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Post by roselovesjake on Sept 20, 2006 22:53:25 GMT -5
HOws This Plan going to work? :}
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 20, 2006 23:03:38 GMT -5
Hey, I was bored so I decided to update. YAY! More Jake vision! (Just so you know, I don't have these written out. I just write them in this little white box at the bottom of the screen and post them.) Well, here's chapter 11!
*Jake's POV* "How long to I have to stand here?" I asked. "Until I'm done painting you, now hold still!" Faith said. "Which will be?" "Just hold still and shut up," Faith said in a voice that was a cross between playful and soft. I sighed. "Hurry," I said. "My feet hurt." "Then fly," she said with a laugh. Rose rolled her eyes and walked out. "Almost finished." "Finally," I grumbled. "Do you want your plan to work or not?" "Yes," I said. "Then hold still and quit complaining." I stuck my tongue out at her. Rose came back in. "Spud and Trixie are back," she said. "Done," Faith said, holding it up. "It looks like a pinata," Rose said. "Oh great," I said. "You want them to beat the candy out of me don't you?" Rose giggled. "Kind of, but nobody will let them beat the candy out of the real Jake," Faith said. "Rawr!" I said. She raised an eyebrow at me. "I'm just going to go call more help." I slowly backed out of the room. I heard Trixie yelling at Spud again. "Spud! Put that thing away before you put someone's eye out!" Trixie yelled. Spud was playing with his yo-yo and it nearly hit Trixie's side. "Hey guys," I said. "Hi Jake!" Spud said. The yo-yo wrapped around a lantern and it fell on the ground and shattered loudly. "Oops!" There was a shout from the next room. "JAAAKE!" Gramps shouted. "Gramps, it wasn't me!" I responded, a little too quickly then turned to Spud, who chuckled nervously. I lit the string to his yo-yo on fire. "Problem solved!" "Hey!" Spud said. "That was my favorite yo-yo!" "Chill, Spud," Trixie said. "Yeah," I said. "I'll get you a new one for Christmas." Spud looked sadly at the pile of ash and melted plastic that used to be his yo-yo. "Ok, let's get to work," I said. "We need to come up with a plan. Everyone get out here! We're making the plan!" Everyone ran out and sat around the table.
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Post by superdoglac on Sept 21, 2006 14:42:49 GMT -5
NO!!! NOT THE YO-YO!!!!!!!XD
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Young Warrior Dragon
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Post by dreamcatcher on Sept 21, 2006 15:14:44 GMT -5
poor yo-yo.... WE WILL MISS YOU!!! XD
UPDATE SOON!!
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Post by Mikokat on Sept 21, 2006 22:00:04 GMT -5
*blasts mikikat with huntstick whilst he gives a compliment* LOL XD XD XD LOL Yeah, good story, update soon! *Takes out an M16 and fire rapidly at gojake*
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 21, 2006 22:32:42 GMT -5
Ok. Still Jake vision! Here's chapter 12!! Review soon or I won't update soon! THIS IS A LOOOONG ONE...Ok, maybe not that long...
"So what's the plan, Mr. Bossy Pants?" Trixie said. I glared at her for a minute before I started talking. "Well," I said. "We could always..."
