DarkDragontc
Young Warrior Dragon
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Post by DarkDragontc on Jul 27, 2006 21:38:07 GMT -5
Welcome to My first Fan-Fiction story. I have never made one before, (yes I have made stories, but not like this) I really need an answer if this is good or not!!!
Chapter 1: Surprise, Surprise/ First Day of School
Mom: James wake up your going to be late for you first day of High School.
James: I’m getting up, I’m getting up….
James Dark is a 14 year old that graduates from IS24 in Staten Island. He going to school in NYC because of his high grades, the principal recommends that he should go there. James is 5 Ft 5inches tall and brown-tan skin all of his body. James had fun with his friends he have made over the summer and now he going to miss them because of the changes he is going through, including one thing he doesn’t know yet….
James: It is only 6am, why you wake me up at this time?
Mom: Because me and your father have something to tell you.
James: What this about?
Mom: Remember when you saw in the papers and heard on the news about Dragons in NYC. (James nod his head) Well it is true. (James was Surprise) and you … uh…
Dad: You are a Dragon. (James again very surprise)
James: What? No way I can be a dragon. I love them, but I can’t be a dragon.
Mom: You are a Dragon, Remember the day you beat that kid in a race.
James: Yeah i remember but he was strong and i beat him. (James laugh a little bit) I see your point… Ok let’s just say that I am a dragon… what does this mean for me?
Dad: You take the responsibly of protecting our world and the magical world and making it a better place. Remember the movie Spider-man, Uncle Ben said “With Great Power, Comes Great Responsibly”. That is now true to you too, because becoming a Dragon is very loyal and trustworthy. (James understand it)
James: Ok I understand it, but how do I turn into a Dragon?
Mom: I knew you were about that question. (Mom steps into the kitchen and opens the freezer door and got a drink that was a potion to turn him to a Dragon)
The potion is made to last forever as long it stays in the freezer. Only a person that is born with a Dragon Soul can get the potion, otherwise the potion will not work right. While Mom was getting the potion, Mr. Dark told James what color dragon you’re going to be.
Mrs. Dark came back and said….
Mom: Here we go just drink it and you will turn into a Dragon.
James: Cool. (He Drinks and become a Dragon)
The Dragon has grown to 6 feet and the color is Dark black with a mix of purple on his body. The wings were also black. James couldn’t believe his eyes. (I finally turn into a Dragon, wow this is so cool.)
James: Thanks Mom & Dad. Why couldn’t you told me earlier?
Mom: uh … (Dad step in and answer that)
Dad: well because we thought you weren’t ready yet and I want you to go have fun with your friends before you became a Dragon. (James understands) Ok son get ready for school, I will drive you there today. (James runs upstairs to get ready for School.)
James looks at the picture of his best Friends Wayne, Marie, Cory and Mike. (“I missed them all; we had so much fun this summer”) They all went to the same school until they graduated and then they went to different schools. James stops looking at the picture and wipe off his tears from his eyes and get ready for school.
Meanwhile…
Mom: I hope we did the right thing for him, because his life will become harder now. (Mr. Dark Agrees)
Dad: yeah I know but he will provide time for it. (James Came back down and get his book bag and his lunch)
Dad: ok son lets go to school.
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The Alarm went off in Jakes room….
Jake: Oh man School is finally here, I was enjoying my summer very well. (He holds up the picture frame of his friends Trixe and Spud. Then he holds another picture of Rose which he hugs then he put it back and starts to cry)
Jake life was doing a number of him because since Rose never came back after the last fight they have against the Dark Dragon. He doesn’t know if Rose survives the attack from the Dark Dragon. Also Jake never got a Dream from her all summer, which kill Jake in a bad way. Jake says his mind ("I will get you back my love no matter what I will find a way to do it") (Fu Dog comes in)
Fu Dog: Come on Jake your going to be late on your first day of High School.
Jake: (Very Sad) I’m sorry fu, it’s just when I lost Rose in that last fight, I couldn’t control myself. I feel very weak that I know can’t live out my life with out Rose.
Fu Dog: I know you are sad, but you have to get over for now and things will get better. You’re lucky you have Trixe and Spud with you that are going to the same school with you. Come on Jake get ready for school.
Jake: ok I will. (Jake was already pack and went downstairs to the lounge to have a talk with his grandpa)
Grandpa: Jake I will take you to your first day in high school today, I know things were hard for you during the summer, but it will get better. Remember Jake you are the American Dragon and I am very proud of you.
Jake and Grandpa were about to go outside until they saw something glowing…
Chapter 2 will come tomorrow… tell me how you think, I will continue it tomorrow. Please Reply.
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Post by kazashi on Jul 28, 2006 9:20:53 GMT -5
Interesting, i like it so far This James guy has just discovered he has dragon powers im thinking he'll proberly run into Jake? Also poor Jake depressed and sad for Rose. Good story so far tho *thumbs up*
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DarkDragontc
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Post by DarkDragontc on Jul 28, 2006 9:29:00 GMT -5
Thxs here is Chapter 2....
Thank you for reading, here is chapter two.
Chapter Two: A New Friend
Jake & grandpa saw a glowing right in front of the house and it was Jake’s mom & Dad returning from there vacation. Mr. long finally understood why Jake and on his mother side acting weird, which made sense for him to stay after Jake had a long talk with him, saying that I’m the American Dragon. Mrs. Long knew Jake had to tell him sooner or later about him and her sister.
Mr. Long: that was a great vacation… wasn’t it honey?
Mrs. Long: Yeah it was. (Turns to Jake) I will ride to your new school today.
Grandpa: I was about to take him.
Mrs. Long: Don’t worry about it dad, I got it.
