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Post by chetchaka on Oct 7, 2005 22:44:41 GMT -5
I really liked your ff's Magenta, so here's a fanfic of my own with your character as the main character!
Disclaimer: I do not own Magenta, which is Magenta's character. I own Timberwolf though (AKA TB.)
Prologue-Location-Lao's Shop
Lao (AKA Jake's Gramps): Jake and I will be out on dragon duties. You and Fu stay here and close the shop and lock the door if you go outside. Do you understand?
Magenta and Fu nodded and Jake and Lao went to the roof of the shop and transformed. They then flew off leaving Magenta and Fu to tend to the shop...which did not happen. Instead, Magenta transformed into a human, put Fu on a leash, flipped the sign to say "closed", opened the door, walked out and locked it. She then put the keys in her pocket.
End prologue
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Post by mithos on Oct 7, 2005 22:51:29 GMT -5
Great! Good job!
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Oct 7, 2005 22:57:04 GMT -5
It's going great so far. Update soon! ^______^
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Post by Chaos on Oct 7, 2005 23:14:14 GMT -5
Ooh! Sounds cool! I think it'll be great, please continue.
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Post by chetchaka on Oct 7, 2005 23:21:52 GMT -5
Chapter 1-Enter Timberwolf
Scene 1-Location-A few blocks from Lao's shop
Magenta and Fu stepped around the corner of a building and Magenta accidently collided with a boy about her age and they both fell to the ground.
Magenta: I-I'm sorry, I didn't-
Magenta looked at the boy's face and was stunned, temporaraly lovestruck.
Boy: It's okay. I should have watched where I was going.
Magenta *stammering*: So, um..what's your name?
Boy: The name's Timberwolf. But you can call me TB for short.
Magenta: Oh, that's um... a nice name. So I'll see you around?
TB: Sure. How about Saturday?
Magenta: Yeah, that'd be good. Same palce, same time?
TB: Sure. Bye for now.
TB walked away and Magenta just stared at him for as long as she could before he turned the corner. Magenta then gave a heave sigh.
Fu *whispering*: Magenta? What was that?
Magenta: Uh...
End scene 1
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Oct 7, 2005 23:43:33 GMT -5
Ah, a clifhanger. Well, kinda... Another great scene! I can't wait to see what Magenta tells Fu Dog and what will happen when TB and Genta meet again.. XP
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Post by chetchaka on Oct 8, 2005 9:55:35 GMT -5
Scene 2-Location-three hours after last scene, at Lao's Shop
Magenta and Fu had just gone back to the shop and Fu had many questions to ask. And by many I mean like three or four...
Fu: You know you're not REALLY a human right?
Magenta: Yeah, but he was just so...
Magenta sighed and became lost in her thoughts.
Fu: Magenta? Don't you still love me? Like me even?
Magenta: Y-yeah, I do still love you, I-I just...
Magenta searched her mind for an excuse. Nothing. Her mind had used up every excuse she could think of.
Fu: You just what?
Magenta: Um...I-I....
Fu put his paw on Magenta's shoulder.
Fu: Please, Magenta...please stay with me.
Magenta: I never said I was going to leave you in the first place!
Fu: Then what about that boy you met earlier!? It sure looks like you'd rather be with him than me!
Magenta was shocked at this remark. Why was Fu so angry with her? Did she do something wrong?
Fu: Well!?
Magenta was silent. She was near tears before Fu yelled again.
Fu: You know what, fine! If you're not gonna answer me I guess I'll just go to bed!
Magenta: But, Fu, please-
Fu was already in Lao's room and the door was locked. Magenta sniffed, and then began to cry.
Magenta *thinking*: What have I done?
End scene 2
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Post by magenta on Oct 8, 2005 10:23:38 GMT -5
Awwww! This is really good so far! Oh, poor 'Genta. Fu was so harsh! Anyways, continue soon, please. This is great! ;D
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Post by mithos on Oct 8, 2005 15:58:41 GMT -5
Continue! ;D
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Post by chetchaka on Oct 9, 2005 18:52:37 GMT -5
Scene 3-Location-The next day, Lao's Shop
Magenta had cried herself to sleep last night. She woke up miserable and went downstairs for breakfast. Fu Dog had also woken up and was feeling pretty bad about what he said to Magenta last night, but he still was thinking about giving an apology. Magenta entered Lao's room.
Magenta: Fuzie?
Fu: Go away.
