Post by zero on Aug 9, 2009 9:27:51 GMT -5
hey guys! sorry for delay's I just didn't got enough time
but i hope you enjoy it after all.
I do some things clear before we start the story
1. jake is 13 like at the start of season 1
2. jake is kidnapped like rose and haley is the american dragon.
3. the mark that the huntsclan claims to be theirs is really the mark from eragon, in this story the mark is dragonfighter's mark.
4. rose is jake's girlfriend! but this will change turing the story
5.in episode "tony" tony talk's about the dragonfigter's stronghold
in centralpark , it is really a underground stronghold, i wanted to say that because you might think I'ts a little odd , a big stronghold at the middle of centralpark .
6. in the episode "henri, the revenge of the fallen" henri the predator takes revenge on huntsmaster, that's because HM slayed his big brother a several years ago and code of the predator say's dead can't find peace before someone in their family have killed his/her killer and it must be done with holy weapons , blades of the predator, when I finish this story ( and all the sequels) I might do the fanfic named life of henri the predator.
7.dark horse means in this story the dragon and chosen one the rider and the hero is both the CO and DH , I say that because some DH never find their CO .
8. DF are immortals so they can't be killed by time.
9.if dragon's dragon up then they are in 1 level dragon up 2 level is like eragon dragons and 3 is with armor. all dragons of earth can't go to 2 level dragon up. I say that because DF's DH are from predatorland.
10.henri is the predator king on the predatorland.
11. the story's are 1. red dragon of huntsclan 2. life of a hero 3. kids of DH and CO 4. hasen't decided yet.
12.huntsclan's greatest fears are the DF and the predators.
13. NY thieves that tony is talking about are really DF's spy's and
tony is one of them.
now I think I made myself very clear i think we can start the story
( if anyone has some question's, ask I'll be glad to answer)
1 chap. last day at huntsclan.
this chap. and the next chap. is inspired of nickelback song hero
I am so high. I can hear heaven.
I am so high. I can hear heaven.
Oh but heaven, no heaven don't hear me.
And they say that a hero can save us.
I'm not gonna stand here and wait.
I'll hold onto the wings of the eagles.
Watch as we all fly away.
Someone told me love will ALL save us.
But how can that be, look what love gave us.
A world full of killing, and blood-spilling
That world never came.
And they say that a hero can save us.
I'm not gonna stand here and wait.
I'll hold onto the wings of the eagles.
Watch as we all fly away.
Now that the world isn't ending, its love that I'm sending to you.
It isn't the love of a hero, and that's why I fear it wont do.
And they say that a hero can save us.
I'm not gonna stand here and wait.
I'll hold onto the wings of the eagles.
Watch as we all fly away.
And they're watching us
Watching Us
And they're watching us
Watching Us
As we all fly away.
jake waked up and moaned: aww man... just another day in the huntsclan. say'd he.
he hated the huntsclan but he admired all magical creatures and he wished everyday he could be one of the DF.
he found out of them on one mission where he found a red book with a same mark on it like was on his hand, for the second he tought he would be a DF but he throwed that tought quickly away.
at least he didn't beleve that crap what huntsmaster told him everyday, that his parent's were killed by the MC's (MC is magical creatures),also he tried to get away on every mission
and dragon slaying class but he still went to the cafeteeria and studyed in the library.
in all classes he got only a's but in the dragonslaying slaying only f's and the worst part with the missions was that jake fighted perfectly, he could put the HM down in a fight in 10 second's but he hated that.
as jake was MC loving , peaceful and nice his GF rose were MC hating nice too but only to jake and not so peaceful at all and beleved that crap what HM told her and the worst part was rose didn't understand him.
he hated his life!
suddenly he heard a voice : come on draco( like rose's name was thorn jake's name was draco) fighting class is starting!
I'm goming! say'd jake with a happyness in his voice.
fighting class was only class where he could beat down other's and do it so easily that he has fun doing it.
I wonder who am I gonna beat down today? say'd he to himself.
he had beat every student at least twice.
later in fightingclass...
jake taked his seat and then the bell ringed.
student's! say'd teacher: this is cliff, the fighting pro from other huntslair, anybody to want to fight with him?? nobody?! ok, then I'll choose draco! get up here!
yes master! say'd jake.
he stepped up and teacher say'd : take your huntsstaff's !(sorry if I spelled it wrong) when cliff picked up his staff he say'd to jake: i'll crush you like poop!
we'll see about that! replied jake, then the match started.
cliff tried to hit jake into the chest with his staff but jake was too quick and jumped into the air, then he pushed himself away from the ceiling and hit cliff into the head knocking him into the wall.
take that you crap! yelled jake as he landed.
there was a silence in the class for minute or two and then rose broke it saying: ok, that went well!
then everybody raised from their chair's and started cheering and teacher say'd: wow... that .... was amazing!
after that he went to the cafeteeria and rose talked to him: hi hotshot! I want to ask you this why do you get only f's in the dragonslaying but a's in other classes?
rose we have talked about this okay , dragonslaying isn't my place!
say'd jake.
yea... maybe your right. sayd rose sadly because jake been so bad at dragonslaying then they are at separate classes: see you later!
ok! yelled jake.
after this he went into the math class , the gym class and the dragonslaying class ( where he obviously got another "f" for the test and another "f" for sleeping on the class ;D )
later...
he sit on the window of his room and looked at the moon.
ahh... I wish i was a dragon and get away from this huntsclan! say'd he. then he went to sleep. jake didn't know how close was his wish to became true because not far from the huntslair something big, something terrible and something fast came trought the darkness...
wow that was a long one , very long I wrote it about two and half hours of course I needed to do some thing's over and over again ! i hope you like it and i would like some comments too and watch out for new episode!