Jake: (“Dang I thought that was Rose for a Second”). (Jake went into the Car)
Mrs. Long: alright were off, see you later guys. (Mr. Long and the rest went back inside the house)
Jake had something stuck in his mind. It was Rose. Jake couldn’t get out the memory he had when Rose save Jakes life and told him to go, during the Dark Dragon fight. Jake was ready to kill the Dark Dragon until he pull a fast one and almost kill himself until Rose step and stop him, but Jake didn’t see what happen after the doors close on Jake. Jake tries with all his might to open, but he couldn’t get it open and stand next to do and crying very hard. Grandpa took Jake away for safety and he wasn’t himself ever since. Everyone try to help him out but it made it worst for him after the summer was over.
Mom: Are you okay Jake?
Jake: yeah I am, it’s just when Rose went in there and the doors closed, I couldn’t control myself… and … I feel very weak.
Mom: I know how you feel, but you have to get over this for now. You still have a job to do.
Jake: yes I know, protect the city and Magical Creatures. (Mrs. Long nod her head)
They arrive at the school as well for James Parents that arrive too.
Mom: Have a good day at school. (She blows a kiss at him and then leaves) Jake: (Does the same and meet up with Trixe and Spud) Hey Trixe & Spud, sup?
Spud: Hey Bro, Nothing we had a great summer and look we are at High School.
Trixe: That’s right; we did it Jakey and were going to continue to do even better.
Jake: Let’s get to school; before we miss our first period.
Jake, Trixe and Spud got in the school. James walk in slowly and went to the first class were Jake was in. James sat right behind Jake and took his books out and watches the teacher writing on the board. Jake was looking on the board and it was math. Jake hate math and he was really bad at it. James really love math. Mr. Ponser was the teacher. Mr. Ponser love to teach and love children, he can stop smiling at his students when they do well.
Mr. Ponser: Alright everybody welcome to your first period and to first year in school. I will be your math teacher for this semester. Everyone pair up with somebody, you will need it for this semester. Choose wisely.
There were 10 students in the class, so it was prefect enough to pick a pair.
Jake didn’t know anybody as well for James too.
James: (went to Jake) do you want to pair up with me?
Jake: Sure, why not? By the way what your name?
James: My name is James Dark. What is your name?
Jake: nice name, anyway my name is Jake Long.
James: cool.
While Jake and James were talking. Mr. Ponser wrote a hard question on the board. It was a hard math question. On the board he wrote 85x6=? James knew the answer already as Jake was trying to figure it out. Mr. Ponser look back and only saw one hand up.
Jake: you know the answer.
James: Yeah it is easy. (Mr. Ponser picks him) The answer is 510.
Mr. Ponser: That is correct. Nice Job James.
The class was very surprise of how he got it correct and Jake seem like he pick the right person for the job. Jake: wow you are really good.
James: well it’s a gift I have, really.
School bell rang after Mr. Ponser gave out the next question. He forgot to give out the homework, but he said “never mind”. James went up to him as Jake went to lunch.
Mr. Ponser: you are very smart James. I have never seen a student so fast at numbers; I want to move you up to a higher level of math. Do you me to do that for you?
James: …uh … well… no.
Mr. Ponser: why not?
James: I don’t know, it’s the first day here and already I’m getting move up, I want to get used of what you’re teaching and maybe by the end of the week I will give you my answer. (Mr. Ponser nods his head and James head off to his next class which was Lunch.)
Spud: hey Jake come over here and sits with us. (Trixe agree)
Trixe: How was your class?
Jake: It was very good; I met a kid that is very smart, so there is a chance to get a good grade in math.
Trixe: Nice. My class was good or bad it was just…. Well… (Spud cuts in)
Spud: Mr. Rotwood is back and he teaching in our school.
Jake: Say What?
Trixe & Spud: For real and he is getting tired of seeing us around after what did to him last year.
Jake: yeah I remember that. (They all laugh)
Meanwhile…. James was sitting down at a table were with no body, until Jake call him over. James went to Jake and greets him with Trixe and Spud. James was so happy that he made friends already.
Jake: Hey James, sup? What did Mr. Ponser say to you?
James: He said that he want to move me up to a higher math class. Trixe: what subject is Mr. Ponser teaching?
Two girls pass by Spud and then ran away after they saw spud.
Spud: Hey girls …. Sup?... come on, am I that cute that you run away from me?
Jake: (nod his head) It is Math. No way, they can’t do that to you.
James: Jake I’m not going anywhere, I’m staying right here with you because I can tell you need help in math.
Jake: yeah how do you know that?
James: well I saw your face and (Trixe cuts in)
Trixe: Can you help me too with math? (Spud says the same thing)
James: Yeah sure why not.
The four were very happy and the school bell rang and all went to different classes. Jake and James shake hands and went off to class. By the end of the day Jake saw James and call him.
Jake: James wait up.
James: yeah sup Jake?
Jake: Have a nice day, do you have e-mail?
James: yeah mine is DD123@aol.com and what is yours?
Jake: My e-mail address is ADJL55@aol.com .
They both traded papers and went off. Jake went to the back of the school and turn into a Dragon. Jake patrols the city and saw nothing wrong for 2 hours straight. James went back home in Staten Island and saw a lot of trouble. James Save 2 kids before the got run over by a car and stop a bank robbery. After that James so nothing else wrong and went back home. Jake went back home and went right up stairs and started to dream about something….
James got home and went up stairs and goes to his computer and put in Jake e-mail address in, then turns off his computer and goes to sleep. James room was big but it was on the third floor of his house, so it was a very quiet room. James never knew that he became a dragon.
Jake woke up at midnight after seeing a dream about Rose. (Rose wasn’t talking to him though) Jake was trying his best to forget about what happen between him and Rose, but he couldn’t the pain went right through him and started to cry again…
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Post by kazashi on Jul 28, 2006 9:37:01 GMT -5
Well let's put it this way, My eyes were glued to the screen I like the way how Jake and James have already become friends, i wonder if they find out the other is a Dragon and how will they react? I sense their relationship will grow stronger. Poor Jake, Tormented by visions of Rose and his thoughts, it makes the story interesting and shows Jakes emotionally side. You might need to sort out some Grammar issues, as sometimes it doesn't make sense, But overall great story ;D
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DarkDragontc
Young Warrior Dragon
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Post by DarkDragontc on Jul 28, 2006 16:57:18 GMT -5
Thank you for reading, here is chapter three.
