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Post by meninwhite on Sept 4, 2005 13:41:34 GMT -5
Pretty good.Keep going
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Post by chetchaka on Sept 5, 2005 8:56:16 GMT -5
Scene 7-8-walking down stairs to the elevator in the subway
Chase: So, why were you keeping this stuff secret from me?
Fu: We thought you would freak out so we tried to keep it a secret for about a week. You found out a bit early though, but you didn't freak out as much as we thought you would so everything's good.
Chase: So, how do we get to Dragon Summit?
Jake: We take the elevator.
Chase: An elevator?
Jake: Well, an ele-
Chase:No, I know what they are, but how are we gonna get to Dragon Summit through an elevator when it's on the other side of the world?
Jake: Beleive me, it's a fast ride. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Scene 8-Location-on the elevator to the summit
Lao: Well, here it is.
Fu: I'll do the combo! *wrong combo* Uuuhh, my finger slipped. *Wrong combo again*
Fu messes up about fifteen times.
Fu: *Nervously* Ehehe!
Lao: *sigh* I'll do it. *correct combo*
Goblin: Welcome. Please hold onto the rail as the ride will begin shortly.
Chase: Huh? Why hold on to the rail?
Jake: Just do it.
The elevator starts.
Chase and Jake: AAAAAHH-Jinx you owe me a soda-AAAAAAAAHHH!!!
The elevator finally stops and both Jake and Chase stumble out the door to see Dragon Summit.
End scene 8
End Chapter 1: The Eclipse Dragon.
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Post by chetchaka on Sept 8, 2005 19:41:19 GMT -5
Alright, here it is. Chapter 2: The Best There Ever Was!
Scene 1-Location-Dragon Summit
Chase: Wow...this place is way bigger than I thought it would be.
Chase started to walk around a bit.
Fu: Remember kid! Try to make a good first im-
Chase then accidentally steps on a tail. Fred Nerk's tail.
Nerk: YOOOWWCH!!! *rubs tail* Hey, you! Watch where you're stepping!
Fu: ...Impression...
Chase: *quickly* Sorry!
Nerk: Oh, you're gonna be sorry, mate. *cracks knuckles*
Nerk starts to approach Chase when Jake steps in the way.
Jake: Hey, take it easy yo! He's new here!
Nerk: Hmph. I'm only backing off because you saved me, but if you get in my way next time, both of you are going down.
Chase: *slightly shaken* Wh-who was that? And why did he stop when you came in?
Fu: That's the australien dragon, Fred Nerk. And Jake saved his carcass from being taken by the Dark Dragon.
Chase: *sneers with pleasure* Oh. That's why. But who's the Dark Dragon?
Lao: The Dark Dragon is the greatest threat ever to try and destroy the magical community and Jake's brother.
Chase: What!?! Jake?
Jake: It's a confusing story, but I'll tell you later.
Fu: But Lao here stopped him the fist time, and before Fred got kidnapped, he was the only one to survive an attack from the Dark Dragon AND drove him away for forty years.
Chase: Whoa. Are you the best dragon ever or something?
Lao: Actually, no.
Chase: *impatient* Then who is?
Lao: Hero, the Aerian Dragon.
The group continues to talk as they enter the main building.
End scene 1
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Post by chetchaka on Sept 9, 2005 18:17:00 GMT -5
Oh, something I forgot to mention. The fight between Huntsgirl and Chase happens right after the episode, The Hunted. Sorry if you're confused.
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Post by chetchaka on Sept 18, 2005 9:56:49 GMT -5
Scene 2-Location-inside the Main Counciler building.
Chase: Hero's pretty good at this stuff, huh?
Fu: You bet kid! The best of the best, and not even an adult yet! Agoogoo!
Chase: I guess we can expect a lot more from him in the future, then?
Lao: Indeed. However, he is currently a dragon master like myself. No one yet has ever been skilled enough to have him as a dragon master though, so you may be the first one.
Chase: Well, according to what you just told me, probably not.
Jake: Yeah, I really want him as a dragon master-*suddenly nervous*Uh, except that...uh, you're way better G'! Um...yeah! No one can beat the, uh...used-to-be mack-daddy dragon 'cause he in da' heezy!...
A sweatdrop trickled down Jake's face. Fu dog just rolled his eyes. After a few more minutes of walking, the group finally reached the Dragon Council.
Counciler Andam: Welcome, Lao, Jake. And who is that boy?
Andam aimed his sight straight at Chase.
Chase: It's Chase, sir. Nice to meet you.
Counciler Kulde: And what kind of dragon are you?
Lao: We believe he is the Eclipse Dragon.
Counciler Omina: Ah, the Eclipse Dragon. So long it has been since I've seen one. So, do you mind transforming to show us what you look like?
Chase: Sure, it's just that, um...I don't know how yet.
Jake: Like this. *cracks knuckles* Dragon up yo!
Jake transforms into his dragon state.
Jake: Now you try.
