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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 17, 2005 17:39:17 GMT -5
yes i can't wait
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Post by mithos on Aug 17, 2005 21:31:04 GMT -5
Is anyone else reading this fan fiction? If so, please post for encouragement. I stay up late at night, work for 8 hours, and fall asleep every time I try to write.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 18, 2005 17:54:50 GMT -5
ya know i read so plz contiune plz and i'll see if any one will review this for you
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 19, 2005 3:38:39 GMT -5
ok how about this GO HERO!! give me a H! H! give me a E! E! give me a R! R! Give me a O! O! what that spell? HERO!!!!
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Post by mithos on Aug 19, 2005 19:50:21 GMT -5
Good enough.
After Yuin told the story to Hero, Hero turned off his com-link and sat down to rest. He knew they found the Dark Dragon, so he left them alone. When a few minutes past, Hero got up and started walking on the northern pathway. While he was walking, he spotted a huge pool of blood. The blood was darker than normal blood. Hero thought to himself, “Wha..? What happened? This is… Iyallanos blood. Yui…”. After thinking this, Hero continued his journey. To either side of it was a green meadow stretching as far as the eye can see. After an hour of walking, Hero reached a strange temple at the end of the path. He noticed another pool of blood near the entrance. Yui was definitely here. He rushed inside and looked around. It was damp and dark, just like a cave. In the middle of the room, was a pedestal. Hero walked over and shoved his sword into it. Suddenly, the locked door leading to the next room opened revealing a pathway. “You opened the door for me, thank you! I guess I don’t have to slay you now!”. Hero looked up and saw Yui standing on the floor above him. Yui jumped down holding his bleeding chest, and walked past Hero. Hero asked, “What happened to you?!”. “My father and I had a disagreement, but we came to an understanding.” Yui replied. “How can you live with him if he does this to you?!”. “Why do you care?! My father’s strong, unlike your weak father who gave his life for you! If only he told the truth… he would still be alive!”. “I care… because I am your friend. My father was stronger than your father, because he sacrificed himself for me!” Hero exclaimed. “Stay out of this! You don’t know my life! Now step aside. I must get the treasure beyond this door!” Yui said. Yui walked a little bit further, then collapsed because of blood loss. Hero ran up to him and yelled, “YUI!!! Hold still so I can help you.”. Yui turned and shouted, “Stay back! I’ll kill you if you come any closer!”. “You don’t have the strength to. Now hold still.”. Then, Yui grabbed his sword and sliced Hero across the stomach. He laid on the floor shocked. Yui was also shocked. He yelled, “What have I turned into?!?!”. Then, he ran out of the building and headed eastward. Hero got up and walked into the next room. There was a pillar with a golden slab on it. Hero walked over and read it aloud, “The sacred treasure sought by all, lies within the wielder of the ultimate sword. The power of the holy relic is infinite. The Crystal will reveal itself to the chosen one when darkness comes close… what does this mean?”. Just then, Yuin, Drake and Rei walked into the room. Hero was surprised to see Rei come in. After they all read the slab, they left for Yuin’s secret base.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 19, 2005 19:54:29 GMT -5
plz continue it's really good and when i mean good i mean the way i can't even write straight
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Post by mithos on Aug 19, 2005 19:57:07 GMT -5
Thanks! I have more, but I did not type it. (I type my ff on my computer, then I transfer it over to my mom's. She does not like me on the internet for a long time. That's how long it takes me to type.) I'll have more soon. ;D
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 19, 2005 19:59:45 GMT -5
ok but plz continue when you can ;D
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 20, 2005 0:17:54 GMT -5
uhh.. thats realy mean to say dragonfan123 no offence
NICE!! HERO!! plz take your time on your fan fic its realy realy GOOD!!
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Post by amdragfire on Aug 20, 2005 8:47:14 GMT -5
Of course it will be worth the wait.