Chapter 3: The Long Weekend
It was midnight, Jake stops crying after a while. He goes to his computer and sees James is on. Jake start typing to James, but no response came. Jake tries again and finally gets a response.
James: (Typing) Hey Jake? Couldn’t sleep?
Jake: (Typing Also) Yeah I couldn’t, it just a weird dream I had.
James: Ok, what’s on your mind?
Jake: Nothing, I just want to know why you are at midnight.
James: I’m up late, because it’s a Friday and usually I don’t get a chance to see my friends online all week and there usually on at night. (He was also typing to his best friend Wayne)
Jake: Ok. You know we have to finish that math project and give it to Mr. Ponser on Monday.
James: Don’t worry about it, I’ve got it cover.
Jake: cool, good night. (Jake turns off his computer and went to sleep again)
James: Hey Wayne are you still there.
Wayne: Yeah I am, so how is life and how is school?
James: Great, I met already three new friends, there are very nice to me. They are Jake, Trixe and Spud.
Wayne: Wow, nice job. I can’t believe you got friends that fast before I did lol, anyway I have to go to bed, good night JD.
James: Good Night, Wayne.
Wayne Jones was a very good friend of James. He was very smart too, but not as smart James was. Wayne does not know that James is a Dragon. Wayne went to a high school in Staten Island and was accepted in James School too, but he decided to stay closed to home. He is also 14 years old and also gradated from IS24. He is 5Ft 2Inches and very dark skin.
Meanwhile…. Huntmaster: #88 and #89 come here at once.
#88: Yes Huntmaster.
Huntmaster: Where is #89? (Getting mad)
#88: He is sleeping
Huntmaster: THEN WAKE HIM UP YOU FOOOLL!!! (88 runs and gets him up)
#89: Yes Huntmaster.
Huntmaster: tell me what happen and what you saw with the American Dragon and Huntsgirl.
#89: Me and 88 were on top of a building watching and waiting for another Dragon to catch and then we saw Huntsgirl and the American Dragon go inside the hatchway.
#88: that’s correct, and then we heard someone crying after a few hours later. It was the American Dragon. I think there was fight with American Dragon and Huntsgirl against Dark Dragon. We only saw the Dragon came out and stared to cry and this blue dragon came out no where and took him away.
Huntmaster: what did you say? (He (88) repeated again) Did you follow them? (88 & 89 nods there head) You fools, why couldn’t you follow him? But anyway you found the prize we looking for. I was searching for the Dark Dragon for years and I know where it is, thanks to American Dragon. Now I need the nail of the Dark Dragon. If we can get that, we can make a clone that it will fight every magical creature. (HM is laughing) 88 & 89 lets go.
The next morning came….
Jake woke up in his bedroom with Fudog and on his chair where the computer was. Jake looks outside and sees the streets of New York City clean as a whistle. Jake turn into a Dragon and went outside for a nice patrol.
James woke up and went down stairs and saw a note on the table. It was from his parents. It said….
James,
We went to Atlantic City in NJ, we will be back Monday. Make sure you lock up the house if you’re going out. If you will be sleepover anyone house make sure you calls us first, and then we will see if we accept it. Be careful out there being the Dragon you are.
Love, Mom & Dad.
James was very happy and then he got his lunch and went outside to patrol the city until….. He got capture by the Huntsclan.
James: (still in his Dragon body) get off of me. What are you doing?
Huntsclan: Taking you to our base and getting you nails clip off.
James: (“That were my dad and my mom were talking about, I guess I have to focus of what I’m doing, there will be enemies that I have to face”) Ok that’s it.
The Dragon try to get out but he couldn’t. He tries again and finally he pushes out but he drops a nail on to the floor. A dragon nail. The Huntsmaster were waiting for that to happen.
Huntsmaster: yes we have it a Dragon Nail. Now I can make my clone to get the American Dragon....hahahahaha. (James flew away)
Meanwhile…. Jake saw a person in trouble on the streets. Jake got there in time and save her before she got runover by a car.
Jake: be careful next time you hear. (Jakes flies away)
Little Girl: Thank you Dragon.
Jake saw nothing else and went back home and his Grandpa was looking at him like he has bad news.
Jake: What up G? What with the long face?
Grandpa: The Dark Dragon is back he already attacking magical creatures is Central Park.
Jake: Say what? I’m on my way there now.
Grandpa: I’m coming with you.
The Both Dragons have flew away and went to central park. James heard there was something wrong in Central park but he had other problems.
Trixe & Spud were going to the old folks home to meet there aunt & uncle in the Staten Island Hospital…
Trixe: Come on Spud, let’s get inside.
Spud: Ok I’m coming… wait there is Stacey over there (Trixe says it again “Forget about her, COME ON SPUD lets go”)
Spud: That was Stacey, STACEY… My love life.
Trixe: Come on Spud, you will never get her.
They both went inside and met there aunts & uncles.
Little they know that were was a fire staring already in there. It grew bigger by the second.
Meanwhile…. Jake and Grandpa Saw a medium size Dark Dragon staring to attack on Magical Creatures. Jake went down so fast, it was lighting.
Jake: What are you doing?
DD: Fighting every magical creature I see and now I’m ready for you. Ready American Dragon?
Jake: Bring it.
Jake and DD were fighting. Jake had something in his mind saying that (“I thought the Dark Dragon was gone for good”) Jake finally had the upper edge and kick DD to a Tree. Meanwhile, Grandpa Saw the hunts clan and he went right after them. 88 and 89 were ready to capture him until Jake use his dragon breath that went through DD and fire at 88 and 89 which foil the trap.
Jake: Huh? What’s going on? (Jake looks closer and saw it was clone, he notice there was no belly button there.) (He remember that in Science class yesterday)
Fu dog finally came and got the spell that Jake needed…
Fu dog: This should do it.
