Desertscar
Dragon-in-training
IMMA CHARGIN' MAH LAZAH
Shepard.
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Post by Desertscar on Sept 21, 2007 12:34:15 GMT -5
Alright, basic rundown, this FF will chronicle my fan character, Leon T. Banner on how he found his powers, his curse, and the events that unfold from it all. Chapter 1 It was like a normal day at school, walking from class to class, listening, taking notes, and doing work. But, today was everything but a normal day. I guess it started around my third hour, I had this annoying feeling in my arm. When the bell rang, I pulled up my jacket sleeve....I was shocked, amazed, and appalled at the same time, my arm, looked like a dragon's arm! From the elbow up, it was covered in this glossy, silver....fur? I walked through the halls, but before I even got to my next class, my other arm had taken the same affect. I wasn't going to go through school like this! I ran towards the nearest exit, it felt like something was tearing out of my back, I burst through the door and to the side of the building. I hunched over in pain as two scarlet colored wings came out from my shoulder blades. I ran and jumped into the air. It felt good, like I was meant to be here, I flew to my home, I burst through the door and went down to my knees. My maw and head changed shape, as did the rest of my body. I got up and stumbled to the mirror. What I saw confused me, my face, it had the shape of a wolves with silver fur, these scarlet dragon legs....I also had a dragon tail, it was very confusing, but also amazing. But how do I go back to my human form? I focused on what I looked like as a human, and slowly, I turned back to a human. I was exhausted, all my energy spent. I walked over to the couch, and fell asleep. End Chapter 1
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Flame The Fire Dragon
Maturing Dragon
I will kill you.....DIE!!! MWWHAHAHA!!![ss:American Dragon | Season 2]
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Post by Flame The Fire Dragon on Sept 21, 2007 12:42:44 GMT -5
Nice story so far i like it
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Zodiac
Maturing Dragon
HEY IT'S [That_dog]
Go on,Grab your hat and fetch your camera. Go on, Film the World before it happens.
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Post by Zodiac on Sept 21, 2007 23:18:45 GMT -5
I LIKE
i had a fic like this, exsept i never really got into it.. OH WELL SCREW IT *reads yours*
SAMMEH IS IN IT RIGHT? *pokes MSN convo we are having now* XDDD
THROUGH THE FIRE AND THE FLAMES WE CARY ONNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by YFWE on Sept 22, 2007 0:04:06 GMT -5
Hey, this really isn't too bad. It's... intriguing, more than anything, I suppose. I like the 'curse' idea. Sooo... update soon, I suppose, and please try to make it longer this time!!
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Desertscar
Dragon-in-training
IMMA CHARGIN' MAH LAZAH
Shepard.
Posts: 1,130
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Post by Desertscar on Sept 22, 2007 22:50:54 GMT -5
Chapter 2 Leon awoke with a stir, he saw his little sister Sam sitting on the opposite couch. It looked like she was focusing on her arm...."Hey kid." Leon said to her, she looked up and hid her arm quickly. "Leon, your awake, I don't know what's happening to me..." She said. "What do you mean?" Leon said, not being able to focus from waking up. She was reticent, but slowly pulled her arm from it's hiding place, Leon wasn't sure if he was dreaming still, or....No, could it have been real? He focused his vision and finally saw what she was showing him. There, her arm was covered in bright, white scales. "Leon, what's happening to me?" She said to him. Leon was highly confused, was it all real? "Sam, hit me." He told her, "What?!" She said, befuddled at what he just said to her. she put her fist back, and gave him a sharp jab to the cheek. He was dizzy for a moment, but knew he wasn't dreaming. "Thanks..." he thought to himself for a minute. "Sam, I think....I think mom and dad were....magical creatures." He thought he sounded sheepish saying it. "Magical...creatures?" She said to him. "Well, this may surprise you a little." He said as he thought about his.....werewolf? dragon? no.....Weredragon! he thought about it and sure enough he changed into his form. Sam didn't know what to say or do, her brother just changed into some wolf, dragon-thingy! "Leon...What's going on?" she demanded. "I'm not sure, but I just got these powers, I'm not sure....Maybe seven, eight hours ago..." He muttered, "When did you get that dragon arm?" Sam thought about the previous few hours. "I dunno....between my third and fourth hour..." Leon thought to himself, "That's the same time that it happened to me...why is it taking so much less time on her? maybe it has to do with our age...I'm seventeen...she's twelve, not much of a difference..." "Well, first off, can you control your powers?" Leon asked her. "Not