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Post by chetchaka on Oct 21, 2005 17:09:31 GMT -5
Scene 2-Location- Jake's house Chase was furious. He marched downstairs and grabbed a coat. Jake: What are you doing? Chase: I'm running away. What else would I be doing? Jake's heart sank, and his stomach tied in knots. Jake: No-wait, you can't leave! You can't leave just because my father doesn't like you, I mean, come on! Chase: Good bye, and good night! Jake: Wait, Chase- Chase: I SAID GOOD NIGHT!!! Chase slammed the door on his way out and ran away with tears in his eyes. Jake ran over to Lao's shop. Jake: Gramps! Chase just ran away! Lao: Aiiiya! He did!?! Jake: Yeah, please, you gotta help me find him! Lao: Don't worry, we will find him, wherever he may be right now! Jake and Lao transformed and flew different directions into the dark night. Jake flew into an alley and transformed back when he heard a shrill voice. : Do you need something? Jake gulped and responded. Jake: Uh, yeah...y' see, my friend ran away and I'm trying to find him. He's got blue and white hair, just so you know. Did you see him? Suddenly, two Huntsthugs appeared behind Jake and took his hands. : No, but one thing I do know is that you are going to die, American Dragon! Jake: Whoa there, you think you can just come up behind the Am' Drag' like that!?! Jake transformed and got out of the grasp of the thugs, but was then knocked out. When the thugs moved in for a finishing blow, a person in a whit cloak came down and started fighting the thugs. He took the first one out with a swift kick to the head and the second one with a karate chop to the back of the neck. He picked up the unconsious Jake and ran back to Lao's shop. End scene 2
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Post by drag00n on Oct 21, 2005 17:18:27 GMT -5
plz contiue^^ ;D
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Post by mithos on Oct 21, 2005 17:48:10 GMT -5
I agree! I'm lovin it! Ba ba ba ba ba-----a!
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Post by chetchaka on Nov 10, 2005 10:03:28 GMT -5
Scene 3-Location-Upstairs in Lao’s Shop : Jake? Jake...please wake up...come on, don’t be dead!!! Jake!?! Jake slowly opened his red, dragon eyes to see a cloaked figure. Jake: Who are you, an’ why you be messin’ wit’ da’ Am Drag? : Jake, it’s me, Chase! Chase removed his hood to reveal his face. His eyes looked swollen as though he were about to cry. Jake: Chase? What’s wrong? Chase: I-I thought you were dead. Look, I promise not to run away like that ever again, I just was really mad. And you were right, I shouldn’t have left just because of what one person thinks of me. Jake: Well, it’s okay now. Anyway, it’s late and we should both be in bed. Chase: Right. Sorry if I worried you. Good night. Jake: Right back at ya’ Chase. Jake left his grandpa’s shop and returned home to get some much needed rest. End scene 3 End Chapter 3: Running Away?
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Post by chetchaka on Nov 10, 2005 11:37:33 GMT -5
Chapter 4: Dealing With Huntsclan
Scene 1-Location-Lao’s Shop, next day
Chase was waiting for Jake to arrive from school. Finally, he heard the door open; it was Jake.
Chase: Jake, what took you so long? Normally you’re here by 4:50 at the most.
Jake: I had a little trouble with the Huntsclan.
Chase: Huntsclan?
Jake said nothing and went to the kitchen.
Chase: Uh, Lao? What’s the Huntsclan?
Lao: The Huntsclan is basically a team of evil hunters who kill magical creatures for fun and sometimes to sell their skins.
Chase: What? That’s horrible!
Lao: I know, but it cannot be denied.
Chase: And why does Jake look so sad?
Lao hesitated to answer, and then spoke.
Lao: Well, Jake once liked a girl in the Huntsclan. But he did not know that this girl was actually Huntsgirl, and when he found out, he was heartbroken. A few weeks later the Huntsgirl found out about Jake’s secret identity as the American Dragon, and ran away. She was relocated and sent to a different school, but she is apparently back.
Chase: Probably because they have some kind of “master plan” or something along those lines.
Chase suddenly had a worried look on his face.
Chase: Y-you don’t think they know where we live, do you?
Lao: I am positive they don’t. Anyway, dragon training starts now.
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Chase was wondering what the Huntsclan could possibly be planning, and doing so he could not get any sleep. He just sat there, watching the ceiling.
Chase *thinking*: What could the Huntsclan be up to?
End scene 1
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Post by chetchaka on Dec 23, 2005 4:47:49 GMT -5
Scene 2-Location-next morning, Draco Isle (aka The place where the dragon council is)
Chase was miserable. He kept on thinking about his parents, and he didn't know why. He couldn't stop to think about anything else. Why he wasn't miserable about them before was a mystery to him.
Chase *thinking*: Why do I miss them anyway? They abused me, treated me like a slave-
Lao: Chase? We are inside the Counciler building...is something wrong?
Chase: Uh, no, I'm fine.
