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Post by superspud234 on May 27, 2007 16:09:14 GMT -5
Jake: Wierd Rotwood's freaking me out. Wot i actually did homework for once? Cool, I love this Rose!
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Post by roselong121 on May 27, 2007 21:03:55 GMT -5
Rose: I'm glad you do Jake.
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Post by roselong121 on May 28, 2007 18:05:34 GMT -5
As for how Rotwood did that, only ME knows.
“But I’m telling you it had to be Rotwood. Who else in New York stalks kids and has a German accent?!” Jake complained to Fu dog as he was looking up something on the laptop.
“Well kid, I really have no clue what the heck could have happened. By the way sorry the old man was so hard on you in training today.” Fu apologized. “Well, I’m gonna talk off now G. Me and my boo have a date tonight and I gots to be looking fizine.” Jake said slicking his hair back only for it to pop back up. “Young one do you think you could drop off this at the MUN for me?” Gramps asked as he handed Jake the box containing the Siren necklace.
“Sure G, but what’s the MUN?” Jake asked quite confused. “The MUN stands for Magical United Nations. It’s basically the Magic based UN.” Fu dog stated simply turning back to the computer after reading “seeking a young single dog who’s looking to have fun.” Jake rolled his eyes as Fu dog immediately replied to the ad.
“Alright G, I’ll drop it off. See ya!” Jake exclaimed jumping onto his skateboard as he headed home to prep himself for he and Rose’s date.
“Oh, yeah. I’m definitely bringing sexy back.” Jake commented practically sliding down the stairs. “Really Jake, I didn’t know that you were such a copy cat. Of course you do rip all your so-called slang off old rap music videos.” Teased Haley as Jake started to head out the front door. “Jake, where are you going?” Jake spun around to find Rose standing in the living room. Jake was confused “I though I was picking you up?” he asked walking over to her.
“So this is the Rose girl you obsess over. Hun, come on down and meet Jakeroo’s girlfriend.” Mr. long shouted out. As sure as anything, Mrs. Long had grabbed her camera and was instantly taking pictures. “Um, Mr. Long I’m pretty sure you met me back in Hong Kong.” Rose replied shaking his hand. “Oh yeah, that’s right you used to be that Huntsgirl person right?” Jonathan asked remembering bits and pieces of what his son had told him about Rose.
After about ten minutes they finally released the two. “Wow Jake, your family is just so nice. I can’t believe you never let me meet them until now.” Rose gushed as they turned the corner. “Well, besides the fact that the niceness only lasts for a while, I’m not so sure they would have exactly loved you if they had known back then how many times you tried to slay me.” Jake joked resulting in a playful punch from Rose. Soon they arrived at the pizza parlor he was taking her to. “I hear this pizza is the best.” Rose said as they entered.
Soon they were both talking and having a great time. Jake had forgotten all about the events that were making him uneasy before. “So, when you are done with school what do you want to do as a job?” Jake asked Rose. “Well, I really have no clue yet. Is that bad?”
“I thought you would go into modeling since your so beautiful.” Rose blushed. “Mr. Long flattery will get you everywhere.” She commented kissing him without warning. Jake just then sat up straight remembering that he needed to go drop off the package at the MUN before nine. “Uh Rose, do you think we could go I need to drop off something at the MUN.” he looked at her confused look “Don’t ask what it means.”
Soon they had arrived at the MUN building. After Jake dragoned down they headed inside. “Um, Jake are you sure this is the right building? It sure doesn’t look magical.” Rose commented looking around. “After you say the password it does.” Jake walked up to a door where a little slit slid open. “Password?” Jake nervously replied “Monkey feet.” Rose gave a comical look to Jake and had to keep from laughing as they entered.
Soo far soo good. R and R please.
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antiyonder
Jake's friend
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Post by antiyonder on May 28, 2007 21:02:12 GMT -5
Good chapter, and I see my request was considered.
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Post by superspud234 on May 29, 2007 2:07:36 GMT -5
Jake: haha funny.. keep going
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Post by roselong121 on May 30, 2007 0:13:24 GMT -5
As for their date you know I gots to keep it like the real Jake Long TV show would. So far I would say I’m doing a pretty good job. Eh, at least I didn’t get eaten by a twister today. Don’t ask. On with the show.
As Jake as Rose crossed into the room, it turned out to be more like a palace. The ceilings were high stretched and magical creatures were etched into the walls. There were also the 13 biggest threats to the magical community. Such as the Dark D. still remaining number one. Even though most magical inhabitants lived in complete ignorance of the fact he still existed.
“Mr. Long, welcome me lad.” A short man came out, Jake instantly recognized him as the leprechaun he once had worked for. “Yo, Shamus? You work here, what about “Pot o’ gold?” Jake asked as Rose looked quite confused, she swore she could faintly remember something about this guy.