*Five minutes later*
"So that's the plan. Any questions?" "Jake, I have one," Rose said. I looked at her curiously. "ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND?!" "What?" I asked. "It's a perfectly good plan." "Jake, you'd have to be crazy to think that that plan could work!" she said. "Well, it's all I've got, so we have to try it." "Who says we've 'got to'?" Trixie asked. "Any better ideas?" "I...Uh..." "That's what I thought." "Jake, this won't work," Rose said. "Can we at least try?" I asked. "Ok," Rose said. "We only have one shot, Jakey," Trixie said. "So don't mess it up!" "Look who's being bossy now!" I said. "I'm just saying..." "Maybe you shouldn't talk then." "Oh! It's on!" She tackled me and we started fighting. "Can't we all just get along?!" Spud asked hopelessly. "ENOUGH!" Gramps said as Trixie pulled my hair. We stopped fighting and stepped off. "Sorry Gramps," we said at the same time. Trixie was starting to call him Gramps now too. "Let's get started on Jake's plan," Rose said. "Jake, did you call in more back up?" "Yeah," I said. "They should be down at the park." "We very well can't carry everyone," Faith said. "We can take the car," Fu suggested. We all nodded in agreement and went outside to the car. I sat between Rose and Trixie and Faith was on the other side of Trixie. Spud sat in the small space in the very back where there were no seats, just the flat place for storage. Gramps and Fu were up front. "Why is the dog driving?" Faith asked. "Gramps doesn't have his liscense," I said. "But the dog does?" "I got a dog liscense," Fu said. "And the name's Fu," he added, starting the car and driving. "Get your elbow out of my ribs!" Trixie yelled at me. "I can't!" I said. "It's too cramped." "You have plenty of room!" "Not as much as you!" "Liar! You have way more room then me!" "No you do!" "No you!" "You!" She flicked me behind the left ear. "OK THAT'S IT!" I said, making my dragon claws appear. "STOP IT!" Rose said, grabbing my wrists as Faith grabbed Trixie by the shoulders. We tried desperately to get to eachother, but then we gave up because Rose and Faith wouldn't let us go. "Fine!" I said, making my claws disappear. They let us go and we crossed our arms and sat in silence the rest of the way. "We're here!" Fu said, annoyed with our childish behavior. We got out and saw a bunch of magical creatures that I called. "Cara, Sara!" I said. "I didn't call you." "Yes but Sara had another vision," Cara said. "Oh no!" Trixie, Spud, and I exclaimed. I sighed. "What now?" I asked. "Like, don't get all upset or anything because it's not that bad," Sara said. I rolled my eyes. "Just tell me." "It's about Rose. She--" "Rose is a brain eating zombie!" Spud inturrupted. "I knew it!" "SPUD!" Trixie and I shouted. "She what?" I asked. "She is going to be hit," Sara said. "By what?" we all asked. "A glowing green staff!" "The Huntsman!" we all shouted together again. "Rose!"
DUN DUN DUN!
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 22, 2006 8:43:07 GMT -5
If anyone wants, they can make a banner for the fanfic. I'd really like it.
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Post by dreamcatcher on Sept 22, 2006 22:43:12 GMT -5
when they got into the car i don't know why but it reminded me of when clowns all cram into those little cars at the circus XD
AHHHHH ROSE!!
update soon!!
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Post by superdoglac on Sept 23, 2006 11:20:28 GMT -5
Thats was Pure chaos!!! I LOVE CHAOS ;D!!!!
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 24, 2006 23:15:00 GMT -5
The next few chapters are funny! Well, I'll try to post one tomorrow, maybe two! Also, thanks for the picture of Faith, Superdoglac! I'll try and post that tomorrow too. G'night ya'll!
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 26, 2006 21:25:17 GMT -5
Ok, here's Faith vision for once! YAY! PARTY AT MY HOUSE! *1 minute later* Ok, everyone out! Ok, well I guess I'll shut up and let you read then? *Faith's POV* (Duh!) Rose and I were waiting for Jake, Trixie, and Spud to come back from talking to those girls. "What do you think they're talking about?" I asked. Rose shrugged. "Probably something stupid," she said. "But it sure looks like Jake is starting to panic." "I don't know," I said. "Looks pretty serious. Oh, look it looks like Sara just had another vision and told Jake about it." "SAY WHAT?!?!" we could hear him shout. "Yeah, looks like she just told him," I said. "Here he comes." Jake was walking over to us, a mixture of concern and confusion in his eyes. Trixie and Spud followed him. "I knew she couldn't be trusted!" I heard Trixie say. "Who?" I asked suspiciously. "And what did Miss Sunshine tell you?" "Nobody," Trixie replied. "Jake, you go ahead and tell them." I could just see some anger in her eyes. "Sara saw two things," Jake said. "The first one was that the Huntsman was going to hit Rose with his staff." I gasped. "Wait till you hear the second thing!" "What?" I asked eagerly. "She said that Rose, yes you heard me, Rose was going to hit me with her staff, and not fake fighting either!" he exclaimed. I