Jake: Thanks. (It was potion; he has to put this potion in DD mouth to work.)
The Hunts Clan was still fighting with Grandpa until he use his fire breath which scare all them away including 88 & 89.
Jake got DD on to the floor and put the potion in his mouth which made him disappeared successfully. Jake and Grandpa along with Fu Dog went back home.
Meanwhile…. James saw the hospital on fire and went straight to it. James went inside and saw Trixe and Spud knock out cold (“Oh my god, my friends are in danger”) under a pile of wood. (“it must been fallen on them from the fire”) James took Trixe and spud outside to safety. The EMT took Trixe and Spud to a near by hospital. Trixe and Spud survive with minor injures. The people cheer and shout out “Dragon, Dragon”… James saluted and then headed straight home. When he was home he turns back to human form and checks up on the house and then goes to the nearby hospital where Trixe and Spud were.
Jake and Grandpa Saw on the news about what happen in Staten Island and heard about two teens injured on the seen. Jake rush out of the shop and went to the nearby hospital in Staten Island, but Jake didn’t see who save Trixe & Spud lives, including Grandpa who saw Jake rushing to the hospital.
James was waiting in the waiting room to visit Trixe & Spud. Jake walks in.
Jake: I got here as soon as I could.
James: Jake wow, I can’t believe you came.
Jake: Yeah I heard on the news that two teens were injured and I heard it was Trixe & Spud.
James: yeah I’m just waiting for the doctor to tell us to come inside.
Dr. Whitey: Ok you boys can go in now. (Jake & James Nod there heads and went into the room.)
Jake & James saw Trixe & Spud waking up and said…
Trixe: Oh my god, how did we get here?
James: (“I better make an excuse for now, until I can really trust these three”) the firefighters got you out of there in time.
Spud: I didn’t see … fire fighters….
Jake: That’s because you were cover in wood.
Spud: Oh wood… right... (There was a pause)
James: what happen in there Trixe?
Trixe: Me and spud were in the hospital talking to our aunts and Uncle…. Oh my god my aunt angles and Uncle Sam. (Spud said the same thing expect “aunt Jennifer & Uncle Tom”)
Dr. Whitey: Don’t worry about your aunts and Uncles, they are ok, no serious injures. (All of them said “phew”)
Trixe: Thank god, anyway back to my story… we saw the fire coming on the elevator and we were running down to the exit until we got knock out by a pile of wood that fell on top of us. That when the Firefighters save our lives and bring us here.
Spud: Yeah….
Jake: you had a rough day.
James: I agree, do you both want something to drink?
Trixe & Spud: Water please. (James runs away goes to the nearest machine)
Jake: Now that James is gone, my day has been hell; I’m very tired from what happen today.
Trixe: what happen?
Jake: I had to do a can of whoop ass on the Huntsclan and a medium size Dragon. The Dragon was Dark, but not as big as the Dark Dragon.
Spud: whoa Bro, you had a hard day. Look on the news…
The news reported about the hospital. (Jake look at it, as James came back with bottles of water in his hand.)
News #1: Thanks to a person who was brave enough to save these two teens lives. We didn’t get a picture of the person, but people were yelling out “dragon”. (Jake, Trixe, Spud and James (Faking it) were all surprise)
Jake: (Notice James was around, so he had to be surprise too.) I can’t believe a Dragon save your lives.
Trixe: yeah I thought the firefighters save your live. (James & Spud agree)
Jake: you two better get some rest, we see you in school on Monday. Don’t forget to those math projects that Mr. Ponser gave you. (Trixe & Spud agree) James lets go home.
James: Yes let’s go home… It all right that I can sleepover your house Jake, my parents aren’t home until Monday Morning.
Jake: Sure why not, just let me call my grandpa.
James: I have to call my parents too.
The phone rang at the house. Grandpa Answer…
Jake: James is going to come over your house; you have to do no Dragon stuff ok.
Grandpa: Ok Jake, I will make sure fu dog and me act normal as we can. (Jake hangs up the cell phone)
Jake: Ok you can come over.
James: My parents say that I’m allowed to sleep over.
Jake: Cool lets go.
Jake & James went on the ferry and went home….
Jake: Well James this is my room, put your sleeping bag any where you want it.
James: Ok, wow neat Dragons.
Jake: Yeah I love Dragons very much.
James: Hmm, I think we should start the Math project tomorrow and also get some sleep it’s been a hard day for us… (Jake agrees)
Jake: Ok lets gets some sleep.
Jake & James went to sleep…
James woke up because of a bad dream he had and went to the bathroom and saw….
Chapter 4 will come up tomorrow… Reply as Fast you can.
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Post by DarkDragontc on Jul 31, 2006 13:17:47 GMT -5
Sry for Double posting... Please Reply
Thanks for Reading, here is Chapter Four.
Chapter 4: Who are you?
James saw a dog that was snoring. James looks at it for a second and then went back. (“That was weird”).
Later on Sunday Morning, Jake eyes woke up early and thought about something
Jake: (in his mind) it’s been four days since I know James and I don’t know if I should tell him I’m a Dragon. We do have a lot in common and I think he will would be a great sidekick for me. But last night what James said was a lie, I think he thought a firefighter went in there and save Trixe & Spud Lives, but that wasn’t true, what I saw on the news was a Dragon or some kind of magical Creature. Until then I can’t tell James just yet, until I can fully trust him.
Jake went back to sleep for another hour, then Mrs. Long wake them up for breakfast…
Mrs. Long: Come on boys your going to miss your breakfast.
Jake: Coming mom. Your ready? James: Yeah I be down there in one second.
Jake: Ok. (Jake head down stairs)
James: There is something very weird about this place. I don’t know if I should tell Jake I’m a Dragon. I know him too, but I can’t trust him yet. (James headed down stairs too)
Mr. Long: How are you boys? Do you want to anything today?
Jake: We have to work on out Math Project.
Mr. Long: Ok, I be down stairs fixing a few things.
