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Post by huntsrose on Sept 11, 2006 8:30:55 GMT -5
I know I am, and that's why I think I'll keep you in suspense until after school. I already have chapter 3 written, but well I'm going to be late, and I want you in suspense. Muhaha!
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Post by gojake on Sept 11, 2006 15:41:43 GMT -5
It's after school to me! My school ends at 2:30, so I have to record ADJL episodes now, cuz so hot summer is over
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 11, 2006 19:02:14 GMT -5
Can you believe Saturday's episode? They didn't show Rose, they didn't say anything about her or her sister. They didn't even say her name!!! Well, thanks to that, that means I can continue my FF without stressing. I'll update as soon as I find chapter 3. (I already wrote it, but need to find it.) Hope I didn't leave it in my locker, or you'll have to wait another day.
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 11, 2006 19:21:50 GMT -5
Ok, well I just found it, so now I'm going to post it. Well, here it is, and hope you like it.
Chapter 3
"I have an idea," I said, finally getting a pleasant thought. "But it can only get us one of the things we're missing." "Yeah?" Jake asked. "What is it?" "Well," I said. "We could use our dream charms to go back and see if we can find one of their names." "Great idea!" Jake said. "Meet you there?" I nodded. "Hey, what about me?" Fu asked. "You just gonna leave me here?" He looked at Jake. "Nah, I'm just kidding. Go ahead, Kid." I sit down on a chair nearby, and Jake sat next to me. We both started to drift off. I found myself in a grey hallway next to Jake. It had several doors with a lot of names on them. "This way," I said, pulling Jake along. I saw a door with my name on it. "This is it." I took a deep breath and opened the door. I continued to pull Jake along until I was in that hospital. I looked into one of the doors and saw my mother again. She was holding me and my twin. I tried hard to keep tears from welling up in my eyes. "Rose," Jake said. "Are you ok?" "I'm fine," I said, looking into his eyes. He looked at me with concern as I turned back to the room. "I think I'll call her Rose," my mother said. I couldn't watch anymore. I turned my head. Jake put his arm around me. "It's ok," he said. "That man stole my baby!" she cried. "He took Rose!" I turned back to the room again. Two of the doctors ran out after him, but it was too late. He had orbed away. "I'm sorry," the doctor said. "Rose is gone." Tears welled up in her eyes and mine too. She looked at my sister. "Faith," she said.
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Post by superdoglac on Sept 11, 2006 19:27:52 GMT -5
OK. Now tears are swelling in my eyes Update soon...or else XD
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 11, 2006 19:29:26 GMT -5
Or else what? Ooh? Is the big bad dwagon gonna...OW! Did you just shoot a fireball at me?
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Post by superdoglac on Sept 11, 2006 20:06:16 GMT -5
Yes I did! *bares teeth* XD
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 11, 2006 20:08:11 GMT -5
Oh now you've done it! I was going to post Chapter 4 today, but I've decided to wait until tomorrow. All my fans, you can blame Superdoglac for that! *Shoots Superdoglac's tail*
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Post by superdoglac on Sept 11, 2006 20:14:15 GMT -5
OW! Grrrr XD
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 11, 2006 20:37:40 GMT -5
Nah, I'm just messing with you all. I'll post it. Note: This one is a little funny. I hope you like it!
Chapter 4
"Faith," I repeated. I was a little bit excited that I would finally find my family, but it had been so long, and I would still have to keep so many secrets from them. "Come on," Jake said softly. "Let's go back." "Wait," I said. "There's still one more thing I want to do before we leave." "What?" Jake asked. I smiled. "You'll see." I pulled him out through my dream door and into the hallway. Just ahead was Jake's door. "Oh no," Jake said. "Nuh uh. I don't think so." I rolled my eyes. "Just come with me." I went past his door and took a right. A few doors down was a door that said, "Huntsman," on it. Jake smiled. "Are we going in there?" he asked. "Might as well," I said, winking. I reached out and opened the door. We went inside. We saw Huntsman standing over a pile of magical creatures. "Ok," Jake said. "Did not need to see that." "Come on," I said, pulling him through. There he was as a teenager. All of the other members were teasing him. I could tell he was mad. Jake was laughing. "This should be good," Jake said. They took his staff away and threw it to eachother as he tried desperately to get it back. Jake and I were both on the floor laughing. We decided to in further. We saw him outside as a kid about our age. He had a mask on, so we couldn't see who he really was. I didn't even know who he really was. He had a stick and was twirling it around, practicing hitting a dummy. He tried to hit it but it flew backwards, bounced off a tree, and hit him in the back of the head, knocking him to the ground. We started laughing again.
After our giggle fit was over, we decided to go in farther. Finally, we got to see his real face. He was just a baby though. The doctor noticed his odd birthmark and the same thing that happened to me, happened to him. He was kidnapped, but he didn't have a twin like I did. "No wonder he's so cruel," Jake said. "He never knew his family either."
Time for a little something I call, "Jake vision"!! Woot!
*Jake's POV* I stood there, watching the Huntsman being taken away by a former leader of the Huntsclan. "Should we leave now?" I asked. "Yes," Rose said. "I suppose we should, since this is as far back as we can go." "Ow!" I said as Rose pinched me, and I woke up. Then Rose woke up too. "We did it!" she exclaimed. "Yeah," I said, not too happy with the Huntsman for taking Rose away like that. I wanted so badly to show him who was boss, but I knew Rose wouldn't allow it. "But we still need krylock venom."
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Post by superdoglac on Sept 11, 2006 21:01:32 GMT -5
Yay! Squecky Huntsman voice XD! Ahh! *runs*
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 11, 2006 21:04:48 GMT -5
Lol. No more for today. I'm going to eat dinner now, so I'll be on laterz.
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Post by gojake on Sept 12, 2006 15:24:34 GMT -5
very nice. Didn't get a chance to post. is it confirmed that Rose's twin is female? Because I'd like to write a fanfic about a male twin. Or a triplet group. with two sisters and one brother.
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dreamcatcher
Young Warrior Dragon
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Post by dreamcatcher on Sept 12, 2006 17:04:07 GMT -5
JAKE VISION WOOT!!!!XD
the teenage huntsman was funny!!
uPDATE SOON OR I WILL THROW MY CANDY BAR AT YOU!!!!
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 12, 2006 19:24:18 GMT -5
Mmm candybar. I'll update in a little bit today. Maybe twice if ya'all are nice to meh! I'm pretty sure it was a girl because (s)he had long hair.
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