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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 9, 2005 16:21:17 GMT -5
ok but plz hurry this ff is getting really good
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Post by mithos on Aug 9, 2005 16:23:46 GMT -5
Thnx! (copying your thing). I'll have more soon! It took me three hours to type, write and edit all the new stuff.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 9, 2005 17:00:57 GMT -5
yes it does take som time but plz continue when you can ;D
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Post by mithos on Aug 11, 2005 19:35:47 GMT -5
After a while, nightfall hit. Hero decided to camp out inside of the bell tower. Aside from the cold chills that occasionally blew through the old, cracked walls, Hero felt safe for some reason. After a long, peaceful sleep on the bell tower’s red carpet, morning struck in all its brilliance. As the sun arose, the windows and the cracks in the walls were lit up. Hero looked up at the beautifully lit stain-glass window near the entrance of the tower and thought, “I am ready.”. Then, he got up, shielding his eyes from the sun’s clear, bright radiance, and exited the tower. After taking a few steps out of the building, a man with blue hair appeared before him. Before Hero could react, the man threw a gas canister at him. Hero covered his mouth quickly, but it was too late. The gas already made its way down to Hero’s lungs. He suddenly collapsed to the ground and tried to look at the man’s face, but his vision was greatly blurred. After a few minutes, Hero fell unconscious as the man walked over and picked him up. By the afternoon, Hero woke up. He found himself laying on a bed in a control room. He continued to look around and then gasped, because someone took his sword! Suddenly, the man walked into the same room as Hero. Hero jumped off the bed and backed against a wall as the man cornered him. Then, Hero yelled, “Stay back! Even though my sword is gone, I can sill kill you!”. The man laughed and then said, “We’re on the same team.”. Hero looked puzzled and then asked, “What?! What do you mean?! You nearly tried to kill me back there!”. The man smiled and replied, “My name is Yuin. My team and I have observed you for some time now. Ever since you came over to this world, we have watched and studied you. We know everything about you… Hero. We even know what happened to your parents.”. Hero looked at him carefully and asked, “Why is Yui really trying to kill me?”. “Your friend’s father gave him Luciis, the second ultimate sword. It is known as the legendary sword of light; only one with a pure heart can wield it. Apparently, Yui’s heart is pure. He’s very confused right now. He has to choose either you or his own father. If he chooses wrongly, his sword will become useless and it’s power will remain dormant until a new person wields it. Hopefully, he will choose you, so the sword will grow and live.” Yuin explained. “The man who killed your parents has the third ultimate sword, Exile. It is known as the legendary sword of darkness. Only one with a heart of pure evil can wield it. Its power matches up equally to your sword, except it is harder to wield because of its great length.”. Hero looked at Yuin and asked, “What’s so special about my sword? Everyone seems to want it.”. “Your sword is made of both concentrated light and darkness. Anyone can wield it and because of that, it is truly the ultimate sword. The sword contains four elements: light, darkness, gravity, and time. If you fuse all of these elements together, then it will create Soul Reaper’s ultimate attack, final destruction wave. The attack freezes the enemy in time, and light and darkness fuse to expose the flow of gravity on the earth. Then, if you swing your sword into the flow and hit the ground, spikes of concentrated gravity will shoot out of the ground, sending a devastating wave that will rip the opponent apart before he blinks. When your sword hit’s the ground, the normal gravity flow is disturbed causing abnormal spikes to form deep within the earth. After a few seconds, they concentrate and shoot out of the earth and hit the opponent.”. Hero looked at him puzzled and asked, “How many team members do you have?”. Yuin rose his hand and extended his index, ring and middle finger. Hero questioned, “THREE?! You only have THREE people?! I thought you had at least thirty! So, who are they?”. Yuin snapped hi fingers and a red dragon flew through the partly cracked skylight and landed right next to him. “DRAKE?!” Hero questioned. Drake looked at him and asked, “It’s a small world, eh?”. Yuin glanced at both of them and then explained, “I hired Drake to observe and fight beside of you. He is still your friend, but also your normal, other-worldly bodyguard.”. “A hired friend?” Hero asked. “No, a friend and fellow teammate.” Drake replied. Yuin looked at both of them and asked, “So Hero, can we join your team?”. Hero gave them a long, hard stare, smiled, and then replied, “Sure! Welcome to the team!”. All three smiled and then Yuin exclaimed, “Dragon-X, and the legendary warrior on the same team… this is truly a historical day! Hero, I’ll give you your sword back. Remember what I told you. Master the final skill, and you will become the ultimate warrior. Good luck on your journey, for I must leave. I’ll give you this com-link, so we can keep in touch.”. After Yuin gave Hero a com-link and his sword back, Hero asked, “Wait! Who is your third teammate?”. Yuin looked at Hero, smiled, and replied, “You.”. After saying this, he walked out of the building. Hero and Drake both stared at each other and smiled. Then, they left the secret base, walked off into the sunset and headed towards Rei’s house.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 11, 2005 19:39:35 GMT -5
not bad plz continue
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Post by mithos on Aug 11, 2005 20:23:45 GMT -5
I'll have it done tomorrow. If your a fan, please post for encouragement. It takes a LONG time to write!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 11, 2005 20:56:08 GMT -5
plz continue your story is really great
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 13, 2005 9:19:27 GMT -5
yeah go hero! your my hero hehehe well Jake is my biggest hero no offence your stories are great plz continue! i love them!
