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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Mar 10, 2007 11:28:17 GMT -5
OH MNY GOSH! the dark drags got rose!!!!!!! AHHHH update girl!!!!!!!!! like NOW! or you shall fell the wrath of HUNTSGIRL form the NC!
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Post by huntsrose on Mar 14, 2007 16:51:13 GMT -5
OK OK!
Chapter 7 My Everything
*Rose's POV* I sighed, wanting to be with Jake. I guess if he knew me like I thought he did, he would want to keep me away from danger. But it was like he was my past. My future. My everything. But there was a crash behind me and I wheeled around. There was glass everywhere and the window was completely shattered. The Dark Dragon stood in front of me. I just knew it was the Dark Dragon. Who else would it have been? "What are you doing here?" I asked. "I've come for the dragon," he said. "Where is he?" I couldn't help but laugh. "I don't know, and even if I did, do you honestly think I'd tell you?" "I see you're going to be difficult," he said. "I know he's in Hong Kong. I saw him." "And what makes you think I would tell you?" I asked. "I don't expect you to talk," he laughed. I stepped backwards nervously, but he lunged at me and flew off with me. "What are you--put me down!" I said. "And what makes you think I would put you down?" he asked.
*Jake's POV* I looked around for any trace of evidence. Nothing. "Gramps," I said. "What are we going to do?" "I do not know," he said. "It may be a trap." "What do you have against Rose?" I asked. "I have nothing against Rose," he said. I didn't believe that at all. "I'm supposed to believe that? After everything we've been through, you won't help her just this once." "Jake, it is much too dangerous for just us two to go after her," he said. "Oh yeah? Watch me," I said. And with that, I flew off to find her, only to see him right behind me. "Aiyah Jake," he said. "I will help you, but do not go running off on your own like that again. First we must find Haley and Sun." "There ain't time for that," I said. "You find them if you want, but I'm going to help Rose." "Ok, Jake," he sighed. "I will find them. Just be careful." "Will do," I said. I recognized the Dark Dragon and hid behind a bush. He had Rose. He went into a small cave close to where I was hiding. I flew in after him quietly, trying to stay unnoticed, but Rose and the Dark Dragon both spotted me. "Jake, get out of here," she said. "It's a trap." "No," he said. "Ha, foolish boy, you are no match for me," said the Dark Dragon. "I kicked your butt twice so you better prepare for a third time," I said. "Do you honestly want to fight me?" he growled. "Uh, duh," I said. "What do you want with me and Rose anyway?" "I want you to join me so dragons can rule the world again," he said. "And I'll release your precious girlfriend." I looked at Rose and then at him. "I won't join you," I said. "But I will fight you." Just then, Gramps, Haley, and Sun showed up. "Right on time." I sliced the ropes that bound Rose and all 5 of us were ready to fight. We all attacked at once. Realizing that he didn't have a chance, the Dark Dragon flew off. "Until next time, American Dragon," he said. "And next time, you won't be so lucky."
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Post by superdoglac on Mar 14, 2007 16:55:45 GMT -5
BUm bum bum oh wait. Never mind XD UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Mar 15, 2007 14:15:36 GMT -5
haha aHHH! suspence. lol LOEV IT! XD
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Post by huntsrose on Mar 20, 2007 23:14:06 GMT -5
HIIII! Still Jake's point of view! Chapter 8 Rose's Memories
"Rose, you ok?" I asked. I knew I shouldn't have left her alone like that. I knew it was too dangerous. Why did the Dark Dragon have to be in Hong Kong? Why couldn't he be somewhere else far away from Rose? I guess it was my luck. But then again, I would have never found her...or been allowed to find her. Was irony good or bad? I guess it could go either way. "Yeah," she said. "Jake, this is all so new to me...I barely know you, but I feel like I've known you for so long...I hate the feeling." "G can we go back to the hotel?" I asked. "Yes, we can," he said, and off we went. I dug around in my dresser for something. There it was. I took it out and showed it to Rose. She gasped. It was the picture I had of us at the dance. "I remember that night!" she said. "You do?" I asked, smiling. "Yeah! It was the dance. I only remember some details. Half of the dance was blanked out." "Heh, yeah, that was my fault," I said, remembering Jazmine. "Don't ask." "Ok," she said. "Fu don't you have some kinda memory potion? One that will bring details back?" "Sorry, kid," he said. "I don't think one has been invented. I could look, but wait until we get to New York." "But...Rose will be here," I said. "I have an idea." I smiled. "Rose, you want your memories back? I think we can get them back." "Yeah, I do. How?" "You'll find out soon enough."
