dreamcatcher
Young Warrior Dragon
._.[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by dreamcatcher on Sept 4, 2007 9:11:44 GMT -5
“AH! You died?” shouted Kay in shock with the suspenseful story, leaping up once.
Ash rolled her eyes and made a glare at the sudden interruption she blurted out all of a random, as it seemed, “Yes, Kay, I’m dead. And oh, what a twist of fate, you can see me completely fine right here, telling everyone here a story about my near-death experience when I’m screaming hysterically of my own death!”
DAMNIT KAY STOP INTERUPTING!!!!XD
you finnally updated * glomp* ^^
AWESOME CHAPTER!!!
UPDATE SOONS!!!!
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Post by Erinul, Mass Ressurected on Sept 5, 2007 17:12:58 GMT -5
Sorry I'm late on commenting. School's been keeping me busy lately with work and stuff. Anyway... I read the entire post, from Mark's story to the end of Ash's. I totally liked how you kept my character's story intact, even with the modifications. You made it sound even better. I liked Ash's story as much as Mark's. It was very well written, very tragic, and it almost made me cry.....well, almost. Overall, I believe that this was a great filler. I hope that the sequel is just as good (or better, whichever one you want to pick XD) as this great story.
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