Post by rarehunter55 on Jul 20, 2005 16:24:47 GMT -5
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With the blaring noise of my alarm to wake me up, I woke up with wide eyes, "Little loud..." I turned down the alarm some so my ears would stop hurting, the morning looked the same as every other, today is an enigma ready to unfold, today me and Rose hopefully get a date, I have been waiting for this forever... Okay so three days isn't forever, but thats not the point, I'm not gonna let anything stop me from dating Rose the first time. My mom called out, "Get down here Blake, may I have a word?" I came downstairs dressed already, she looked at me and said, "So want some breakfast?" I shook my head, "Gotta stay ahead of the game, I must go to school now, see ya laterz." Mom waved to me and smiled, she looked at my dad, he was sleeping on the table. "Mark, MARK, MARRRRRRRRRRKKKKKKKKKK!" His head rose and his coffee spilt all over his lap, I laughed, he said, "What? I was umm... I have to go to work... Later!" He ran out the door and drove away in his car, I went outside and closed the door. I flew by Rose's place and knocked on the door, Huntsman answered, he said, "She'll be ready in a moment." He closed the door and a minute passed, Rose came out the door and swung her arms around me, I was taken by surprise by this, "Whoa, made my heart skip a beat Rose, let's go, we can't dawdle here all day, school starts soon." Rose and I both walked to school together.
The sun was pretty bright when the door opened again, some girl I've never seen before walked in, Jake looked at her and his jaw dropped, I just hugged Rose and said, "New girl is trying to infatuate everyone with her cheerleader get-up, makes me sick!" Rose nodded in agreement. Jake got himself together and walked over to the new girl, he said to her, "Hey, your new here, right?" She said back to him, "Yeah, I was kinda switched out a few days ago, last school was kinda boorish, I slept in every class." Jake said with a smile, "I'll warn you now then, Professor Rotwood's class is extremely boring, you'll fall asleep almost instantly, I tell ya." She laughed, I gave her a dirty look, the faced me and asked, "Who is that guy?" Jake turned around and said, "Don't go hang-out be with him, he stole my girlfriend, the one he's hugging is Rose... I kinda really miss her a lot." The new girl pat him on the shoulder, I could see the tears dripping from his face, from Rose's view she saw nothing but my back and locker, "Come on now, you know what they say, boys don't cry." That didn't help too much, Gretta looked at him face-to-face and said, "Come on, don't be sad... Err, whats your name?" Jake wiped the tears from his face and said feeling better, "I'm Jake and this is Trixie and Spud." Trixie and Spud both waved at her, she waved and said, "My name is Gretta Norland." Jake looked at her, he said, "So Gretta, where are you from?" She answered, "I'm kinda from around here, hear of North Adams, Massachusetts, that place so looks like it was in a video game I've played." Her cell phone rings, she answers it, "M.C., this is Gretta, oh, hey Nickie, oh really, awesome!" She turned her phone off and said, "That was just Nickie, she's kinda my eye in the sky." Jake couldn't remove his eyes from that Gretta girl, it was disgusting how infatuated he was by her, "Rose, Let's go to class." They both went away to Professor Rotwood's class. Gretta said to Jake, "Catch you later cutie, I have to go see what my classes are, nice meeting you guys." Gretta walked away, Jake smiled and said with a blush, "She thinks I'm cute, hee hee." He smiled and said, "Maybe she will be my girlfriend, well if I don't pressure her into it." Spud shook his head and said, "I dunno Jake, loving someone for their looks is kinda bad, isn't it?" Jake shook his head, "I'm totally her's if she asks me out." Spud shrugged and said, "Maybe not..."