couldn't, wouldn't believe it! "Rose wouldn't do something like that!" I said. "Well, Sara's visions were never wrong before," he said, starting to calm down. I looked at Rose, who was clearly in deep thought then back to Jake. I sighed. "This is why I don't listen to oracles," I said. "I know!" Trixie said. "But sometimes their visions aren't always what they seem," Jake said. "So we'll have to wait and see what happens." He looked at Rose, who was still in thought. "Are you ok, Rose?" "Yeah," she said, blinking and coming out of thought. "It's just that, something like that might actually happen." Jake looked down. "But I won't let it hurt too bad," she added, placing a hand on his shoulder and winking at him. "So shall we get started on this bizarre plan of yours?" "Hey!" he said. I rolled my eyes. "Well, you have to admit," I said. "It is pretty bizarre." "But how will we tell everyone?" Spud asked. Trixie rolled her eyes and turned his head to a tall slab of marble with a bunch of steps and a microphone on top. "OH!" We all climbed the stairs to the top. "Ok," Jake said into the microphone. Everyone faced us. "So thank ya'll for coming and here's the plan..." *Five minutes later* (Sorry don't want to tell the plan yet.) "Any questions?" Several hands shot into the air. "Besides asking if I'm insane?" All of the hands went down. "Thank you," he grumbled. "Rose, want to say anything?" Rose nodded and stepped forward. "Yeah, thanks for helping, everyone," she said. "But how about a hand for Jake?" A random cricket chirped. "That wasn't a question!" Everyone started clapping. I laughed. "But I especially thank my little Jakey-Wakey!" I could tell she was trying to embarass him. He turned red. "Ok, Rose," Jake said, pulling her back by her arm. "That's enough!" "No," Rose said, jerking her arm away. "I'm not done." Jake slapped himself on the forehead. Rose just grinned. "Ok, now I'm done." "Thanks Rose," Jake grumbled angrilly. "You're welcome," she said, grinning. "Hey, can I say something?" Spud asked. Jake shrugged. "Sure, go ahead." Spud walked up to the microphone. "I'd just like to say," Spud said. "Spulunking. That's all." We all rolled our eyes. Here's the picture Superdoglac made: Hope you enjoyed that chapter! Review soon!
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Post by roselovesjake on Sept 26, 2006 22:24:40 GMT -5
What's gonna happen!
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 27, 2006 20:46:08 GMT -5
Well, here's chapter...13? 14? Ack, I need to update the name more often! Anyway, I guess I'll be quiet now and let you read...Oh! One last thing! Spulunking!
*Jake's POV*
My face was so red from what Rose said. I had never felt this way before, but at that moment, I wanted to slap her. I would just have to get her back later. "So anyway," I said. "We should start now." "Wait!" Faith said. "I have an idea!" "What about my idea?" I asked. "Well, this one's mine, so it'll be better," she said. "Fine," I said, irritated. "What is it?" "Ok, you could all hide in bushes and stuff, and then Rose can call the Huntsman and then when she gives the signal, you all jump out," she explained. "There's just one problem with that," I said. "Yeah?" "How are the giants going to fit behind bushes?" "They can hide behind that bilboard up there," Rose suggested, pointing to a bilboard. "How are they going to get up there?" I asked. "They can't fly!" "No, but you and Faith can." I sighed. "Fine. Dragon up!" I said. Faith turned into her dragon form too. We flew over to Bertha and we both lifted her up by her shoulders and flew her up to the bilboard. Then we did the same for the other few giants that came. "Ok, now everyone hides," Faith said as we both landed back on the stage. Everyone hid behind bushes except for Rose, who had the fake dragon in a net (not sphinx hair) attached to a tree. I hoped so much that this would work. Rose pushed a button on her communicator. "Have you found the dragon?" came the Huntsman's voice. "Yes, Master," she said. "We're down at this park." "Good," he said. "I'll be down there in a moment." With that, he disappeared. "Rose," I said quickly. "What's the signal?" She did a hand motion. I ran over to her quickly. "If this doesn't work out, I want you to know that I love you." She smiled. "I love you too," she said, and we kissed softly. Then I ran back to the bush I was hiding behind, hoping that she wouldn't be hurt. The Huntsman appeared from a ball of green right in front of Rose. "Huntsgirl," he said. "Where is the dragon?" She pointed to the fake dragon. I couldn't believe how real it looked from a distance! "Well done." He took out his staff and threw it towards the tree. It cut through the middle of the dragon. I was just glad he didn't go near it and find out that it was fake. Rose made a motion with her hand and everyone jumped out, surrounding him. Rose kicked his staff from his hand and caught it in her own. "Don't move," she said. He didn't move, but I could believe he was thinking of a plan to escape, and even though we couldn't see his face, I could tell he was afraid. Rose reached up and removed his mask...
