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Post by chetchaka on Sept 2, 2005 21:32:33 GMT -5
Prologue-
The story starts 2 Years in the past, in Bejiing, China in a bedroom. A boy was uncomftorably rolling around in his bed. He moaned and started shaking violently. His eyes opened and turned blank and the noise of a shattering window followed. The boy woke up somehow outside on his lawn. He then saw his home town completely destroyed with no possible explanation. Every living thing except the boy was destroyed. Seeing this, the boy runs off and lives on his own until two years later in the present, when his destiny takes a drastic turn. End Prologue.
I'm new here. No, seriously, I just joined.
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Post by mithos on Sept 2, 2005 21:34:26 GMT -5
Cool. Is this a fan fic? Cause you can post in the ff section. ;D
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Post by mithos on Sept 2, 2005 21:35:29 GMT -5
Nevermind! Don't read the last post!
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Post by chetchaka on Sept 2, 2005 21:41:01 GMT -5
Characters in the story:
Jake (of course) Trixie Spud Lao (Jake's Grampa) Chase (the boy in the intro) Thorn (A.K.A. Hunstgirl or Rose) Huntsman and some other random people! y@zOrz! (sorry, had to get that out of my system)
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Post by chetchaka on Sept 2, 2005 22:21:36 GMT -5
Chapter 1: The Eclipse Dragon
Scene 1- Location-Lao's Shop in the present as in Jake being 13 like he is in the series.
Jake: C'mon gramps, why do I always have to clean your shop?
Lao: It is part of your training, young one. If you do not-
Fu: Hey, gramps check out this funky flashing scroll!
Lao: What!?! Let me see that!!! *snatches the flashing scroll*
Jake: What is it, a slow strobe light...scroll?
Lao: No Jake...it is much more than that...*transforms* Follow me Jake! Fu, stay here and be a guard dog!
Fu: *moan*
Jake: Finally some dragon action! Dragon...UP!!!
*Jake and lao fly away from the shop*
End Scene 1.
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Post by chetchaka on Sept 2, 2005 22:34:04 GMT -5
Scene 2-Location-Somewhere on the northeast of Japan, in the wilderness
*scroll starts to flash extremely rapidly*
Lao: We are very close!.. Jake, look out!
*Both dodge government supersonic airplaine as it flies by*
Jake: Its coming back!
Lao: This cannot be good...
Meanwhile on the ground below Jake and Lao...
Chase: Man I'm thirsty. *sees lake in corner of eye* Score! *Tries to scoop up some water but it goes through his hands* What the heck...*Chase squints his eyes and makes out a staircase below the nonexisting water* Uuuhhh....down I go then.
Chase travels down the staircase and comes upon a shrine embedded with jewels and shiny metals with a rod in the middle of the shrine. The rod had a jewel in the center and seemed to be crafted out of platinum.
Chase: Whooaa...*sigh* Makes me wish I could pick up really heavy things. Well, maybe I'll-
A feild of lightning prevented Chase from exiting the area. Chase takes a deep breath and slowly advances toward the rod. Meanwhile, Back in the sky...
Lao: *clutching onto supersonic plaine* Jake! I'll slow it down! Get it in flames!
Jake: No problem yo! I'll just-OOOFF!!!
Jake was hit head on by the plaine and he cluthed onto the windsheild.
Jake: Nnngggg!!! *Sets plaine on fire*
The plaine crashes.
Lao: Young one! Down there!
Jake: On it gramps!
Meanwhile, at the mysterious shrine...
Chase: Might as well take this rod. I could probably sell it for about 10000000 Yen.
Chase grabs the rod and silver lightning strikes both the rod and Chase.
Chase: GAAAAAAAAAAHH!!! H-he-lp m-me-e!!!
Back to Jake and Lao.
Lao and Jake finally land. The scroll is now flashing incredibly fast and Lao signals for Jake to follow.
Lao: In here.
Lao dives into the nonexisting lake and Jake tails close behind.
Lao: Look!
Jake: Omigosh!!!... Wait what the heck's going on?
Chase: *very weak* Hel-p-p mee--e...*faints*
Finally, the lightning stops. Lao grabs Chase and all three of them leave to go back home.
End scene 2
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Post by chetchaka on Sept 3, 2005 9:29:12 GMT -5
Scene 3-Location-three days after last scene, right after Jake's school gets out
Trixie: So, yo sayin' that your G' just adopted some black-haired boy?