In Professor Rotwood's class, I saw Gretta siting with Jake, but Brad was next to her on the opposite side, I herd Brad say to Gretta, "Hey lovely lady, why sit with the loser?" I called out, "Yeah Brad, why should she sit next to you?" Everyone laughed and Professor Rotwood commanded, "Quiet down class, now for a question." He pointed to a picture of a pixie, "Can anyone tell me what this is?" Gretta called out, "A pixie Professor Rotwood." Rotwood looked at her and said, "Very good Mrs... What's your name?" Gretta got up and said, "I am Gretta Norland, a new student from the northern state of Massachusetts, a flower aranger and a top-class drama queen, nyeheh!" Jake looked at her, she looked at him, but then she said, "And I moved here for one reason, the bussling streets and great shopping places, this city is paradise!" Professor Rotwood said, "Sit Mrs. Norland, the class must begin studying all thier notes class while I copy some notes for you Mrs. Norland." As soon as Rotwood left the room no one was studying, we were all talking and having fun, it was alright, then he came back and everything was silent with sudying, Rotwood smiled and said, "Good, no one was chit-chating while I was gone, here you are Mrs. norland, your notes for the mythology test." She took them and said, "Thank you so much sir." She was studying right away, but Jake was studying something else, he was studying Gretta, I whispered to Rose, "Funny how guys can be so idiotic over one girl just because of her looks." Rose laughed and said, "Your kinda guilty of that yourself Blake." I shook my head and said, "Naw, I love you for you hon." Rose warmly smiled and said, "I know you do, so what are we gonna do tonight?" I looked at her and said, "I dunno, maybe patroll for magical creatures." Rotwood didn't notice us talking so we were safe. As soon as the tes was over the final bell rang and everyone stampeeded out of class, running over the small, nerdy hall monitor. Gretta was stanging outside wating for something, her cellphone rang and she answered it, "Talk to me, uh-huh, WHAT!? Okay, I'm on my way!" She ran off, Jake saw Gretta and he said, "Where is Gretta going, she looks really worried about something..." Spud said to Jake, "Ya think Blake's after her?" Jake shook his head, "Naw, I don't think he has any motivation yet, something about who was on the other line maybe." Gretta rounded a allyway and took out a laptop computer, she typed in some codes. "Gretta to base, Gretta to base come in base." Nickie's voice rang out, "You've made friends with those evil creatures, but are we safe?!" Gretta smiled and said, "Don't worry, they don't suspect a thing, how are you on following those idiots on servalence?" Nickie said, "Fine so far, but I advise you attack when they least expect it, weather it be now or next Tuesday, we need to defend the base from intruders!" Gretta nodded, "Understood Nickie, I shall not fail, the honor of our ninja tribe rides on it... Not to worry, I shall eliminate them all by sundown, or I am not a true sibbling!"
I had heard it all because he evesdropped on her, I walked away quietly but Gretta appeared in front of me like lightning, "Thaught you could evesdrop and get away with it? You are stupid to think I would let you go after you herd all that, yes we ninjas have gone into hiding for a few years, I honed my ninja prowess for the past 10 years of my life, you are not a threat to me!" I laughed at her and said, "You... Higher then me, I don't think so... I happen to posess one thing that makes me outrank you anyway, sword of winds!" The wind shard turned into a sword and I grabbed onto it, "You should learn to fear the unknown, so I'll teach it to you!" I swung the sword twords her with all my might, she got blown back by a huge gust of wind, I laughed, "You see? You are inferrior to me!" Gretta laughed and said, "Is that so? Or am I only a illusion braught on by your guilt for evesdropping on me?" She vanished and struck me in the head with a trash can lid, I was knocked out, "That should keep you out long enough for me to escape, later, fufufufu!" She walked away with a smile on her face, she said into the cell phone, "I shall not allow them to come into contact with Sycon, he needs to be locked away in the Tomb of Winds, this time I'll do the final lock so he shall never return to destroy all magical creatures!" Nickie said back, "Good, we must close that door soon, for others may try to find the lost contedent, Windshell Island AKA the Tomb of Winds."