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Post by mithos on Aug 24, 2005 21:03:38 GMT -5
Ok. After a long time, I'm done with this part. Enjoy:
When they arrived there, Yuin input his security code in the doors’ computerized locking mechanism. The doors unlatched and opened. They walked forward into the next room and found a big door. As they approached the second door, they noticed a huge melted hole in the middle of it. “Someone’s been here. This doesn’t look good.” Yuin said. He used ice and froze the door’s hinges. Hero and Drake both transformed and simultaneously blew fire on the frozen hinges. They cracked, because of the intense heat, and the door fell to the ground. As soon as they walked inside, they gasped in horror as they looked straight ahead of them. “So nice of you to join us! Please, come in and make yourselves comfortable.” said the Dark Dragon. Hero, Drake, Rei and Yuin immediately got into their fighting stances. The Dark Dragon arose from the chair he was sitting in and snapped his fingers. Suddenly, his whole army surrounded the perimeter of the base, armed and fully trained with swords and other weapons. One dragon, shot an arrow at Yuin and pierced his left shoulder. “YUIN!!!” Drake, Rei and Hero shouted. The Dark Dragon laughed and exclaimed, “Did you really expect to beat me? Ha! Die now!”. Just then, Hero stood up, grabbed his sword and said, “It’s time.”. Yuin looked at him and yelled, “No! Don’t do it! Stop now, don’t throw your life away for one attack! Save it for a more worthy cause!”. “No. You need me. These dragons have made their choice to serve the Dark Dragon, so I make mine to slay them with one blow. I don’t care if I die… as long as you are safe. This is a worthy cause. Now prepare yourselves! Final Destruction Wave!!!”. The sky suddenly turned black and the ground next to Hero split open. Then, light beamed out of the crack as soon as Hero gripped his sword. He bashed it against the ground and time around him froze. Yuin, Rei and Drake looked astonished as they glanced around them and noticed they were not frozen like the dragons. Then, he slashed the ground in the same spot and clear gravity spikes burst out of the ground. They looked like crystal, and were four times larger than Hero! They came from the ground, forming a wave and pierced all of the army except the Dark Dragon. Also, beams of light pierced the dark clouds and struck the earth next to the gravity. Holy swords and dark swords fell from the clouds like rain and pierced the army. Then, time unfrozen and the dragons were shredded and ripped apart by the intense, concentrated gravity spikes. All that remained were their dead, thrashed corpses. Everyone looked in awe at Hero. Suddenly, hero collapsed to the ground unconscious. Yuin and Rei both ran over to him and tried to wake him up. The Dark Dragon looked at his fallen army and attempted to flee, but Drake shot a fireball at his leg causing him to trip. Drake ran over, picked him up, and carried him to a holding cell inside the base. The cell was made of iinaronite, which disables the dragon’s natural power, but allows the dragon to remain in it’s form. Drake quickly ran over to Yuin, Rei and Hero and asked, “Will he be alright?”. “Yes. He needs a lot of rest. For now, head toward the dragon council. Rei, separate from them and go there now. You are the council’s only hope to reestablish it. I will stay with the Dark Dragon. *Sigh*, that idiot wrecked my base! You can reach me by my com-link.”. After saying this, Yuin walked inside of his base, Rei flew towards the dragon council and Drake carried Hero and walked down the long pathway leading there.
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Post by maromi on Aug 24, 2005 22:45:31 GMT -5
Good ff, didn't you stay up till 4 am making this? ;D
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 25, 2005 5:28:21 GMT -5
lol is she realy your sis?
the Special attack was GOOD! i can even picture its powers its much better than my sky dragon slash plz continue!
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Post by maromi on Aug 25, 2005 11:27:32 GMT -5
Yup
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Post by mithos on Aug 25, 2005 12:54:20 GMT -5
Thanks! (yes she is my sis. She is kinda ANNOYING!!!! Just Kidding Maromi! Just kidding...) ;D
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