Jake: Yeah, I dont get it. It's like he's a special case or somthing.
Spud: So maybe he's a dragon too? Or a shapeshifter...or maybe he's the huntsman in disguise. Yeah that's right! He's-
Trixie: Stop taking guesses Spudstuh yo hurtin' my head with all that! Jakie, couldn't we just go by yo gramp's place and see what he is?
Jake: Good idea.
Spud: -or maybe the huntsg-
Trixie: Spud you gotta shut that down!
End scene 3
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Post by darkness on Sept 3, 2005 9:59:53 GMT -5
hey, not bad
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Post by chetchaka on Sept 3, 2005 10:01:34 GMT -5
Alot of people could do better but i'm trying. I wonder what would happen if someone submitted a fanfic to disney...
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Post by stranger on Sept 3, 2005 10:09:17 GMT -5
ya, not bad, pls continue
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Post by dragonfire on Sept 3, 2005 10:16:44 GMT -5
more more more!
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Post by chetchaka on Sept 3, 2005 10:52:23 GMT -5
Scene 4-Location-Lao's Shop
*Jake Spud and Trixie walk through door*
Jake: Yo, G'! I'm home! *uncomfortable silence*What's going on?
Lao: I'm upstairs.
Jake: *to himself* Huh? G never goes upstairs these days...
Trixie: Are we goin' upstairs or not?
Jake: *stammering* Uh-sure!
The trio head upstairs and see Lao next to Chase who just woke up from his three day nap.
Spud: Dude, that's some really wierd colored hai-
Both Trixie and Jake clap thier hands over Spud's mouth before he could finish but Chase knew how Spud would finish.
Chase: Uuuhh...Isn't my hair black?
Trixie: I think you need a mirror to check that.
Chase: *looks at the nearest reflective object* MY HAIR'S WHITE AND BLUE!?! I NEVER DYED MY HAIR!!!
Lao: Apparently, it's natural.
Chase: *Winces* And, by the way, who are you people and where am I?
Jake: That's my gramps and these are my pals Spud and Trixie. And you're in the NYC.
Chase: NYC? Huh?
Trixie: Uugghh...NYC equals New York City.
Chase: What? Last time I was awake I was somewhere in Russia...or at least I think.
Lao: It's a long story. Right now you should get settled in.
Chase: You're letting me stay?
Lao: Yes.
Chase: Thank you so much! Anyway, my name is Chase. Nice meeting you all.
Spud: Same here bro. Five me!
Chase: Uuuh...uuuumm...
Jake: I don't think he knows what that is Spud. *to Chase* We're gonna go to the skate park. You comin'?
Chase: Yeah, sure I guess.
Trixie: Follow us then.
End scene 4
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Post by chetchaka on Sept 3, 2005 15:44:39 GMT -5
Scene 5-Location-The Skate Park
Jake: Well Chase, skateboarding's sorda like um well uuh...y'know...oh I'll just show you.
Jake does his best and shows Chase the basics.
Chase: Cool. Mind if I try?
Jake: Knock yourself out.
Chase: ...
Jake: Just take the skateboard and skate already.
Chase: Oh. Right then.
Chase takes the skateboard and gets ready to try an ollie.
Trixie: Jakie, are you sure he won't just fall and hurt himself?
Jake: No.
Chase suddenly ollies 8 feet in the air from flat ground and has a perfect landing.
Trixie and Jake: *Jaws drop* How did he do that?!...Jinx you owe me a soda!
Spud: Sweet man! He's like, the best skateboarder in the world or somthing!
Trixie: He's headed for that really big half-pipe!
Jake Spud and Trixie: *gasp*! He'll never make it!...Jinx you owe me a soda!
Chase launches about 50 feet into the air and does five 360's and perfectly lands again! Chase jumps off the skate board.
Chase: So, how'd I do?
Jake: You were awsome man!
Trixie: Did you see yourself? You went sky-high and you landed perfectly!
Spud: Awsome dude! Five me!
Trixie Jake and Chase: ...Jinx you owe-
Chase: Wait, huh?
Trixie: Oh nevermind that! Anyways, I gotta run Jakie! See ya'!
Spud: Trixie wait up!
Jake: Let's go home. It's getting late.