That night I used my dream charm to go into Rose's dreams. I found her alone in wonder. "Jake?" she asked. "Is it really you?" "Yeah," I said. "Come with me. I think I can get your memories back...let's see...how did you do this thing?" "Do what thing?" "This." I peeled a strip of nothingness just like she had done before. "Whoa..." she said. She followed me through and I led her to her dream door. "Maybe the memories are in here. If they're not, they would be in mine." But they weren't, so I led her to my dream door. "Don't worry. They're in here." We watched memories go by...our first date, when I revealed my identity to her, fights in the Huntsclan, and it all led up to one moment...when I made the wish that she had never been taken. I looked over to realize she was crying. "Hey, are you ok?" I asked, feeling sorry for her. "We've been through so much," she said. "And I didn't even remember it! It's just...I feel like I've...I don't know, missed out...missed you." "Don't worry," I said. "I'm here now." "And I'm glad," she said, hugging me. I smiled as I hugged back. She was back! It was probably the happiest moment in my entire life. But then, how would I see her after I left Hong Kong? Would I just use my dream charm? "And," she said. "I actually found this some time ago. I thought it was a normal bracelet. Do you know anything about it?" She showed me her dream charm. Well, that answered that. "I do, Rose."
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Post by superdoglac on Mar 21, 2007 21:56:44 GMT -5
AWW ROSE REMEMBERS UPDATE SOON BEFORE I STOP TALKING !!!! XD
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Post by huntsrose on Mar 22, 2007 23:13:53 GMT -5
Ok, the first half is kinda pointless (lol) but it will get better...well, maybe not in this chapter, but it will have some important stuff that will make you want the next chapter soon...I think. Oh, just read it!!
Chapter 9 Sacrifices
*Rose's POV* After all of the memories Jake and I watched, we woke up a little later than intended. It was almost 8:00 by the time I woke up! Violet woke me up of course. "Heya Sis," she said. "Any more of those dreams?" "Well, that depends," I said with a smile. "Anyway, are we still going to the mall today?" Violet asked. "Hmm," I said. I had been hoping to spend more time with Jake. "I don't know." "But I can't go alone!" "Ok, I'll go with but not for too long because I have stuff to do." "Like what?" "Oh, you know, homework, studying..." I said. It was very unlike me to keep secrets from my sister, but I wasn't ready to tell her just then.
"Vi," I sighed, dropping the bags in our room when we got home. "Why do you have to buy so much?" She had bought about ten bags full of junk she didn't need, half of which she made me carry. I had gotten one with an outfit I thought was cute. "I'm a girl, it was cute clothes," Violet said. "Do the math." "Yes, I'm a girl also, in case you haven't noticed," I said. "Look how many bags I got!"
I looked at the clock a few minutes later after we had put all the clothes away. It was a lot later than I wanted it to be. It was about 12:30 already. "See ya Vi," I said quickly as I put my flip-flops on. "Where ya goin' Ro?" she asked. "Out." "Can I come?" I considered her question for a long minute. "Well..." I did tell Jake he could meet her. "Fine, but don't do anything stupid." "Me?" she laughed. "Stupid?" "Ok, listen," I said. "Can you keep a secret?" "Duh." "No, I mean...you're usually the source of most of the gossip at school. Just keep this secret...you know, secret for once." "Ok, I will," she said. "Ok, well, you know Jake, the one I told you about?" "Yeah." "He's in Hong Kong. He's...he's a dragon," I explained. "Shut up!" Violet said in that annoying preppy voice she did whenever she heard a juicy secret. "Yeah, well, it turns out that my memories of him were erased. We used to be together. Then he wished I had never been taken by the...Huntsclan, and I'll get onto that topic later." "Wow," she said. "Do you want to meet him?" I asked. "Depends, is he hot?" "Violet!" "I'm just kidding, Rose!" she said.
I led Violet to Jake's hotel room, then knocked on the door lightly. Jake opened the door. "Hi Jake," I said. He glanced from me to Violet and then back and smiled. "Hi Rose," he said. "And you're Violet, right?" "Yeah," Violet said. "Oooh, Rose, you were right, he is cuuute!" Jake and I both blushed. "Yeah, don't mind her," I said. "She tries to embarass me sometimes, but I get her back." "You said I was cute?" he laughed. "Well, yeah," I said. "What happened in here?" Violet asked, looking around the hotel room at the broken glass that was everywhere and the shattered window. "Long story," Jake and I both said at the same time. "Rose, you do realize that your boyfriend is too short for you?" Violet asked. I sighed. "Maybe this was a bad idea." "Aww, come on, I'm just kidding!" I rolled my eyes. "So, Jake," I said. "Do you want to go do something?" "Are you asking me on a date?" he asked with a raised eyebrow. "Maybe I am." "If you are, then I'll go...oh wait, I gotta patrol the city some more in a few minutes," he sighed. "Aww," I said. "Well, that's ok. I'll see you tonight then." I winked at him. As Violet and I walked out, I noticed Jake smiling in a dreamy fashion. I giggled.
