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Post by dominosowner on Jul 26, 2006 10:39:52 GMT -5
NOW I like it! It looks so much better now, I enjoyed it.
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shadowpelt
Jake's friend
DRINK!!!
Brains?[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
Posts: 91
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Post by shadowpelt on Jul 26, 2006 15:11:21 GMT -5
suprise suprise. Write more soon. This is getting good.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Jul 26, 2006 15:22:03 GMT -5
COOL now here's the finally part of the chapter
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"Drake say that again slowly." Jake said looking at his step brother "Jake your nephew has dragon powers and possiblely wolf powers." Drake said "Whoa Whoa Whoa hold it werewolf powers? Now you just tripping Drake," Jake said "there is no way Akira has wolf powers." Jake said to his brother "Actually Jake Akira can have dragon and werewolf abilites cause of shinsei's side of the family." Rose said
*meanwhile at school during lunch*
"Akira look dude you really need to study hard cause i don't want my best friend to stay behind."Mike said "Mike i know i know but i swear that Rotwood taught my dad and Uncle," Akira said sighing"But then again he always hated me for getting answer wrong." he said "Anyway guys i don't feel so well i'm gonna call home and see if my dad can pick me up." akira said getting up and leaveing.
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ok guys i guess there's a part four to this so anyway plz review and no flames plz
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Post by Kisama on Jul 26, 2006 15:52:33 GMT -5
Its Really Good Krypto Likey I Would Love To Hear More! ;D
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Post by Chaos on Jul 26, 2006 19:17:05 GMT -5
Nice job, keep going, very nice. You dial that phone, Akira! ^^
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Post by Tales_ Fanatic on Jul 27, 2006 9:51:33 GMT -5
THis is really good Bro. Keep it up. ;D
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Post by dragonfan123 on Jul 27, 2006 14:56:18 GMT -5
ok guys sorry i can't update today but i promise one tommorrow
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Post by Tales_ Fanatic on Jul 27, 2006 16:26:55 GMT -5
Ok Bro. I'll wait ;D
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Post by riin on Jul 27, 2006 16:47:06 GMT -5
KEEP ADDING MORE!!! I want to see more of Akira! ;D
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Post by dragonfan123 on Jul 28, 2006 9:45:31 GMT -5
hey guys i'll update today but to let you know it's just gonna real short (literally)
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Akira walked to nurse office "I need to call home i don't feel so well." Akira said to the nurse "ok go ahead." she said to him"Thanks," he said and picked up the phone and dialed his home number"Hello? this is shinsei long speaking." said his mother "Hey mom can you come pick me up i have a stomach ack." he said "Ok akira i'll be there in 20 minutes." she said and hung up.
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told you it was a short one
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Post by Chaos on Jul 28, 2006 12:40:56 GMT -5
Hmmm... This stomach ache will probably lead to something with Akira's powers. ^^ Very nice, continue soon!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Jul 29, 2006 12:18:34 GMT -5
sorry i can't update today
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shadowpelt
Jake's friend
DRINK!!!
Brains?[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
Posts: 91
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Post by shadowpelt on Jul 29, 2006 17:37:00 GMT -5
Dududum..... Wonder what Shinsei will do?
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Post by dragonfan123 on Jul 30, 2006 13:22:26 GMT -5
ok thnx guys and another warning this is another short update
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Shinsei got to school around 1:30 checking out Akira "Ok Akira out with it your not sick why did you want to leave earlier?" she asked her son"Heh nothing gets past you mom did you tell dad what had happened last night?" he asked "Well yes i did and i have to tell you something Akira," she said taking a deep breath " Akira your a dragon and half werewolf." she said turnig to her son seeing he past out from the news"O god help me now." she said aloud --------------------------------------
i tried to imgane how jake would reacted when his mom first told him
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Post by Chaos on Jul 30, 2006 14:24:50 GMT -5
Lol... I like how he passed out.
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