The next day was depressing, all of the clouds in he sky where making everyhing dark... But the dark was way too dark... There is a diturbance, I can sense it in my soul. It looked like Jake could feel it too, like there was a evil chill from out of nowhere, at least it is safe at school. Professor Rotwood walked walong the sidewalk from his car to the school, it started to thunder when he walked in, Gretta laughed and said, "That was sorta ironic." She got a drink from the water fountan and she heard lighning strike, "Woah! I hate thunder and lightning, scary!" She ran into Rotwood's class and sighed with relief, "At least I can collect myself here..." I was a little curious about the storm because there was no forecast for one, either the weatherman messed up again, or this is the work of something evil, either way I cannot deal with it now. Rose shook me and said, "Can you hear me?" I snapped to attention, "Sorry Rose, I was just thinking about this sudden storm that came up, it is really wierd how this just suddenly came up like nothing." Rose looked outside and said, "Yeah, your right... Isn't it strange that these things happen after the new girl shows up?" Just then I remembered what Gretta had said yeserday, I told Rose everything, she said to me, "So a ancient tribe of ninjas is trying to send a evil magical creature back to it's own place?" I nodded, "This must have something to do with that oppened door she mentioned, it goes to some place called Windshell Island, it was suposedly lost in history, there is no current record of it's existance, maybe because the sibblings were guarding it untill they found the incantation to lock in Sycon forever, that is my ipression of what she meant." Rose thaught a moment and said, "This is beginning to add up, I think that griffin Trixie saw was Sycon, he was unleashed from his ancient slumber bacause of something Gretta did." I rubbed my chin and said, "And Gretta can't risk anyone else finding out about the sibblings or the lost island itself, thats why she said she would cross out all of us magical creatures, all magical creatures can feel a connection to that island down below the surface, if it is down there any longer we may all parish, says so in legend." Rose gave me a book of magical legends, the page on windshell island was marked, I looked at it, "So you knew about the island as well?" Rose looked at me and gave me the gauntlet, "Thats why we had to steal this from that mansion, give this to Gretta, this is the key to locking Sycon away for good and to restore the island to it's origonal form." I took the gauntlet and wonded when I should give it to her, but then I thaugh, why dosn't Jake give it to her in my place?
I approached Jake durring lunch and told him the whole story in secret, he took the gauntlet from me and said, "So your finaly being good for a change?" I looked at him and said, "Don't push it, this little act of charity dosn't change a thing, so know this, I am not good, I will never be good and I will never become a sidekick to a wannabe like you!" Jake said with a smile, "Then I guess I'll be beatin on ya later Blake." I looked at him with anger growing in my eyes, but I turned away, "Say what you wish, I'm still superior to you, even at a loss... Wait, that didn't come out right." Jake laughed and said, "Yeah it did." It was at that point I realized Jake was right, I'm not a gret evil villan, I'm just a lame zero, but I can't quit the huntsclan, Rose might not love me anymore... I asked Jake, "What should I do? I-I can't be a loser... But will Rose love me if I quit the huntsclan and assume the role of a hero?" Jake said to me, "I'm sure she will, and you shoud know that the huntsclan is just using you, and when you surved your purpose they'd of slain you." I looked down and said, "I'll talk with her tomarow about this then... I don't wanna bring this on right now, it's not a good day." I left the table and sat next to Rose, we both ate together, held hands and flurted a little.
The last bell for school rang, Gretta waited for Jake patently, she was wondering what Jake andted from her, she said, "Does he think I'm cute too? Ehee hee, first time the pray was in love wiht me before the bitter end." Just then, as if by cue, Jake came to meet Gretta, he said handing her the gauntlet, "I wanted to give you this, I hope this makes you happy." Gretta's eyes widened and she grabbed it from him, she said, "Where did you get this key from!?" Jake smiled, "Does it please you Gretta." Gretta smiled and said, "Beyond all belief Jake, oh thank you so much!" She hugged Jake and ran off to the catacombs of Sycon to put the final lock on the door to the evil world and restore Windshell Island to it's rightful place in the skies above. "Now our taks is done... The sibblling legacy is finaly over, now we can live our lives the way we want to." Nickie saild with a smile, then Gretta said, "And best of all, I can be with that cute boy, Jake." She half fainted from all this excitment, but what become of Rose and I? Find out next time.
