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Post by roselong121 on May 18, 2007 23:33:51 GMT -5
Here's the sequal to Jake's summer. I hope you all like the title.
"Haley-hoo, Jakeroo! Time to get up!"
Jake slowly opened his eyes to greet the golden sunlight. He sat up and looked at himself in the mirror. There he was; no longer a middle school kid but a full-fledged high school student. He streached out his arms getting up and out of his bed. Just then he realized "Bathroom."
He walked out into the hallway to greet Haley, also no doubt heading for the bathroom. He grinned "Morning Haley, You know now that I'm a highschooler I can still totally beat you to the bathroom." He said acting quite arrogant.
"Not if I, Dragon-up!" Haley exclaimed turning into the small pink dragon form of herself. Haley began flying towards the door. She bumped into something on the way. "Jake? Dad! Jake's using his doppelgangers again!" Haley tattled as Jake immediately absorbed his Chi doppelganger.
"Jakeroo, now what did I tell you about using your dragon powers on your little sister? You know she can't use her doppleganger powers yet." Johnathan scolded as a door slammed.
Jake growled under his breath as he heard Haley giggle behind the door. "Better luck next time big bro!"
After Jake had gotten ready for school he headed down stairs to greet his mother holding a camera. "Oh, I can't believe my little boy is growing up so fast! I mean just a few years ago you were busy making mud pies and now you’re a highschooler." she exclaimed as she snapped enough pictures to blind him for life.
"The funny thing is mom, he ate the mud too." Haley teased eating her oatmeal.
"Yo, at least I ain't the one that’s eating Gramps kind of cereal." Jake teased right on back grabbing a slice of toast before putting on his helmet.
"Jake, that’s all you're going to eat?!" asked his mom shocked at he wasn't touching any thing else. She knew by lunch he would be starving.
"Yeah, I promised Rose I would meet her at the corner to walk her to school. Love ya'll bye!." Jake exclaimed heading out the door.
"Hey there."
"Hey there yourself, Dragon-boy." Rose replied as Jake skidded to a halt in front of her. He popped the board into his hand.
"Wow, I've hardly seen you in a skirt." Jake said gazing at her. The only time he could ever remember on her wearing something close to this was when she was leaving for Hong Kong and had no memory of him at all. Of course, he was sure the Huntsclan would have never allowed skirts like hers.
"Something tell me you like it." she replied playfully. "We'd better hurry to school, we don't want to be late for homeroom." she said taking his hand. "What's wrong Jake?" Rose asked noticing Jake's strange look.
"Well it's just, back in the academy when the Huntsclan existed. You would never hold my hand because we feared that they would find out about our relationship. Not that I don't want to it just feels a little..."
"Weird? It will at first Jake, I mean our whole relationship is quite strange. Yet good strange." she replied still holding tight to his hand. "We don't have to worry about that anymore."
Jake smiled at her as she smiled back. Just as their faces drew close they were interrupted by Trixie and Spud.
"Yo Jakey I, uh. Maybe we should just talk to you when ya'lls ain't gonna smack some lips. Come on Spud let's rotate." Trixie said as they interrupted Rose and Jake.
"Aw, it was just about to get good." Complained Spud, as they skated away. Jake turned to Rose "Now where were we?" Rose giggled but stopped him with her finger.
"Come on Jake were gonna be late. We need to get to school fast." With that Rose and Jake scrambled to the school as fast as their feet could carry them.
Well, hope you all like it so far. This is kinda season 3 to me..
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Post by roselong121 on May 19, 2007 0:01:06 GMT -5
Sorry, minor note. Some events in this story might be confusing if u haven't read Jake's summer.
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Post by superspud234 on May 19, 2007 8:07:43 GMT -5
Jake: awsome! lol Haley does eat Gramps ceral! haha update soon!
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on May 19, 2007 9:29:55 GMT -5
So awesome! YAY SIS!
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Post by roselong121 on May 19, 2007 11:38:29 GMT -5
Yay! Lots of reviews equals chapter two.
Jake and Rose barely got into homeroom just as the bell rang. "Well, who are you that was almost late to class?" the teacher asked giving them both a dirty look from her desk. "Um, I'm Jake Long and this is Rose Hunts. We're freshman and.."
"Well that still doesn't excuse tardiness. You both will write "I will not be late and make up lame excuses." a hundred times if you are late to my class again." Jake tried not to talk back; this woman was almost as bad as Rotwood with detention giving. Why was it that almost all teachers were like this to him; he wondered that every day. Just then the TV screen clicked on.
