Post by nyc2dragon on Oct 2, 2006 21:58:30 GMT -5
Disclamer: I do not own the rights to American Dragon: Jake Long or their characters. They are property of the Disney Company.
By popular demand, here is my early episode idea, about Jake and Thorn being stuck in a closed space on the night Jake has a date with Rose. This is pre secret identity revealed story. Originally titled "Trapped". I have decided to change the title to "First Date."
This takes place between "Professor Rotwood's Thesis" and "Ski Trip."
Our story begins in the school hallways, as Jake Long is talking to his two friends Trixie and Spud as he steering at his crush Rose. "Rose she is so wonderful." he said. "Than just ask her out already. I am sick of the same thing everyday, you drolling all over miss thang. Ask her out already." Trixe tells Jake. "Are you crazy?" Jake responds. "Just pretend you asking your mother out on a date." Spud tells Jake. Jake and Trixie steer a Spud with a destirb look on their face.
As Rose walks by, Trixie pushes Jake right into Rose knocking her and Jake down. "Oh I am so sorry." Jake says. "That is ok, I am used to bumping into you, and I kind of like bumping into you." Jake and Rose both gilggle argradly. "Rose you have any plans tonight?" Jake asked. "No, what do you have mind?" She says with a light giggle. Jake struggles to talk, Trixie nugges Jake's elbow, with her elbow. "Would like to go out on a date with me?" Before she could respond, Jake says "Who I am kidding, a girl like you, would never go out with a guy like me. I am sor." Rose interupts, "Sure I would like that. Meet me at the Lowes theater on 28th st?" Jake responds "Sure, see you than." Rose responds "See you than."
Rose exits, Jake is overjoyed, with Trixe and Spud by his side. "She said yes." he yells. "She said yes." as he is dancing in the hallway, when all of a sudden a locker hits him the face, and his knocked to the ground.
After school, Jake goes over to Gramps shop to tell his grampa and Fu dog the good news, but his gramp has news for him. "I have a mission for you, there is a Orb on display at Natural Museum of Natural History, you must bring it here." Jake asks "Why?" "We got a tip that Huntsman is planning on stealing it, and selling it to Herbert the Gobblin mafia king." Fu says. "Can't it wait, till tomorow, I have a date tonight." Jake said. "No young one, tonight, do not question your dragon master." Gramps says. "What time is your date?" Fu Dog asks. Jake tells him 8 pm. "The museum closes at 5 pm, just bring the Orb here before 8 and than you can go on your date." Fu Dog says. Jake says ok. "But how do I get it." He asks. "Kid it is locked in a safe, but I know the combo thanks to some tips on the street, and the beems deactivation code." Fu dog says. "The combination is 38, 24, 14. The deactivation code is 2882. Got that kid." Jake says "I got it Fu."
Meanwhile, in the Huntsleer, the Huntsman has a mission for his apprentise Thorn, who is Jake's cruch Rose. "Thorn I have a mission for you. We have been paid a healthy amount to obtain a Orb in the Museum Of Natural History for a gobbling crime ring. You are to bring it to me tonight." he says. "Master must I obstain it tonight, I have a previous arrangment. She responds. The Huntsman starts to become enrage and yells "Thorn you will bring me this orb tonight, or else! Do I make myself clear?" "Yes master." Thorn says with fear in her voice.
It is 6 pm at the museum as Jake in his American Dragon form arrives at the museum looking for the Orb. He finds the safe, and uses the combination Fu gave him. The safe opens, he pushes the deactivation code, the beems are deactivated. He grabs the Orb and is about to leave, when he is kicked in the face by someone. It is Thorn. "Thank you for getting the Orb for me dragon boy. Now it is time to you to be slayed." She says. "Well it is time for you to learn a lesson, it is not nice to do business with Gobblins." He responds.
Jake and Thorn begin fighting. They fight all over the safe's room. Thorn tries to attack Jake with Huntssitck. She says "Ready to die dragon?" Jake responds "I am always ready. Wait I am mean, you know what I mean." Jake ducks, and kicks the weapon out of the room. They continue to fight. As they are fighting, three mysterious creatures appear. It is Herbert and two of his henchmen. They take the Orb and exit. They locked the safe. Jake and Thorn hear it closes and stop fighting for a second.
The safe's pephole window opens, as they see two sneaky eyes, and a voice. It is Herbert "Thank you for the Orb." He looks over at Thron "Tell the Huntsman thank you, but I won't be paying him after all. Ha ha ha" He looks over at Jake. "American Dragon, always a pleasure, having you be my sab. ha ha ha." He continues "You kids should know there is only enough air to last 6 more hours. You will die tonight at midnight. I got to go hold the magic world hostage. Have fun on your date. Ha ha ha." Jake says "Aw man."