“Well boy-o. There comes a time when people have to realize that they need to take things seriously and..”
“And you figured working here would help stop the Dark. D and be more honorable than your old shop huh?” Jake asked smiling. “Actually, they pay better here.” Rose had to stop from laughing, such a typical leprechaun. As they were lead back to a different room they saw a certain mermaid working on a computer shaped as a shell.
“Hey Jake, long time no see.” Silver Joked as they walked into her office. “Sorry the place is such a mess. Miss Huntsgirl you look rather pretty tonight, do you have a date?”
“Actually, her name’s Rose and yes she and I had a date. We came to drop this off with you.” Jake replied grabbing the container and placing it on her desk.. Silver looked down at the box and then at Jake. “Siren’s necklace eh? Well, I will make sure this get’s locked up tight along with the other dangerous artifacts we have received from other people.” Jake and Rose turned their heads to see a large pile of things, some didn’t look quite evil but you never knew in the magical world. Rose gasped as she picked up on thing, she ran her fingers over the surface. It was the Huntsman’s old crest. Rose could remember that the Huntsman wore this all the time even as he was sucked into the portal she knew this was with him.
As Rose and Jake exited the MUN building, Jake knew Rose was upset about the crest. “Rose, it’s okay. The Huntsman is gone for good. He probably left this with 88 and 89.” Rose turned to Jake and silenced him. “Listen to me Jake, the Huntsman never took this off. Not even when he was asleep. And now it just happens to show up? This isn’t a coincidence Jake. I fear that.” Rose swallowed hard. “He’s back.”
“If you are sure he’s back, let’s go swing in on 88 and 89, and find out what they know about old Huntsy right now.” Jake then led them into an alleyway, dragoned up and flew them to the old Huntsclan academy.
As they walked though the place it almost seemed creepy to them. The old banners were mainly torn down. The area’s trashed from blown in dirt and trash. It seemed like a real ghost town. “Yo, 88, 89 come on down we want to talk with ya’ll!” Jake called out. Sure enough 88 and 89 came down a staircase with staffs in their hands.
“Well, well, look who we got in our humble abode 88. The old Huntsgirlie and her dragon BFF forever.” 89 teased.
“Yo, fool. How many times do a I gotta tell you. It’s BFF! Besides their more like BF and GF now fool.” 88 scolded taking a playful swing at 89’s head. Jake rolled his eyes at them. “I need information on where the Huntsman is.” Jake said. 88 and 89 burst out laughing.
“Are you kidding me dragon fool?! The Huntsman is still trapped up in that vortex ya’ll put him in. duh!” 88 remarked walking over to Jake. “Wow, have you ever noticed this 89, but I’m almost as tall as the dragon when he’s in human form?” he asked standing next to Jake.
Jake pushed him away. “So you’re telling me ya’ll know nothing about the Huntsman’s whereabouts? I mean Rose thinks he’s here.” 88 and 89 both raised an eyebrow at Rose before bursting out laughing again. “That’s a good one.”
Rose grabbed the crest out of her purse and put it down on the table that lay before them. “Laugh at this. It’s the Huntsman’s crest. You both and I know that he never takes this off. And according to Silver it was discovered by some pixies near the bay.”
88 and 89 both looked as if *stops to laugh here* they had seen a dragon. They were both very pale and 89 was starting to nibble on his fingernails. “You-you guys found that?!” 88 asked stuttering half the way.
“Actually a pixie did, like we said before. And now are you gonna take us seriously?” Jake asked. Before Jake could say another word 88 and 89 were screaming out things like: “We’re gonna die!” and “Momma!” Jake finally silenced them by dragoning up, thus making them stand still.
“Alright, we’ll see if we can find any information on the new clan’s whereabouts at “the Scoop.” 88 said now taking this seriously. “Just promise that we won’t be torched by the Huntsman?” 88 begged Jake. Jake rolled his eyes again. “Fine, just find out what you can and contact my Gramps.” Jake said as he and Rose flew off into the night sky.
Ooo, the Huntsman’s crest. What the heck? Is Jake doomed to be tourtured forever?!
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Post by superspud234 on May 30, 2007 3:10:29 GMT -5
Jake: Oh no... dun dun dun!!!! lol i love this story!
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on May 31, 2007 20:55:26 GMT -5
OOOO AWESOME!
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Post by The Pantheon Dragon on May 31, 2007 21:08:53 GMT -5
Huntsy back?Ugh,not good...Fantastic writing,just be sure to space out your dialouge.That will both make it easier to read AND make your story seem longer. LP
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Post by roselong121 on Jun 1, 2007 2:10:55 GMT -5
I think I allready write enough.. LOL? Thanks for being so faithful and coming back to read new chaps. I will try to update sooner than usual . Here’s the next chap.
