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Post by Theory on Mar 10, 2007 8:58:54 GMT -5
(NOTE: This is only one part of the story. In later part of the Story, Jake will meet other characters from other world, in which will be posted in fanfiction.net) Jake cooled down under the shade after running (for some obvious reasons) onto the forest. However, while he was doing that, he heard an echo that was not heard anywhere from aback. Then, turning his back, he sensed a couple of trouble heading towards him. Viewing on the front were a couple of dusts and black dots which he find unfamiliar. As the dots gets nearer and nearer, Jake realise that they were after him. As they charges near, Jake ran, seeing that he is unable to attack and stop them. As he ran, he noticed his hand is burning up for no reason. The flame flew off his hand and right directly towards the dusts, in which a sudden explosion occurs. ' what is that all about? ' Jake thought.
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Post by YFWE on Mar 10, 2007 21:45:50 GMT -5
Well, given some of the new stuff from other unnamed writers I've read lately, this fic (even though it was short so far) is definitely a breath of fresh air. Nice job!!!
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Mar 22, 2007 20:31:59 GMT -5
COOL! XD update soon!
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