nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
Their love can't be stopped. Neither will the show, without a fight[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by nyc2dragon on Sept 18, 2006 15:18:28 GMT -5
I do not own the rights to AD:JL or its characters. Those belong to the Disney Company.
This story is a sequel to my last fan fic Return To Dragon Summit. This time I decided to do it a different style. If you recall in my last story, the Dark Dragon was looking at the picture of Jake and Rose at the fall dance. And said "She (Rose) could be the key to defeating the American Dragon, Ha ha ha."
This takes place after "Homecoming", Rose has found her family in Pittsburgh, where she lives with them, and hiding from the Huntsclan. Jake goes up to Pittsburgh with Fu Dog to visit her.
And now our story begins.
Jake gets off the plane, and at the airport, he is looking for Rose. He finds her.
"Hey, it's been a long time." He gives her a hug. She responds "What the hell are you doing? Get off me creep." And kicks him in the groin. Jake says "Rose?" The girl responds "Oh, you must be Jake. I am Sunshine, Rose's twin sister."
"I thought you were just some weirdo. I am sorry" she says. "Well they say that about me all the time." Fu Dog say. "You must be Fu Dog". Sunshine says. "She is a smart one" Fu Dog says.
Jake asks "Where is Rose?" From behind him, Jake hears someone says "Hi there stranger." It is Rose. "Rose is it really you." As they hug. "Yes Jake it is me." Rose says Jake responds "I have dreamed of this day for months."
While this reunion is taking place, in his underground leer the Dark Dragon is watching the conversation through his black magic.
"At last, I can go through my plan to take over the magic and human world, and have the American Dragon be mine at last." He says.
"I brought you here my servant, to execute my trap. Bring me this creature he cares so much about." The servant takes off the hood and it is former Counslor Chang "Yes master."
After Chang leaves, the Dark Dragon ponders his plan "This time I got you American Dragon. You will be mine. Ha ha ha"
End of part 1. What do you think so far? My plan for the story is not what you think. (Dark Dragon puts a spell on Rose. Not in this story)
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Post by twg519 on Sept 18, 2006 15:27:50 GMT -5
I don't think you know how much getting kicked in the groin hurts, jake would've been rolling on the ground in pain. Good story though!
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nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
Their love can't be stopped. Neither will the show, without a fight[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by nyc2dragon on Sept 18, 2006 16:04:03 GMT -5
Ok I could change that a little bit. But you get the point.
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Post by twg519 on Sept 18, 2006 16:06:02 GMT -5
ok, sorry if I sounded rude! Your stories are awesome!
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Post by dreamcatcher on Sept 18, 2006 18:11:10 GMT -5
"Hey, it's been a long time." He gives her a hug. She responds "What the hell are you doing. Get off me creep." And kicks him in the grong. Jake says "Rose?" The girl responds "Oh you must be Jake. I am Sunsine, Rose's twin sister." LOL!!! awesome start... update soon!!
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fudogg
Young Warrior Dragon
I've seen Dead Man's Chest enough times to know that this is not a good thing...[ss:Lao Shi]
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Post by fudogg on Sept 18, 2006 19:09:15 GMT -5
grong? it's good. yeah, being kicked in the groin is no walk through a peaceful meadow. This would be Jake's reaction , then .Update soon.
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nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
Their love can't be stopped. Neither will the show, without a fight[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by nyc2dragon on Sept 18, 2006 19:50:35 GMT -5
I'll have part 2 done by the end of the night. Just so you should know, this fan fic has 4 parts. So by the end of the night we be half way there.
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Post by superdoglac on Sept 18, 2006 21:40:31 GMT -5
Great story! Update soon!
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fudogg
Young Warrior Dragon
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Post by fudogg on Sept 18, 2006 21:55:00 GMT -5
Your doing a good job!
