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Post by gojake on Jul 23, 2006 16:24:31 GMT -5
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Post by gojake on Jul 30, 2006 14:57:51 GMT -5
Chapter something: of Mind Tricks....
Lobi, Jake and the droids stand on a cliff over looking a city.
Lobi: Mos Eisley. A more wretched hive of scum and villany you will never find.
Later.....
Jake, Lobi and the Droids drive into Mos Eisley, but are intercepted by Huntstroopers!
Trooper: Where are you taking these droids?
Lobi: They're up for sale, if you want them.
Trooper: I need to see your ID.
Lobi waves his fingers ever so slightly.
Lobi: You don't need to see his ID.
Trooper: We don't need to see his ID.
Lobi: We can move along.
trooper: Move along. Move along.
Later:
Jake: Wow, I thought we were bantha fodder for sho'! How'd you-
Lobi: It's a dragon technique, one you must learn.
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Post by Kokusho the Evening Star on Jul 30, 2006 21:26:13 GMT -5
Simple chapter, more like I remember the Teen Titans' Episode 297-494 when Beast Boy is putting on Raven's cloak and try to cast a Force Mind Trick to fool the robots. But the answer is a no. And that's how I got the name of Beast Boy Kenobi in some of the other forums & places.
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Post by mckennan122 on Aug 2, 2006 19:45:52 GMT -5
its doing great so far! i like it .
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Post by gojake on Aug 3, 2006 12:02:36 GMT -5
I want a co writer to help me out. I don't need one, however we can get to the prequel trilogy faster. ANYWAYS HERE IS A NEW CHAPTER. Thanks for support, Readers!!
Chapter : Han Spolo and Trixbacca!
Jake, Lobi and the Droids walk into the cantina.
Suddenly, the bartender yells out.
Bartender: Hey! We don't serve their kind here. (referring to the Droids)
Jake: (to Artoo and Threepio) You guys wait out by the landspeeder. We don't want any trouble.
Lobi looks around for pilots who can take them to Alderaan, and Jake orders a drink. However, a alien sits near him.
Alien: Nweogoaldwogjowoodlkajiegeer!
Jake: Yeah.. Sure...
A distorted human approaches him
Human: We're wanted men!
Jake: I'll be careful.
Human: You'll be dead!
The human throws Jake to the other side of the cantina. Lobi ingnites his radiant, blue battleclaws and chops off the hand of the alien!
Alien: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKK
The human takes the alien out of the cantina.
Lobi: I have found a pilot. Come.
Lobi and Jake walk over to a shady area of the cantina, where captain Span Solo and his first mate, Trixbacca are sitting. Span is a young man of Jake's age, brown hair, somewhat slow looking. He wears a Blue and orange shirt with an alien on it. He has nasty looking blasters in holsters. The wookiee, however wears hip hop clothes from Coruscant, the capital of the Empire. And its a female wookiee!
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Post by Kokusho the Evening Star on Aug 4, 2006 0:25:10 GMT -5
Nice one, the introduction to the smugglers. Nice!
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Post by gojake on Aug 18, 2006 18:38:13 GMT -5
"Some kinda Local Trouble?"
The people sit down.
Span: Ok, dudes whazzup?
Jake: We need to go to Alderaan.
Span: Oh, ok... lets see..... wait, what were we talking about again?
Lobi and Jake exchange glances.
Span: Oh yeah.... so, whazzit, some kinda local trouble?
Lobi: Get us to Alderaan. The boy, myself, and two droids. No questions asked.
Span: Well, buddio, it gonna cost ya a lot. 10000, all in advance.
Jake: What! We could buy our own spaceship for less!
At this point, the wookiee starts to speak. (Ok, wookiees speak in my story, so sue me).
Trixie: Well yah, but who's gonna pilot it? You?
Jake: You bet I could. I'm not such a bad pilot myself. Come on, Lobi, we don't have to listen to this junk....
Lobi: We can pay you 2000 now, and after our destination, 15000 later.
Span: Ok so you gonna pay us 3000 -
Trixie: 17000 you dope!
Span: We can pay off our debt to Jabba the Troll!
Span: you got yourself a deal, old man. And you'd better hurry, old dude, cuz some Huntspunks are after you.
Span points to some Huntstroopers coming their way.
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Post by Kokusho the Evening Star on Aug 21, 2006 1:00:45 GMT -5
Leaving Tatooine. Get ready to hear the old phrase :
"That's no moon, it's a space station." -- Obi Wan Kenobi.
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Post by gojake on Aug 21, 2006 16:55:11 GMT -5
yeah, lol. Though the only reason i made trixbacca talk is cause span (a quality from spud) is really slow. So he needed someone witty as a counterpart
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Post by mckennan122 on Jan 24, 2007 21:58:02 GMT -5
i love it! you are doing so well!!
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Post by gojake on Feb 9, 2007 18:20:43 GMT -5
Lol I've decided to start this one again....
Chapter whatever: Kiss my ass goodbye, Tattooine!
Lobi and Jake quickly make their exit to the docking bay. The walk through the narrow streets of Mos Eisley. As soon as they arrive at Span's ship, some troopers open fire. Span returns fire back. For all his idiocy, he's a good gunslinger.
Jake: You saved our butts out there. Thanks.
Span: Yeah........ Where are we?...... Ok back to Earth.
Lobi grunts with disgust.
Span ingnites the thrusters, and they lift off from the planet, recieving some vain fire from huntsnipers.
Jake: Kiss my @$$ goodbye, Tattooine!
For all his sockyness, he shuts up when a Huntsdestroyer shoves it's massive bulk right in front of them...
(Jaws music plays) XD END OF CHAPTER WHATEVER
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Post by sizler on Mar 3, 2007 1:07:17 GMT -5
arent u on chapter like 5 or 4? plz continue also if u need a co writer for this i no alot about star wars i like no every single word and sence so if u need a co writer for this pm me ok
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Post by mckennan122 on Mar 10, 2007 10:51:32 GMT -5
plz keep going!!! i havent seen a new chapter in a long time!!! you are makeing them shorter and shorter every time! plzzzzzzzzzzzz write more!!!
Mckennan122
(p.s., did i end every sentance up there with an exclamation point? yes, i did.
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Post by sizler on Mar 17, 2007 23:34:28 GMT -5
Impressive..most impressive
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Post by gojake on May 24, 2007 20:06:22 GMT -5
Hokey Religions.
Jake ignited his fathers battleclaws and watched a remote closely. Span and Trixbacca come into the room.
Span: I told you we'd outrun those Huntspunk slugs.
Jake blocks a lazer bullet from the remote.
Span: Don't everyone thank me at once.
Jake stares at the remote for a while. The remote fires two lazers at him, but these evade his battleclaws and hit him on the leg.
Jake: OW!
Span chuckled
Span: Hokey religions and outdated weapons are no match for a good blaster at your side, kid.
Jake: You don't believe in the Force, do you?
Trix: I've seen wierd things when traveling the galaxy, but ive never seen anything to make me believe in the Force. Take Span for an example.
Span's eyes are zoned out.
Lobi takes a cloth and drapes it over Jakes head.
Lobi: Stretch out with your feelings. Feel the remote with the force. Your senses are of no use here. You must use the Dragon's Eye force power, and see the remote. See the remote, but do not see.
Jake: I... think so.
Jake effectively dodges 20 bullets in rapid succession and blocks 15.
Jake: Now do you believe in the Force.
Trixbacca is just staring wide eyed, and Span drooled.
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