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Post by evildragon on Dec 1, 2006 14:30:07 GMT -5
thanks ;D i might have a chapter 3 tonight, maybe even a 4..
(oh, and alot of you may not even know this, but this fanfic is to be feature length.. it's to be VERRRRRY long..)
(i will be on vacation on the weekend too, so i'll write some fanfics then, and upload them all at once)
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Post by evildragon on Dec 2, 2006 2:35:38 GMT -5
Chapter 3:
Jake wakes to the sound of beeping. He picks his head up from his pillow, and looks around the room, and it sounds like it's coming from the floor. He sees Brandon in the sleeping bad with a dragon tail hanging out where theres a tear, but notices a spot on the sleeping bag is blinking. He gets up and wakes Brandon up.
"Brandon, get up! You're blinking and beeping!" said Jake, shoving Brandons sholder. "Wha? What do you mean?" said Brandon. "Just look and listen." "Oh, that's my phone!"
Brandon looks at the telephone, and notices the phone says "Unknown Name / Unknown Numer". He answers it anyway.
"Hello?" quentioned Brandon. "2 dragons, in the same spot, this makes my job SOOO easy." said a deep and scary voice. Brandon puts the cell phone on speakerphone so Jake can hear. "What do you mean?" said Brandon. "I mean, getting you two round up will be so easy. Oh, what about the third?" said the voice. "What third?" asked Jake with a nervous face. "Oh, I believe across the bedroom hall, there is a little dragon." "No!! Not Haley!" yelled Jake. "Oh yes, that's her name. Perhaps my job will be even easier than I thought. Maybe I should have a quota." "What do you want?" asked Brandon. "..click..", the phone said "Call Disconnected" on the LCD.
"No! That voice, it sounds, so familiar.." said Jake. "Who do you think it is?" asked Brandon while looking at Jake nervously. "I don't know, but I know it's not the huntsman, how would he know YOUR phone number, let alone my family?" "True, very true. So, what are we going to do?" "Don't know."
Jake opened the bedroom door a little, to look out. He sees nothing. "Everything looks clear to me." said Jake. "Good", said Brandon.
Jake and Brandon head down stairs, where Jakes mother is cooking breakfest. "Who wants french toast?" she said. "Sorry, we need to go to gramps shop, like, NOW." said Jake, very quickly. Brandon followed Jake out the door. "Dragon up!" both Brandon and Jake said. They both flew to Lao Shi's shop.
"Gramps, yo gramps?!" yelled Jake. "What is it? You almost broke the door coming in.. This isn't like you." said Lao Shi. "Me and Brandon got a strange call on Brandons cell phone.. It was another threat, and it was too me, Brandon, and Haley!" "Hmm, this isn't good. Whatever the threat is, it's getting very close. Brandon, give the cell phone to Fu Dog, he can try and track that call." "No good, the phone doesn't even know who it was." said Brandon. "Exactly. Fu Dog knows his ways." said Lao Shi, looking at Brandon, with trust in his eyes, for Fu Dog. "Fine."
Brandon walks over to Fu Dog to give him the phone.
"No no, just give me the SIM card. That's all I need. Those things keep a record of everything, I'll get information off of it." Fu Dog said. "Oh, how long would it take?" said Jake. "Probably 8 hours. These things are encrypted tough, so people like me, um, dogs like me, can't crack into it."
Jake heads to school, while Brandon follows. Brandon signs up at the school's main office as a "visitor". Brandon is able to be in the classes with Jake.
As Jake and Brandon are walking down the hall, Rotwood comes out of a closet with a hand full of books. "Ha, look at that dudes crazy hair!" Brandon said out loud. "Oh, you mean Jake?" said Rotwood. "No, I mean...." Jake puts a hand over Brandons mouth. "Don't do it, he'll chew you up.." said Jake. "Remember Jake, I'm watching you." said Rotwood. "What does he mean?" said Brandon. "He knows I'm a dragon. He wants to expose me." said Jake. "Do you think, he's the one who made the call?" "No, he's too stupid to know how to use a phone." said Jake, while Brandon laughed.