"Time for the morning announcements. Please stand for the pledge." After they all sat down again a kind looking older man came on the screen. "Attention students, I am very sorry to inform you all this but I am retiring within the next day. I know that my replacement will help to uphold the standards we have all come to have at this school. Please give a warm welcoming to my replacement: Mr. Hans Rotwood."
"Aw, man!" was all Jake could say as Rotwood face appeared in the screen. He knew the only reason Rotwood would be following from middle school to high school was to expose the fact that Jake was a dragon.
"Why me?! Do people just want to torcher me constantly?! It's bad enough being at a new school where some teachers dislike me already, but to have Rotwood as my principal again? That can't be a mere coincidence." Jake complained putting his head upon the stack of books he had been assigned for each class.
"Come on Jake, maybe Rotwood will leave you alone this year. I mean you don’t think he knew where you were going to be for high school.” Rose said massaging Jake’s shoulder caringly.
“Yeah dude keep a low profile and maybe you can avoid him for well, um.” Spud was cut off by Jake nearly shouting.
“Four years?! And what the rest of my life?! I’m pretty sure he’ll probably follow me to college or something.” Jake felt like his life was doomed to have Rotwood as his shadow forever. “Jakey, just ignore him. You should be happy; you and Rose are finally together. I mean for a while I thought you two would never be together. Plus, you got a way cool looking pendant from your Gramps. Rotwood being here is just a tiny flaw in our high school plans.” Trixie said trying to calm Jake down as well. Even though all his friends knew the only reason that Rotwood was here was because he would have more options to expose the fact that Jake was a dragon.
“Alright, I’ll just try to forget he’s here. Besides, there aren’t any Mythology classes here. At least I don’t think.” Jake looked at his schedule. The next class he had was creative writing. That sounded like fun to him, plus Rose was in that class with him; actually she was in most of his classes as well. “We’d better get to 5th hour. We don’t need to get detention on the first day.”
As they entered the class room it was a very strange looking one. Nice relaxing music was playing and sweet smells infiltrated their noses. If he didn’t know better he would have sworn he was in some coffee shop. Just then he and Rose saw the teacher. “Sun, what are you doing here?!” Jake asked seeing the tall slender Asian women face them.
“Well, I heard you would be going here plus, I love creative writing like I love Home Ec. It lets you freely express your creativity.” She said as she finished straightening a stack of papers on her desk. Jake smiled as he sat down next to Rose. Sun he didn’t mind, heck he could actually talk to her openly since she was a dragon as well.
After class Jake and Rose were walking down the halls as Jake slammed into an open door. “What the hec-“Jake stopped as he realized who it was. “Well, didn’t fancy bumping into you here.” Rotwood said straightening himself as he offered a hand to Jake. Jake glared at him “No thanks I’ve got it.” He said remembering the time Rotwood had hidden the Brockium up his sleeve. He wasn’t going to accept his help and turn into a dragon in front of everyone.
“Jake, we’d better go. Don’t need to start anything.” Rose said grabbing Jake’s arm leading him away from Rotwood. She knew Jake would probably start something he would regret much later. “Jake, you’ve got to just put on a happy face and go about your day. Just grin and bare it.” Rose said after they were out of an earshot.
“Rose, I know he’s up to something. And I’m going to find out what.” Jake said looking back at his office as Rose led him away.
Here you go, you know the drill. Rand R.
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on May 19, 2007 19:09:49 GMT -5
I LOVE IT! TONS AND TONS! YAYA SIS! ahh dumb rotwood, i hate his class!
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Mess with me and I will show no mercy.[ss:American Dragon | Season 2]
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Post by Zen on May 19, 2007 19:13:26 GMT -5
ITS AWSOME!
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Post by roselong121 on May 20, 2007 21:58:18 GMT -5
Here's chappie three.
Jake heaved a giant sigh as he, Rose, Spud, and, Trixie walked home from school. This had been the worst day at school ever. "I can't believe all the homework we were assigned, and it's only the first day!" Jake complained as he shifted the weight of the books he was trying to balance.
"Hmm, I only have about one page tonight. It's funny how they say calculating probability is so hard when really it's way too easy." Everyone turned to look at Spud. Spud wasn't known for his genius at high school yet. "What anyone can calculate it by."
"Okay, um how about a new topic. Rose, do you have anything to say?" Jake asked trying to switch the conversation to something less confusing. "I'm trying out for the cheer squad." Everyone turned to stare at her now with a less intensified stare. "What did I say?" Rose asked feeling quite cornered.