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Post by mithos on Aug 13, 2005 14:57:07 GMT -5
While they were walking, Hero asked Drake, “So, how long have you been working for Yuin?”. Drake looked at him and replied, “Almost two years now. We both worked on trans-dimensional inspection. It was just a mere coincidence that he hired me, Dragon-X. After a month or so, he found out I was a dragon. Since then, we have been studying ancient myths and prophecies. Strangely, all the ones we studied related to three things: the three legendary swords, the inter-dimensional portal, and the one chosen to vanquish evil. That one, is you Hero. When you came through the portal, we knew you were the legendary warrior. Aside from you, we found proof that two others breached.”. “Yui and his father…” Hero said. “Exactly. We must find Yui and try to convince him that he is still your friend. If Yui turns to our side, then we will have two of the three ultimate swords. The last one will be the most difficult to get. Save your ultimate attack for this battle. If you use this attack, it will deplete most of your life, causing you to faint. It is hard to recover afterwards, but it is well worth it.” Drake explained. After a few minutes, Hero and Drake left the mountain range and noticed the sky was pitch black. They both gasped when they looked towards the end of the pathway. They quickly flew beyond the path and landed next to Rei’s house. Everywhere was set ablaze by an ominous purple flame. The dragon council building was burning, and all the houses and tents were on fire. Drake and Hero both looked around, but there was no one there. Then, Hero’s com-link rang and he answered it immediately. Yuin asked, “What’s going on around there? There is smoke coming from your position.”. Hero replied, “Everything is on fire. This was no accident. There’s no one here… it’s almost as if they fled from something.”. “Hero! I found a weird mark on this building! … This is no doubt the work of the Dark Dragon!” Drake exclaimed. Hero looked near his feet and found a note. Hero grabbed his com-link and said, “Yuin, I found a note. It says, “… Soon my father and I will rule this pathetic planet. But first, we must eliminate every inferior creature. Thankfully, the Dark Dragon will help us, so we don’t have to get our hands dirty. When the time is right, he will fall like the others. But for now, he will train the dragons I captured on Draco. Pretty soon, he will have an army of highly trained dragons. They shall also aid us, but like the others, they will also fall in time. When the Iyallanos are transferred to Earth, we will destroy Aeris. Finally, there will be a day where no one will be discriminated against. This is what I and my father strive for. Hero and his friends will die before me. Then, I can reclaim the sword that was meant for my father. Soul Reaper will be in our grasp… soon. Only then can I die in peace.”… this was written by Yui.”. Drake then transformed into his dragon form and told Hero, “I’m gonna go retrieve the captive dragons. Hero, search for Yui. It seems that he is loyal toward his father. Defeat him for good, and take the sword of light. Don’t worry, you can hold it, because you have a pure heart. I’ll return soon. Bye Hero!”. After saying this, he flew westward into the dragon training course where Hero encountered the Dark Dragon. Then, Yuin said to Hero, “Head north. You will find Yui here. To the south is where your parents’ murderer lies in hiding. Don’t use the ultimate technique yet. Save it for the final battle.”. After Yuin said this, Hero headed north not knowing what was going to happen next.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 13, 2005 15:09:51 GMT -5
non bad plz continue plz
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Post by mithos on Aug 13, 2005 15:10:58 GMT -5
As Drake neared the end of the course, he spotted the crack in the wall. He then took out his com-link and asked, “Hero, are you there?”. “Yes I am. What’s up?” Hero responded. “I found the cave. What should I do next? Drake replied and asked. Yuin got on the line before he said this and replied, “Good. Enter and proceed with the evacuation. I will rendezvous with you shortly.”