End scene 5
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Post by chetchaka on Sept 3, 2005 17:21:42 GMT -5
Scene 6-at night, in Lao's shop The sound of a crashing window awoke Chase that night. It came from Jake's house. Chase: Burgalurs? Murderer? Chase put on a black cloak to protect his identity from the mysterious thing that entered Jake's house. He also grabbed a wooden bo staff and then ran outside just in time to see Haley being dragged in a net by a girl in a ninja suit. Chase: What are you doing with here? : It's none of your buisness. If you just go back where you came from, I'll let you go quietly. Otherwise, I have no choice but to destroy you. Chase: Not without the girl. : Fine, but try not to get too dead. Chase: Bring it! : AAYYAAHH!!! The ninja girl aimed a windmill kick at Chase's neck, but Chase quickly pulled out the bo staff and blocked the incoming hit. The fight raged on and became louder and louder until Jake was able to hear it from his room. Jake: *drowsy* Huh?.. The sounds continued to grow louder but Jake still couldn't tell what they were. Jake: Ear of the dragon. Jake heard everything and then there was one last loud, smack and then a voice. : Hah. You never had a chance. Now here's your final warning. If you go back to where you came from now, I'll pretend like this never happened and let you go. Chase: Nev-ver-r... Jake: *under his breath* Chase! : Alright then. get ready to die- Jake: Rose? Huntsgirl: We meet again dragon. But this time, things are different. Even though you were my freind before, I still thought about killing you. So here I am. I'm back. Jake: But why? Huntsgirl: That doesn't matter. If you want this girl to live, then you will let me kill you. Either that or the girl dies! Jake: No...Fine. Kill me. Chase: No!!! Chase hits Huntsgirl as hard as he can with the bo staff, but since he was weak, all he did was injure Huntsgirl's chest. Hunstgirl: Uuuugghh...Another day, Dragon. The hunstgirl grabs her weapon and dissapears in a green ball. Chase falls unconcious and the hood falls off and Haley is still asleep. Jake hauls both of them over his shoulders and puts them in their beds. End scene 6
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Post by chetchaka on Sept 3, 2005 21:11:11 GMT -5
Scene 7-Location-Lao's house 4 days after last scene
Chase is going downstairs for breakfast when he hears an unfamiliar voice in the front room. He goes in the living room to see Fu dog talking on a cell phone!
Chase: Fu?
Fu: Uh, I gotta go. ttyl. *to Chase* Look, kid, it's not what you think. You're just uuh, dreaming!
Chase: I think I'm able to tell when I'm dreaming Fu.
Chase takes a seat and waits for Lao to enter.
Lao:*enters the room*Good morning Chase.
Chase: You DO know your dog can talk, right?
Lao: *nervously* Oh-hoho, nonsense! Oh the mind of the young is, like...
Lao knew he wasn't fooling Chase.
Lao: You must understand. Magical beings must be kept secret from humans.
Chase: Who here is "magical"?
Lao: I am.
Chase: What?
Lao transforms into a dragon and Chase promptly falls out of his chair in surprise.
Lao: And you too are a dragon young one.
Chase: What?
Fu: I'll explain it to him gramps. *to chase*Look, every 100 years a legendary and super powerful dragon is born but at first can't control his or her powers. After touching the rod of Eclipse, you gain full control over your powers which you have already done. So in other words, you are one of the most powerful things on the planet, and now you've gotta start training to protect it. You are the Eclipse Dragon. Man, that was a mouthful.
Chase couldn't believe his ears.
Chase: *thinking*What!?! The most powerful thing on earth? Unable to control my power..what is this world coming to?
Finally, all of the words said by Fu and Lao made sense and he realized something very, very disturbing. He might have destroyed his own town without knowing! However, Chase let the fact slip from his mind and started talking about dragon training.
Chase: So, after my first week of training is complete, I have to go to some place called Dragon Summit to see what I have learned?
Lao: Before you start your training though, you must go to Dragon summit and be examined and tested for what kind of dragon you are and what your starting abilities are.
Jake: *walks in* Yo, Chase. Wanna go skating again?
Chase: I know what I really am now.
Jake: What are you talking about?
Chase: I'm the Eclipse Dragon.
Jake: I guess you finally found out huh?
Chase: Yeah. Maybe being a dragon will be fun.
Jake: Not really as fun as you think. I'm also a dragon.
Chase: You are?
Jake: Yeah. The American Dragon, Jake Long!
Chase: So, when do we go to Dragon Summit?
Lao: About now.
End scene 7
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