With the blaring noise of my alarm to wake me up, I woke up with wide eyes, "Little loud..." I turned down the alarm some so my ears would stop hurting, the morning looked the same as every other, today is an enigma ready to unfold, today me and Rose hopefully get a date, I have been waiting for this forever... Okay so three days isn't forever, but thats not the point, I'm not gonna let anything stop me from dating Rose the first time. My mom called out, "Get down here Blake, may I have a word?" I came downstairs dressed already, she looked at me and said, "So want some breakfast?" I shook my head, "Gotta stay ahead of the game, I must go to school now, see ya laterz." Mom waved to me and smiled, she looked at my dad, he was sleeping on the table. "Mark, MARK, MARRRRRRRRRRKKKKKKKKKK!" His head rose and his coffee spilt all over his lap, I laughed, he said, "What? I was umm... I have to go to work... Later!" He ran out the door and drove away in his car, I went outside and closed the door. I flew by Rose's place and knocked on the door, Huntsman answered, he said, "She'll be ready in a moment." He closed the door and a minute passed, Rose came out the door and swung her arms around me, I was taken by surprise by this, "Whoa, made my heart skip a beat Rose, let's go, we can't dawdle here all day, school starts soon." Rose and I both walked to school together.
The sun was pretty bright when the door opened again, some girl I've never seen before walked in, Jake looked at her and his jaw dropped, I just hugged Rose and said, "New girl is trying to infatuate everyone with her cheerleader get-up, makes me sick!" Rose nodded in agreement. Jake got himself together and walked over to the new girl, he said to her, "Hey, your new here, right?" She said back to him, "Yeah, I was kinda switched out a few days ago, last school was kinda boorish, I slept in every class." Jake said with a smile, "I'll warn you now then, Professor Rotwood's class is extremely boring, you'll fall asleep almost instantly, I tell ya." She laughed, I gave her a dirty look, the faced me and asked, "Who is that guy?" Jake turned around and said, "Don't go hang-out be with him, he stole my girlfriend, the one he's hugging is Rose... I kinda really miss her a lot." The new girl pat him on the shoulder, I could see the tears dripping from his face, from Rose's view she saw nothing but my back and locker, "Come on now, you know what they say, boys don't cry." That didn't help too much, Gretta looked at him face-to-face and said, "Come on, don't be sad... Err, whats your name?" Jake wiped the tears from his face and said feeling better, "I'm Jake and this is Trixie and Spud." Trixie and Spud both waved at her, she waved and said, "My name is Gretta Norland." Jake looked at her, he said, "So Gretta, where are you from?" She answered, "I'm kinda from around here, hear of North Adams, Massachusetts, that place so looks like it was in a video game I've played." Her cell phone rings, she answers it, "M.C., this is Gretta, oh, hey Nickie, oh really, awesome!" She turned her phone off and said, "That was just Nickie, she's kinda my eye in the sky." Jake couldn't remove his eyes from that Gretta girl, it was disgusting how infatuated he was by her, "Rose, Let's go to class." They both went away to Professor Rotwood's class. Gretta said to Jake, "Catch you later cutie, I have to go see what my classes are, nice meeting you guys." Gretta walked away, Jake smiled and said with a blush, "She thinks I'm cute, hee hee." He smiled and said, "Maybe she will be my girlfriend, well if I don't pressure her into it." Spud shook his head and said, "I dunno Jake, loving someone for their looks is kinda bad, isn't it?" Jake shook his head, "I'm totally her's if she asks me out." Spud shrugged and said, "Maybe not..."