Jake’s sister comes down…
Haley: a visitor in this house, wow Jake I never knew you would let someone sleepover…. What is his name? (Very happy)
James: My name is James Dark. You can call me JD for short.
Jake: Nice way of putting it. Her name is Haley.
James: Nice name. Well Haley I might see you around. (Haley Blushing)
Haley was blushing and her heart was beating very fast. (“What a very cute boy”) Haley sighed and then went downstairs to her dad.
James: I think your sister just gave me the look.
Jake: What kind of look?
James: Like I want to take you on a date, look.
Jake: Say what? No way my sister likes you.
James: well she made a face that looks exactly the same when my friends look at another girl.
Jake: you had friends back then. (James nods his head) why did you come to this school?
James: My principal wanted me too because of my high grades.
Jake: Of course you’re smart. (Jake & James laughing)
The hours have past Jake & James did there math project and were ready to presented on Monday to the class.
Later that Sunday Night…
Jake & James were outside doing there patrols. James was in Staten Island, while Jakes was NYC. The patrols went well until Jake saw the dark dragon which was James (but he doesn’t know) and said…
Jake: (In dragon form) hey come over here, what are you doing?
James: (In dragon Form) (“I better make an excuse for now”) I was … uh…
Jake: That’s correct you were doing nothing and you will continue to doing now.
Jake kicks James in the head. James went on to the floor and thought (“why he doing that… yes that’s it… he thinks fighting because I look dark and I fit the profile… ok… but I have no choice to fight for now, until then… and also I don’t who this dragon is, who are you?”) James got back up and uses his fire breath, Jake dodge and went right for his stomach. James went down again but this time he grab on to Jake tail and swing him all the way to the next building…
Jake: Ouch. He more stronger then I thought. James: Come on…
The fight continue for a least 2 hours… until grandpa saw was going on and turn into dragon form to meet up with Jake. James saw another dragon and ran away.
Jake: Yeah you better run away.
Grandpa: (In dragon form) who is he?
Jake: I don’t know, as far I know he is the Dark Dragon.
Grandpa: You better be careful, you guys been at it for two hours already.
Jake: I know and he will be back.
Jake & Grandpa went back inside and turn back to human form.
Grandpa: I want to tell you something, look right here on the TV Screen.
Jake: yeah I’m looking… (“What do you see?”) I see a magical creature… but it’s to blind to see.
Grandpa: yeah. Me and fu dog were trying to find out who it was, but can not tell by close up. I will be gone for a few days, make sure you watch the shop and keep an eye on all your friends.
Jake: Ok.
Jake went upstairs and knocks on the bathroom door…
Jake: Hey James, are you done in there? (No response) He repeated again. Finally a response.
James flew right in the bathroom and turns back to human form.
James: I’ll be right out.
Jake: ok hurry up.
James got out and checks on the math project, while Jake wash off the burse he got from the dark dragon (James). James had no burses at all, just some bumps on his head. James & Jake love there project and finish successfully. They finally went to sleep.
The Next day….
Jake & James arrive to school late, but got A+ for the project. Mr. Ponser was very please and can see the reason why James wants to stick around. Trixe & Spud didn’t come in today because of there injures. The day went quick as Jake & James didn’t have a chance to talk to each other.
Jake went to a party, as for James he went home… But when James opens the door he heard….
Chapter 5 Tomorrow… Reply as fast you can.
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Post by kazashi on Aug 1, 2006 5:45:59 GMT -5
Lol triple lost.. Anyway same thing as before good story and please continue even tho im the only one reading it
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Post by gojake on Aug 1, 2006 12:58:02 GMT -5
No I am too plzzz update.
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DarkDragontc
Young Warrior Dragon
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Post by DarkDragontc on Aug 3, 2006 18:44:16 GMT -5
Thank for Reading, here is chapter five.
Chapter 5: Happy B-Day James
James walks in and closed the door and heard “Surprise” by his parents and friends. James forgot it was his birthday because of the hard work he was doing in school. Jake, Trixe & spud were there with along with Mr. & Mrs. Long. (Haley had a babysitter). James’ birthday is the beginning of the school year as for Jake, Trixe and Spud there birthday is in November & December.
James: wow, I can’t believe… how the… (Jake cuts in)
Jake: Your mom call my mom and then it when on from there and I decide to come to your party.
Spud: yeah bro.
Trixe: Right up, Jake.
James: why you both weren’t in school today?
Trixe: I didn’t feel up to school today (Spud Agree)
James: But coming to my party you did. (Jake laughs)
Spud: uh yeah …
James: You really are the best of friends I ever have.
After an hour later of celebrating of James’ birthday. Jake gave James a present. Jake’s Presents was a Dragon fountain. James was very amaze of it. Trixe & Spud split the money for a gift and gave James a gift card at Game Stop. James parents gave him a skateboard. James was really surprise when he got that.
James: I can’t believe you got me a skateboard. (Happy) thank you everybody.
Jake: No problem, (everyone else says the same)
James hugs his parents.
Mrs. Dark: why won’t you show your friends your room, James?
James: sure why not.
James & the gang went up the stairs. While they were going up, James was thinking to himself, (“should I tell them I am a Dragon, I did think about this a lot of times and I promise myself the day I got friends and fully trust them and when my birthday hit. I just don’t know what there going to say and plus I already met another dragon which was nice, but we had to fight, because the dragon suspected something of me. I will tell them, because it is my decision and the time to tell my friends the secret I’ve been holding against them.”) They finally got up to James’ room. Jake & and the rest like it because it was big room and you have a great view of the city in New York.
Trixe: Dang man you have a great room.
Spud: Yeah I agree, you can see everything from outside here.
Jake: This is a great room, it’s larger than my room.
James: Thanks. … Uh … Can you guys sit somewhere for a second I have to tell you something?
Jake: what is it?
James: Remember what happen to Trixe & Spud that got save by those firefighters.
Spud: No I don’t remember.
Trixe: Yeah I remember, (Trixe hits spud in the head) Spud … you really have to remember what happen because that was a life or death situation over there.