Zero
but i hope you enjoy it after all.
I do some things clear before we start the story
1. jake is 13 like at the start of season 1
2. jake is kidnapped like rose and haley is the american dragon.
3. the mark that the huntsclan claims to be theirs is really the mark from eragon, in this story the mark is dragonfighter's mark.
4. rose is jake's girlfriend! but this will change turing the story
5.in episode "tony" tony talk's about the dragonfigter's stronghold
in centralpark , it is really a underground stronghold, i wanted to say that because you might think I'ts a little odd , a big stronghold at the middle of centralpark .
6. in the episode "henri, the revenge of the fallen" henri the predator takes revenge on huntsmaster, that's because HM slayed his big brother a several years ago and code of the predator say's dead can't find peace before someone in their family have killed his/her killer and it must be done with holy weapons , blades of the predator, when I finish this story ( and all the sequels) I might do the fanfic named life of henri the predator.
7.dark horse means in this story the dragon and chosen one the rider and the hero is both the CO and DH , I say that because some DH never find their CO .
8. DF are immortals so they can't be killed by time.
9.if dragon's dragon up then they are in 1 level dragon up 2 level is like eragon dragons and 3 is with armor. all dragons of earth can't go to 2 level dragon up. I say that because DF's DH are from predatorland.
10.henri is the predator king on the predatorland.
11. the story's are 1. red dragon of huntsclan 2. life of a hero 3. kids of DH and CO 4. hasen't decided yet.
12.huntsclan's greatest fears are the DF and the predators.
13. NY thieves that tony is talking about are really DF's spy's and
tony is one of them.
now I think I made myself very clear i think we can start the story
( if anyone has some question's, ask I'll be glad to answer)
1 chap. last day at huntsclan.
this chap. and the next chap. is inspired of nickelback song hero
I am so high. I can hear heaven.
I am so high. I can hear heaven.
Oh but heaven, no heaven don't hear me.
And they say that a hero can save us.
I'm not gonna stand here and wait.
I'll hold onto the wings of the eagles.
Watch as we all fly away.
Someone told me love will ALL save us.
But how can that be, look what love gave us.
A world full of killing, and blood-spilling
That world never came.
And they say that a hero can save us.
I'm not gonna stand here and wait.
I'll hold onto the wings of the eagles.
Watch as we all fly away.
Now that the world isn't ending, its love that I'm sending to you.
It isn't the love of a hero, and that's why I fear it wont do.
And they say that a hero can save us.
I'm not gonna stand here and wait.
I'll hold onto the wings of the eagles.
Watch as we all fly away.
And they're watching us
Watching Us
And they're watching us
Watching Us
As we all fly away.
jake waked up and moaned: aww man... just another day in the huntsclan. say'd he.
he hated the huntsclan but he admired all magical creatures and he wished everyday he could be one of the DF.
he found out of them on one mission where he found a red book with a same mark on it like was on his hand, for the second he tought he would be a DF but he throwed that tought quickly away.
at least he didn't beleve that crap what huntsmaster told him everyday, that his parent's were killed by the MC's (MC is magical creatures),also he tried to get away on every mission
and dragon slaying class but he still went to the cafeteeria and studyed in the library.
in all classes he got only a's but in the dragonslaying slaying only f's and the worst part with the missions was that jake fighted perfectly, he could put the HM down in a fight in 10 second's but he hated that.
as jake was MC loving , peaceful and nice his GF rose were MC hating nice too but only to jake and not so peaceful at all and beleved that crap what HM told her and the worst part was rose didn't understand him.
he hated his life!
suddenly he heard a voice : come on draco( like rose's name was thorn jake's name was draco) fighting class is starting!
I'm goming! say'd jake with a happyness in his voice.
fighting class was only class where he could beat down other's and do it so easily that he has fun doing it.
I wonder who am I gonna beat down today? say'd he to himself.
he had beat every student at least twice.
later in fightingclass...
jake taked his seat and then the bell ringed.
student's! say'd teacher: this is cliff, the fighting pro from other huntslair, anybody to want to fight with him?? nobody?! ok, then I'll choose draco! get up here!
yes master! say'd jake.
he stepped up and teacher say'd : take your huntsstaff's !(sorry if I spelled it wrong) when cliff picked up his staff he say'd to jake: i'll crush you like poop!
we'll see about that! replied jake, then the match started.
cliff tried to hit jake into the chest with his staff but jake was too quick and jumped into the air, then he pushed himself away from the ceiling and hit cliff into the head knocking him into the wall.
take that you crap! yelled jake as he landed.
there was a silence in the class for minute or two and then rose broke it saying: ok, that went well!
then everybody raised from their chair's and started cheering and teacher say'd: wow... that .... was amazing!
after that he went to the cafeteeria and rose talked to him: hi hotshot! I want to ask you this why do you get only f's in the dragonslaying but a's in other classes?
rose we have talked about this okay , dragonslaying isn't my place!
say'd jake.
yea... maybe your right. sayd rose sadly because jake been so bad at dragonslaying then they are at separate classes: see you later!
ok! yelled jake.
after this he went into the math class , the gym class and the dragonslaying class ( where he obviously got another "f" for the test and another "f" for sleeping on the class ;D )
later...
he sit on the window of his room and looked at the moon.
ahh... I wish i was a dragon and get away from this huntsclan! say'd he. then he went to sleep. jake didn't know how close was his wish to became true because not far from the huntslair something big, something terrible and something fast came trought the darkness...
wow that was a long one , very long I wrote it about two and half hours of course I needed to do some thing's over and over again ! i hope you like it and i would like some comments too and watch out for new episode!
Zero