That night, I waited for Jake in my dreams. He didn't show up, so I decided to go dream realm exploring. I spotted his dream door and smiled as I opened it and walked inside, awaiting the possible wonders that would lie inside. As I watched some of his memories, I noticed that he was a very selfless guy. He had made a lot of sacrifices for so many people and magical creatures, and yet, asked for so little in return, and when he did ask for things, usually didn't get them, or got them and they ended up making things worse. I noticed the love he had for me (I mean, come on, it's not that hard to guess)and how he wanted me back in New York with him. Maybe it was time for someone to make a sacrifice for him. I could leave my family there...no, that wouldn't do. I could talk them into moving back to New York. I had a feeling my dad was going to get fired soon anyway. "Having fun?" asked a voice behind me. I nearly had a heart attack. "Jake!" I gasped. "Don't...do that! You nearly gave me a heart attack!" "Sorry," he grinned. "Where were you? I've been looking for you." "I was still patrolling," he said. "Oh...." "See anything good?" "What?" I asked. "In my memories." "Oh," I laughed. "Curiousity killed the cat." "Yes," he said. "So...you wanna do something?" "Like what?" "Anything." "How?" "This is a dream. Anything can happen." "Is this possible?" I asked. "I mean...it's scientifically impossible...isn't it?" "We're here aren't we?" Jake asked. "All ya gotta do is use your imagination." "But...wow, this is all so new to me...I mean, I remember it, but I don't remember experiencing it. You know?" He laughed. "You'll feel like that for a while." "I've been thinking," I said, as the scene we were in changed. We were lying on the beach in Hawaii side by side. I had always liked beaches. "Hmm?" he asked. "Well, in your memories, it seemed to me that you made a lot more sacrifices then anyone would've made for you," I explained. "So I was thinking...maybe I should come back to New York for you." Jake sat up. "Why? I mean, your family lives here. That's what you wanted." "Yes," I said. "I could talk them into coming with me. I have a feeling my dad is going to lose his new job soon anyways." I laughed a little. "Don't you like Hong Kong?" he asked. "No," I said. "You really want to come back to New York?" "Yes." "But what if your parents don't go with?" "I'm sure Violet will, and if she doesn't, I'll go by myself and visit them, but if they love me like I think they do, then I'm sure they'll go." "Can't wait," Jake said with a smile.
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Mar 23, 2007 9:27:26 GMT -5
AWESOME!(i only read a lil i gotta read th e rest l8tr)
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dreamcatcher
Young Warrior Dragon
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Post by dreamcatcher on Mar 23, 2007 10:59:06 GMT -5
I just started reading your story!
WOOT!!! ROSE MIGHT BE GOING BACK TO NYC!! YAY!!!!
UPDATE SOON!
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Post by huntsrose on Mar 23, 2007 17:10:03 GMT -5
Yay! Thanks for reading! I'll update when I feel like it! Off topic: Dreamcatcher, in your dragon picture, it looks like you're tangled in some kinda iPod cord. No offense though!
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Mar 23, 2007 20:16:39 GMT -5
lol cool!
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Post by huntsrose on Apr 16, 2007 22:38:36 GMT -5
Ok, some bad news. I've written the "conclusion" for this story...BUT...when I was cleaning out some old papers it was in the pile and I accidently threw it away in Science class. I'll have to re-write it. Sorryz!
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Post by huntsrose on Apr 20, 2007 15:54:12 GMT -5
OK! I re-wrote the chapter! It's not exactly the ending, but I figured, "why end at 10 chapters when you can have more?" Anyway, enjoy!
Chapter 10 For both of us
*Rose's POV* I swallowed as I tip-toed out of mine and Violet's room. It was morning and Violet was still asleep. I crept down the hallway toward my mom's room. Dad had already left for work.
With each step, it seemed as though the room was getting father away. I knocked on the door lightly. "Come in," Mom said. I walked in and climbed into her bed next to her. "What is it Hon?" "Well," I sighed. "Can I ask you for a favor?" "Sure." "Can we move back to New York City?" I was prepared to make an arguement. "Rose," Mom said. "Your father has a great job, and--" "Mom," I inturrupted. "Do you like it here, in Hong Kong, where nobody speaks English?" "Well, I have to admit, there's not much socializing." "We all hate it here. Me, Vi, you, and I don't think Dad's too fond of it either." Well, I wasn't exactly ready to tell her the other reason. Jake. "Rose," she said. "I will talk to your father about it, but right now, just sit tight. I hate to say this, but I doubt your dad wants to move. He has a nice job, a nice house, and the view here is great." Seemed to me like it was Violet and me against Mom and Dad. And it would break their hearts if I left. More importantly, it would break mine and Jake's heart if I didn't. "I really don't like it here," I said. Then I walked out.
I got dressed and went outside, hoping to find Jake. There he was indeed. Him and Haley. They were patrolling still, meaning that giant bag of dirt was still out there somewhere. I sneaked up behind Jake silently. "Now then," I said, startling them both. "If I were the Dark dragon, you'd be toast." "Well then, it's a good thing you're not the Dark dragon," Jake grinned. "Hello Haley," I said, petting her on the head like an older sister. "Hi Rose," shes said. "So, did you ask your parents?" Jake asked. "Yeah, but I didn't exactly get an answer yet," I replied. "And even if they aren't coming, I'm still going." "You don't have to do that for me," he said. "I'm not going to do it for you," I said. "I'm doing it for both of us."
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Post by superspud234 on Apr 22, 2007 12:10:44 GMT -5
update!!!!
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Apr 22, 2007 20:37:07 GMT -5
LOVE IT!! UPDATE LIKE NOW! or you SHALL feel the wrath of the huntsgirl!
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