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Post by redemption on Jul 15, 2007 18:51:24 GMT -5
Hmmm.... interesting.
I haven't checked this out and thought I would, considering I liked your last one. I definitely see some improvement but there's still some spelling errors... nothing serious, though.
Continue. ^__^
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Post by roselong121 on Jul 15, 2007 21:11:35 GMT -5
^^ that's good. Trust me I'm glad to use a comp over pen and paper..
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Post by roselong121 on Jul 15, 2007 22:14:05 GMT -5
Well, sorry for the major shock.. I guess it woke up a few people. Here’s the next one.
“This can’t be!’ Jake looked over at Stacey, she and the other cheerleaders were gossiping in the back of the gym. “Besides I’m not shallow and evil.. I mean.”
“Dude, it’s okay.. I don’t think Stacey would even go out with you anyways. You aren’t her type.”
“No offense man but neither are you.” Jake didn’t know why they were even talking about this. As if it was even going to happen.
“Yeah, but she went out with me anyway.” Spud was beginning to sound a bit frustrated at Jake. He knew Jake was upset because of him and Rose being perfect matches, but Spud had hoped that he would have gotten Stacey, even Trixie as his match. “Hmm, I wonder who Trix got.”
“She probably got Kyle. Look here she comes now.” Trixie upon further impression seemed as if she was going to cry. Jake and Spud began to expect the worse. “What’s wrong Trixie? Not get your test back?”
“No, I got it.”
“How bad could it be?” Jake asked.
“Two words: Brad Morton.” Jake and Spud’s mouths dropped nearly to the ground. Brad Morton? The worst of all the popular guys at their school?! It couldn’t be..
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “I mean why is fate spitting on me?” Trixie complained as they left the gym. Rose was now walking along side of them as they continued. “Well, it’s not just you. I got Stacey and he got Rose. Somehow I think someone’s behind all of this.” Jake said as they came upon the skate park. “but who would do this?”
“Oo, what if it’s some evil mastermind who was banned from his dance and his true love ran off with his evil half brother who runs a fish market in England..” Everyone looked at Spud strangely.
“Come on Spud, lets go ride the half pipe and things will be a little better.” Jake suggested as he got out his skateboard. “You leaving Rose?”
“Besides the fact that I can’t skate, well I’ve got a ten page paper to work on for my Bio class.” She gently brushed his cheek with her lips. “I’ll see you later.”
“Allrighty lover-boy, are you gonna skate or just stand there with that goofy face all day?” Just as Trixie was about to start, someone flagged her down. “Brad, what do you want?” Although, she obviously knew why he was there.
“The Bradster knows that you are his perfect match and wants to know if you want to go hang with me tomorrow night. So how about it?”
“I would rather watch paint dry.” Trixie said trying to skate away but Brad followed.
“Please give me a chance. I promise I won’t make fun of Jerk, I mean Jake Long…” Brad pleaded as he stopped her gently. Trixie placed her hands on her hips in doubt but Brad was looking at her with the puppy dog pout. She knew she couldn’t resist long.
“Oh, alright. I’ll got out with you, but only on a trial base period.” Trixie responded. “Now could I please skate?” Trixie finally got to skate as Brad moved out of her way. “Now, this is just too weird.”
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “Bye guys! See ya tomorrow, I gotta get home. Dad won’t except any excuses thi-s” Just then Jake bumped into someone. “I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean to.” “It’s okay. Oh, hey there Jake.” It was Stacey who he had bumped into. What scarred him even more is the fact that Stacey was being so nice about him bumping into her when; in the seventh grade she put a guy in the trash because he tripped her.
“Well, what are you doing here; I’m pretty sure cheerleaders don’t like skateboarding. I mean, with all the bruises, scrapes, and helmet hair issues.”
“Um, I was hoping I would run into you here. I like, wanted to talk to you about the whole match thing. I mean since you must be perfect for me.” Stacey replied tucking back a stray hair.
“Stacey, you don’t actually think that we are meant to be because of some stupid personality test?”
“Well that’s what I wanted to ask you. I was wondering um, you know that new coffee place called “the Bean Scene?”