In Professor Rotwood's class, I saw Gretta siting with Jake, but Brad was next to her on the opposite side, I herd Brad say to Gretta, "Hey lovely lady, why sit with the loser?" I called out, "Yeah Brad, why should she sit next to you?" Everyone laughed and Professor Rotwood commanded, "Quiet down class, now for a question." He pointed to a picture of a pixie, "Can anyone tell me what this is?" Gretta called out, "A pixie Professor Rotwood." Rotwood looked at her and said, "Very good Mrs... What's your name?" Gretta got up and said, "I am Gretta Norland, a new student from the northern state of Massachusetts, a flower aranger and a top-class drama queen, nyeheh!" Jake looked at her, she looked at him, but then she said, "And I moved here for one reason, the bussling streets and great shopping places, this city is paradise!" Professor Rotwood said, "Sit Mrs. Norland, the class must begin studying all thier notes class while I copy some notes for you Mrs. Norland." As soon as Rotwood left the room no one was studying, we were all talking and having fun, it was alright, then he came back and everything was silent with sudying, Rotwood smiled and said, "Good, no one was chit-chating while I was gone, here you are Mrs. norland, your notes for the mythology test." She took them and said, "Thank you so much sir." She was studying right away, but Jake was studying something else, he was studying Gretta, I whispered to Rose, "Funny how guys can be so idiotic over one girl just because of her looks." Rose laughed and said, "Your kinda guilty of that yourself Blake." I shook my head and said, "Naw, I love you for you hon." Rose warmly smiled and said, "I know you do, so what are we gonna do tonight?" I looked at her and said, "I dunno, maybe patroll for magical creatures." Rotwood didn't notice us talking so we were safe. As soon as the tes was over the final bell rang and everyone stampeeded out of class, running over the small, nerdy hall monitor. Gretta was stanging outside wating for something, her cellphone rang and she answered it, "Talk to me, uh-huh, WHAT!? Okay, I'm on my way!" She ran off, Jake saw Gretta and he said, "Where is Gretta going, she looks really worried about something..." Spud said to Jake, "Ya think Blake's after her?" Jake shook his head, "Naw, I don't think he has any motivation yet, something about who was on the other line maybe." Gretta rounded a allyway and took out a laptop computer, she typed in some codes. "Gretta to base, Gretta to base come in base." Nickie's voice rang out, "You've made friends with those evil creatures, but are we safe?!" Gretta smiled and said, "Don't worry, they don't suspect a thing, how are you on following those idiots on servalence?" Nickie said, "Fine so far, but I advise you attack when they least expect it, weather it be now or next Tuesday, we need to defend the base from intruders!" Gretta nodded, "Understood Nickie, I shall not fail, the honor of our ninja tribe rides on it... Not to worry, I shall eliminate them all by sundown, or I am not a true sibbling!"
I had heard it all because he evesdropped on her, I walked away quietly but Gretta appeared in front of me like lightning, "Thaught you could evesdrop and get away with it? You are stupid to think I would let you go after you herd all that, yes we ninjas have gone into hiding for a few years, I honed my ninja prowess for the past 10 years of my life, you are not a threat to me!" I laughed at her and said, "You... Higher then me, I don't think so... I happen to posess one thing that makes me outrank you anyway, sword of winds!" The wind shard turned into a sword and I grabbed onto it, "You should learn to fear the unknown, so I'll teach it to you!" I swung the sword twords her with all my might, she got blown back by a huge gust of wind, I laughed, "You see? You are inferrior to me!" Gretta laughed and said, "Is that so? Or am I only a illusion braught on by your guilt for evesdropping on me?" She vanished and struck me in the head with a trash can lid, I was knocked out, "That should keep you out long enough for me to escape, later, fufufufu!" She walked away with a smile on her face, she said into the cell phone, "I shall not allow them to come into contact with Sycon, he needs to be locked away in the Tomb of Winds, this time I'll do the final lock so he shall never return to destroy all magical creatures!" Nickie said back, "Good, we must close that door soon, for others may try to find the lost contedent, Windshell Island AKA the Tomb of Winds."