Magenta: Please, Fu, I just wanted to-
Fu: I said go away!
Magenta: Fine! Be that way!
Fu: Okay then, I will!
Magenta: Uuggh!
Magenta wanted to talk to Fu badly but she knew when she was not wanted. She reluctantly slammed the door on her way out. She then remembered about Timberwolf. Suddenly, she decided that if Fu no longer liked her, she would just go with TB. She marched out the door in a rage and down the sidewalk.
Magenta *thinking*: Who needs Fu anyway? That stupid, mangy, good-for-nothing-
Magenta spots Timberwolf sitting on a bench and he looks up.
TB: Hey 'Genta.
Magenta: Oh, hi. So, um...what do you want to do?
TB: I don't know, maybe take a walk in the park and go to the movies I guess.
Magenta: That sounds great.
The two start to walk and talk about different things. They discussed which movies they wanted to watch, their favorite colors and a bunch of other stuff. By sunset, The two had already watched several movies at the local theatre. They then took a walk in the park. By nightfall, they were alone on a bench under an apple tree. Timberwolf grabbed an apple and handed it to Magenta and then took one for himself.
Magenta: Thanks TB.
TB: No...thank you, Magenta.
Magenta: For what?
TB: For being with me.
Timberwolf smiled sweetly at Magenta, and Magenta did the same. Magenta simply stared at the apple.
Magenta: It's getting late. I gotta go home.
TB: Yeah, I do too. If I don't get home in time for dinner, my mom will cream me.
Magenta giggled a bit. She couldn't help it. It just came naturally.
Magenta: So, should we get together next week? Friday?
TB: Yeah, that'd be good. Here's my phone number by the way.
Timberwolf handed Magenta his phone number.
TB: Well, see you later.
Timberwolf walked down the road. Magenta took one last look at him and then she sighed. Then, she reminded herself that she needed to get back to Lao's Shop, so she took off running.
End scene 3
End Chapter 1: Enter Timberwolf
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Post by magenta on Oct 9, 2005 19:14:06 GMT -5
This is great! I love it! ^_^ Please update again soon!
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Post by chetchaka on Oct 9, 2005 20:31:44 GMT -5
Thanx Magenta! Here's chapter 2: Jealous.
Scene 1-Location-Same night as last scene on the last chapter, Lao's Shop
Fu was staring out the window, wondering where Magenta had gone. He decided that he would suprise her in a few days with a gift, but wouldn't say sorry until then. He saw Magenta rushing from the sidewalk. She dissapeared from the veiw of the window. Fu got up and opened the door as Magenta walked in.
Magenta: I thought you didn't like me.
Fu: I'm just in a good mood tonight. You won't see me do that tommorow.
Magenta did not reply. Instead, she went upstairs to sleep and remember this day. ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ Jake and Lao arrived early that morning, dead tired. They both went into their houses and slumped into bed. In the meantime, Magenta decided that instead of waiting an entire week, she would call Timberwolf and...then she would tell Timberwolf her secret identity. There was no way TB could be part of Huntsclan since he never had to take off like Rose did with Jake. She reached for the phone, got out the peice of paper with Timberwolf's phone number and she dialed. At the same time, Fu was busy talking to one of his friends on the other of the house phones since his cell phone was out of batteries. He heard a voice on the other line.
Fu: I'll have to call you back. Someone's on the other line.
Fu's Friend: Okay then. Bye!
Fu's friend hung up and Fu could clearly hear the conversation between Magenta and some guy.
?: That's okay. I'm one too.
Magenta: Really!? That's great! I'll see you Friday night! Bye!
?: Bye!
Fu hung up and rushed upstairs and swung the door open.
Fu: Who were you talking to?
Magenta: Uh...m-my brother! Who else would I talk to?
Fu shot Magenta a suspicious look.
Fu: Are you sure that was your brother?
Magenta: Um-yeah! I'm sure!
Fu: Okay then...
Fu slowly left the room and Magenta went back to sleep.
End scene 1
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Post by blinx on Oct 9, 2005 23:00:33 GMT -5
Awesome need more or i'll... darn it haven't gotten that far yet.
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Post by magenta on Oct 9, 2005 23:42:18 GMT -5
This is awesome! Pleeeeease update again soon! You've got 'Genta's personality great! ^_^
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Oct 10, 2005 0:18:28 GMT -5
Yes. Pretty, pretty pleeeeasssse? This is sooooo great so far. ;D
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