“Yeah, what about it?” Jake asked quite confused.
“I was wondering if you could meet me there tomorrow, say like fourish?” Jake gritted his teeth. Meet Stacey?! Wasn’t this like a date, if it was wouldn’t it be considered cheating?
“Um, okay. As long as it isn’t a date.” Jake slapped him self on the forehead as she walked off “Stupid, stupid!” he stopped as a couple raised their eyebrows at him. “Hehe..”
ooo, Trust me that this will become good.. R and R,,
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Post by roselong121 on Jul 16, 2007 21:23:25 GMT -5
Just so you all know, it's gonna take a while to come up with a new chap..
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Jul 18, 2007 21:26:38 GMT -5
AH! sis nooo! poor rose, idiotic stacey AH! FREAKY! AH! lol You know i love it
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check it out yo, the amdrag is in da hizhouse[ss:American Dragon | Season 2]
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Post by amdrag1 on Sept 16, 2007 7:18:00 GMT -5
please come up with the other chapter
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Post by roselong121 on Sept 24, 2007 9:55:23 GMT -5
Hehe, I'm wondering about if I should go put up the next *giggles* few chapters... Cause there have been a lot more!!
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Student
check it out yo, the amdrag is in da hizhouse[ss:American Dragon | Season 2]
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Post by amdrag1 on Sept 24, 2007 12:26:20 GMT -5
please do, it´s a very good story. If there is gonna be a 3 season this is a very good story idea
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Oct 3, 2007 13:05:07 GMT -5
PLEASE update!
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Post by antiyonder on Oct 8, 2007 1:05:21 GMT -5
She's posted more chapters on her fanfiction.net page. Here's the next chapter:
Thanks for reviewing after I shoved that shock into all of your faces… I sure hope you are enjoying this story as it becomes more and more revealed. Please submit any questions you have about the next chapter with your review... BTW.
“So what do you think Trix?”
“What I think Jakey, is one why are you asking me about all of this? When you know that Spud is better at the whole guy thing advice.” Trixie was sitting sprawled out on her bed talking to Jake who had just told her about his little run in with Stacey. She knew that Jake wouldn’t ask Spud about this. Especially after the fact that Stacey was apparently Jake’s perfect match.
“You know why Trix.” Jake was nervous as ever about meeting Stacey at four tomorrow. “I just don’t want it to seem like I’m trying to get together with her ya know?” Jake replied rubbing his head.
“Well, Jakey you want my advice?”
“Yes!”
“Don’t give Stacey any reasons to think you’re adorable, or flirting with her.” Trixie stated filing her nails.
“Trix, do you actually think I would flirt with Stacey when I’ve got an awesome GF that’s Rose?!” Jake smiled arrogantly “Besides, the adorable-ness just comes naturally. I am the Mac daddy dragon of the N.Y.C.”
“Ugh, whateva player. Anyway, got to go Jakey.”
“Good luck with the Bradster.” Jake commented with a smirk as he hung up the phone.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The next afternoon Jake waited nervously inside the “Bean Scene” as he waited for Stacey to arrive. The door rattled quite a few times, but it wasn’t Stacey just yet.
“Hey, you showed up.” he turned to see Stacey sitting down across from him. Instead of her usual cheerleading uniform she had changed into a pair of washed out jeans and mauve top. “I’m surprised you didn’t stand me up.”
“The Jake-man stand a lady up now that’s just crazy.” Jake replied as she took a seat next to him.
“So, um I bet your girlfriend was pretty upset about her not being the exact match for you huh?” Stacey asked not in a “neener” kind of way, but in a caring and concerned way. For Jake this all seemed too weird.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Just around the corner Rose and Spud were walking together. Not as a couple but, as a couple of friends. They were looking all over for Jake.
“So where did he say he was going to be?” Rose asked checking her cell. Hoping that he had called her.
“I really don’t know. Trix told me he was at Dragon Training or something.”
“But we just stopped at his Gramps place and he wasn’t there.” Rose narrowed her eyebrows. “Something strange is going down, you don’t think he’s hurt?” she asked worried that one of his enemies had taken captive of him.
