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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 25, 2005 17:00:24 GMT -5
really good plz continue it's really good
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Post by Tales_ Fanatic on Aug 26, 2005 19:10:15 GMT -5
Keep up the good work.
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Post by mithos on Aug 27, 2005 16:28:02 GMT -5
After Drake passed the bell tower, Hero regained consciousness. His vision was greatly blurred and his whole body, except his head was paralyzed. He muttered, Uh… what happened?”/ Drake looked at him and smiled, “We’re almost to the dragon council. They will decide what happens to the Dark Dragon. But for now, you need to rest. By using Final Destruction Wave, your body is exhausted and is acting strange.”. “Yeah, I guess paralysis and visionary distortion can be classified as “strange”.” “You’re so right! Anyways, rest so you can heal faster. We have a long trip ahead of…” Just then, a blue dragon flew down and landed right in front of them. She said, “Stop! You may not proceed any further!”. Drake looked at her puzzled and replied, “Why not? It’s not like you own this road!”. She looked at him and paused. Then, she shouted, “What are you talking about?! I have my orders! Return from where you came from immediately!”. Drake looked at her and replied, “You’re kinda cute… for a roadblock.”. She looked at him embarrassed and shouted, “Wha-what?! Don’t forget that we are enemies… or did you?!”. “No, but I don’t think we were enemies from the start!”. Hero woke up and mumbled, “What’s the matter? Why have you stopped?”. Drake replied, “Oh. There’s an annoying roadblock in the way.”. The dragon shouted, “Don’t call me that!”. Drake grabbed hi com-link and said, “Uhh… Yuin, we have a problem.”. “What is it?” Yuin asked. “There’s an annoying roadblock in the way. What should I do?”. “Destroy it.” Yuin replied. Drake turned and looked at her and said, “He told me I should destroy you… if you don’t mind. What do you think, Hero?”. Hero woke up again and mumbled in a confused manner, “What is this roadblock? You addressed it as a she, how do you know that? (Couldn’t it be a boy boulder?)”. Drake laughed and exclaimed, “She’s a she alright! And she’s hot!”. Hero thought, “I hope these are the after effects from the attack, otherwise Drake is flirting with a boulder!”. She looked at Drake even more embarrassed than before and yelled, “I AM NOT A ROADBLOCK!!!! Stop calling me that! If you refuse to leave, then I will slay you! Prepare to die!”. She dashed forward and attempted to grab Drake’s neck, but he backed up just in time to counter. He slammed her against his knee and grabbed her by the neck. He then laid three power punches to her stomach. He grabbed her again when he let her go, and smashed her head into the ground. He then applied pressure to her neck to make her fall asleep. Suddenly, she flew up in the air and said, “Is that the best you can do?”. “No, but I can show you!”. Suddenly, Hero yawned and a huge fireball shot out of his mouth and hit the dragon. She fell to the floor with an “oof!”. Drake looked at Hero, on his shoulders with astonishment. He wasn’t impressed by the attack, but was by the fact that Hero could maintain his nap on Drake’s shoulders and attack at the same time. The girl got up and said, “You got lucky! Now, finish me!”. Drake looked at her puzzled and said, “I won’t kill you! That’s just crazy! I…”. Then, she flew off and headed toward the dragon council. Drake carried Hero and headed in the same direction.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 27, 2005 16:30:34 GMT -5
plz continue it's really good
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Post by mithos on Aug 27, 2005 16:33:35 GMT -5
I'll have more tomorrow. Right now I'm focusing more on avatars for people. But I will have more soon. ;D
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Post by maromi on Aug 27, 2005 17:36:08 GMT -5
Please, If you're not on this site you,re making avatars and banners for people. By the way they're good!!
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Post by mithos on Aug 28, 2005 19:58:51 GMT -5
Thanks sis! Here:
When they arrived, Rei was there at the entrance and greeted them. He said, “Welcome to the dragon council. How may I serve you?”. Drake laughed and said, “Okay Rei, stop joking around!”. Rei looked at him confused and asked, “How do you know my name? I have never seen you before!”. Drake looked at him shocked and replied, “It’s me, Drake. This is Hero, your student. You trained him a year ago! How could you forget?!”. Rei looked at him and replied, “If you need any help, you can go inside and talk to one of the council members. You should seriously get checked out. I’ve never trained anyone, I’m just a greeter.”. Drake backed up slowly and walked away. Suddenly, the blue dragon flew down and landed right next to them. She said, “See… you should have turned around. All of their memories were wiped clean by a man with a huge sword.”. Hero woke up on Drake’s shoulders and said, “Let’s go. Anyways, welcome to the team. My name is Hero, and this is Drake.”. “What?! I never said… Uhhh! Never mind! My name is Sarah. I was abandoned as a child and was forced to live in the mountains because no one excepted me.” Sarah explained. “I’m an orphan too. That man you saw… was my parents’ murderer. I’ll explain more when we walk because it’s a LONG story!”. Then, Hero Drake and Sarah left the dragon council and headed eastward.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 28, 2005 20:00:20 GMT -5
plz continue hero it's really good
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 28, 2005 21:16:29 GMT -5
yes its realy good!
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Post by Chaos on Aug 28, 2005 21:20:18 GMT -5
Yeah, great! I didn't get to read it until a while. It's great, descripitive and exciting...
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 30, 2005 20:45:49 GMT -5
plz continue hero plz
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Post by maromi on Aug 31, 2005 0:47:58 GMT -5
He,s working on it...seriously
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Post by retardedlink on Aug 31, 2005 1:43:20 GMT -5
Yeah heheh, continue the good job.
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Post by maromi on Aug 31, 2005 3:05:02 GMT -5
STOP TALKING TO YOURESELF, COLIN...I mean Hero.
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 31, 2005 3:09:13 GMT -5
lol your sis is so adorable when she's angry hero even her avatar is cute oooohh!...
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