Oh I just love leaving you in suspense. Reviews people! (Sorry if it's short)
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Post by superdoglac on Sept 27, 2006 21:29:56 GMT -5
NO NOT THE SUSPENCE!!!!!!!! SPULUNKING!
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 27, 2006 23:03:42 GMT -5
Here's the next chapter. So sorry it took so long.
*Rose's POV*
"Say what?!" Jake exclaimed. The masked figure that claimed to be the Huntsman was nothing more than a robot. The real Huntsman appeared on my communicator. "Fools," he said. "Did you really think that I would come alone and unarmed? I thought this might be a trap. That's why I sent this robot. I've been controlling it from the base." "But...Why didn't you trust me?" I asked. "Do you really think I'm so stupid?" he said. "I know all about your little 'relationship' with this dragon. I know all about how you've pretended to slay him several times now. Well it won't work anymore." "But how did you know?" I asked. "I've had 88 and 89 watching you for some time now. You and your little dragon friend." I took the communicator and threw it at the robot. It broke in half and clattered on the ground. I ran up to the robot, wanting to attack it, but Jake held me back by the shoulders so I would calm down. It worked. "I think I have to leave the city," I said to him sadly. Everyone around us was just watching Jake and me. I ignored them. "Everyone who isn't family should probably go," I heard Trixie say. "Aw, do I have to go?" asked Spud. "No!" Trixie said. Several left, but mostly the people I knew stayed. "Why don't you stay with me?" Jake asked. I actually considered it for a minute. "No, Jake," I said. "If they found me, it would put you in danger." "I don't care," he said. "Listen, I don't want anything to happen to you." I knew that meant that he wouldn't take no for an answer. "Fine," I said. "But if they find out where I am, I'm leaving so that you're not in danger." He sighed. "Ok, but if they damage one hair on your head, I'm going after them," Jake said. I couldn't help but smile. "Ok," I said, then hugged him.
*Jake's POV* I was so glad that Rose wasn't leaving. We all went back to the car. I was too excited to fight with Trixie this time. Rose was very distracted the ride back. Faith was concerned and kept asking everyone if they'd be ok, including me. Of course, we all said yes, but I wasn't too sure everyone meant it. When we got back to the shop, I asked to talk to Rose alone. We went to the back. "I'm glad you've decided not to leave again," I said. "Actually, I kind of am too," she replied. "I wouldn't have anywhere to go anyway." "What about your parents?" I asked. "I don't know if I'm ready to meet them yet," she said. "I mean, I just met Faith. I want to get to know her before I meet her parents." "You mean your parents?" I asked. "Jake, I've never met them," she said. "I don't know if I can call them my parents yet." "Hmm, I guess you're right," I said. "Ooh, speaking of Faith, her parents are probably worried about her. You think we should take her home?" "You have to ask her that," Rose said. "It's her choice." "Ok," I said. "But I am really glad you decided not to leave." She smiled. "Me too." I kissed her softly on the lips. I felt warmth run down my spine. I pulled away slowly. "I love you," I whispered, holding her hands in mine. "I love you too," she whispered back. I looked up as the door opened. "Sorry to inturrupt your little 'smooch session', but you should come out here now," Fu said urgently. I let go of Rose's hands. "What happened?" I asked. "Come on," Fu said, walking out. I shrugged and followed him out. "It's Faith. She's gone." "Well where did she go?!" I demanded. "That's the thing, Kid," Fu said. "We left her alone for like a minute, and now she's gone." I groaned. "Where could she have gone?" Rose asked. "Where could who have gone?" someone behind Rose asked. "Faith!" I exclaimed. "Where did you go?" "I went to the bathroom!" she said. "Geeze, don't get so overprotective." I sighed, relieved.
Ok, well it was pretty short, so I added a second half. Hope you liked it!
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