“How about we grab a drink from this place and keep looking.” Spud suggested pointing at the “Bean Scene.”
As he and Rose walked in, they spotted Jake. “There he is,” she dragged Spud to a table and hid behind a menu. “and he’s with Stacey?!” Rose was shocked she knew that Stacey had been announced as his perfect match.
“Are we gonna go talk to them?” Rose hushed him with her hand.
“No, I want to hear what they’re saying.” Rose leaned closer hoping to catch what Stacey was saying to Jake. Rose began to feel her temper boil as Stacey’s hand went and rested on top of Jakes.
“So, like I know you would never believe this but I actually think you’re cute.” Stacey said doing a hair flip. Rose gasped as she heard those words.
“We are going to talk to them, and you are going to act like you like me.” Rose grabbed Spud’s hand and dragged him to their table. She was determined to make Stacey back up off her man.
“Oh Spud, you are so funny.” Rose faked a laugh as Jake turned to face them. “Oh, hi Jake. Hi Stacey.” Rose made sure to add sarcasm into her voice as she said her name.
“Rose, why are you and Spud here, together?” Jake asked not quite comprehending the situation at hand. Rose gave Stacey a death look as she explained that they were just there for some coffee.
“Well, Jake and I met to discuss this whole dance thing.” Stacey replied becoming a bit more hostile. Jake could tell that this was not going to end well. Spud meanwhile was reliving the days back at the academy where the two Huntsgirls had fought viciously over him. Although that was before Stacey ever even gave him so much as a glance.
The next day at school…
“Well, I’ll see you in gym for your practice.” Rose said to Lacey as she headed down the hall towards the gym. After she got through the doors she found the squad warming up and her favorite guy sitting in the stands waving down at her.
“Why did I even get so upset about all of this yesterday. Jake likes me not Stacey. Besides she has Spud.” But things went from bad to worse in practice. As the homecoming king and queen were announced..
Ooo, me’s soo evill R and R!
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Post by antiyonder on Oct 8, 2007 3:29:50 GMT -5
Wow, ya’ll REALLY want an update BTW, thanks for pointing out my mistake I guess my comp missed it… LOL? Well on with the story..
“Hello students since all the candidates are in this room for king and queen, I have decided to announce the winners early.” Rotwood has been standing over in the middle of the stands. In his hands he held a crown and a tiara. They glittered in the light as he pulled out a small envelope.
“Could all the couples please come down to the center court so we can crown our king and queen!” Within a few minutes all the couples nominated were down on the floor. “And this year’s homecoming king is…”
“I sure hope you win. I voted for you Jake.” Rose said as she held his hand. She really did want him to win it since the last time he had, she had ruined the moment with the entire Huntsclan showing up at the dance. This year was going to be better she just knew it.
“Jake Long!” Rotwood exclaimed as Jake carefully took the crown from him and placed it on his head.
“Oh yeah!! Check out who’s the king!!” Jake exclaimed as he thrusted his hands into the air waving them around while people cheered.
“Yes, yes and now for the queen. This years queen is… Stacey Wintergrin!”
Rose felt a singe of anger and jealously as Stacey gladly accepted the tiara and wrapped her arms around Jake. “It should have been me with him, or at least Spud as king...”
Later the next day at lunch
Trixie and Spud came over with their trays to find a rather depressed looking Rose at their table. “Hey girl, what’s wrong? You look sadder than Spud when he found out that Mr. Piggy ain’t real.”
“Mr. Piggy isn’t real!!?? Why?!!!!”
“Well,” Rose began trying to explain the turn of events from practice yesterday over Spud’s whining. “So Jake got homecoming king and I’m really happy for him but, Stacey got queen. What’s funny about all of this is that I knew I was going to get it. Since I tallied the votes and all. Some of her friends might have taken some votes and slipped them in..”
“Well, maybe it was Veronica. You know how she doesn’t like you and Jakey together. Since you a cheerleader and he being a skater.” Trixie suggested. She knew Veronica hated Rose because of her being not only popular but also dating “below her food chain.”