. “Wait… you are going to help Drake? Are you a dragon too?!” Hero questioned. Yuin replied, “No. The reason why I hired Drake and knew about the portal is because I was born in Aeris. Because I am an Aerian, I can use elemental attacks like fire, at any time. I came over to this world thirty years ago, after I was born. I was part of an experiment to see if the portal was functioning correctly. Just like you, I came from Aegis. Your father, Raiju, and another man used the three ultimate swords to send me through the portal to Earth. Your father was an Aerian, Raiju was an Iyallanos, and the other man was a Lucian. Raiju was the leader of the Iyallanos. Because he was an evil man, he was put to death and his followers, the Iyallanos, were banished to the Dark Region. Raiju forged the ultimate sword of darkness from his own blood, soul, and from a special reflective ore called lunikrite. With this sword, he can reflect any elemental attack with twice as much power. Before he died, Raiju named his sword, Exile, because of the Iyallanos’s banishment from Aegis. Your father was the original wielder of Soul Reaper. He was given it by the maker of a holy relic called the Sacred Crystal. It is said that this relic could grant any wish… if used by a good person. The maker of the Sacred Crystal forged two swords, Soul Reaper and Luciis.”. Yuin arrived at the cave after saying this. They both peered through the crack and spotted two guard dragons. Suddenly, they left through two door on either side of the arena and it was empty. Then, a dark figure wearing a gray, hooded cloak walked through the door on the left and stood on the left half of the arena. A women wearing a gray hood walked in through the door on the right and stood on the right half of the arena. The dark figure asked the women, So, how is the training?”. The women replied, “Good. They have all pledged their allegiance to you, except on, my lord. Soon we will have an army ready for lord Yui.”. “Excellent. When the army is ready, we will destroy him and rule the world! As for now, Chang, I want you to interrogate the prisoner. If he does not pledge his allegiance to me, or tell us anything, kill him.” said the man. “I will do it now, my lord.” Chang said. Then, she left the arena. The man also left and the arena was once again empty. Yuin looked at Drake and said, “Rei is being held in the lower prison area. It seems we found the Dark Dragon.”. Drake then responded, “Chang betrayed us… I wonder if the others did too? I hope she was lying!”. Drake flew onto the arena that was suspended on top of the lava. With one leap, Yuin jumped onto the arena. They both went through the door that Chang went through. They ran down fifteen flights of stairs and found the door that led to the prison. It was locked, so Yuin used gravity to crush the lock. Rei’s arms were chained to a wall and he was bleeding heavily from torture. They rushed down to the bottom of the prison and broke Rei free. Then, they carried him up the stairs and ran into the center of the arena. Suddenly, the Dark Dragon emerged from the lava and said, “Leaving so soon? I thought you wanted a warm welcome. Let me give you one!”. Then, thousands of dragons surrounded them. Yuin turned and looked at the Dark Dragon and said, “Face the facts, Yui is using you! You’re nothing but dispensable puppet in his overall scheme! Your biggest part is about to end!”. “Yes. To us, he is also a puppet… for giving me these dragons to train! We will soon rule the world! It’s two against two-thousand!” said the Dark Dragon. “Yeah, the two ultimate swords against two-thousand weak dragons! These swords were meant to slay thousands of men, with one swing! That scratch that Hero gave you… wasn’t even a sample of the sword’s power! Give up, fate isn’t on your side!” shouted Drake. “We’ll see!” exclaimed the Dark Dragon. Then, the dragons cornered Drake, Yuin, and Rei. Drake transformed and Yuin made a sword out of electricity. Yuin shocked and knocked out half of the dragons , while Drake fought the other half with Rei on his right shoulder. After an hour of fighting, all the dragons were knocked out and Yuin and Drake were tired. The Dark Dragon laughed and exclaimed, “Impressive! You forgot one big thing, me! Prepare to die!”. Suddenly, Rei got up and said, “No, YOU forgot one thing! Me!”. Then, he extended his index and middle finger together and slashed his right hand at the Dark Dragon. Light energy flew out of the slash and created a giant wave. The wave flew and hit the Dark Dragon causing him to fall on the arena’s floor parlayed. Then, Drake, Yuin, and Rei exited the cave. Yuin used earth and caused a boulder to fall and block the entrance. Rei said, “I’m sure Chang will take care of him. The Dark Dragon and his army will wake up, soon. For now, let’s rendezvous with Hero. He’s probably reached the spot where Yui is, so we must hurry!”. After he said this, they headed north to reach Hero.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 13, 2005 15:15:45 GMT -5
plz continue it's really good
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 14, 2005 1:21:57 GMT -5
yay! go hero! kill the ugly dragon (no offence to all dark dragon fans) yeah!
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Post by mithos on Aug 16, 2005 18:14:10 GMT -5
Thanks! I'll try to add more tomorrow! ;D
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 17, 2005 5:40:29 GMT -5
yay!
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