Chase: Alright. Dragon...UP!!!
Suddenly, great white lights emerged from within Chase and everyone covered their eyes.
Counciler Andam: *thinking* This is nothing short of a miracle. All of the Eclipse Dragons of the past were strong, but this is absolutely amazing. The boy is surging with power.
The bright lights stop and Chase has only one wing out and nothing else.
Chase: Did I do it?
Jake: Uh...not exactly.
Chase: Okay...I'm gonna try this one more time. Draaaaagoooon uuuuUUUP!!!
Lights flashed rapidly and the air started to stir. Chase was now completely eneveloped in a sort of golden light that made his body invisible. About ten seconds later, the flashing lights slowed and the winds stopped altogether. Chase became visible again-as a full dragon! He had blue, spiky hair reaching down his neck. His scales were silver with a slight gold tint. He had a yellow underbelly and black claws. He also had a strange, glowing, circular mark on his forehead.
Chase: Now?
Jake: You did it! You're full dragon yo!
Chase said nothing and stared down at his claws, stirred in his own thoughts.
Lao: Chase? Is something wrong?
Chase: *stammering* Uh, no.
Andam: Now, you will take a test that will decide who you qualify for in dragon training.
Omina: Wisdom in battle is the only test you'll take for now. When you come the second time, there will be three tests. But on with this one.
The Dragon Council showed Chase to the ring and the rest of the group to take a seat. Soon, there is a full audience waiting for the fight. Out of the corner of Chase's eye, he spotted a white dragon carrying a sword, but he quickly forgot as the match was about to begin.
Announce: Welcome, Dragons, Dragonesses and animal guardians! Welcome to see the new Eclipse Dragon fight in a battle of...well, wisdom of course! Release the brownies!
A huge stone door was opened. But instead of brownies, a beat-up dragon robot stood there twitching every few seconds. Murmurs started to come from the crowd.
Chase: Hey, this thing’s a piece of trash! I bet it can’t even move!
Chase goes up to the robot and starts to poke it. Suddenly, the robot grabbed Chase by his scaly neck and the crowd gasped.
Robot: Oh, don’t worry. I wouldn’t want to disappoint you like that.
End scene 2
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Post by blinx on Sept 25, 2005 17:29:32 GMT -5
Please more please more!
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Post by chetchaka on Oct 8, 2005 17:21:11 GMT -5
Scene 3-Location-The "Wisdom in battle" arena Chase tried to break free, but the robot's grip was just to tight! Chase started to gag a little. The robot then threw a punch into Chase's stomach and Chase spit up a mound of blood. Chase: GAAAAH!!! JAKE!!! Jake and Lao then jumped into the arena to fight the robot. Everyone in the audience, as well as the dragon council watched in horror as the robot slowly destroyed Jake, Lao and Chase. Lao then wrapped his snake-like body around the cold, oily robot and started to squeeze. The robot promptly dropped Chase while Jake got ready to throw a hard punch to the robot's head. The robot suddenly opened it's mouth and shot a quick blast at Jake. The dragon robot then managed to free it's hand from Lao's grasp and sent the back of his fist flying into his chin. Lao: YOOOWW!!! Robot: That was pathetic. You actually thought you could beat me, didn't you? Lao was kneeling on the ground, rubbing his chin. He took his hand off to see his chin was out of place and was bleeding heavily. Jake looked at the injury blankly, and then shouted. Jake: YO!!! YOU CAN'T DO THAT TO MY G'!!! The robot chuckled a bit. Robot: And why not? Jake: BECAUSE I SAID SO!!! Jake leaped at the robot at full speed. The robot gave a swift chop to Jake's head and he fell unconcious. The white dragon Chase noticed earlier jumped from the crowd and sliced the robot in half. Chase: Uh...thanks. What's your name? : The name's Hero. It's n- Hero quickly turned around to see the robot's two halfs form together again. Robot: Please. You didn't HONESTLY think I'd die that easily, did you? Because you know you can't defeat me. Chase: SHUT UP!!! Chase threw his hardest punch at the robot. The dragon robot underestimated the power of this punch and foolishly let Chase hit him. The punch was so hard that the metal that was once the robot was now liquid! Hero: So, I see that you are the Eclipse Dragon? Chase: Well yeah, I guess... Andam then came down to the arena where Chase and Hero were. Andam: That was a spectacular performance! And your freinds are getting their necassary treatment as we speak. They should be up in two hours. Chase: Good. Thank you for taking care of them. Andam: No need to thank me. Meanwhile, you should get some rest yourself, young dragon. Chase: That would be good. End scene 3
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Post by mithos on Oct 8, 2005 17:25:00 GMT -5
Nice! Go Hero! Go Chase Go robot... nevermind the robot's evil.
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Post by blinx on Oct 9, 2005 22:53:58 GMT -5
Write more PLEASE
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Post by chetchaka on Oct 16, 2005 0:47:14 GMT -5
Scene 4-Location-Just outside of Main Counciler Building, Dragon Summit, 3 hours after last scene
Jake and Lao had been completely treated of their wounds, and were standing next to Chase and Hero.