“I can’t believe it.. Why would Stacey do this to me?!” Spud asked poking his fork around on his plate just pushing his food back and forth. Just then in came Stacey and the other girls from the cheer squad and Jake was with them.
“Wow, he’s soo cute!”
“You are soo lucky to have him as your king Stacey!”
“You and Jake make a cute couple!”
Rose felt so mad at every comment the others made about Jake and Stacey. Meanwhile Jake had come over to the table. “Hey guys, what’s up?” He asked as if nothing had happened.
“Oh, well you just totally stole my girl away from me. Some friend you are.” Spud commented getting up from the table and walking off.
“What?! It’s not like I wanted Stacey to be with me. We’re just king and queen, but Rose is so much more to me than that. You do know that right?” He asked to her.
“Jake, I really don’t feel like talking about this right now.” Rose replied absently. “I do believe you though.” Rose added giving him a peck on the cheek before getting up and leaving the table.
Jake slumped down in his seat. He knew that Rose wasn’t mad at him and he also knew that if being King meant that he couldn’t be with her, it just wasn’t worth it. “Hey Stacey, could we meet up outside in about ten minutes? I need to talk to you.” Jake asked as Stacey nodded her head to him.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- She and Jake met up at a table and Jake began to discuss about the whole issue over King and Queen. “And I just feel that if being King means making Rose stay a distance from me; then being a king isn’t worth it.”
Stacey hugged Jake tightly. “Oh, thank you Jake. I’ve been feeling so bad about abandoning Spud. I mean, you’re cute and all but your just not my Spud man.” Stacey explained as she let go of Jake. “Here,” she handed Jake the tiara. “if I give it up the first runner up gets it which is Rose.” Jake looked at her quite shocked.
“You are REALLY going to give up this tiara?!”
“What, did you think I was going to give up my BF for a plastic tiara? Jake, I told you High school has actually changed me. Now if you’ll excuse me I’ve got one Spud man to cheer up.” Stacey commented walking off to go find Spud.
Jake smiled at her as she wrapped her arms around Spud tightly. “Now, to go make things right.” Jake said running off to find Rose.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Rose was walking home she kicked an empty can as she crossed the street. “Why did this have to separate us again?” Rose asked as she placed her hands into her jacket pockets. Just as Rose turned to cut though an alleyway she heard a small twig snap as she continued down the path. Rose stopped and turned to survey the alley. Nothing but trash and dirt.
As she continued on she heard it again. This time Rose grabbed an old mop and prepared to fight what ever could be following her. “All right, show your face! I know your there!!” her cries echoed throughout the alleyway.
“Please could we be a little less dramatic? I mean my sisters say I’m bad, but you ha, your another story.”
“Who are you?” Rose asked the woman standing before her. She wore a Greek style dress and her hair seemed to be moving as if it were actually alive. “Wait, aren’t you Medusa?”
“Fury is the name. Not Medusa… ugh why is it that people ONLY know about her and not me.. I’m the most important of the gorgon sisters!” Fury ranted. “Anyway, I need you to destroy the American Dragon.”
“I would never destroy him!”
“Why not, aren’t you a member of the Huntsclan?” Fury asked noting the birthmark upon Rose’s arm. “Wait, oh” Fury lowered her eyes into a smirking stance “you like him don’t you? I knew it!”
“Yes I do. So what?!” Rose replied jumping into the air and beginning to fight Fury. Fury sent out her snakes of her hair as Rose tried to hold them off with the mop. Unfortunately the snakes snapped the mop in half leaving Rose with out a weapon.
“I could finish you now, but then again revenge is the sweetest of all.” Fury glared into Rose’s eyes. Rose began to feel rather strange as she began to become under Fury’s control. “Yes, and now you shall go and slay the American dragon!! Muhahahahaaha!” Fury paused for a second. “Ya know the “Evil laugh” does need a little work.”
Oh no!!!! Fury has got Rose under a mind control spell. Will Jake be able to break it.. R and R!