"Um, are you sure you want to?" Trixie asked Rose, remembering her experience being on the cheer squad. Trixie remembered that all cheerleaders mainly do is make fun of everyone and bicker about each other. "I mean those girls are not at all like you."
"Well, tryouts are tomorrow. I was hoping that you could probably give me a few pointers since you were on the squad in middle school.” Rose said complementing her hoping her flattery would earn her a yes. Trixie looked at Rose, who was now giving her the “puppy dog pout” one of the most effective techniques used on anyone.
“Oh, all right. But, if you leak one word that I helped you, I don’t think Jakey could save you from my fury.” Trixie replied finally giving into Rose’s plead. Trixie did not want the cheerleaders knowing that she helped Rose because they would probably bug her into joining as well.
“Alright, but I will say thanks at least.” Rose replied a little scared of her. Jake just chuckled as they continued walking. Soon Trixie and Spud left the group to head over to the skate park.. Meanwhile Rose and Jake kept walking along. They were heading to Gramps shop. “So besides that whole Rotwood thing, did you have a good day today?” Rose asked Jake as he halted and turned to face her. “Yeah, especially since you were there.” Rose smiled at him. They were just leaning into kiss, just then Jake’s cell rang.
“Kid, there’s trouble at the Brooklyn bridge again!” Fu dog exclaimed. “You’d better head over there right now!” Jake turned to look at Rose. “Looks like it’s time to Dragon up.” Jake said turning into a dragon and flying off.
Jake was in no time at the Brooklyn bridge. “Yo Amdrag in the hizz house!” Jake exclaimed as he landed on the bridge. He looked down to see a bunch of sailors fighting each other. “What in the world?”
“Boys are so easy to control, did you miss me Jake?” Jake turned around to face Vicky. Vicky was a Siren who Jake had almost been “won” by in the bachelor auction. She seemed innocent at first but, soon her true evil, mind controlling nature was revealed to all. Jake, Trixie, and, Spud put her away after learning about her men-controlling powers. A Sirens power was to sing her victims, A.K.A men and boys, into total mind control.
“Vicky?! Yo, I thought you were doing hard time in the magic slammer.” Jake replied quite shocked that she was back.
“It was quite easy to escape since all my guards were male. You think they would know,” she paused when a small beeping went off. “Ugh, still with the swimmers ear!” she complained. “All right, where were we? Oh yes, get him boys!” she commanded as the sailors began to fight Jake. Jake soon flipped them all into the bay where they were instantly awoken from the spell.
“Impressive Jake, you and I will make a great couple.” Vicky said firing some sound waves at Jake. Jake tried to resist but he could feel the waves taking over his control. “Can’t resist much longer.” Jake groaned trying to keep in charge of his mind.
“No one can resist it. Hey!” Vicky jumped back when a green laser beam almost hit her. “Who are you? Wait you’re the Huntsgirl. Why would you defend something you slay?” Vicky asked staring down Rose.
“Cause no one lays a hand on my boy friend.” Rose stated positioning another blast towards Vicky. Vicky looked at Jake shocked. “You would go out with the Huntsgirl over me?!”
Jake took this moment to grab the necklace from Vicky. “Ha, you’d better skedaddle before my boo roasts you.” Jake said putting the necklace in a safe container. “I’ll be back!” Vicky exclaimed jumping into the water and vanishing. Rose pulled off her mask and set her old Huntstaff down. The only part of the Huntsgirl uniform she had kept was the mask; she had made herself a totally different outfit. Instead of the usual blood reddish uniform; she wore a black leather jacket, magenta shirt with a bit darker magenta pants, and a belt. She also had some black boots to go with it. She had of course braided her hair before pulling on her mask.
“So who was she?” Rose asked sitting next to Jake. Jake had forgotten about Vicky and Danica since Rose had come back. He began to explain all about the bachelor contest and about how Vicky had framed Danica by giving her the Siren necklace.
R and R please!
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Post by roselong121 on May 20, 2007 23:24:21 GMT -5
Oh, and please help me decide what the new name of a villain shall be out of these three.