The next day at school.
At lunch time Jake filled Spud and Trixie in on all the details from the night before. “So, your telling me that old Huntsy could be back?” Trixie asked with a fearful tone. The last time she had seen the Huntsmaster he was fighting Jake mercilessly. Just the sight of that man terrified Trixie. “I wanna hear more about the date. Did you guys do that whole scene from that one dog movie where she had spaghetti and you did and then.” Spud made kissing noises as Jake blushed a tint of red.
“Spudinski!” was all it took for Spud to cease his mocking. And go back to researching on his laptop. “Anything yet Spud?” Jake asked getting a little impatient. “Well, I recently discovered that it is illegal in Hawaii to put a penny or any other coin inside your ear.” Jake just simply lowered an eyebrow to Spud and replied “Anything we can actually use to find the Huntsman yet?”
“Nope dude but I’ll keep searching while you go.” Jake looked confused “What? Where am I going?” Trixie put her hands on her hips. “Jakey, do you remember anything important happening today?” she asked rolling her eyes at him. Jake thought hard before it hit him.
“Oh my gosh, Rose’s tryouts! I promised I’d be there! Sorry guys got to go!” Jake exclaimed before running to the gymnasium area. “I swear that boy would lose his little dragon head if he didn’t have someone to remind him.” She said as she and Spud watched him dash away. “Yep, hey I got something!”
Rose stood waiting her turn in the gym. She was so nervous, she knew her old Huntsgirl self would never feel this way. Of course her old self was supposed to hate Jake and would constantly try to slay him.. Rose pulled her hair back into a ponytail as she heard her name called out. She grabbed her pom-poms and ventured out to the mat area. She hopefully looked out into the stands to see Jake’s smiling face but no, all she saw was Brad being surrounded by girls. She gave a quick shrug, and then put on her best smile before heading out onto the mat to perform her routine.
Meanwhile Jake was still running to get to the gym.. He hoped Rose hadn’t gone yet. He had completely spaced on the fact that tryouts were during lunch. He was so distracted by his thoughts he ran head first into someone standing in the halls. After rubbing his head he immediately got up to help who ever he had knocked down. “I’m so sorry, oh hey Danica.” Jake said offering a hand to her, which she gladly accepted.
“I guess we just keep bumping into each other huh?” Danica asked in quite a flirty voice, tossing her hair over her shoulder. “Yeah guess so, listen I really need to get to the gym.” Danica stopped him.
“What a coincidence, I’m heading that way too. Why don’t we just walk there together, to not risk anymore collisions?” Danica suggested. Jake smiled at her. “What harm could this cause?” he thought as they walked down the hall together. As he and Danica departed Jake didn’t realize he had left something very important behind. He also didn’t realize who had found that certain something.
Soon he arrived at the gym doors. As he entered with Danica he could see a bunch of girls cheering wildly and a lot of the girls were around Brad. Then he located his cheerleader. “Hey Rose, so how did tryouts go?” Rose simply looked at Danica with a bit of a glare before picking up her duffle bag and walking off. “Looks like trouble, I think I’m gonna go Jake. Nice to see you, bye!” Danica said nearly running out of the gym area.
“What’s a matter? I’m sorry I couldn’t be here to cheer you on.” Jake said trying to soothe her. Rose undid her ponytail and ran her fingers through her hair before turning to him. “I made the squad; in fact I’m captain of freshman squad.” She said still not sounding joyful.
“Rose, you got made “Captain” and your not happy about it one bit?” Jake asked feeling quite bad, Rose was expecting him to be there for her and he couldn’t even remember to come. “Jake I’m quite glad and excited but, not having my BF there for just moral support. Instead Brad shouts out “way to go Rosealicous!” Rose turned to look at him. “Jake, please tell me you have a good reason as to why you weren’t here.” Rose asked.
“Well, I almost mauled poor Danica while I was running here. I’m sorry I stopped to help her up.” Jake replied starting to have a bit of anger and frustration in his voice. Rose went over to Jake and caressed his face. “I forgive you. You just need to promise you’ll be at the games to see me in action.” Jake grinned at her. “You mean in that cute little cheer outfit? I would never miss that.” Rose smiled at him as their hands joined together and they walked off to the next class.
As they left someone had been watching the whole thing from a distance. “So the Dragon’s girl is easily jealous. Hmm, interesting.” Vicky pondered as she watched them from the bleachers. “It seems this girl is mostly angered by Danica. Who isn’t though? Oh well, this can work to my advantage.”
Oo, Vicky is planning something.. Someone picked up something Jake had dropped. Wonder who it is and what.. R and R.
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Post by superspud234 on Jun 1, 2007 3:42:22 GMT -5
Jake: Ooooooooo Vickys coming back!