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Post by antiyonder on Oct 8, 2007 3:33:26 GMT -5
Sorry for such a short update on my other story but I really need to plan out what’s going to happen next plus I am trying to start up two more stories..
“Rose? Come on Rose pick up.” Jake shut his cell phone frustrated; he had no idea where Rose was and if she was ignoring him. “Now her voice mail is full.” Jake said laying his head down upon the table.
“Jakey, I know she said she was okay with everything but, you gotta give miss ninja girl some space. Maybe she thinks you’re here with Stacey and decided to stay home.” Trixie suggested she had finally been able to ditch Brad on the dance floor.
“Why would she do that? Besides I already called her parents said she had gone out earlier.” Jake replied adding his frustration to his tone of voice.
“Aiight, no need to get all up in my grill.”
“Sorry Trix, it’s just; I thought that this would be a nice homecoming for a change.” Jake apologized glancing over at the other happy couples dancing together under the glow of the shining lights. He sighed wishing that that could have been Rose and him.
“At least you ain’t the one having to hide from your date.”
“Speaking of hiding Trix, I think someone found you.” Spud said as he sat down next to Jake with Stacey at his side. Trixie turned around to face Brad.
“Hey there Trixie I thought you were going to get some punch?” Brad asked looking a little confused and hurt. “Well, if you don’t want to be around me then I think I’ll just head on home.”
Trixie bit her lip as Stacey, Jake, and Spud all gave her that “Aw, come on and give him a chance” look. “Yo Brad, I’m sorry how about a dance?” Trixie asked running off to catch up to him.
“Dude, you aren’t going to try to call Rose again are you? It’s really noisy in here and probably she can’t hear you too well.” Spud said as Stacey let out a huge squeal. “This is my favorite song come on Spuddy let’s dance!” She pulled Spud off the dance floor by his arm.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Jake headed out of the doors and into the deserted hallways. He pulled out his cell phone and dialed Rose again. Just then he heard a ringer going off in the next hall. He walked slowly to where the source of the ring tone was coming from. There she was all dressed up and everything. “Rose, you came?!” Jake was overjoyed to see her there.
“Yes, Jake I am here.” She replied in a rather monotone like way.
“Is there something wrong Rose?” Jake studied her face; there definitely was something wrong with her. She was acting far too lifeless. “Muhahahaha! Hello American dragon!” Jake spun around to face Fury. “I knew a little sneaky no good gorgon like you would be behind this.”
Fury raised an eyebrow in confusion at him. “You actually did?”
“Nope,” Jake did a sweeping kick to knock Fury backwards. “but it does make for a rather good distraction doesn’t it?” Fury got back up immediately laughing still. “Oh, it’s not me you have to worry about. It’s her; the Huntsgirl.” Jake turned around just in the nick of time to avoid a punch from Rose.
“Rose?! What in the- oh, you have her under one of those lame mind control spells huh?” Jake asked as he ducked and dodged more blows coming from Rose. It amazed him how fast she was moving in a floor length gown. “Oh you might find this spell to be a bit upgraded.” Fury responded as she chuckled when Jake nearly got flattened like the locker Rose has hit. As they continued fighting Jake tried to think about how he could break this spell. Just then he remembered the only person to have broken Furys spell before was; “Spud!”
Jake ran into the gym again moving through the crowd to try to locate is friend. Just then he spotted him with Stacey jiving on the dance floor. “Yo Spud!” he called to him.
“Hey dude, so have you gotten though to Rose yet?” Spud called out over the blaring music. “Yeah, except she’s not well herself. I need to know how you broke Fury’s spell that was on Trix that one time.” Jake asked.
“Oh, I just made her remember who I was though all that we have been though together.” Spud replied. “Why did you need to know that?” Just then Jake saw Rose come in through the doors. She immediately spotted him and went straight after him. They began to face off on the dance floor. All the others around them simply thought it was a dance off or something and began to cheer wildly. “Go Jake!”
“Come one Jake think! What way can I get Rose to remember me?” Jake asked himself. Just then he got an idea and ran off the dance floor with her following him. He ran all the way out of the building and across a few streets with her still on his tail. “I hope this works.” Just then Jake reached the spot he needed and turned around to face Rose.”