James: well … I don’t how to say this but… that wasn’t firefighters that save your life. It was me.
Trixe: how? (Confused)
Spud: what… cool… but how?
Jake: How did you do it?
James: Well you guys I’m a … how can I say this… I’m a Dragon.
Jake: NO WAY! (“I knew there was another Dragon, but I didn’t know who”)
Trixe: You must be tripin, but if you are a Dragon, thxs for saving our lives.
Spud: Yeah bro, you risk your life to save ours.
James: Yeah I did… here I go turning into a Dragon… Dragon UP!!!!
James turns into a Dragon. Jake was very surprise, because that was the same dragon he fought the last time they met, but this time he wasn’t clone. Trixe was amazed to see another Dragon and Spud fainted on the floor.
Jake: So it was you… I mean wow you are dragon, look at your skin it’s darker then ever.
James: Yeah it is and I like it.
Jake: Now I get it, the person that took photo of the hospital was you in there, but it was too blind to see and no one can prove that was a dragon. (Spud woke back up)
Spud: yeah I agree… wait … what am I’m agreeing on?
Trixe: you’re accepting on, that James is a Dragon.
Jake: James I have to tell you something and I … want to waited a little longer until I can trust you, but since now you show you are a dragon, I’ve better tell my secret I’ve been hiding from you. (James nod his head) Dragon Up!!!
Jake turn into a red dragon. James (“Oh no, I didn’t know that was Jake I was fighting. He is a good fighter, but I had to give up because another dragon show up with him. But why did he fight me in the first place?”)
James: I’m sorry, Jake. I didn’t mean to hit you.
Jake: I forgive you, you didn’t know you were fighting me.
Trixe: At least you two have something in common.
Spud: Yeah I agree.
James Mom was yelling down the stairs…: time for your friends to go, James, you have another school day tomorrow.
James: ok mom. You guys have to keep this secret lock.
Jake: don’t worry, our secret is safe with us.
Trixe: Yeah, Happy Birthday James.
Spud: Happy Birthday bro.
Trixe & Spud head down the stairs… James told Jake to wait up.
James: be online tonight I need to talk to you more. (Turns back into human form)
Jake: Ok I will be on. Now since I know you’re a dragon, who is training you? (Turns back into humans form)
James: Nobody I was actually train already.
Jake: Oh man, I was train with my grandpa, but he is good grandfather anyway.
James: So your grandpa is a dragon too, right?
Jake: yeah he is. You met him when we were fighting.
James: yeah. You better go, I will see you online tonight.
James was left alone in his room, after Jake, Trixe & Spud left. James parents came up the stairs and saw James looking outside his windows with a beautiful view of the sunset.
Mom: are you ok James?
James: Yeah I am. It’s just now that… I think I told my friends too early about my secret.
Dad: why did you tell them?
James: It was my choice, I trusted them and it’s working out fine for me and my friends.
Mom: well James, it was your choice.
James: yeah it was… (“I never knew that Jake was a Dragon though”)
Dad: James we have one more present for you.
James: what is it?
Mom: it is a wish bowl. Every year on your birthday, you have one wish to make, any wish you want.
James: wow cool. Thank you mom & dad.
Dad: Save it for a rainy dad, James.
James: I will.
James’ Parents went back down stairs after they hug & kiss James and told him “Happy Birthday”.
Later that night, James wrote down a list of things he wants to wish for, he didn’t decide yet what he wish for, but he is getting close to a conclusion. James receives and e-mail from his best friend Wayne. In the e-mail it’s said…
Hey James,
I just wanted to wish you a happy birthday. I will be not on tonight, but I will be on tomorrow and also we are going on a field trip to NYC. I think were going to your school for a play. I will check on it. I think we be leaving at 9am and come back at 12pm.
Your best friend,
Wayne Jones.
James couldn’t believe if Wayne comes to my school, I could invite him to see my new friends I have made. I’m still deciding if I should tell Wayne that I’m a dragon, but I don’t trust him because everytime I’m tell him something he can’t keep a secret, not even for 20 minutes. James went to the bathroom…
Meanwhile…
Jake was online, along with Trixe & Spud.
Jake: (Typing) James’ party was great
Spud: (Typing also) Yeah…. Uh …. What kind of party was it?
Trixe: (Typing also) You really need to get your head check, it was a birthday party for James.
Spud: Yeah I think I really do… I’m going to bed, good night.
Trixe: Jake I agree with Spud, I’m going to bed too, but be careful for now on, even though that James is a Dragon. He is Dark and it scares me because what you encounter before.
Jake: Yeah I know Trixe… Good night Trixe & Spud. (Trixe & Spud turn off there computer and went to bed)
Jake stay on waiting for James to come on… Jake started to have a flashback
{Flashback}
Rose: Come on Jake we have to get inside.
Jake: Yeah let’s do it.
Back at the Shop…
Grandpa: where is Jake?
Fu Dog: last time I’m saw him, he was in his room.
Grandpa & Fu Dog went into the room and saw a note.
Grandpa: ay yuh, Jake went after the dark dragon himself.
Fu dog: oh jeez, this is not good.
Meanwhile back at the harbor river…
Jake & Rose started to fight the Dark Dragon. The fight went on for hours and hours. In one point Jake had the Dark Dragon right in his gasp and was ready to kill him forever.
Jake: Now I’m ready to your kick your behind down
DD: Hmm… I don’t think so.
Rose: Do it Jake, you got him.
Just then the DD pick up rose by its tail and told Jake…
DD: If you strike, your girlfriend dies.
Jake: Rose.
Rose: Don’t worry about me, you have to kill the Dark Dragon.
Jake got punch by the Dark Dragon which pushes him outside of the ship in the harbor. Just then the Door closed.
Jake: NOOOOO. Let me in!!!
Jake tries to open the door with all his might, but couldn’t get in. Jake heard a scream and tries again but nothing happen, and then five minutes later, it was quiet. No noise, nothing. Finally the door open and Jake was looking for Rose. He looks around everywhere and saw nothing. Jake Started to cry very hard…
Jake: NOOO (Crying very hard) I can’t believe she is GONE!!!
