it's beauty couldn't be marred.
Me: Jeez, Fu, how many times did you throw up.
Fu retches emptily.
Fu: Stupid teleportation sequence. Stupid meatballs.
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Post by gojake on Sept 8, 2006 22:16:56 GMT -5
Chapter five: Princess of Silvermere.
Cal's POV.
After we got ourselves up and brushed ourselves off, we headed towards a small village that could be seen on the horizon. As we neared, I saw that the village was a huge city. A large, tall wall blocked the city, with a huge gate. An aqueduct ran over the parapets. Soldiers monitored the walls and gate. A group of elves approached us, headed by an elf wearing ornate armour and clothing approached us. His eyes widened when he saw us.
Jake: Rose?!
Rose: Jake?! What are you doing here?
So the he was a she. Whoops.
Jake and Rose embraced each other with a kiss. Miranda and I exchanged glances.
Me: Hey, Rose.
Rose: Who's the look alike, Jake?
Jake: Um, he's my half brother and your cousin.
Rose: Cal? Is it you? You really grew up fast. I remember you screaming for your nanny to change your diaper.
I blushed deep red. Miranda cracked up.
Miranda: Hey, Rose. Sup?
Rose: Miranda?
The two sister ran and hugged each other. The other elves were enjoying the scene. Why I oughta...
Jake: Cal? Cal? Earth to Cal!
Me: Whowhatwherewhenwhy?
Jake: Jeez.....
Me: Sorry, was drifting off.
Jake: Well, whadda we do now? We have to hunt down Vlad.
Rose: Vlad? Vladimir? He passed by this way a couple of days ago. I tried to kill him, but you know the brother and sister thing. Let him go. D*mn
Me: I didn't know you cursed.
Rose: If your going to look for him, you better get your sword, Cal, and y'all should stay here for a couple of nights.
Cal: Oh yeah, my sword, the Twisted Blade.
Miranda's POV
Rose escorted us to a small visitor's hotel. The service was pretty good, and so was the food. At night, I tried to sleep, but I couldn't. I looked around the room to see Fu sleeping by Jake on the floor, and Cal on the other bed. He wasn't asleep either. I walked over to him, and sat on my knees. He turned his head around and smiled at me. Bloody vampiric smile. Anyways, he looked at me.
Cal: I need blood, Miranda. Your blood regenerates, so I could use yours.
Me: Yeah, I guess you can take it.
Cal got off the bed and came towards me and stooped. I could feel his breath on my neck. I could feel his teeth prickle my neck. There was pain, then it was gone. I could feel some blood flow out of me. Then with some healing water, he washed my wound, but didn't take his mouth away from there. He brought it up to my own, and we shared a passionate kiss.
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Post by gojake on Nov 20, 2006 22:42:37 GMT -5
Bin a loong time, hasn't it
Chapter 6: User of the Sword
Cal, Miranda, Jake, Fu and Rose walked down the hallways of the palace, early in the morning.
Miranda's POV
I looked at the great hall. God, had it been a long time since I had been here last.
Jake: So, what's so cool about this twisted doohicky?
Cal rolled his eyes.
Me: It has the ability to kill any person from the Underworld. They don't necessarily have to be Undead. Take Cal and Vlad, for example. They're not Undead. Or Dead.
Rose: Which is why we need it. There are also other things you will need, for in the Underworld, only humans, vampires, or elves are allowed to pass. Which means, Jake, that you won't be able to go dragon. And nobody can use their powers. However, you may be able to use magic there. Dragons and Elves have that ability. Vampires use their normal powers.
Jake: Won't I need to memorize spells or something?
Me: Yeah. We have tons of tomes containing spells. Just take one or two along.
Rose: We're here.
We stopped walking, and came across a door with a sword etched on it. Rose opened the door, revealing a tunnel with a descending staircase. We walked down and came to a rather battered looking armory.
Rose: Take whatever you want.
Nobody's POV
Everybody scrambled around for items. Jake picked up a spell tome, entitled 6000 SPELLS FOR DRAGONS AND ELVES AND OTHER MAGICAL CREATURES by Dr. C. Nile DeMenchia (pun on Senile Dementia). He also picked up a shiny hauberk of mail, some plate armour with a sun emblazoned on it, and a sharp broadsword.
Rose: I think I'll come with you guys.
Jake: Be my guest.
Rose put on the armor from yesterday, just a plain hauberk with a tunic, a great winged helm, and a shield and sword. Cal grabbed his Twisted Blade and marveled at it. It was curved, like a scimitar, and had a double pointed end that was shaped like a "V". He grabbed a tunic, put a shirt of mail on, and strapped on a chestplate, and two pauldrons with sharp, pointed and curved Unicorn horns. He also put on some leather boots, and put greaves on his muscular legs. Miranda just slipped on some sleek, shiny black leather armor, and strung a bow, put it on her back with a quiver. She belted on a short gladius sword as well.
Fu: I guess we're ready.
Jake and Cal weren't paying attention. They were sparring, and although they were nearly equal, Jake was getting the upper hand because of his training. Jake parred a lunge, twisted Cal's sword around and pressed the tip of his sword on Cal's chin.
Jake: If this was real life, you'd be dead.
Cal: If this was real life, I'd transform into vampire form.
Jake: Good point.
Rose: Quit it out, you two.
She unclipped several optical devices from her belt and handed them out to everyone, Fu excepted, of course.
Rose: These are Level Scouters (yes, cheap Dragon Ball Z copy). They tell the chi energy of an enemy (basically their overall fighting potential in a transformed state, such as dragon or vampire), their sword fighting skills level, and magic potential energy. For Example, I'll use Jake:
Jake Chi: Dragon:99,946 Human: 23,335 (all these are out of 500,000) Sword:26,567 Magic:60,128 Archery: 6,123 Jake: Lets go Vlad Hunting!
END of chapter 6
Scouter INFO
Cal Chi: Dragon: 40,034, Vampire (Human as well): 49,931 Sword: Human: 22,400 Vampire: 30,000, Magic: 51,463 Archery: 2,432
Rose Chi: Human: 12,000 Elf: 64,204 Sword: 40,000 (both) Archery: 20,000 Magic: 19,021(human) 24,000 (elf)
Miranda: Chi: Human: 10,354 Dragon: 31,098 Sword: 17,205 Archery: 23,000(human) Elf: Same as rose Magic: Same as rose.
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Post by jakelong411 on Feb 24, 2007 4:33:50 GMT -5
It's really good! come on! finish it!
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