That is all I have to now. I'll post the 2nd half of this short story tomorow.
By popular demand, here is my early episode idea, about Jake and Thorn being stuck in a closed space on the night Jake has a date with Rose. This is pre secret identity revealed story. Originally titled "Trapped". I have decided to change the title to "First Date."
This takes place between "Professor Rotwood's Thesis" and "Ski Trip."
Our story begins in the school hallways, as Jake Long is talking to his two friends Trixie and Spud as he steering at his crush Rose. "Rose she is so wonderful." he said. "Than just ask her out already. I am sick of the same thing everyday, you drolling all over miss thang. Ask her out already." Trixe tells Jake. "Are you crazy?" Jake responds. "Just pretend you asking your mother out on a date." Spud tells Jake. Jake and Trixie steer a Spud with a destirb look on their face.
As Rose walks by, Trixie pushes Jake right into Rose knocking her and Jake down. "Oh I am so sorry." Jake says. "That is ok, I am used to bumping into you, and I kind of like bumping into you." Jake and Rose both gilggle argradly. "Rose you have any plans tonight?" Jake asked. "No, what do you have mind?" She says with a light giggle. Jake struggles to talk, Trixie nugges Jake's elbow, with her elbow. "Would like to go out on a date with me?" Before she could respond, Jake says "Who I am kidding, a girl like you, would never go out with a guy like me. I am sor." Rose interupts, "Sure I would like that. Meet me at the Lowes theater on 28th st?" Jake responds "Sure, see you than." Rose responds "See you than."
Rose exits, Jake is overjoyed, with Trixe and Spud by his side. "She said yes." he yells. "She said yes." as he is dancing in the hallway, when all of a sudden a locker hits him the face, and his knocked to the ground.
After school, Jake goes over to Gramps shop to tell his grampa and Fu dog the good news, but his gramp has news for him. "I have a mission for you, there is a Orb on display at Natural Museum of Natural History, you must bring it here." Jake asks "Why?" "We got a tip that Huntsman is planning on stealing it, and selling it to Herbert the Gobblin mafia king." Fu says. "Can't it wait, till tomorow, I have a date tonight." Jake said. "No young one, tonight, do not question your dragon master." Gramps says. "What time is your date?" Fu Dog asks. Jake tells him 8 pm. "The museum closes at 5 pm, just bring the Orb here before 8 and than you can go on your date." Fu Dog says. Jake says ok. "But how do I get it." He asks. "Kid it is locked in a safe, but I know the combo thanks to some tips on the street, and the beems deactivation code." Fu dog says. "The combination is 38, 24, 14. The deactivation code is 2882. Got that kid." Jake says "I got it Fu."
Meanwhile, in the Huntsleer, the Huntsman has a mission for his apprentise Thorn, who is Jake's cruch Rose. "Thorn I have a mission for you. We have been paid a healthy amount to obtain a Orb in the Museum Of Natural History for a gobbling crime ring. You are to bring it to me tonight." he says. "Master must I obstain it tonight, I have a previous arrangment. She responds. The Huntsman starts to become enrage and yells "Thorn you will bring me this orb tonight, or else! Do I make myself clear?" "Yes master." Thorn says with fear in her voice.
It is 6 pm at the museum as Jake in his American Dragon form arrives at the museum looking for the Orb. He finds the safe, and uses the combination Fu gave him. The safe opens, he pushes the deactivation code, the beems are deactivated. He grabs the Orb and is about to leave, when he is kicked in the face by someone. It is Thorn. "Thank you for getting the Orb for me dragon boy. Now it is time to you to be slayed." She says. "Well it is time for you to learn a lesson, it is not nice to do business with Gobblins." He responds.
Jake and Thorn begin fighting. They fight all over the safe's room. Thorn tries to attack Jake with Huntssitck. She says "Ready to die dragon?" Jake responds "I am always ready. Wait I am mean, you know what I mean." Jake ducks, and kicks the weapon out of the room. They continue to fight. As they are fighting, three mysterious creatures appear. It is Herbert and two of his henchmen. They take the Orb and exit. They locked the safe. Jake and Thorn hear it closes and stop fighting for a second.
The safe's pephole window opens, as they see two sneaky eyes, and a voice. It is Herbert "Thank you for the Orb." He looks over at Thron "Tell the Huntsman thank you, but I won't be paying him after all. Ha ha ha" He looks over at Jake. "American Dragon, always a pleasure, having you be my sab. ha ha ha." He continues "You kids should know there is only enough air to last 6 more hours. You will die tonight at midnight. I got to go hold the magic world hostage. Have fun on your date. Ha ha ha." Jake says "Aw man."
That is all I have to now. I'll post the 2nd half of this short story tomorow.