Finally Grandpa & Fu Dog took Jake away and bring him home and let him rest on the bed. Trixe & Spud came over Jake house the next day, but Grandpa told them not to come because of what happen. {Flash Back Ends}
James was IMing Jake like seven times… until finally he got a response. James: (Typing) Are you there?
Jake: yeah I am.
James: What happen?
Jake: I just had another memory burn and I can’t get it out of my head.
James: Maybe if you talk about it, it made make you feel better.
Jake: Your right, Ok James you have to keep this between us. Trixe & Spud only know little of it, but I’m going to give the full length of it.
James: I promise to keep my mouth shut.
Jake: Ok here it goes…
Chapter 6 will be tomorrow…. Thank you for reading.
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Post by Sluggy on Aug 3, 2006 23:22:44 GMT -5
This is a really cool fan-fic. Keep it coming.
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Post by DarkDragontc on Aug 4, 2006 13:31:19 GMT -5
Thanks for reading, here is chapter 6.
Chapter 6: Bring Back Rose/ Meeting Wayne Jones
Jake & James had a long talk last night on the internet about Rose. James understands everything from the day Jake & Rose met to when Rose suddenly vanish during the fight of the Dark Dragon. It was 11pm on Wednesday and Jake & James were almost finishing talking to each other¡K
James: Wow that¡¦s was amazing story
Jake: Thanks for making me feel better.
James: NP ļ. Jake I have something that made get Rose back.
Jake: What is it? And how can you get Rose back?
Mrs. Dark: James time to go to sleep, it¡¦s already 11 o¡¦clock.
James: Yes mother, just hold on I¡¦m almost done.
Mrs. Dark: Ok get some sleep please.
James: Sorry Jake I have to go, I will tell you tomorrow after school.
Jake: Ok, good night.
James shut down his computer and went to bed. As for Jake he stays up for a few minutes and tries to remember what happen to rose. Suddenly fu dog enter.
Fu dog: Why are you up this late?
Jake: I just talk to James about Rose.
Fu dog: Oh, but why did you talk to James about Rose?
Jake: Because he is a Dragon.
Fu dog: What??? (Surprise) Another Dragon in this city?
Jake: yeah, I thought I told you already.
Fu dog: No you didn¡¦t, well at least you have a friend that¡¦s a Dragon.
Jake: Yeah.
Fu dog: Did you gramps yet?
Jake: No I will tell him tomorrow.
Fu dog: Ok Jake, I¡¦m going to sleep, make sure you tell gramps about this okay.
Jake: yes fu dog. Good night.
Jake finally went to bed.
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The next morning came as for James, Jake, Trixe & Spud got to school on time. Mr. Rotwood was giving an assignment to the class. The assignment is about your favorite Role Model, they have to compare there favorite Role model to each other.
Mr. Rotwood: Ok everybody, I want a project due by this Monday. (Everyone groans) Enough with your groans. You will grade on presentation and teamwork. Jake Long please choose a partner out of the hat¡K
Jake use eye of the dragon and saw James¡¦ name and pick him¡K
Mr. Rotwood: Jake & James.
Then everyone started to pick¡K
Jake: I guess it us again.
James: I¡¦ll bet you use your Eye of the Dragon to choose me, right?
Jake: Uh ¡K. Maybe ¡K.. Yeah I did.
James: tsk. Tsk. Tsk. What a bad boy you are?
Jake: Say what?
James: I¡¦m just kidding with you. (Mr. Rotwood came over)
Mr. Rotwood: James why are you talking in my class. Go to the principal office now!!
James: Dang you don¡¦t have to push it.
Jake: Just go there, I¡¦ll meet you there in a sec.
James went to the principal office and wait for Mrs. Waite to come out.
Mr. Waite: James, the principal wants to see you now.
James walks in¡K
Mrs. Waite: Ah James sit down, what happen?
James: I was talking to my friend during class, we were discussing the project we had to do.
Mrs. Waite: who was your friend?
James: I was talking to Jake.
Mrs. Waite: ok I send him here.
James: Ok. Am I in trouble?
Mrs. Waite: will see James?
Jake walks in with Mr. Rotwood¡K
Mr. Rotwood: These two were talking during class non-stop.
Jake: Hold the phone¡K we were talking about our project.
Mr. Rotwood: Oh really? ¡K are you sure¡K (Mrs. Waite Cuts in)
Mrs. Waite: Mr. Rotwood lets watch the tape and see if Jake & James are telling the truth.
Mrs. Waite puts the tape in and see Jake & James talking¡K but they are talking about the project.
Mrs. Waite: Ok you two can go. (Jake & James Grin) Mr. Rotwood you stay her, there is a matter we should discuss with you.
Jake & James went out¡K Jake had to go to music class and as for James was called off by a teacher. It was Mr. Ponser.
Mr. Ponser: James can you do me a favor? (James nod his head) Can you show this kid, where the bathroom is? I will give a free period pass for the day.
James: Sure why not.
The kid was James¡¦ best friend Wayne Jones.
James: Oh my god, Wayne Jones.
Wayne: Hey James, wow you have a great school.
James: yeah this is. How is life in Ralph McKee High School?
Wayne: it¡¦s been good, we already saw a lots fight in our school already. Two kids had go to the hospital today.
James: Dang man, I¡¦m sorry for that
Wayne: yeah I am too. I¡¦m very smart for my class and I¡¦m already in the top 6 in my class.
James: not bad.
Wayne: James I really have to go, where is the bathroom?
James: Oh sorry, I didn¡¦t know, it¡¦s right here.
As James was waiting Trixe & Spud walk by¡K
Trixe: Spud, don¡¦t you think I should know your first name by now?
Spud: believe me Trixe you don¡¦t want to know my first name.
Trixe: Hey James, what¡¦s cracking?
James: nothing much, just waiting for my friend to come of the bathroom.