The next day was depressing, all of the clouds in he sky where making everyhing dark... But the dark was way too dark... There is a diturbance, I can sense it in my soul. It looked like Jake could feel it too, like there was a evil chill from out of nowhere, at least it is safe at school. Professor Rotwood walked walong the sidewalk from his car to the school, it started to thunder when he walked in, Gretta laughed and said, "That was sorta ironic." She got a drink from the water fountan and she heard lighning strike, "Woah! I hate thunder and lightning, scary!" She ran into Rotwood's class and sighed with relief, "At least I can collect myself here..." I was a little curious about the storm because there was no forecast for one, either the weatherman messed up again, or this is the work of something evil, either way I cannot deal with it now. Rose shook me and said, "Can you hear me?" I snapped to attention, "Sorry Rose, I was just thinking about this sudden storm that came up, it is really wierd how this just suddenly came up like nothing." Rose looked outside and said, "Yeah, your right... Isn't it strange that these things happen after the new girl shows up?" Just then I remembered what Gretta had said yeserday, I told Rose everything, she said to me, "So a ancient tribe of ninjas is trying to send a evil magical creature back to it's own place?" I nodded, "This must have something to do with that oppened door she mentioned, it goes to some place called Windshell Island, it was suposedly lost in history, there is no current record of it's existance, maybe because the sibblings were guarding it untill they found the incantation to lock in Sycon forever, that is my ipression of what she meant." Rose thaught a moment and said, "This is beginning to add up, I think that griffin Trixie saw was Sycon, he was unleashed from his ancient slumber bacause of something Gretta did." I rubbed my chin and said, "And Gretta can't risk anyone else finding out about the sibblings or the lost island itself, thats why she said she would cross out all of us magical creatures, all magical creatures can feel a connection to that island down below the surface, if it is down there any longer we may all parish, says so in legend." Rose gave me a book of magical legends, the page on windshell island was marked, I looked at it, "So you knew about the island as well?" Rose looked at me and gave me the gauntlet, "Thats why we had to steal this from that mansion, give this to Gretta, this is the key to locking Sycon away for good and to restore the island to it's origonal form." I took the gauntlet and wonded when I should give it to her, but then I thaugh, why dosn't Jake give it to her in my place?
I approached Jake durring lunch and told him the whole story in secret, he took the gauntlet from me and said, "So your finaly being good for a change?" I looked at him and said, "Don't push it, this little act of charity dosn't change a thing, so know this, I am not good, I will never be good and I will never become a sidekick to a wannabe like you!" Jake said with a smile, "Then I guess I'll be beatin on ya later Blake." I looked at him with anger growing in my eyes, but I turned away, "Say what you wish, I'm still superior to you, even at a loss... Wait, that didn't come out right." Jake laughed and said, "Yeah it did." It was at that point I realized Jake was right, I'm not a gret evil villan, I'm just a lame zero, but I can't quit the huntsclan, Rose might not love me anymore... I asked Jake, "What should I do? I-I can't be a loser... But will Rose love me if I quit the huntsclan and assume the role of a hero?" Jake said to me, "I'm sure she will, and you shoud know that the huntsclan is just using you, and when you surved your purpose they'd of slain you." I looked down and said, "I'll talk with her tomarow about this then... I don't wanna bring this on right now, it's not a good day." I left the table and sat next to Rose, we both ate together, held hands and flurted a little.
The last bell for school rang, Gretta waited for Jake patently, she was wondering what Jake andted from her, she said, "Does he think I'm cute too? Ehee hee, first time the pray was in love wiht me before the bitter end." Just then, as if by cue, Jake came to meet Gretta, he said handing her the gauntlet, "I wanted to give you this, I hope this makes you happy." Gretta's eyes widened and she grabbed it from him, she said, "Where did you get this key from!?" Jake smiled, "Does it please you Gretta." Gretta smiled and said, "Beyond all belief Jake, oh thank you so much!" She hugged Jake and ran off to the catacombs of Sycon to put the final lock on the door to the evil world and restore Windshell Island to it's rightful place in the skies above. "Now our taks is done... The sibblling legacy is finaly over, now we can live our lives the way we want to." Nickie saild with a smile, then Gretta said, "And best of all, I can be with that cute boy, Jake." She half fainted from all this excitment, but what become of Rose and I? Find out next time.