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Post by dragonfire on Aug 26, 2005 4:45:14 GMT -5
yeah yeah! its going great
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 26, 2005 17:50:39 GMT -5
ok here's chapter 2 first round drake vs yuin
feo looked at yuin " yuin is there anything what you need to say about the tourny rules before we leave?" she asked him "oh yes thank you for reminding feo i know hero might have told rei about aergis but i'll remind you rei al right the tournys on aergis are always in cages for some reason ask hero but time is unbalenced on aergis so don't be surpised if you see some oppents moving faster than you it take abit to get used to and you'll be reborn," yuin looked at me "so that means both you and rei won't be dragons." yuin said to me and rei i was able to take it but rei i not sure "ok so when do we leave?" i asked he smiled and said "well we'll leave right now then." yun said with a smile and said a few words and the same portal open that hero went through when he left. all of us were suck in by a huge twister like wind into the portal going through that portal made my head spin and i was feeling like i did when dragon-X first enter my body i passed out when we hit hte ground i saw a 16 year old boy that looked familair but i couldn't tell cuz my eyes were blurry.
i continue after i get some reviews
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Post by mithos on Aug 26, 2005 18:07:24 GMT -5
Sweet! Please continue! ;D
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 26, 2005 18:59:45 GMT -5
yeah and can you tell me is hero in earth? cuz i need to know in my story to amke it acurate
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Post by mithos on Aug 26, 2005 19:02:32 GMT -5
No. But in my ff, right now he's on the island of Draco. (on earth) This is a ff near the ending of mine. ;D
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 26, 2005 19:18:11 GMT -5
ok here's part two
i woke up a hour later still feeling wosey and on a bed and the smell of melting iron in the room. i looked to my side and saw my gloves and my sweat shirt and pendant to the side on a chair "man it's just like you to pass with all your gear on drake." i turn around to see hero standing in the door way "hey hero so why did you want me to enter the tourny and want me to bring feo here too?" i asked him just then geo came from the front room "hero help me with get the o hey drake i'm glad to see your up and i wanted to see my sis again cuz it's been a while since i saw her." geo said to me i smile it was great to see her again cuz even when me and my friends were in deepest of trouble she and her sisters help " btw drake the other reason is i want to see who's the better me or you in fighting the tourny starts in one hour i all ready signed you up so get some rest your gonna need it." hero said and the minute he left i fell back asleep
i'll have the tourny round up next and i'm sorry it' short
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 26, 2005 19:57:08 GMT -5
oh! nice one but geo wasnt saved by the Dark Wizard she was with the guys the whole time in my story plz continue the story is a ibt off from mine but its realy great than my idea plz go on!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 26, 2005 19:59:48 GMT -5
o sorry i didn't know and i won't be able to get it til tommorrow btw does any one know a easier way to post your ff pm if you have the answer
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Post by stranger on Aug 26, 2005 20:09:18 GMT -5
I like, pls continue
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 27, 2005 9:52:45 GMT -5
ok here's part 3 of chapter2
i woke up a hour later sweating all over "stupid nightmares."i said to my self and i looked around seeing sword drawing and pics of hero's family i guess this was hero room but when i looked at the balcony i sensed darkness i shooked my head to get the feeling out i grab my things and headed down stairs i guess the stairs led to the kitchen cuz i smelled something cooking i saw feo and geo cooking together rei and yuin trianing i guess they enter the tourny too and i saw hero reading the rules for the tournament "hey hero why are you reading the rules the tourny? don't you know them all ready?" i asked him it must have startled him cuz he was fumbleing with the rule book "drake! i told before don't do that!" hero yelled at me then just looked at me "drake your not sick are you? cuz your really pale." hero asked me "no i just had a bad nightmare." hero smiled "alright then let's go to the tourny we were just waiting for you to get up." he said as geo feo rei and yuin came by as all of us left.
i'll have part 4 the acutal fight between yuin and drake next after i get some reviews
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 27, 2005 10:00:21 GMT -5
yay go go go! to the death! just kidding continue!
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Post by mithos on Aug 27, 2005 16:26:07 GMT -5
Please do. ;D
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 27, 2005 19:52:00 GMT -5
heres part 4
i looked around the tournament arena "uh hero why is there a cage around the arena anyway?" rei asked hero "well it's use mostly for sword fighting tournys from the schools but it can be used for both fist combat and sword combat too." he said with a smile he turned to me to tell me the cage rules i held my hand to tell him to stop what he was about to say" don't worry hero i all ready know cage match rules the match don't stop til some1 drops right?" i asked him he nodded with a smile before i can ask anything else the ref came by "excuse me are you drake? if you are follow me plz." the ref said to me i followed him to the caged arena "you need help over mr.drake?" the ref asked but when he look for me i was already in the cage. i look forward to see yuin on the oppsite side "so yuin your my oppenent in the first round of this tourny." i said to him he nodded and got in a jeet kune do stance i got into my capeoria stance i was much better in this stance the ref yelled"started!" yuin chraged at me faster than he does on earth. i ducked barely dogdeing his kick i flip kick him up ward then he landed on his back he got and made his electric sword i look at the ref he wasn't gonna disqualfiy yuin. looking away was a mistake yuin slash me with that electric sword of his "come on drake i know you can fight better than this!" yuin yelled then he regrab me turn me around literly kick me in the butt pick me back slaps twice puts me on his knee moves my arms on my back and spanks me teice picks me back up and tosses me straight up warded and my back lands on his knee.
i'll continue the fight tommorrow plz tell me what you think about this 1st
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 27, 2005 22:01:56 GMT -5
its good! its going very good!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 28, 2005 11:17:59 GMT -5
ok here's the continuatin for the fight
i held my back cuz of the pain "get up drake i know that didn't hurt you much!" yuin yelled at me. he was right i got up ingoreing the pain in my back he chraged me again trying to hit me with that electric sword but i jump over him slam my forearms into yuin shoulder blades jump wrap my legs around his neck and spun down ward slamming him into the ground. he got up ready to strike me again. i ran up to him grab him slam him into my knee pick him back did 6 power punches then smash his head into the ground and held him there by his neck applying pressure making yuin fall a sleep.
there's the fight i got a cat fight next between feo and another girl for drakes heart heart pm me if you think who's gonna win
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