As school gets out, while Brandon was walking down the school steps, he tripped, and fell onto the sidewalk. He saw someone standing in front of him. He looks up, and notices it's Madisen. "Oops, my bad." said Brandon. "No worries." said Madisen. "So, how have you been?" "Doing ok. What are you up to, with Jake?" "Um, he was threatened, twice, by an unknown entity. I'm kinda acting as his bodyguard." said Brandon, winking to Madisen. "No you're not, your just here because..........um, you're just here because he threatened you too." said Jake. "You inferring that Brandon isn't strong? I think you're wrong on that." said Madisen, winking back to Brandon. "Say what?" said Jake. "You heard me!" said Madisen. "Burn!!" said Brandon. Jake used his dragon tail and tripped Brandon back on the ground. "Not again!" yelled Brandon, right at Jake. "I better go, see you later Brandon!" said Madisen. Madisen gave Brandon a little kiss, then walked away. "Jake, that wasn't funny." said Brandon. "Well, you were taking the credit." said Jake. "Because.....because....um....has it occurred to you that maybe I was trying to impress Madisen? And anyway, I AM acting as your bodyguard anyway!" "Geez, sorry. Didn't think you'd get all upset about it." "Well, it was uncalled for." "Sorry. I'm just....I'm just all stressed right now. I don't even know who's threatening me." "It's ok, but don't forget, this entity is threatening me too, and your family." "That's what worries me."
As Jake and Brandon walk, they all of a sudden, someone from behind grabs both of them, and brings them both into a dark alley.
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Post by crazy17 on Dec 2, 2006 12:34:52 GMT -5
CLIFFHANGER!! *runs around* Darnit, Madisen...so close! >_> Great chapter! Update sizzoon!
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Post by Chaos on Dec 2, 2006 12:41:38 GMT -5
LE GASP!! Dragged in an alley. Ah, kewl, my feature length fan-fic is also coming. This is nice. The Earth King declares that this will be updated after you sign 15 papers! Orr.... Just update. ^^
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Post by evildragon on Dec 2, 2006 12:41:53 GMT -5
i'll try to write some while im on vacation.. got my trusty laptop with me, so i should turn up some cool stuff..
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Post by evildragon on Dec 4, 2006 18:05:38 GMT -5
i didn't get any fanfics done.. sorry..
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Post by evildragon on Dec 5, 2006 21:41:57 GMT -5
Chapter 4:
As Jake and Brandon were pulled into the dark alley, Jake felt like he had been pulled in by his enemy, the unknown one who threatened him. When Jake turned around, he realized he was wrong. It was Madisen!
"Madisen! Hey, uh, what are you doing?" Jake said. "Brandon, wait over there, ok?" said Madisen. "Oh, nothing, I just, well, didn't like how you talked to Brandon." "Oh? Well, what are ya gonna do about it?" said Jake with a smirk on his face. "Testing me?" said Madisen. "Hahaha!" laughed Brandon, in the background. "Jake, don't be foolish." "Why?" asked Jake, with confusion. "Cause I know some spells." said Madisen. "Oh snap!" said Jake. "Hahaha!" laughed Brandon, again. "It's not funny!" yelled Jake. "Yes it is." giggled Madisen. "Hey, wanna fly"? "Uh, what do you mean?" asked Jake.
Madisen proceded to do a "Wingardium Leviosa" spell, which made Jake levitate off the ground. He was just floating in the air.
"Hey, put me down!" said Jake. "Nice one!" said Brandon. "Yep. No one messes with Brandon!" said Madisen. "Dragon up!" said Jake, turning into a dragon. "Hey, I can't fly anywhere!" said Jake. "Of course, you are where I want you, you aren't moving anywhere." said Madisen.
Madisen poked Jakes stomache saying "Bad dragon!".
"Ok ok, I'm sorry!" said Jake. "Good, you can come down now." said Madisen, stopping the spell. "Haha, that was soooooo funny, I completely enjoyed it." said Brandon, with a tear running down his face, from laughing so hard. "Watch it, I know where you live." said Jake, looking at Brandon. "Wanna fly again?" said Madisen. "NO!!" yelled Jake.
Jake walked out to the sidewalk to get a hot dog from the stand across the street. Brandon and Madisen stayed in the alley.
"Brandon?" said Madisen. "Yea?" said Brandon, turning to her.
As soon as Brandon turned around to Madisen, she gave him a kiss.
"If you need my help, helping Jake against this 'threat', let me know, ok?" said Madisen. "Sure, I got your phone number." said Brandon. "Yep. Hey, um, did you plan that?" "Yes, I did, why?" said Madisen with a small giggle. "No reason." said Brandon winking at Madisen. Madisen winked back. "See ya later!" "See ya!"
Brandon went across the street to Jake, and Madisen continued walking home.
"So, what was that about?" asked Jake. "Nothing." said Brandon. "Yea right." "No, really, it was nothing." said Brandon, with a smile on his face. "Want a hot dog? I'll pay." asked Jake. "Sure. You sure you wanna pay? I got some money." "No you don't. Madisen took your wallet." "She what?! Why would she do that." said Brandon, laughing.
Madisen walked into her house, and put her backpack on the chair in her room. She looked at Brandons wallet.
