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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 23, 2005 17:45:27 GMT -5
this ff is mabe by me and hero ;D since he put drake in his ff i doing the same and with a character form dragon fire's ff dragon knights here's the 1st chapter the surpise
"drake wake up." it was yuin i could tell from his voice he is like my godfather after i join with him to find the legendary warrior hero my best friend next to ryu"Yuin just five more minutes i'm tired from the trining you put me through yesterday." i told him yuin just chuckled to him self "well i know your still tired but you have school and you don't want mr.rotwood to nearly finding out your a dragon again do you?" yuin said i open 1 eye looked at him then looked at the clock it said 5:45 a.m i knew yuin was right i don't want past mistakes coming back up to be real again "alright i'm getting up i'll meet you down stairs in a few minutes" i said while i was getting out of bed. i got on my usual clothes my disturbing tha peace athletic sweat shirt baggy blue shorts and my red and white reebok mids on. i ran down stairs to see yuin working on somthing but i didn't ask "yuin i'm leaving is there anything you want me to do after school?" he look up and said "yes i want you rei and feo here after school." i just looked at him he never wants me home straight after school tho. jake rose trixie spud and feo my girlfriend wiating for me at the spot we said after last year. "yo wat up drake." spud said to me "fine just fine but yuin wants me rei and feo at his lab after school so i can't come over and have are little tournament on def jam fight for ny sorry." i told them feo just looked at me and asked "why does yuin need me for anyway i mean he gots-- ah!" iturned around to see feo voilated by brad his hand is on her butt "uh brad i wouldn"t do that if i was you cuz doing that to her with her boyfriend in front of you and the last time some1 did that to her he ended up in the hospital." i geard jake told him "yeah right jake hey feo dumped drake for a real boy that has vip pass to bonecrusher' concret to night." brad said with hopes that feo will dump me all feo did was knee brad in the grion then scissor kick him up ward as he fell backward she jump up and when brad hit the ground she lands on his stomach. i never knew feo could do that
this is the first page i got more but i what to get some reviews first ;D
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Post by mithos on Aug 23, 2005 17:49:12 GMT -5
Cool! Add more please!!!! ;D
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 23, 2005 18:14:48 GMT -5
ok here the second part
"wait a minute feo where did you learn how to do that anyway i know i did not teach you that!" i told her she looked and smile "well my father taught me ya know the dark god." feo said to me i shudder at that name i know it was during the summer but i nearly lost my life in that mountain helping him with jake ryu hero and luis."uh who is the the dark god jake?" rose ask him he told trixie spud and rose about that adventure we had "wow that's why you where gone all summer jakey but i thought you where with luis and ryu at the amusement park."trixie said to him "any way forget about that but who do you guys have for home room i got rotwood." jake said with dispresstion "well i got him to jake for 1st and second period cuz remember last year they said that social studies is in all the classrooms now remember." i told him trixie and spud has him too rose and feo didn't well not for homeroom tho."well it's nearly time for 1st connection." rose siad to all of us had gym that was really great. then it hit i had to see what sports they have this time i'm hoping they have the 1 i really like i ran i front of everyone to head to the front office i looked at all the sports and found and it said martalarts club "what is martalarts club anyway?!" i said out loud "it's a club under school polcity for kids who love to fight and grades have nothing to do with it." i recinized that swedish voice somewhere tho but i can't put my finger on it.
i got part 2 up for the the chapter one i'll continue when i get reviews
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Post by mithos on Aug 23, 2005 18:29:28 GMT -5
Please continue! It's really good! ;D
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 23, 2005 18:30:53 GMT -5
ok but i'm gonna have to do that tommrrow buddy o plz get other people to review my ff too
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Post by mithos on Aug 23, 2005 18:32:31 GMT -5
I will buddy! ;D
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Post by dragon on Aug 23, 2005 19:20:12 GMT -5
I'm liking it, when you get the time I'd definititly like to read more!
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Post by stranger on Aug 23, 2005 20:25:35 GMT -5
Not bad, I like it pls do continue!