“I sure hope this does it.” Jake wished again as he ran straight at her; it looked like a strange game of “Chicken.” As he and Rose collided she fell over as did he; before she could recover though Jake had stood up and was offering a hand. “Hey there.” Was all he said.
Rose shook her head as the spell broke. “Where am I?” she asked scanning the area around her. “Jake, where’s Fury?” Jake smiled “Don’t worry about her.” He replied as he helped her up.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “Wasn’t I under some spell or something?” Rose asked as they arrived back at the dance. “That would explain why my brand new dress has a huge tear in the side.” She examined the damage among the side of her nice ocean blue dress.
“Yeah, it’s okay though. Gramps and Fu are already taking Fury into security. Everything is the way it needs to be.” Jake commented.
“What about Homecoming? I don’t think this was exactly a perfect one.” Rose replied looking at him apologetically. She really had wanted this to be the perfect Homecoming for him; to make up for the last one.
“Nah, its wasn’t perfect.” Jake took Rose’s hand. “But there’s no place I would rather have been.” Just then soft music began to play. Jake did a small bow and offered his hand to Rose. She smiled at him as they walked out to the dance floor. Rose leaned her head upon his shoulder as they began to sway gently back and forth. “Now this is perfect.”
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Brad and Trixie were dancing only a few feet away from them. “Now, I wasn’t totally fair with you before Brad, but now I see that you were just trying to be a better person and if that’s what you truly want to be than I am fine with dating you.” Trixie said
Just then their lips met and they both enjoyed the moment. As they pulled away Trixie was blushing a bit and Brad was flashing her a charming smile. “Hehe, looks like you win Brad.” Said a voice as a tall guy walked over to them. “You got her to kiss you so you win the bet.”
Trixie right away began yelling at Brad. “Being with me was all just a bet!?” Brad tried to deny it as she began spouting off at him “You low-down, no good, shallower than a kiddie pool, soulless person! You don’t EVER talk to me again!!” Trixie stormed off.
“No Trixie, that was before I liked you.” Brad chased after her. “Trixie!!”
Hehe and there you go the ending of this segment… R and R for more..
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Post by antiyonder on Oct 8, 2007 3:35:03 GMT -5
Hmm, looks like you all thought the end of that, shall I say Episode? It was kinda funny to write it.. What would be even funnier is if any of this stuff made it into S3.. I would BE HONORED to have one of my ideas on it.. XDD Like it would happen to me .. Oh well.. Get ready for more surprises..
“Come on Jake, we’ve only got until Friday to memorize all these formulas for our Algebra class.” Rose exclaimed waving an arm in front of him.
“I just don’t get why we have to learn all this stuff. I mean, I see the importance of addition, subtraction, and the other basics but, why do we need to be able to know what X equals?” Jake complained stretching his arms out. “If anything we’ll never use this stuff again unless we are math teachers, which I will never be.”
“Hola famila! And Rose.” a familiar face came around the corner of the kitchen door. “Hey dad, just studying.” Jake responded before he could ask what they were up to. “Well, I hope you all are having the best of luck with it.” Jonathan said pulling out a glass from the cabinet for some water.
“Actually, Jake is getting rather distracted and not focusing.” Rose responded casting a glance at Jake. “Maybe you two should take a little break or something, back when I was in high school me and your mom would go for a little walk if we got stuck on studying.”
“That’s a great idea dad. Thanks.” Jake said grabbing Rose’s arm and tugging her out the door.
“Well, at least we are getting some fresh air right now.” Rose commented as they continued walking down the street holding hands. “Yeah, getting out of my house is so nice.” Jake replied “You really don’t know how annoying my dad can get.”
“Really, Jakeroo?” Rose said grinning from ear to ear. She had been dieing to use his nickname all day.
“Hey, that’s not fair Rose…um, bud!” Jake tried to think of an embarrassing nickname for her but to no prevail he couldn’t think up any good ones. “Hold on, something weird is going down at my Gramps. He told me there would be no DT today, then why is the shop closed?” Jake asked becoming rather suspicious. “Come on.”