"I Brandon doesn't get mad at me. I hope he understands why I took his wallet."
Jake noticed Fu Dog on the street, with another dog. Jake and Brandon approached them. "Fu, what are you doing? Aren't you supposed to be working on Brandons SIM card? You know, to PROTECT me?" "Oh, I was taking a break. You know, SIM cards are a real pain in the neck. Literally too." said Fu Dog. "Argh! Come on! I'm the one who's in danger here!" yelled Jake. "Hey, um, do you want to know my SIM cards PIN number?" asked Brandon. "That would help." said Fu Dog. "What? Why didn't you tell him that earlier?" asked Jake. "He didn't ask. Fu Dog, it's 384017." said Brandon. Fu Dog takes a piece of paper and a pen out of the flaps of his skin, writes down the PIN number, and puts it all back. "Thanks! Now I can finally get passed stage 1." said Fu Dog. Jake sighed, looking at Brandon.
Brandon and Jake continued walking on the sidewalk. Before they got to the next intersection, two Huntsclan people approached Brandon.
"Are you Brandon?" asked one of the Huntslcan people. Brandon knew sure enough who they were. He knew he had to lie. "No, who are you guys? I need to go to the store." said Brandon, nervously. Jake was told to stand by the mailbox that was 18 feet away from them. Jake knew he couldn't start anything, that might expose himself. He knew Brandon would have to deal with this himself. "You sure look like Brandon. If you're not Brandon, what's your name then?" said the other Huntsclan person. "My name is Danny." "Show us your ID then." "I don't have my ID with me."
The huntsclan grabbed Brandon and tried to get his wallet from his pocket, but it wasn't there.
"Blast! We don't have any positive ID on him. We can't do anything about him." one of the huntscaln people said. They both ran off.
Jake came running back. "What was that about?" asked Jake. "They wanted to slay me. They know I'm a dragon. But they couldn't ID me, cause they faintly knew what I looked like. They hoped I had my ID with me, to get a positive ID on me. That's why Madisen took my wallet." "How would she know? She in the huntsclan?" "No, she's not. I know that. It's just, what kind of magic can she do?" said Brandon, with a lot of thoughts going through his head.
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Post by evildragon on Jan 19, 2007 2:59:10 GMT -5
Chapter 5
Brandon was walking down the street, with Jake, when he saw Madisen running to him.
"Brandon, I have to tell you something." said Madisen. "Yea, what is it?" said Brandon. "Um, I have some bad news that you need to know." "What's wrong?" "I'm going to be moving to another state with my family. It's across the country." "What does that mean?" "That means we won't be able to see each other anymore." "What?!" "I'm sorry I'm telling you this now, but I just found out." "I'm going to give you two a couple minutes." said Jake, walking down the street by himself. "Madisen, this can't be true, please tell me you're joking!" said Brandon, starting to feel sick inside. "I'm sorry, it's true. I really am moving." said Madisen, with a tear running down her face. Brandon remains speechless for a few seconds, then wipes the tear off Madisens face. "Is there anything you can do to stop the move?" asked Brandon. "No, there isn't. If I knew about this sooner, I would have told you." "This brings a lot of sorrow to me. It's almost like it's a 'forbidden love'". "That does sound like what it is, doesn't it?" "Yes, it does. It's like we are meant to be with each other, but we can't do anything about it." "Here, let me atleast buy you a hot dog. New Yorks finest." says Brandon, turning around and ordering a hot dog. When Brandon turns around, Madisen is gone.
Jake returns from his short walk. "So, how did it go?" asked Jake. "She left without even saying goodbye." said Brandon. "Maybe she was too heart broken to stand saying it." "Yea, that's probably what happened. Wait, how do you know what went on?" "Um, I couldn't help but overhear a few words."
Brandon begins to have a tear of his own, as he realizes that was probably the last time he would ever see Madisen, and he didn't even get to say that he loves her one last time.
Later in the day, after Jake and Brandon went to their own homes, Brandon goes to the Sega game console he left a couple days ago.. He proceeds to power it on, but doesn't find the strength to use it. "I wish she was here, I wish I could see her again, but that will never happen. It is a 'forbidden love', just like I thought."
"Knock knock!" said a voice at the bedroom window. It was Madisen. "What, what are you doing here? I thought you had to leave." said Brandon. "Not without saying goodbye!" said Madisen. "I thought it was going to be too hard on you, to say your goodbyes." "It is hard, but not too hard for this." says Madisen, kissing Brandon. Brandon returns the kiss, and gives her a big hug. "So, now this I guess is really it." said Brandon. "Yes, this is really it." said Madisen. "I love you, I will never forget you!" "I love you too, and I will never forget you either!"