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nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
Their love can't be stopped. Neither will the show, without a fight[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by nyc2dragon on Sept 18, 2006 22:34:33 GMT -5
They arrives at Rose's family home. A two stories house. It is a nice looking house, very much like Jake's own house. Rose tells Jake "Before we get in. I didn't tell your a dragon. They would freak, because of me being targets of the Huntsclan, and be around anyone that might attract them. Jake says "No problem I understand. I am use to hiding that with my own dad. "Thank you." Rose kisses Jake on the chek. They enter the house. Sunsine says "Which also mean, you need to be quiet Fu." Fu responds "No problem, I know people are not confertable with talking dogs. I don't why..." Jake, Rose, and Sunsine all say "Fu dog."
Jake says "This is not a nice looking place you got there". "Thank you, these are my parents Bill and Vanessa Clower." Jake looks at Rose's parents, he is very nervious, and doesn't what to say. "Hi I am meet, great to Jake you. I mean my name is great, Jake to meet you." Rose interupts, "This is Jake." Rose says half laughing.
Mr. Clower says "So this is the famous Jake long. We have been hearing so much about. Rose just can't stop talking about you." Jake says with a smile "Oh really." Mrs. Clower gives Jake a hug and say "Thank you so much for helping bring together our family finally." Jake says "No problem." Mr. Clower says "Let me show you to our guest room."
They go to the 2nd floor to the guest room Mrs. Clower says "Why don't you settle in Jake." Jake says ok.
Later on, Jake and Rose are talking in her room Jake says "It's been a long time. There is something I want to tell you." Rose says "Me to. You first." Jake says "Ok, Rose" Sunshine walks in and says "Why don't we give you a tour of our city." Jake says ok. Jake and Rose both have a slight anger look on their face.
Jake, Rose, Fu, and Sunshine go to the local fast food place and are talking. "So tell me Jake, is being the defender of the magical world as glamorise as it seems"? Sunshine ask. Jake says "Not really, it is very dangerous, and you can't have a normal life. Sometimes I wish I was a normal human." Fu asks "Could any of you, order me another Big Mac?"
Later in the day, after Sunshine and Fu went back to the house, Jake and Rose are walking down the street talking. Jake says "I love you Rose. There I said." Rose responds "Jake I love you to." And the two of them kiss."
The next day Rose gets a call "It this Rose?" the voice says. "Yes it is." "I am a member of the Dragon Council. We have got a tip that the Huntsclan is lurking around your neighborhood. You must meet me at the Oakbridge yards." the voice says. "Also don't tell the American Dragon about this, we don't want to alarm him." Rose says ok
Rose arrives outside the yard and sees a woman "Rose we meet at last." Rose asks "Who are you?" The lady says "My name is Counslor Chang." Rose is thinking "Chang. Chang that name sound familer." Chang points at a map of Pittsburgh. "A brownie spotted some Huntsclan members on this side of town."
As Chang is talking Rose has a flashback of a conversation she had with Jake on their Central Park date about the magical creatures of the world. Jake says "Magical creatures are like humans. Some are good, some are evil. Some of the evil one's include El Pandaruas, a wizard bent on ruling the magical world. The Gorgon sisters, who can turn anyone to stone if they are together."
Jake continues "And last but not least, the Dark Dragon. He is the most dangerous creature in the world. He wants to rule the human and magical worlds, and destroy anyone that stands in his way. He has a accomplish that we caught, that was a member of the dragon council. Remember the lady you almost slayed last Halloween, and I stopped it. That is her, Chang, the biggest trader in the magic community." Jake continues "I almost wished, you did slay her that night. You would have done the whole world a favor."
Back to the present, Rose shouts "Chang, I know you." She kicks Chang in the face and runs. As Rose is running, the Dark Dragon shadow creatures appear. Rose is running for her life, when it happened.
From underneath the ground, the Dark Dragon appears. He shouts "Ha ha ha, you fell right into our trap." Rose says "It's you, the one Jake warned me about, the Dark Dragon." Rose had a look of disbelief, before she know what to do. Chang hit her from behind with a club. As Rose was knocked out the Dark Dragon said "Finally I have my bait. And now to catch the giant trout that is the American Dragon. Ha ha ha."