Pira Vani Virla
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antiyonder
Jake's friend
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Post by antiyonder on May 21, 2007 7:13:57 GMT -5
Oh, and please help me decide what the new name of a villain shall be out of these three. Pira Vani Virla Vani sounds pretty good. Anyways, great work on the stories/chapters you've written so far. Just a fun little suggestion for a future chapter if you don't mind. Ever considered doing a flashback to how well (of embarassing) of an impression Jake and Rose made on each other's parents? Just asking since you do pretty good at keeping the character portrayals faithful to the show. That and I was thinking of the Kim Possible episode Emotion Sickness where Kim's parents gave Ron their blessings and warnings at the same time.
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Post by roselong121 on May 22, 2007 1:54:13 GMT -5
Yes, I’m getting more reviews!
“Yo, G! I totally kicked some Siren butt today!” Jake bragged as he sat down on the couch that lay in the back of his Grandfathers shop. “Ahem, you?” Jake rolled his eyes and sighed as he corrected what he had said. “Alright “we”, “We” kicked butt.” Remembering the fact Rose has shown up, he turned and asked “How did you know where I was and more importantly where did you learn some of those moves? They seem quite familiar.” Rose opened her mouth to respond but was silenced by Gramps speaking.
“I taught her young one. It was under her and my request.” With that Jake’s mouth dropped open, Gramps was expecting this from Jake.
“G, are you kidding me?! Rose can’t,” Jake stopped to look over at her face that now harbored a annoyed look. “sorry, more like shouldn’t be fighting magical creatures. What if she got hurt?! I think I can imagine what her dad might possibly do to me.” Jake had met Rose’s father before picking her up for a date. Jake knew if he ever hurt Rose he better go into hiding.
Rose turned and placed her hand on Jake’s shoulder, trying to comfort him. “Don’t you see though Jake, I’m fine. Plus, I used to take out magical creatures all the time while I was Huntsgirl.”
“Yeah, “used to be”. You “used to be” Huntsgirl.” Jake pointed out “Your fighting skills, no offense, might be a little rusty.” Rose knew that Jake was only concerned for her well being, but she felt the same way for Jake. “Jake, the only reason I want to join this unending fight between the two worlds is because I couldn’t bare to ever see you hurt either. Plus, your Grandfather requested that I join you and prove to the Dragon council that I’m serious about being good.” Jake gave a small smile which probably meant he approved.
Later after some training and a loud explosion caused by Fu dog trying out some new potions. Jake and Rose were heading to the school. Unbeknownst to them, they were being observed and recorded. “It seems zee dragon-boy has a girlfriend who helps him protect the magical creatures. It seems to be miss Rose from last year, I knew those two would end up together. Although I believe that she said the marking on her arm was a birthmark.” Rotwood whispered into the camera as he zoomed in on Rose and Jake.
“Yo, I think” Jake slowly looked over his shoulder “were being followed.” Rose just then got into her purse and pulled out her compact. “Hmm, yes were being followed. He’s a male about 5 foot 2, scraggly hair, and is trying to hide behind the trash can with the blue lid.” Jake was too busy gawking at Rose’s identifying skills that he was just dragged along as they ran into the alleyway that was a head of them. Sure enough Rotwood proceeded to follow but as he turned into the alleyway it was as if they had vanished into thin air. “Vey must have spotted me.” Concluded Rotwood, before turning on heel and walking off. Rose and Jake both heaved a sigh as they hung onto the fire escape. They had ditched him for now.
“So you’re telling me old Rottie had followed you all from Gramps shop and is like, stalking you?”
Jake and Spud were sitting over on the sidelines as Trixie was teaching Rose about moves and chants. “Totally dude, why else would he have chased after us like that? I told ya he was up to something.” Jake replied to Spud gloating a little about the fact he was right. “For all I know he could be monitoring all my activity.” Jake just then turned around to make sure no one else was listening to their conversation.
“Doesn’t sound too good. Maybe we could go investigate his apartment.” Spud suggested looking for any reason to do some more spy work. Jake smiled at his friend as he watched Rose doing a flip out of the corner of his eye. “Maybe Spud, maybe. Till then I think I’m gonna go ask Trix how practice is going with Rose.” As Jake walked over he nearly tripped over someone who had been warming up on the floor. “So sorry, I didn’t see you there. Danica?!” Jake smiled at her as she got up off the floor.
“Hey there Jake, so how have you been?” Danica asked acting friendly. Danica and Jake hadn’t left off on such a good note, with his friends accusing her of being a siren and all. She still looked the same except for the fact she had her long chestnut brown hair up in a loose braid. “Well, I’ve been pretty good.”