They both say "Bye!" and Madisen leaves the room, back out the window she came in. Brandon goes to bed, with tears, knowing he won't see whom he loves, again.
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Post by Chaos on Jan 19, 2007 10:52:33 GMT -5
Awwww.... That was a saddy sad chapter. The one before it was pretty kewlies though. Continue soonoonnnn.
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Post by crazy17 on Jan 19, 2007 12:01:30 GMT -5
Awwwwww! That was sweeeeettttt! ^____^ And sad...and romantic...
I'm moving to Utah! GO UTES! XD
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Post by evildragon on Jan 22, 2007 23:21:45 GMT -5
(It should be noted that this fanfic now takes place after Homecoming, since I never mentioned Rose once.)
Chapter 6
It's 8:34 AM, and the alarm is going off, and has been for 4 minutes. Brandon moves his hand and slams the "snooze" button. "I'm not getting up!" he yells.
Couple minutes later, and Brandon gets up. The phone rings, caller ID shows it's Jakes cell phone. "Hello?" asks Brandon. "Hey, how's it going?" asks Jake. "It's doing ok, but I wish it was better." "You know, sometimes you just have to go with the flow." "I wasn't really talking about me and Madisen, I realize that it would never work out. What's I'm talking about is you, I've been trying to figure it out, who it could be." "You know what? Me too. The voice sounds familiar, like I've heard it before." "Is it possible it's an old foe?" "It could be. But, why? I thought all of them were taken care of, if you know what I mean." "Yea, I know what you mean, but I wonder if maybe you skipped one, forgot about 'em, or they didn't really get taken care of, and totally fooled you." "I wouldn't be surprised if that was true." "Hey, lets go meet in a public place, okay?" "Sure, you know where to go."
Both hung up the phone. Brandon knew exactly where he meant, Central Park.
Brandon gets all his morning stuff done, including eating. He heads out the door and continues walking down the street. As he is walking, he spots whom he thinks is Madisen. "Madien!!" he yells reaching for her shoulder. "Who the heck are you?!" screams a woman whom's not Madisen. "I am so sorry!" says Brandon, but it's too late, the lady is all ready hitting him with her purse. He runs away down the street.
The duo finally meet up at Central Park, where Brandon has a bruice on his head, and Jake has one too.
"How did you get that bruise?" both ask at the same time. "I'll go first. I got beat up by this lady, cause I thought she was Madisen." said Brandon. "You did? Same for me! Except I thought I saw someone I remember, but can't quite put my finger on it." "Oh, you mean Rose?" "That's it!" said Jake.
The duo continue to talk about this "unknown enemy", when all of a sudden, they are blind folded, and taken off somewhere.
"Where am I?" asked Jake. Jake looked around, and saw Brandon knocked out.
"You are with me." said this deep voice. It was the voice from the cell phone. "Where are you?" "You'll never see me. Not for a while anyway. HAHAHAHA!!!" "COWARD!"
The voice did not respond, it seems to have gone away. Jake looks around, he sees nothing but mostly darkness, but does notices brick walls, and an old fasion window with bars on it.
"Brandon, get up!" yelled Jake. Brandon does not budge, he's out cold.
Jake stands up, and starts walking around. He sees a big metal door closed, the only door in that room. He uses his dragon claws and tries to pick the lock. He's unsucessfull. He tries again, this time he gets the door to open. He looks back at Brandon, then continues moving forward.
He walks around, and sees nothing but fire pits, and stone walls. He notices a big hall. He goes down the hall, remaining to the side, trying to keep out of sight.
He hears talking in the distance, and he continues forward. Once he reaches an opening where the sound is loudest, Jake takes a peek. Jake is almost in shock when he notices it's the Dark Dragon!
The Dark Dragon notices Jake, and flies over to him. "How did you get out?!" demanded the Dark Dragon. "I got out because you were too stupid to even have a guard! You know, people that WATCH the door!" explained Jake. "Silly fool, I AM the guard. I caught you, didn't I?" "Uh, yea, but...." "SILENCE! I will not tolerate any escapes, not here where I am in charge!" "Oh, you mean the "dummys palace?"
Jake gets knocked out again, from behind.
"Take him back to the cell I had him locked up.. This time use a better lock!" demanded the Dark Dragon.
"Yes, I will do just that." said Councilor Chang, as she begins bringing Jake back to where he escape from.
Hours pass, and Jake is just starting to wake up.
"Awe, I got such a massive head ache!" said Jake. He looks over to where Brandon was, but he's now gone.
"Wha?!! Where did he go!!??" said Jake, very nervously.
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Mar 16, 2007 9:06:50 GMT -5
OOOOOO cool! XD
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