Jake: It sure doesn't seem like you're fine. You've been in a fog all mornin'.
Chase: I-I'm just tired. I'll feel better in a few minutes.
Fu: Whatever you say kid. Hey, Lao, do you still have that soda?
Lao: What soda?
Fu: What? You didn't bring a soda!?
Lao: You never told me to bring a soda-
Counciler Kulde: Ahem.
Lao: -Uh, Sir!
Counciler Chang: It is time for your tests, Eclipse Dragon.
Jake was shocked that Chang was released from prison.
Jake: Wha? Chang? Yo, that is whack! You went to jail just five weeks ago! How'd you-
Chang: It is not of your concern, young dragon. Now, Eclipse Dragon, you must take these three tests, and you must pass at least two unless you want to be asigned to a new dragon master, so I suggest you listen closely. The first test is Judgement in Fire, which is fairly a self explanitory name for the task. You must simply hit targets that represent enemies, and the targets that are not enemies should not be hit, of course. Should you hit three friends, you will fail the task. The second task is Wisdom in Battle. You already know about this one. The last task is (I forget what it is called, it's the one where two dragons race against each other). In this task you must race off against another dragon. Which dragon you race is completely up to you. To pass this test, you must fly through more rings than your opponent AND finish. You may go through the rings using any means possible, even if it requires pushing and shoving.
Chang sipped her remaining tea from a century old cup and then spoke again.
Chang: You may now progress to the first task. It is located in a cabin just outside this building.
Chase: Alright then. Dragon up!
After the transformation, the group walked out of the building and Nerk walked up to Chase.
Nerk: Hey mate. I heard you're finally doin' your tasks.
Chase: Yes. Yes I am.
Nerk: Well, good luck to ya' mate. You'll need it.
Nerk put some pepper on Chase's snout when he began to walk away. When Chase entered the cabin, the first enemy immediately popped up. However, when Chase reared his head to breathe fire, some of the pepper on his snout got into his nostrils!
Chase: Wha? What was-achoo!!!
Chase started sneezing uncontrollably! Eventually, he had blown up three cardboard friends and he had failed the task.
Jake: What went on back there, yo? You were all like, "Whoa, wa woah puchupuchu"!
Chase: I sneezed.
Jake: Just like I did?
Chase: The same thing happened to you?
Jake: Yeah, I had some pepper I was gonna use to prank Nerk because he made me look like a total fool, and-
Chase: Wait...Nerk must've done something!
Nerk: You got that right, mate! I put that pepper on your nose!
Chase: Unbalivable, me not being able to notice such a thing.
Kulde: Eclipse Dragon, it is time for your second task. Come.
Chase followed Kulde, and Jake, Lao, and Fu all walked into the stands.
End scene 2
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Post by chetchaka on Jan 13, 2006 23:25:59 GMT -5
Scene 3-Location-Insinde the wisdom in battle arena
Announcer: Who's ready to see the world's most powerful dragon? I know I am. Anyway, the Eclipse Dragon today will fight a giant troll! And he...hm, let's see, a bunch of useless note cards...ah, the heck with it! Open the door and let the match BEGIN!!!
A huge stone door in front of Chase opened, revealing the troll. Chase transformed, flew upwards and rammed into the beast's stomach. The troll fell backwards, got up, and hit Chase with a swing from his huge club. Blood was dripping below Chase's eyes, nose and mouth, but he was still ready, until everything turned black. Chase couldn't move! However, everything to the audience seemed normal. They didn't see any blackness, but instead watched Chase as the troll got ready to pound him into the ground. Chase could only move his mouth, but not speak. He tried calling out for help, but his voice wouldn't even crack. Then, his eyes turned blank, and he could move again. However, he could not control his body! His mouth opened and shot a pitch black energy beam toward the troll's head. When the beam dissapeared, the troll's head was no longer there! In fact, it was not even on the ground.
Jake: What just happened? Where's the troll's head? This is whack!
Lao stared in suprise at the sight of the headless troll.
Lao *thinking*: Is this the true power of the Eclipse Dragon?
Meanwhile, Counciler Omina flew down to the spot where Chase was and wiped the blood off his face.
Omina: What were you thinking? You were not supposed to kill the giant!
Chase: I...wha?...I feel...ugh...
Even though the injuries were nothing to the Eclipse Dragon, he still fainted. Hours later, he woke up in the magical hospital. Chase opened his eyes to see a crowd of people around him.
Kulde: Now, all of you, back outside, he needs some room.
The crowd began to walk out the door when Kulde's voice boomed again.
Kulde: Except you two, Lao Shi and Jake.
Fu: Does this mean I gotta stay to?
Kulde, Jake and Lao: Yes.
Fu: Darn. Just when I was gonna get some soda.
All three stepped into the room.
Kulde: Ask him what happened out there. And to remind you, he did pass the test, but barely.
Kulde stepped outside the room and shut the door.
