Post by jakelong411 on Mar 10, 2007 5:02:47 GMT -5
Sorry I havent been posting in a while, I've been waiting for some commenters. By the way, thanks for commenting huntsgirls1fan! Also, I'm warning the readers, this chapter gets a bit lovey-dovey...
Ok: here we go!
A Final Kiss
Jake flew at the huntsman, and the huntsman knocked him back, and he landed behind the halfpipe, unconscious. None of the others noticed this, including Rose, as she creeped up behind the huntsman, her staff set to 'knock-out-mode' and she fired, she fired hard, and it hit alright.
The huntsman fell to the ground, defeated. There was a celebration. All the magical creatures cheered, and chanted Jake's name. But, Jake was unconcious behind a ramp, no-one knew that he was almost... dead.
Rose looked around for Jake. She saw a tail flick up from behind the halfpipe, then it dissapeared, it was Jake's tail, and he was in human form. She ran round to him, "Jake! we won! get up, come on! get up!" She yelled, pulling at his hand, but he didn't budge, nor answer her. "Jake?" She asked, turning his human body onto its back, his eyes were closed, and he wasn't breathing. "JAKE!!!" She yelled, and everyone else heard, and came to assistance. She started pounding his chest, but still nothin happened, she kept on pounding. Nothing seemed to work. She then knew only one thing to do, she embraced her arms around his neck, and softly pressed her lips to his, and his eyes shot open! He turned dragon form, and flew high, higher than ever before! Roses arms were still round his neck, "I just wanted to wake you up, this is a tiny bit extreme!" she yelled." Jake was laughing, "I would have died if it wasn't for you!"
Sneak peek at chapter seven:
Two years later, "Rose, will you marry me?" He asked, down on his knees.
Ok: here we go!
A Final Kiss
Jake flew at the huntsman, and the huntsman knocked him back, and he landed behind the halfpipe, unconscious. None of the others noticed this, including Rose, as she creeped up behind the huntsman, her staff set to 'knock-out-mode' and she fired, she fired hard, and it hit alright.
The huntsman fell to the ground, defeated. There was a celebration. All the magical creatures cheered, and chanted Jake's name. But, Jake was unconcious behind a ramp, no-one knew that he was almost... dead.
Rose looked around for Jake. She saw a tail flick up from behind the halfpipe, then it dissapeared, it was Jake's tail, and he was in human form. She ran round to him, "Jake! we won! get up, come on! get up!" She yelled, pulling at his hand, but he didn't budge, nor answer her. "Jake?" She asked, turning his human body onto its back, his eyes were closed, and he wasn't breathing. "JAKE!!!" She yelled, and everyone else heard, and came to assistance. She started pounding his chest, but still nothin happened, she kept on pounding. Nothing seemed to work. She then knew only one thing to do, she embraced her arms around his neck, and softly pressed her lips to his, and his eyes shot open! He turned dragon form, and flew high, higher than ever before! Roses arms were still round his neck, "I just wanted to wake you up, this is a tiny bit extreme!" she yelled." Jake was laughing, "I would have died if it wasn't for you!"
Sneak peek at chapter seven:
Two years later, "Rose, will you marry me?" He asked, down on his knees.