Counciler Kulde: Ah, young dragon. You have proven yourself a worthy warrior.
Counciler Andam: You may now choose your dragon master, and you qualify for Hero.
Chase walked up to Hero.
Chase: Okay then, I'm with-
Chase stopped and looked back at Lao, Fu and Jake. Now, he had to make what could possibly be the hardest descision in his life; Who should be his dragon master?
Jake, Fu, Lao and Hero waited for an answer. After what seemed like hours, Chase finally came to a descision.
Chase: I'm staying with Lao.
Everyone looked surprised, and especially Jake. Why had Chase not chosen Hero to be his dragon master?
Chase: Yeah, being trained by the best would be an honor for me and all, but more important than everything else, what I desire above all...
Chase paused for effect, and then continued.
Chase: ...is a family.
There were tears in Lao and Fu's eyes. Jake only stared at Chase and smiled. Hero put a hand on Chase's shoulder.
Hero: You were very wise in your descision, and we are all proud of you for that. You based your descision not on popularity and fame, but on the fact that what you wanted most was a family to be with. And that, my friend is why we are all proud.
Chase: Thank you, Hero.
Chase started to walk toward the direction of the magical elevator and looked back at Hero and the dragon council, standing valiantly in front of a beautiful sunset.
Chase: Thank you all.
Chase, Jake, Lao and Fu stepped into the elevator and activated it.
End scene 4
End Chapter 2: The Best There Ever Was.
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Post by mithos on Oct 16, 2005 14:45:29 GMT -5
YEAH! keep going, it's awesome!
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Post by chetchaka on Oct 16, 2005 14:47:43 GMT -5
Thanx a bunch Hero! I'll have chapter 3 up as soon as I can!
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Post by mithos on Oct 16, 2005 14:50:15 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by chetchaka on Oct 21, 2005 16:33:53 GMT -5
After nearly a month of reasearch, I've finally invented something that will become apparent in a few hours; an update to this fanfic! *audience laughs*
Chapter 3: Running Away?
Scene 1-Location-Early in the morning, just outside Lao's Shop
Chase and Lao were walking over to Jake's house to wake him and prepare him for dragon training. When Jake's house came into view, Lao looked at Chase.
Lao: Do you still remember how to transform?
Chase: Yeah, just like Jake showed me!
At that moment, David Long A.K.A Jake's dad, came out of the house--just intime to see Chase transform! Chase then spotted David.
Chase: Uh...It's not what it looks-
David quickly ran inside slammed the door and bolted it. Jake then came downstairs.
Jake: Waz with all the noise?
David: Your friend is-is a m-monster! Stay away from him! I forbid you to go with him anywhere!
Jake: Whoa, whoa! Slow down!
David: Your friend Chase just turned into some monster thing! He looks sort of like a lizard...
There was then a knock at the door. David pushed Jake under a table.
David: Hide here!
David unbolted the door and opened it to reveal Chase in human form and Lao standing there.
Lao: We've come to-
David: You may, but Chase may certainly NOT come in!
Lao: Look, David...we must talk. Chase, you come in.
David opened his mouth as if he were going to object but no sound came out. The two walked inside and Jake came out from under the table.
Chase: Um...why were you under the table?
Jake: My dad pushed me under there.
Lao: Now...David. I know that you are scared of Jake getting hurt, but there is no need.
David: Actually, I should be worrying, because Chase is some lizard thing!
Lao: No, you shouldn't because...
Lao paused as if to decide whether or not he wanted to tell David anything, and he then spoke again.
Lao: ...Jake is the same thing Chase is. A dragon, to be exact.
David was stunned. Then, he spoke again.
David: I need proof.
Jake: I'm sorry about this dad...
Jake then transformed, and David fainted. __________________________________ 9 hours later(8:00 to be exact)... __________________________________
David finally awoke to see Jake in dragon form and hovering above him. Lao had left and Chase was sitting on a couch.
David: Jake, transform back. We need to talk. Chase, I suggest you leave the room until Jake and I are done talking.
Chase went upstairs and listened secretly to the conversation with his dragon ear.
David: Look, I know that both of you are dragons...but I don't feel that you're safe around Chase. I-I want you to avoid him...at least enogh so that he doesn't know anything about this and you still keep your distance. Okay?
Jake: No dad. He's my friend. And dragons aren't evil. They've been protecting you for as long as you've been alive.
David's voice became loud and clear above everything else.
David: Jake, I will not have you hanging around with some weird haired, flea infested, rat attracting, under educated boy! Who knows where He's been or what he's done anyway? He could be a wanted criminal for all we know!
Chase was shocked. And then, he curled up against the wall and began to cry. Then, his sorrow turned to anger...
End scene 1
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Post by drag00n on Oct 21, 2005 16:51:06 GMT -5
cool i cant wait for the next chapter^^
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