To be continued
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Post by superdoglac on Sept 19, 2006 15:06:01 GMT -5
Bum bum bum! The suspence!!! XD
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nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
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Post by nyc2dragon on Sept 20, 2006 21:32:13 GMT -5
Jake wonders where Rose is at? "Yo Fu have you seen Rose?" Fu says he haven't seen her. "I am starting to get worried now Fu." Sunshine walks in, Jake asked her if she has seen Rose. She says no also. Jake, Fu and Sunshine decide to go out looking for her.
Meanwhile at the Dark Dragon's leer, Rose has finally awaken changed up. She wakes up and says "What happened?" The Dark Dragon appears laughing. Rose says "It is you, the Dark Dragon, what do you want with me?" Dark Dragon responds "Nothing it is not you I am after, it is your boyfriend." Rose interupts "You will never win. Jake will defeat just like he always has."
"Silence" the Dark Dragon shouts. "He has been lucky many times. But he will not defeat me this time. You see what make me more powerful, is I don't care about anyone. He cares about you, he'll do anything for you. That is a weakness, and I am taken advantage of it. His caring and compasions makes me sick. He has protential to be a great warrior, but Lao Shi and people like you hold him back. But until he stops caring for his friends, family, and especially humans, can he reach his full protential. You are just bait, once I get him here. You will be no use to me, because like all humans, you are useless and surve no purpose in this world."
Rose responds, "I thought no one could be a more awful living being than the Huntsman. But you might surpass him as the sorriest excuse of a living being." Chang slaps Rose in the face. "Silence human. Don't you dare talk to the Dark Dragon that way." Dark Dragon says "You have a mouth, just like the American Dragon. It will be a plessure to silence you both."
Menwhile Jake, Fu, and Sunshine are looking for Rose all over the city. "Where could Rose be?" Jake wonders. "I have a bad feeling something terriable happened to her." All of a sudden, the ground explodes, and the Dark Dragon appears "Correct you are American Dragon." Jake says "It is you, Dragon up." Jake goes into Dragon form "What have you done to Rose. If you hurt her I will..." "Silence" the Dark Dragon interupts. "You are in no position to threaten me. You are correct I have her. She is in my leer. It is located underneath the old steal mine downtown. You have a choice American Dragon, join my Dark army, or the creature you care about the most will be history." The Dark Dragon disappears.
To be continued
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nyc2dragon
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Post by nyc2dragon on Sept 28, 2006 21:26:20 GMT -5
Jake returns to the house, and is thinking what to do. "That no good S.O.B., he has got Rose. Fu what am I going to do?" "Well kid, the Dark Dragon is the most ruthless foe in the world. He will no doubt slay Rose, weather you join his army or not." Sunshine suggests "Let me go with you, and rescure my sister." "No it is to dangerous for you." Jake says. Sunshine responds " I am going, and you can't stop me. Don't worry I'll come prepared." She takes something out of the closet. And it Rose's Huntsclan weapon. "Let's go."
Jake, Fu Dog, and Sunshine enter the Dark Dragon's underground leer. Jake yells out "Dark Dragon, come out here. Come out here right now you S.O.B." The ground starts to shake, and the Dark Dragon burst through the ground, and says "American Dragon, I have been expecting you." He looks over at Sunshine and Fu Dog "What are they doing here?" Jake answers "They are here to back me up, incase you try anything funny." Jake turns into Dragon form.
Jake yells "Ok where is Rose? Where is Rose?" Dark Dragon responds "Calm down young Dragon. Your temper is one of the things keeping you from reaching your full protential. She is right here."
The wall behind the Dark Dragon opens, and there is Rose changed up, and Chang. Jake says "Chang I should of know, you had something to do with this." Chang says "Jake Long are you going to join our army or not." Jake responds "Listen Dark Dragon, let her go. It is me your after. I'll tell you what, you and me Dark Dragon one on one. You win I join your army. I win, you let her go."
While this conversation is going on, Fu and Sunshine sneak up and knock out Chang with the Hunts stick. And take the key from Chang. The Dark Dragon sucker punches Jake, and they start fighing.
