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Post by mithos on Oct 14, 2005 20:11:04 GMT -5
Nice! PM me if you want info on the move FDW. I've got a surprise for you.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 14, 2005 21:45:33 GMT -5
thnx i thought i got it wrong
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Post by mithos on Oct 14, 2005 21:49:52 GMT -5
No you didn't.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 14, 2005 21:50:52 GMT -5
ok then but i'll update it tommorrow
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Post by mithos on Oct 14, 2005 21:51:40 GMT -5
Can't wait! It's getting SO good!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 15, 2005 9:59:36 GMT -5
ok i said i'll updste today and i will and plus day's playin game cude
hero looked at raiju and huntsmaster while he was helping me up "wh.. whatt do you mean?" hero said to huntsmaster "yes raiju is right i killed drake's birth mother and my student who was his father!" hunts said to me and hero" lies all lies my parents were kill in a car accindent!" i yelled to him and charged towards him i pounded him to a bloody pulp and upper cut him into the air when he landed next to raiju i jump over to him and slam huntsmaster head in to the ground over and over again til raiju stab me with the hook on his hilt of the exile "that's power we want darkness drain!" he yelled and i felt something dark and full of hatred leave my body "well good job huntsmaster lets kill drake since we got what we want." raiju said to huntsmaster and helped him up " agreed." huntsmaster said moving towards me "not while i'm around!" hero yelled as he got jis sword out he chared huntsmaster and slashed him acrossed his back picked me up on to his shoulder while raiju got huntsmaster back up"let's bring them to a different place were no noe will get in are way! ultimite chaos control!" raiju yelled as hero sword and raiju sword began to glow a huge earthquake hit the ref got up limping towards the exit but froze like time was freezing it self both me and hero passed out before anything else happened
theres the update i'm so glad to stay on the computer
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Post by dragonfire on Oct 15, 2005 20:18:58 GMT -5
oh no! what will happend next?, POST MORE! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPEND! heheh ;D
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 16, 2005 10:40:37 GMT -5
ok here ya go the update
"drake wake up." rolled away to try to sleep more "feo what are you doing with drake's DMX cds?" i woke instintly to see none except hero "hero why did you do that for?" i asked him i looked to my left and saw jake standing next to rose"hey jake what are you doin here?" i asked him but there was no answer "jake answer me boy!" i said to him waveing my hand in front of his face he still didn't move "drake quit it they are frozen in time." hero siad to me i looked around "but how is that possible?" i asked him he shrugged we were right in my school but still could feel the time being unbalanced i looked at hero " hey hero is it possible to combine our two worlds?" i asked him "it could be--." he was hit by a green beam and was sent flying into the wall i turned to see huntsmaster and some i never seen before " drake meet baruaka the demon king." the demon king how is that possible baruaka jumped down clinched his hands into tight fists and blades poped out of his forearms the blades were nearly aslong as my wings "so this is dragon-X? funny i thought he would be more of a dragon than a human." he said and charged towards me
there's the update
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Post by mithos on Oct 16, 2005 11:06:09 GMT -5
GREAT! I love how in the last para. Raiju used Exile's sword hilt! Keep going!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 16, 2005 14:55:19 GMT -5
ok here's the update wow two update in the same day
baruka charged me a enormous speed i held my arms up to block instead white flames hit him and sent him backward. i turned around to see hero in dragon form"hero what is going on?" i asked him as i went to dragon form and charged at baruaka and kicked him in the stomach "well i guess i was wrong about this boy so huntsmaster how much will you pay me to kill him for you?" he asked huntsmaster "i'll double your pay." he told him and baruka charged at me and hero again baruaka slashed me crossed the chest with his blade but missed hero with his left blade "drake is there any weapon your good with?" hero asked me " no i ain't good with a weapon !" i yelled back to him barley dodgeing baruaka's blade "hey hero kill him with the FDW!" i shouted to him he nodded he drew his sword leaped into the air "Final Destrution Wave!" hero shouted and landed 20 feet from baruaka and gravity spikes 20 times bigger than hero moved forward to baruaka and went through him when they disappeared i could see baruaka still standing i moved forward up to him looked at him and pushed him lightly and he fell backward i shrugged "well he ain't a challenge."i looked up at huntsmaster to see he was gone "well this fight ain't nothing compared to raiju and huntsfreak." hero said to me while going back to human form and putting his sword away i nodded he was correct
there's the update i'll continue tommorrow
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Post by mithos on Oct 16, 2005 15:21:17 GMT -5
YAY! Continue when you can, it's FREAKIN SWEET!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 17, 2005 17:13:13 GMT -5
ok here's the update
i looked at hero "hey hero are you mad at me for not telling you about huntsfreak being my foster parent?" i asked him he looked at em and shook his head "nah besides it doesn't matter what you did in the past it's what you do in your future that really counts." he siad to me i smiled "yeah your right well i might know were raiju and huntsfreak is." i told him as we got up and started moving " really were then?" hero asked me "at hunts lair believe it moves a lot too it sucks we don't have jake to help or ryu ." i said to him "yeah your right ryu's able to find them with ease and so can jake but what i don't under--." hero was sent backward being wrap in a net i looked up and saw huntsmaster "raiju is working on something so i'll take care of you both til he's done!" he said he threw his cape and staff to the side and charged at me
there's the update
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Post by dragonfire on Oct 19, 2005 5:03:41 GMT -5
DUCK! Nemo Dad: thats not a duck thats a *gasp* peleken! ....... keep going its exiting!
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Post by mithos on Oct 21, 2005 17:49:17 GMT -5
Awesome! Absolutely marvelous!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 21, 2005 18:17:23 GMT -5
ok here's the update
huntsmaster kicked me in the stomach causeing me to fly through a wall i landed in some euiqpment i got back up looked around pitch black "eye of dragon-X" i said quietly i looked around and saw food center on one side and clothes jewlery toys and the other "great hunts had to kick me into walmart!" i yelled " heres hunts!" huntsmaster yelled and kick me straight upward and juggled me around like a hacky sack then did a handstand capeoria kick me straight forward i crashed into sports gear and gun cases i got up and shot a shot a fireball at huntsmaster but it split away in two directions "whats amatter drake am i too quick for your wittle dragon fire?" he said to me and punched me in the face i tasted my blood " how the hell can block fire ball hunts?" i aksed him he pulled a necklece out from under his armor and it glimmered as if it had it's own light but i could fell evil aura from it as well "it's lunikrite." he told me and gave me a quick but pwerful kick in my stomach he picked me up by the hair "well this looks like the legend of dragon-X ends here." he siad and got a knife out
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