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 24, 2005 5:03:27 GMT -5
yeah its realy great thankx for using feo she is very noisy in my head heeh plz contine i realy like it!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 24, 2005 18:21:33 GMT -5
lol ok here's the other part
i turned around and saw it was Mr.Rotwood "hey mr-- " i was inturpted by him " prof.Rotwood mister drake and for the martal arts club like i told you before but it has nothing to do with grades and try outs are in 1 hour." he told me i turned and left but he stop me"o i forgot to tell get your girlfriend and jake to join too and i saw what feo did to brad ." rotwood told me "uh is she in trouble ?mr i mean prof. rotwood?" i asked expecting a yell from him but when i looked up at him he was smiling?! i must of got hit in the head or something cuz i never see this remake of mister crocker from fairly oddparents smile before. he shook his head no after he did that i ran to grab feo and jake to bring them to the gym after 1st and 2nd period connections. i ran to the front door to see jake talking to someone who i never seen before but i ran into yuin who was bleeding on his arm"yuin what's going on did someone attack you?!" he shook his head no "just grab feo and rei like i asked you to this morning." he told me i just nodded yes and found rei and feo talking to eachother i grab them by their arms and took them to a alley then changed to dragon after i let them go "Drake what is going on here is someone attacking you or us!?" rei asked me "no yuin needs use at his lab for something i don't know but he's bleeding on his arm tho." i told rei and feo rei instedly change to dragon after i said that feo jumped on my back me and rei flew to yuin's lab
ok this is huntsmaster pov now
i was practicing with my new appertince maria and had her down and she was about to counter until my minion came in with a letter "sir huntsmaster a messager for you sir." he said to me i took it from him it had no return address i torn it open and slide the letter out it said
"if you want revenage on drake follow my directions as listed"
i did want revenage over drake for betraying me and nearly killed me i grab my fur cape and my staff and left.
that's the third part for chapter 1 and yes huntsmaster still alive and i'll do the same like i did with parts 1 and 2
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Post by Chaos on Aug 24, 2005 19:57:21 GMT -5
Haha, really good! I hope you continue very soon!
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 25, 2005 4:34:37 GMT -5
yeah me too!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 25, 2005 18:11:55 GMT -5
ok here's part three of chapter 1
rei feo and i arrvied 30 minutes later "what does yuin want use for drake?" feo asked me as we landed "i really don't know but it has to do something to do with hero or something cuz before hero left i overheard him saying something about a tournament." rei told her i looked at him and agree with him it was ethier the tourny rei mention or something else i walk in the lab "YUIN, man where are you?" i yelled in the empty lab the place was a mess cob webs every where "over here drake. come over here o get rei and feo in here as well." yuin yelld to me from the back room rei and feo where looking in side from the door i motion them to come in by the time they did yuin came back from the back room carrying my dtp pendant and the case with my gloves from my adventure with luis ryu jake and hero "uh yuin why are giveing these to me again? and why did you ask me to get rei and feo together any way?" i asked him in a polite and tick off manner. he chuckle to himself " well where going to see hero drake and there's a tuorny in aergis this month and he wants you to enter." when yuin finshed that i looked at him like i was hit by a brick " whoa whoa wait a sec yuin a tourny? rei said that heard you talking to hero about a tourny but i have three questions 1 why is hero entering a tourny and wants me to enter? 2 why does feo have to come with us and 3 how are we going to get to aergis anyway?" i asked hm yuin just smile "well hero wants you to enter cuz he needs to see who's better the legendary dragon-X or the legendary warrior 2 if feo doesn't come with you you'll have girls trying to be your girlfriend and beleive me it will be endless and 3 you for get i'm from aergis and i still can get us there." yuin said to me feo and rei i smiled and put on my dto pendent and gloves "well lets go then." i said with a smile
that's chapter 1 i'll put chapter 2 up when i get reviews
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Post by mithos on Aug 25, 2005 18:49:58 GMT -5
2. Do these count? Continue, please!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 25, 2005 19:50:33 GMT -5
yes they do but i have to continue tommorrow
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