Jake silently entered the shop he could hear two people talking from the back room. He motioned for Rose to follow him. “Lao shi, you are too funny.”
“Chang?!” Jake exclaimed as he heard her voice. When they came into the back they saw Gramps and Chang sitting at a table enjoying some tea together. “What in the-”
I am sooooo evill… R and R to find out more..
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Post by antiyonder on Oct 8, 2007 3:35:44 GMT -5
Haha! I woke you all up with another twist.. Muhahaha!! And you ain’t seen nothing yet…
“Yo, why is she here?!” Jake asked getting into a defensive position. He was all the more shocked that he and Chang were not fighting and trying to kill one another.
“Jake, you need to calm down. Your grandfather and I are just being friendly.” Chang replied locking eyes with Jake. Who glared right back at her. “Don’t tell me to calm down. What, do you have Gramps under some spell or something?” Jake spotted a small basket behind her. “A ha! You were going to do away with him using the evil,” He reached into the basket to pull out a muffin. “muffin. They’re probably poisoned or something.” Jake heard a rather large burp.
“Then I should be gone away by now kid. Ah, muffins.” Fu dog said licking the crumbs off his paws. Jake felt a little embarrassed but was still giving Chang an evil eye.
“Um, Jake why don’t we uh go get some lunch or something?” Rose suggested knowing that all Jake would do was continue to fight with her about anything. “Yes Grandson go ahead and leave with your girl friend.”
“Now, you may like my Gramps but, I know he never married you. Thus, I am NOT your grandson.” Jake exclaimed as he turned back around. “Actually kid, he and Chang were and are to this day still husband and wife.” Fu answered.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “I just cannot believe this!” Jake muttered from his arms. “When did he and Chang get married?! It’s just TOO impossible! I mean they’re enemies for crying out loud!”
Rose took a small sip of soda. “Yeah, so. If I do recall we used to try to destroy each other too.” Jake grinned at her. “Yeah but, I always went easy. Especially on an enemy that was so fine.”
“Actually, I was the one who went easy; you kinda couldn’t even keep from your boxers showing.” Rose replied giggling slightly. “How many times was it that you wore ones with hearts on them?”
Jake blushed at the comment and tried to come back with an excuse that he had been only training for about a week. As he and Rose eventually made it back to his house for more studying they sat down at the table again.
“All right, are you finally ready to get down to business and start really studying?” Rose asked laying out the text books on the table. Jake smiled at her; “Not really but, for you I will.”
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “Whew, man studying really takes up time!” Jake said glancing up at the clock. “Holy smokes, it’s nearing eight o’ clock!”
“That must be why I am getting hungry.” Rose replied with a small gurgling coming from her stomach.
“Well, why don’t you stay for dinner? We’d love to have you.” Mrs. Long said as she started setting the table. She just loved having Rose over since she knew that she would be her future daughter-in-law, or at least she hoped.
“As long as I am not imposing.” Rose responded. It was so nice being around Jake’s family; they felt so warm and friendly.
As the dinner carried on Rose was having a wonderful time with them. Just then the doorbell rang. “Ah, that should be my father.” Susan said rushing to answer the door. “I invited him since he said he had some surprise.”
Jake nearly dropped his fork as he heard those words. It was almost as uncomfortable as the time his mother had brought up “grandkids” when Rose had come over last time. The dinner passed by so slowly. As soon as it was over, Jake rushed off to take Rose home.
“Hey, you acted kinda strange tonight I was wondering if you are okay? I mean learning that your Grandfather and Chang are back together is disturbing.” Rose said feeling a bit of a chill while she said the last part.
“Yeah I just, I mean how can he possibly love her?” Jake asked racking his mind for some kind of an answer to the situation at hand. “After all that she has done, including betraying him.”
“I don’t know, but I do know that I should get inside before my parents think I’ve gone missing or something.” Rose replied as she began to twist the handle. “What no good night kiss?” Jake asked playfully.