Meanwhile Rose looked over to Jake spot to notice that it now had Spud messing with his laptop. Then she spotted him talking to a very nice looking girl. “Who’s that Jakes talking to? He seems to act as if he knows her pretty well.” Trixie could hear a tinge of jealousy in Rose’s voice as she asked her.
“Oh, that’s probably Danica. She was Jake’s GF for a while back but they broke up before he came to visit Hong Kong and find you.” Trixie knew that Rose was probably feeling a little unsure about this “Danica” which she had never met. “I’m going over to say hi.” Rose said taking her pom-poms with her.
“Hey Jake, who’s this?” Rose asked putting her pom-poms on her hips. Jake could feel the tension building between them. “This is Danica, another one of my friends. Well, actually we used to be BF and GF.” Jake admitted. The silence between the two of them was sort of scary. “Hey Rose, why don’t we get back to practicing for your tryouts?” Jake asked breaking the silence and leading Rose away. “Bye Danica!” Jake shouted as Danica waved back. Jake knew he would be in hot water now.
Hehe.. Danica V.S Rose!!! Fight of the century. Kinda like Heros tonight!! R and R please.
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Post by superspud234 on May 22, 2007 12:04:23 GMT -5
Jake: Um this makes me feel uneasy....great story!
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on May 22, 2007 12:46:21 GMT -5
Great writing sis! Danica VS. Rose! WHoot!
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Post by superspud234 on May 22, 2007 14:16:36 GMT -5
Jake: Rose wins everytime! lol
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Post by roselong121 on May 27, 2007 14:57:22 GMT -5
Wowzer. I love all these reviews. More, here you go.
“So you guys went out for a week? And this has something to do with that Vicky girl huh?” Rose asked as they walked from the gymnasium area. Jake had figured he would just tell her everything that happened about the Siren and avoid any of He and Danica’s dates. “Yeah, Vicky was jellin about her so she planted that necklace on her so I would think she was a Siren. In the end Danica hated me because Trixie accused her of being the Siren because she thinks all pretty girls are evil.” Jake stopped to look at Rose who was lowering one eyebrow. “Yeah, she doesn’t think it about you. Any longer, I hope. So um, I gotta head home. Mom and Dad are probably worried that some magical creature has destroyed me or something.” Jake joked as he turned to run home.
Jake looked in to see his family watching TV. He reached into his pocket for his key, but it was gone. “Aw, man.” Jake whispered as the door suddenly opened up. “Well, look-see who’s trying to be a little sneaker.” Jake chuckled nervously at his father as he went inside.
Across the street someone watched Jake enter his house. “Hmm, I had no idea Mr. Long lived across from me.” Rotwood muttered watching Jake get scolded by his father. He smirked as he went to grab his recorder. “Maybe some dragon activity vill happen tonight.” Rotwood said sitting there watching the Long residence.
The next day at school Jake ran into class nearly taking out Ms. Stern, his Geometry teacher. “Yo, sorry. I did all my homework though.” Jake announced handing over a large stack of papers. “Well, that’s a bit of a surprise.” Rose commented as Jake took a seat next to her. Just then a student came into the class with a slip of paper. “Mr. Long, you are wanted in the principals office.” Jake’s smile turned to a frown. What did Rotwood want with him?
Jake stood outside the door of his office thinking about what traps or surprises awaited inside for him. Jake finally opened the door and entered the office. He looked around as he went inside. If you didn’t really know Rotwood you would think he was an okay person. Nothing about “Magical creatures” was hanging on the walls, much less his old theories. Jake welcomed by Rotwood into the room. “Alright so why am I in here? I have yet to break a rule.” Jake pointed out as Rotwood sat down at his desk. “Now, Mr. Long. You are not being punished, why must we always be enemies?” Rotwood was acting quite strange, he was acting as if he and Jake had forgotten all about the “expose” plans of his.
“Yo, why are you trying to act all nice to me? I know it was you following me and Rose that afternoon. I may be magical but I’m definitely not gullible.” Jake said as Rotwood’s smile still remained. “Mr. Long, that couldn’t have been me, I was at a parent teacher conference with Mr. Spudinski’s parents about his advanced classes.” Rotwood said shuffling some papers on his desk. After about fifteen minutes, Jake was turned free. Jake immediately went to find Spud.
“Yo, Spud. Were your parents with Rotwood yesterday?” Jake asked as he watched Spud take out a huge math notebook. “Actually that’s what I was trying to tell you yesterday. They were, which means.”
“That wasn’t Rotwood. But then, who could it have been?” Jake pondered as they walked to their next class.
OOO, how did Rotwood do that..
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