Sunshine and Fu release Rose. Rose takes the Hunts stick, and something out of Sunshine's backpack, it is her old Huntsclan uniform and Huntsmask, she puts it on. She says to Fu and Sunshine "Ok you two, need to get out of here. It is to dangerous." Sunshine resist doesn't have an 's' "No I won't." Rose responds "This is not your fight." Sunshine says ok. "Let's get out of here, while the getting is good." Fu Dog says. Sunshine and Fu exit.
Rose slaps Chang in the face and says "Get up you witch, it's time for us to have a final showdown." Chang turns into Dragon form. Rose says "As much as I hate his guts. The Huntsman was right, my destiny is to slay a dragon. And I will fulfill that destiny by slaying you, you no good witch." The two of them start to fight.
All of a sudden, we have two battles, Jake vs the Dark Dragon, Rose vs Chang.
To be continued. The final chapter is next.
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nyc2dragon
Young Warrior Dragon
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Post by nyc2dragon on Sept 30, 2006 23:17:02 GMT -5
As Jake and the Dark Dragon are having their battle, the following conversation occurs as the Dark Dragon is winning the battle. The Dark Dragon tells Jake "American Dragon, you are no match for me. Why don't you join my army, we are fighting for you and all of the magical creatures in the world." Jake responds "Never, I am not like you." "Yes you are American Dragon, you are more like me than you know. You take short cuts, use you Doppleganger powers for personal gain. Use your teacher's dream to cheat on a test. Sabotage your sister's powers. You are more like me, than that second rate dragon master of yours."
Meanwhile Rose and Chang are fighting. Chang says "It be a pleasure to destory another human. Just like they destroy the magical community." Rose responds "I don't know what your deal is. But after all of done to me while I was capture, you will pay." Rose has a very angry look on her face, as she is taking it to Chang. She is kicking Chang with kicks to her upper dragon body. And pounding her with the Hunts stick. After a karate kick to Chang's head, and a shot from the Hunts stick, Chang is down. Rose looks at her mark of the Huntsclan on her right arm, raises her Hunts stick, aims it at Chang's face, and puts the fatal blow to Chang. Rose takes off her mask, throws it on the ground, looks over her fallen body, and is frozen.
While this is going on Jake and the Dark Dragon continue to fight. All of a sudden, the leer begins to hing in as the rocks are falling. Jake knows he and Rose have to get out of here. Jake grabs Rose and flys in the air, he notices that Chang is dead. "You killed her?" She responds in a quiet voice "Yes."
The Dark Dragon grabs Jake's leg. "American Dragon you are not leaving my son." Rose hits the Dark Dragon with her Hunts stick, the Dark Dragon's grip on Jake's leg loosens as the rocks fall on him, as he is falling down to the ground, he yells "You will pay for this American Dragon." Jake with Rose in his arms fly out of the leer to safety.
After they got out. Jake and Rose are talking. "I killed her Jake." Rose told Jake. Jake responded, "Yes you did. She deserved it." "You don't understand Jake, I killed someone. I killed a dragon. When I let you go during the Equinox hunt, I promised myself I would never kill anyone, and would never slay a dragon. But I did." Rose began to cry. Jake put his armed around her as she continued "But I was so mad at her. When I was captured, she physical and verbally assulted me. When I battled I had so much hate. I became no better than the Huntsman." Rose continued to cry. Jake told Rose "It's ok. It's ok."
Meanwhile in the underground leer, the Dark Dragon's hand was over the rocks. All of a sudden it moved.
The gang is at Rose's house, as Jake and Fu are ready to leave. "Ok kid I be waiting outside." Fu Dog told Jake, as he headed to the cab waiting to take them to the airport. Jake and Rose are on the front porch talking. "Well it is been all to quick. Jake said. "Yes I know" Rose said back. "I just want you to know, I love you more than any other person in the world." Jake said. "I love you more than any one in the world to." Rose said back. Jake and Rose than kissed for what felt like a lifetime.
Jake waived goodbye to Rose, just before he got in the cab. The cab drove away, as Rose waived back.
The End
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fudogg
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Post by fudogg on Sept 30, 2006 23:29:28 GMT -5
That was pretty good. There were quite a few spelling problems, though. It sounds like you might do a sequel. Also I would have liked a more descriptive way of Rose killing Chang. But overall good job!
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