End scene 3
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Post by coolgirlc on Jan 14, 2006 15:48:49 GMT -5
cool story! !
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Post by chetchaka on Jan 17, 2006 19:32:41 GMT -5
Thanx, more coming soon!
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Post by saphiredragon89 on Feb 6, 2006 21:14:09 GMT -5
Man I love this story, even more than mine, hehe
I can't wait for the next chapter
and be sure to read mine ;D
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Post by chetchaka on Feb 6, 2006 21:16:42 GMT -5
I wiiiiilll!!! First comment in a while!
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Post by sadguy on Mar 9, 2006 18:27:22 GMT -5
This is PenDragon in disguise. My parents kinds knocked me off, but i'm back and more deppressed than ever! \
My ghost: Oh. Yeah. That's why you typed an exclama-*shot*
Scene 4-Location-In Magical Hospital
Chase woke up to find himself in a hospital.
Chase: W...what happened?
Chase wheezed a bit.
Jake: Whoa, dude, are you okay? And what happened back there?
Chase paused, coughed a few times and then answered.
Chase: I... I don't know... I-I was just fighting the troll an-and then I was enveloped in darkness...I couldn't breathe, I couldn't see, I couldn't move, I couldn't do anything. When I was able to move again, I was not in control and just before I fainted, I heard some words that I couldn't make out.
Lao already knew what was happening.
Lao: Chase...
Chase: Yes?
Lao: The reason you fainted was because...well, ten-thousand years ago, the first Eclipse Dragon was born. That was around the time that a dragon called Hydra existed, and that dragon had nine heads, and would rip apart everything and anything in his direct path. No one knew what his motivations were, but one thing is certain; the first Eclipse Dragon defeated Hydra, but for some reason, Hydra could not be killed. For this reason, the first Eclipse Dragon cursed Hydra to forever be within an Eclipse Dragon's spirit, and whenever an Eclipse Dragon had a child, Hydra would be passed down to the next generation. And here is the curse's one fault: the seal weakens over time, and if Hydra is not passed down quick enough, the seal will start to break, making the holder have nightmares and when the seal is nearly broken, Hydra might be able to take over the body in which it is being held. And finally when the seal brakes, Hydra will be released, and he will cause destruction once again. And it seems the seal is almost broken, and it could take from a few days to a year to break at this point. It seems we are out of hope already.
Chase was completely speechless. He couldn't think of anything besides how billions of people would suffer under the hands of Hydra.
Jake: Um...G? Why didn't you tell me?
Lao: Loose lips sink ships.
Chase: And this one has sunk already.
Fu: Chase?
Chase did not respond.
Chase: Let's go.
End scene 4
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Post by saphiredragon89 on Mar 9, 2006 18:31:38 GMT -5
Sorry that you're depressed, but this is a great chapter and I'm glad that you're back, I love this story so much ;D
Hope that you feel better and keep on writing. it may take your mind off what's got you down.
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Post by sadguy on Jun 16, 2006 0:22:03 GMT -5
Lol, I was only kidding. XD And I made a mistake in the last chapter, making Chase say "Let's go home" without him going through the third task. Fixed now. I'm also getting around to updating the story after sooooooooooo long, and with such a huge case of writer's block!
Chapter 5-Location-Courage in Flight Arena
Fu: Alright kid, this is where you show the Council everything you've got, so if you hold back, CURSE BE YOU!!!
Fu recieved stares from everyone.
Fu: Sorry, always wanted to say that. Agoogoo!
Lao: Now Chase, you must choose an opponent and race to the finish. You already know the rules.
Chase: I choose...
A small, cadet blue dragon in the back of the crowd rose his hand and waved it.
Dragon: Pick me!!! PICK ME!!!!!!
Chase: Hmm......uuummmmm...Nerk!
Dragon: Awwwww...
Nerk walked up to Chase.
Nerk: Just like Jake, eh? In that case, I'll see you at the finish line, mate!
Chase: I would like to see you try and get ahead.
Nerk: Please! Have you ever even flown before? You're gonna make me bust a gut, mate!
Chase: Bust this.
Chase pushed nerk out of the way and transformed.
Nerk: Oh, you're in for it now-
Announcer: On your mark...
Both Chase and Nerk scrambled to the starting line, tumbling over each other repeatedly on the way.
Announcer: Get set....GO!!!
Chase flew off, and so did Nerk...sort of. In Nerk's rage, he forgot to turn dragon!
Nerk: OH JESUS CHRIIIIIIIIIIII- (I don't know why, but sorry if you find using God's name in such a manner is offensive.)
A splash could be heard below. Chase flew solo the rest of the way. about an hour later, Nerk came by, absolutely soaked.
Chase: Oh, you showed me.
Chase laughed and walked away from a wet rival.
End Chapter 5
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Post by saphiredragon89 on Jun 23, 2006 11:05:33 GMT -5
Nice Chapter, I really missed this story! The Dragon Overlord commands you to write more! ;D
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