Spud: You had more friends?
James: Yup. Spud its ok if your first name is weird.
Spud: it¡¦s not weird, it¡¦s just well¡K
Wayne walks out of the bathroom¡K
Wayne: who¡¦s your friends?
James: This is Trixe & Spud. Trixe & Spud this is Wayne Jones.
Trixe: What up, Wayne? So this was your friend you had since the 6th grade right?
James: Yup.
Spud: (Shake his hand with Wayne) it¡¦s nice to meet you.
Wayne: James I have to know something? How the hell did you get friends before I did?
James: I¡¦ve met these nice two in lunch, also they needed help on math.
Wayne: Oh I see. (Wayne look at Trixe and his heart started to beat faster)
Spud: Yup¡K when was that?
Trixe: On the first day of school.
Spud: Oh yeah.
Trixe: We have to go, nice to meet you Wayne and see you later James.
James: Ok bye.
Wayne: Trixe is very cute.
James: whoa wait a second, you like Trixe.
Wayne: She is very cute, I felt like butterflies were coming out my stomach when I saw her.
James: This is a side of you that I never seen before.
James & Wayne started to walk back to the auditorium.
Wayne: Yeah you might see something new of me.
Just then Jake was catching up to James and was calling his name¡K
Jake: James, hey wait up.
James: Hey Jake sup?
Jake: Nothing much, I just on a bathroom break. Who is your Friend?
James: ok. This is Wayne Jones. Wayne this is Jake.
Wayne: Nice to meet you.
Jake: Same here (Both shake hands) what are you here for?
Wayne: I¡¦m on a field trip with my school.
Jake: cool. James I have to go back to class. Nice to meet you Wayne.
Wayne: yeah you too. Man I can¡¦t believe you already made three new friends already.
James: Yeah I did. You better get back in, before you get in trouble.
Wayne: Ok I see you later, I¡¦m come back on another field trip here hopefully.
James: yeah ok see you later.
Wayne: I really want to come back and see Trixe again.
James: do you really want to go out with Trixe?
Wayne: yeah I do.
James: I will tell Trixe when I get the chance. Until then see you later.
Wayne: Bye- Bye James.
Wayne went back inside the auditorium, as for James, the school bell rang and waited outside for Jake. Jake finally came out with his skateboard, but he saw James looking a girl name Jennifer.
Jennifer is white-tan, blonde hair, almost the same size as James and in the same classes as James was in. James was looking at her like no tomorrow. Even Jakes hand wasn¡¦t working, waving back and forth. So finally he snaps his fingers and it work.
James: Oh I¡¦m sorry,¡K it¡¦s just I saw somebody¡K beautiful.
Jake: you should talk to her¡K (man she close to like Rose was)¡K
James: Yeah I know, but I will find the time, now let¡¦s get to you house.
Jake & James race home as fast they could¡K but there was a problem¡K One of the buildings went on fire. Jake & James went after the seen in there dragon form. They both went inside to find who was in trouble. James found a teacher on the floor. It was Mr. Newman from his old school in IS24 and Jake found a little girl but her foot was stuck. Jake tries & tries to get her out but there is no use. James saw Jake in trouble so he finally push the wood out under the little girl foot and got her out in time before the building crumble. The firefighters thank the two dragons and then went home. It was already 5pm and Jake & James went home and up to Jake¡¦s Room.
Jake: Ok what so important that you had to come to my house? By the way, nice work on helping me.
James: No problem, anyway I got here is a Wish bowl.
Jake: wow.
The wish bowl was a medium size shape of a ball.
James: all I have to do, is throw the ball to an empty space and my wish will come true.
Jake: Cool, but why do you have it with you?
James: Because I¡¦m giving to you, I don¡¦t need it, and since you were talking about Rose so much¡K I decided to give it to you.
Jake: Wow Thank you so much¡K. (Jake was out of breath) ¡K. Uh ¡K. Man you¡¦re the greatest friend I ever had. Thank you.
James: No problem, now Jake you have to throw it after you make your wish. Make sure you think of the wish first, then throw it. Don¡¦t say it out loud.
Jake: Ok. (¡§I wish to see Rose again¡¨) (Jake threw the ball, a flash of lighting came out and piece of paper came right to Jakes hand and it said¡K)
Your wish is my command.
Jake: what does this mean?
James: Your wish will come true tomorrow. You will finally see the person that you miss for years.
Jake: Yeah I know¡K I miss her, you know.
James: yeah I know, ok I have to get out of here and work on that Role Model project from Mr. Rotwood.
Jake: Ok I see you tomorrow.
James: you bet.
Later that Night, Jake was sleeping and was Dreaming about Rose. This time it was for real¡K
{Dream} Rose: Jake are you there, Jake??
Jake: Yeah I¡¦m here¡K Oh wow I can see you.
Rose: Me too. (Jake kisses Rose so hard, it was beautiful)
They stop kissing and look at each other. There were on an Island. Only oceans and trees was there. They started to hug.
Jake: Oh my god, I¡¦ve miss you so much, I thought I lost you forever.
Rose: I thought that too. I will be at your school tomorrow.
Jake: yes, it will be me & you as always. Where were all you this time?
Rose: Jake I will tell you that some other time, for now yes it will be me & you, (Rose kiss Jake on the lips and the dreams ends)
Jake wakes up in the morning ¡K smiling at himself and knowing that Rose is ok and will see her in school today.
Chapter 7 will comes out tomorrow.
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Post by twg519 on Aug 4, 2006 15:02:06 GMT -5
Horay for JakeXRoseness!!!!!!! This story kicks ass!!! Can't wait for tommorrow!!!!!!
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Sluggy
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Post by Sluggy on Aug 6, 2006 21:56:41 GMT -5
When's the next chapter coming out?
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Post by gojake on Aug 7, 2006 9:48:45 GMT -5
another chapter! this story rocks!
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Post by dreamcatcher on Aug 7, 2006 15:46:52 GMT -5
three cheers for jakexrose!
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