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Jun 1, 2007 20:16:07 GMT -5
Oh no! The huntsmans back, and vicky *strangles her* is back. awww man! Jk si syou know how much i love it!
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Post by roselong121 on Jun 3, 2007 1:06:15 GMT -5
Wow, after watching Magical Enemy #1 like ten times now (I usually watch the ep like this.) I feel inspired. Now, back to Jake Long!
“Yo, I can’t find it anywhere!” Jake exclaimed flipping over his backpack and rummaging through the contents of it. “Nope,” he said pulling out his math notebook “Eww, it’s only been a few days of school and I already have rotting fruit? How does this always happen?!” Jake asked pulling out a rotting apple.
“I think it’s the same way with me dude, cause every time I check my pockets I have a peanut stashed in one.” Spud replied pulling out of his pocket a chewed up piece of gum. “Oh, okay today is the day it’s not in my pocket. Hey, my yo-yo!”
Jake rolled his eyes at Spud before turning out his pockets. Hoping the item he was searching for was within them. “Aw, man, just a bus token and a sleeping potion.”
Spud’s eyes lit up, he ran over and grabbed the potion from Jake’s hand. “Oo, does it really... work...” Spud drifted off to sleep within one minute after only a whiff of the potion.
“What is it that you’re searching for exactly Jake?” Rose asked picking through his notebook. Jake immediately grabbed it back.
“Well, I kinda misplaced my er, Dragon pendant.” Jake replied sheepishly. Trixie, Spud (who had awoken) and Rose looked horrified. “Why are you guys looking at me like that?”
“Jakey are you kidding me?! I mean with old Rotwood out to expose you again?!” Trixie turned to Rose “You’d better knock some sense into this boy before ya’ll get married. Other wise he’ll forget ya’lls anniversary.” Jake blushed while Rose giggled a little.
“Trixie! Besides, who says Rotwood has it?”
“Um, does the fact that he’s wearing it count?” Jake flipped his head round to see Rotwood walking into the school wearing Jake’s pendant. His eyes became wide a saucers.
“Ro-Rotwood?! But how?!” Jake ran after Rotwood with Rose following.
Soon Rose and Jake were standing outside of Rotwood’s office. “Rose, you don’t have to come in with me.” Jake said as Rose stayed right at his heels.
“Jake, who knows what Rotwood has plan- Mr., I mean Principal Rotwood.” Rose said seeing Rotwood welcome them in. They sat down in the seats as Rotwood shut the door.
“Alright, tell me what you big plan is this time? What are you gonna do, hold my pendant hostage until I dragon up and tell the world?” Jake asked not being able to take the silence. Rotwood simply smiled.
“Even though that sounds like a great plan, I have a much better one.” Rotwood glanced over at Rose. “You will both simply turn yourselves over to me.”
“Wait, ourselves? What does my being a dragon have anything to do with Rose?” Jake asked in surprise.
“Miss Hunts your hand please” Rotwood reached out and looked at Rose’s birthmark. “Ah, yes. The mark of the Huntsclan is it not? For years I have heard of weird people fighting these magical creatures. To expose not only the existence of magical creatures but also,” he evily looked at Rose “a secret magical hunting organization. That would prove both of my theories and put Brock into a mean jealousy streak.”
Jake was so sick of taking this. “That’s it Rotwood. I have had it!” Jake said beginning to dragon up but Rose grabbed him.
“Jake he’s got a camera positioned at every point.” Jake looked and sure enough there were cameras.
“Your girlfriend is quite smart Mr. Long. I can see that her training has probably taught her much. Including how to hide from someone in a alley. I knew you were both still there that day but, the potion was wearing off. Now that I have obtained a dragon’s pendant I can use the doppleganging powers more often.” Rotwood jumped for joy “Oh, this is even better than my mother’s shinzle on a cold day in May.”
“Doppeganging powers? Um, no offense Rotwood but only a dragon can dopplegang…” Jake’s mouth shut as Rotwood showed them a screen of a class room. Sure enough Rotwood was standing there. Jake and Rose’s jaws dropped. Just then the bell rang. As Rotwood was distracted they ran as fast as they could out of his office.
“Run all you want Mr. Long. Soon enough the most fameous people in the world will want to meet me.” Rotwood took out a small vile from his desk. “after they meet you.”
Ooo, Rotwood got’s a plan, Jake is one hot man er, boy. Hehe. Just R and R please.
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Post by superspud234 on Jun 3, 2007 3:03:24 GMT -5
Jake: Nooooooo.... My pendant! Damn you Rotwood! Keep going I'm hooked on this!
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Jun 4, 2007 11:54:49 GMT -5
Me:AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!....... Alyssa:NOOOOOO!!!!!
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