“Okay.” She gently brushed his lips with hers. “See ya tomorrow Dragon-boy.”
Okay, is that enough J/R romance for one chap? XDD Actually I love all the J/Rness but I am trying to make this like a real ep so… Hehe.. R and R for more!
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antiyonder
Jake's friend
[ss:American Dragon]
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Post by antiyonder on Oct 8, 2007 3:38:42 GMT -5
OMG, I had THE WORST DAY ever with my little baby bro.. He was puking and more puking and we were kinda scared he would need to go to the ER.. Thank God he’s doing better… Glad you all like it.. Here’s more..
“Ring!”
“Five more minutes mom..” Jake sleepily called out to the ringing of his cell phone. Finally he gave up an answered. “Hello?”
“Kid, Gramps is waiting for you. Don’t you remember that today your training was scheduled for five am?!” Jake’s eyes flew wide open as the memory came flashing back to him. “Oh my gosh!” he ran around his room grabbing a pair of clean pants and his hoodie then Dragoned up and flew out his bedroom window.
As he landed on the roof top there was already someone there doing some stretches. “Rose, is that you?” He asked still half asleep. “Yeah, your grandfather was just about to give up on you. We’ve been waiting about thirty minutes.” She noted bending her leg up to her to loosen it up.
“Yes, you are quite tardy but, you were also late to our evaluation of your training which nearly cost Lao Shi his right to train you.” Out of the door stepped Chang. “Great, now she’s going to ruin my training. What are next, my dates with Rose?” He muttered under his breath as the training began. He and Rose practiced sparring at the very end of the session before going into wind-down mode.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “So, what’s our record of winnings so far?” Jake asked Rose dragoning down. “Hmm, I think I’m ahead in points, especially on the fact that I took you down with in only a few seconds.” She teased. Jake turned to face her grinning from ear to ear.
“Well, I may be down in points but, I do know your weakness.” Just then Jake lunged at her; tickling the sides of her stomach as she went into a giggle fit.
“All right, you- you win.” Rose was out of breath and her sides hurt something fierce from all the laughing. Jake lay atop of her smiling. “Yep, the Amdrag always gets his villain.” Jake responded proudly.
“Too bad I know your weakness as well.” Rose pulled his face closer to hers as she covered his lips with hers. After they parted; Jake smiled at her. “Actually I think that’s also your weakness.” They both blushed a bit at each other.
“Could you two get a room already?” Fu’s sarcastic voice rang in their ears as Jake looked up to see not only Fu but, Gramps and Chang standing near them. Jake could feel the warmth of his face as it turned about several different colors of red.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “Wait dude, do your telling me that Chang, Chang the evil dragon lady that hates you and your Gramps is back with him?! Woah, what a weird twist.” Spud, Trixie, Jake, and Rose were all sitting down at a table outside. It was lunchtime at the high school and other students were busily chatting with their friends as well.
“If you ask me, I think your Gramps is straight trippin. I mean homegirl tried to slay you,”
“Sounds like another person I know.”
“ She betrayed your Gramps,”
“Still sounds like another person I know.”
“and girl totally despises what you stand for.”
Spud thought for a minute, “Wait; now that doesn’t sound like the person I know. I mean back then it used to but -” Jake covered his mouth. “I know Trix but, how am I supposed to convince him when he’s totally in love with her? As unbelievable as that is and all. I mean love can make guys do anything and believe anything.”
“Yep, it sure can. You would know all about that huh Jakey?” Jake frowned a bit remembering the school Love Cruise. He had thought that Rose didn’t love him any more when he should have trusted her. “Yeah, yeah Trix. All right, so does any know how I could prove that she is totally up to no good?”
“Ooo, what if you made some kinda fake magical thing and said it was top secret, then you could say it shouldn’t be touched and put a trap on it then she would be caught.” Spud suggested.
“You know Spudinski, after being around you only a few times I never knew what a genius you are.” Rose commented as the four began to draw up a plan to expose Chang for what she really was.
XDDD I wonder what they will do.. Oh wait, I’m the writer I decide.. Heh, I better get to work… R and R for more..
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