really..." "Alright, we're going to find you a trainer." "What about you Leon?" "I'll probably teach myself, I don't have time to look for a teacher, but you should get some sleep, it's getting late, and your going to need your rest." Leon said, changing back into a human. "But first, focus on how your dragon looks to you, and try to change." She thought of what her dragon would look like, and tried, but nothing...She tried once more, and slowly, she turned into a white dragon with a yellow underbelly, a fiery blue mane going down her head to the end of her tail, a pair of whiskers on her jaw. She admired her new form,"Wow, this is amazing!" she said, happy as could be. Leon chuckled,"Alright kid, get to bed, you don't have to go to school tomorrow, we don't want to risk anything, but we're going to find you a trainer." She looked at him with a look of happiness. "Alright, night Leon." she said as she went upstairs, still looking over her new body. End Chapter 2 This one is....iffy, it seems kinda cheesy... BBUUUTTT, listening to RICK ROLL'D RASENGAN, and Through the Fire and Flames gets me pumped up
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Flame The Fire Dragon
Maturing Dragon
I will kill you.....DIE!!! MWWHAHAHA!!![ss:American Dragon | Season 2]
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Post by Flame The Fire Dragon on Sept 22, 2007 23:00:32 GMT -5
Weird how you both got your powers at the same time but i like it update soon ;D
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Desertscar
Dragon-in-training
IMMA CHARGIN' MAH LAZAH
Shepard.
Posts: 1,130
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Post by Desertscar on Sept 23, 2007 12:11:28 GMT -5
Yea :\ I wanted to kind of be a "Family linked" thing.
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Flame The Fire Dragon
Maturing Dragon
I will kill you.....DIE!!! MWWHAHAHA!!![ss:American Dragon | Season 2]
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Post by Flame The Fire Dragon on Sept 23, 2007 15:50:17 GMT -5
^ well i think its a good idea it makes the story more interesting
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Desertscar
Dragon-in-training
IMMA CHARGIN' MAH LAZAH
Shepard.
Posts: 1,130
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Post by Desertscar on Sept 24, 2007 22:23:49 GMT -5
Chapter 3 Leon checked the time....It was 1:45 AM, he sighed, he had been trying to tie in his families linking with his new powers. So far, not much luck, he heard something come behind him. He whirled around and saw Sam,"Your still up?" Leon asked, she nodded and sat down next to him. "Yea, i've been thinking of our new powers, and why mom and dad never told us about it..." she said quietly, Leon thought for a moment,"Yea, it must have been another one of those little secrets they always kept from us." Sam slowly nodded and yawned at the same time. "It's just that...Why would they not tell us? Was it to keep us safe? Or was it something entirely different? It's just that if I knew about these powers before, this would be a whole lot better. Maybe it was to help us after they died?" Leon pondered about all the possibilities..."The thing is, even if they did or didn't, we would still be doing this," Sam mumbled. "That's probably true, I just hope nothing bad happens with these powers..." Sam looked at him,"You know something bad IS going to happen, right?" Leon knew it,"Yea, I just hoped that it would make some false hope. But then again, if they did tell us, why would they? I mean, it would just confuse us and keep us thinking about it all the time...Kinda like right now, but I just hope there are no more side effects of these... All I want is to lead my normal life, but tha-" Leon didn't finish his sentence...He looked over and saw Sam, fast asleep on the couch. Leon smiled and put a blanket on her, and went back to his thoughts. End Chapter 3
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Flame The Fire Dragon
Maturing Dragon
I will kill you.....DIE!!! MWWHAHAHA!!![ss:American Dragon | Season 2]
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Post by Flame The Fire Dragon on Sept 24, 2007 22:37:21 GMT -5
It weird why your parents didnt tell you hmm makes me think if something is going to happen later on but anyway I like it Update soon ;D
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Zodiac
Maturing Dragon
HEY IT'S [That_dog]
Go on,Grab your hat and fetch your camera. Go on, Film the World before it happens.
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Post by Zodiac on Sept 25, 2007 8:04:34 GMT -5
leon: "blah talk talk talk"
*quickly falls asleep* XDD
RICK ROLL'D RASENGAN PLZ
*cant wait to read more*
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Post by YFWE on Sept 25, 2007 8:16:52 GMT -5
Not too bad, although I'd suggest that you separate your chapters into paragraphs... makes it easier to read. It'd also be nice longer.
But eh, whatever. Update soon!
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